Maaneet OS - Playboy Part 3 : Page 14 updated :) - Page 16

Originally posted by: princess163

Khurani, you are gonna have a whole new bunch of fans now!

I have given the links to atleast 10 people in the past hour...😉😆

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii maddy...
dont even ask whether we liked this attempt of urs...coz this is a stupid Q...we love ur works...
i loved it to the core...
i always feel...that if u r going to write a one shot, its going to change my perception about life and leave me with something to ponder over...
i dont have words to describe the sheer beauty of this OS...
u made me fall in love with each and every character os this OS, coz each character exemplified faith, love, loyalty,affection, determination, positive and optimistic attitude...
in spite of this OS having a sad ending, u r leaving ur readers on a positive note...and believe me i was smiling inspite of tears clouding my vision...
i feel so charged up after reading ur OS, that i feel i am going to look at things from a different POV,always with optimism and no complaints...

i simply loved the part of chotu/armaan's speech...it made me completely teary and inspite of me trying to control my tears, i cudnt help shedding tears...
maan- what shud i say...my real life hero...u just made this character so lovable, that i envy geet😆 for having him
i truly feel words cant do justice to comment on this masterpiece of urs...simply flawless...leaving me completely speechless

the note of urs was very inspiring and just added to the sheer beauty and magnificence of ur OS...
kudos to u for writing such a beautiful story on love and relations

simply love and adore u and ur wriitng

keep writing

love u

reva

p.s...--inspite of sad ending, i cud not bring myself to hate u...😛 i simply feel like giving u lots of jhappies and kissies for this wonderful OS

Originally posted by: silkyarora

Wow what a superb part that was!!!!
Loved it to the core...!!! Really hats off to u...!! The way u described each and every relationship was jst fab...maaneet part too good...!!!! Loved the final part so so much...the way maan has told abt geet to chottu...i mean their armaan...!!!
Everything was so gud...felt bad that MSK died but then also he was with her geet everytime na...she felt his presence around him...!!!!
Well awesome and fabulous OS...
And upon that superbly written...!!!

Originally posted by: kathie_berns

I have no words to describe your os. This is the first time ever i had tears in my eyes when reading something. It was so beautifully written. I could actually feel maan's fear and geet's pain. I was a bit apprehensive when i read ur first part but at the end of it, i must give a standing ovation to you. Not because it was a good story, of course it was wonderful, but because it managed to capture my heart and i'm sure many others. You have brought out so well, that lover just doesnt exist when the other person exists, it lasts much more than that and if u love a person, you dont need the person with you to feel his presence. It is also sad how people suffer for no fault of thiers. Here is one example you have given. We should consider ourselves blessed and stop complaining. Last but not the least KUDOS to you and sorry for the long post but i couldn help myself. 👏

Originally posted by: shanzy

first of all maddy...thanx for giving us such a wonderful story...
u said it was story of relations...this is wot i feel while reading chotu's part...if i ud be a simple love story of maan n geet it wont be as special as it is...wid meera n armaan
coming to geet as i told u earlier m kinda possessive person n at start i felt a tinch of myself in geet...although she knew it dat maan was her yet she was insecure...its a negative behavior but she was having him ONLY in her life as true love...n u know true love often scares u of lost n u bcm mean regarding ur most precious n beloved person...so i guess her being jealous or insecure from meera was not a big issue...although meera n maans relation is one of most beautiful relations of world...😊
the thing which irks me was her leaving him all of sudden without even talking to him for a while...without listening to him...that was a bit weird, she behaved like a insane fool, not even for a while she thought blood transfusion is 2nd big cause of AIDS...n if she got it...her love, her maan was also having it...😕
later on it bcm heart wrenching...it was difficult for me to even read him in sucha miserable condition😭😭😭
coming to armaan, i felt beauty of there relation was enhanced by him😊
overall it was superb fantabulous story...👏👏
hats off to u for raising a sensitive issue in sucha beautiful way👏

Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

Maanddy u write so well...i read all the parts in one go...very emotional...hattke...and character of Chootu was excellent...

p.s. do u like Castle???

Originally posted by: maansi85

okay...so here i am...SORRY SORRY SORRY for being late last oone...so i will please you by long one...ha ha

chalo...

Part 1 : scary...catchy...loved it...and cried with Maan... hate u fr makin me cry...lol

part 2 : good one...poor Maan...i cried with him...he was jst so nice and look what happedn to him...:(:(

Part 3 : OMG...this is the HIGHLIGHT of the OS...

and maan's line..." You are the one..." Indeed...it was enough...throughout the OS...i loved Maan more and more...you just breathe him...darling...i envy you for your love and undstndg of maan...awesome...and i loved that part...

" Silence was their communication " i thought...it was the best scene...both wer together n they really need nt much words...how deep loved they have...WOW maaadddy...m loving it more and more...

And, dying part...OHhh...i cried like hell...n when maan confessed that he was scared...awww...i cried too much...i so wanted to be ther n hug him...it was natural...any person wud fear death be it MSK or watever...but then he was nt scared it was just WOW...lik he won death when geet was with him...and dyein scene was incredibly sad...awww...he died holding her hand...and with a smile...WOW...u nailed it...perfectly put...and ARMAAN's speech...wow...i was crying in the end when he explained to have a feelin of dad...Maan was indeed his dad...its not necessary that dad has to be biological father only...wat maan taught him was so good...and loved it...

and when u said it was little diff i was confused bt wen i read it i got it tat armaan part was diff...coz if tat was only maan and geet part then it wud be ordinary n little but fancy...coz two people in love may be complete each other's world...but sometimes other relations are also wonderful n needed...like in yours OS...meera and maan...wow i want this friend...pure and innocent...just friends...and maan and armaan...wow...wat a relation...

you indeed is a creator of emotionally involved and masterpiece...yeah i agree when u said this was broad in concept...coz apart from maaneet love there was too good explanation for relations...and i think you should dedicate this OS to maan...it was for him, by him, to him...

Guzaarish...song is my fav...and i read last part with song ON...so you can imagine how much i have cried...😭

a perfect piece of work...another good one from you...i m gonna remember this for sure...and A Prmise...oghhh...i have read it for so many times tat i forgot the count...its by heart to me nw...LOL

Armaan/chhotu's speech was so nice...I actually cried...and Maan...i think it goes with the title..." Playboy " it was all about Maan...and TOO GOOD...:):)

i jst loved ur note...you are the best...what you said was so true...!!!! Loved it...!!!!

i think it ends with a positive note...kya baat...kya baat...kya baat...👏

everytime i read ur work n it become my fav...n i think this is the best...but u keep writing best...race with ur own OS...WOW

i hate you when you make me cry...but u know...I LOVE YOU MUCH MORE THAN THAT...

i m not exaggerating...but i think...you should take a BOW...HATS OFF TO YOU MAN...:))

my fav...A promise...kiss and now Playboy...

how can u write this tragic stories this much beautifully...????????

jst loved it...:):):) And yes...i read somewhere in comments that YOU ARE THE OFFICIALLY TRAGEDY QUEEN OF IF...i wont disagree...

logo ko rulati rehti jo ho...kese karti ho...???

love you...your work...your FF...Maaadddyyy...:):):):)

Originally posted by: maanddy

Awww...Shan !

Thank you so much babes ! You see when I told you it is little bit different then it was making sense ! 😉

And, yes apart from Maaneet part, my fav part was Maan and Armaan, and yes, Maan and Meera, I would love this kind of relation, rarely we can see such beautiful relation where a boy and a girl, they are just pure friends ! So close and understanding !

Loved that you loved it !

Thank you so much once again, it matters a lot to me, you know that na ? 😉

So sorry for replying late but I was very busy and I'm very busy, as lots of thing going on ! 😉

Love you ! 🤗

Originally posted by: dimpzz

awww maddy!
that was really touching and beautiful!
the ending was really touching!
armaan's speech! i can't ell you how much i loved it!
loved the bond that chottu and maan shared...he took care of him even when he wanted him to go
you hardly find such people now-a-days...
and maan waited for her all the while
it was really sad, maan was helping the girl by donating his blood but fate played a cruel game with him and he ended up having AIDS
but finally geet came back to him and they did marry finally!
and i loved the way you described everyone's relation
maan and meera, jay being such an amazing and understanding husband.
i shall always remember this SS
and i hate you...i'm crying like a fool right now! and i still can't help crying! i sooo hate you for this!!
it was written really beautifully!!
and how could you even think that this wouldn't be nice??
it was one of the best SS's i've ever read!

love
Navpreet