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hopehot

@hopehot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

aww...what a sweet beggining and what a sad ending

i hope it works out

waiting for next update

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jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

maddy nice concept but again full of pain. yaar u r going to make me cry again and again. both updates r full of pain and heart wrenchin.

u r really good in writing tragic stories. pls update soon and thnks for pm

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

I thougt this was the surprise that you promised me looonnnggg back, but😭😭😭

aaj saare verdicts dhul gaye hain😭😭

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

update the next part soon.

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Deva

@jwalamukhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

very nicely written...👏

But maan...AIDS...arey yaar somewhat hard to digest...

But the way u narrated the story ...simply superb...

waiting for next part...

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: maanddy

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">OMG ! Me too CA student ! In fact, I have just given exams for final !😳Wow ! That's Great to know !😛</font>

wow even i gave final exams in may this year...wow i hv got someone from ma field here...its good to know...

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

now what shud i say...???
MAAN-----suffering from AIDS and then geet too...!!
awww...!!
now really looking forward to know what will happen next...??
continue soon

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: princess163
I thougt this was the surprise that you promised me looonnnggg back, but😭😭😭

aaj saare verdicts dhul gaye hain😭😭

Don't say that ! I count on you ! If you like it, then I think " Oh ! There was something in it ! 😉 "

My all time loyal and best reader and cool destructive friend ! 😳 🤗

I so want you to destruct this thread, too ! After you finish your crying ! 😆

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: jasraj123
maddy nice concept but again full of pain. yaar u r going to make me cry again and again. both updates r full of pain and heart wrenchin.

u r really good in writing tragic stories. pls update soon and thnks for pm

Jas, I'm setting it off with FF, its all nice and happy happy thing ! 😉

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: shanzy
maddy u know one thing...

I HATE U😡

how could u maddy...i mean dont u feel bad for maan while writing sucha heart wrenching scenarios...😭😭😭
by title n start i was like wow i ud be fun reading it...wid no tears...
but i was wrong...u cant change😭
how could i sleep now😭
u know why m crying this much...while reading i though...smthing called love wali geet is like u n this geet i like me😆,...getting jealous of every gal related to him..evaen e😆
n look how beautifully u broke my heart😭

Shan ! 🤗

I knew it ! I was expecting a big " I HATE YOU " from you ! Trust me and wow I know you very well ! 😳

Please don't hate me, I'm setting it off with other nice and happy happy FF ! 😆

Don't cry now, or I will feel like criminal and left this OS, wese bhi, I'm doubtful for this one, as its literally very much different from all my past works ! 😛

I don't know you guys will accept it or not ! 😕