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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all maddy...thanx for giving us such a wonderful story...
u said it was story of relations...this is wot i feel while reading chotu's part...if i ud be a simple love story of maan n geet it wont be as special as it is...wid meera n armaan
coming to geet as i told u earlier m kinda possessive person n at start i felt a tinch of myself in geet...although she knew it dat maan was her yet she was insecure...its a negative behavior but she was having him ONLY in her life as true love...n u know true love often scares u of lost n u bcm mean regarding ur most precious n beloved person...so i guess her being jealous or insecure from meera was not a big issue...although meera n maans relation is one of most beautiful relations of world...😊
the thing which irks me was her leaving him all of sudden without even talking to him for a while...without listening to him...that was a bit weird, she behaved like a insane fool, not even for a while she thought blood transfusion is 2nd big cause of AIDS...n if she got it...her love, her maan was also having it...😕
later on it bcm heart wrenching...it was difficult for me to even read him in sucha miserable condition😭😭😭
coming to armaan, i felt beauty of there relation was enhanced by him😊
overall it was superb fantabulous story...👏👏
hats off to u for raising a sensitive issue in sucha beautiful way👏


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Posted: 14 years ago

Maanddy u write so well...i read all the parts in one go...very emotional...hattke...and character of Chootu was excellent...

p.s. do u like Castle???

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Posted: 14 years ago
manndy
wowww awesomeee
luved ittt
u really made me cry yaar
i just dnt have words to tell u hw much i like
hats off to you yaar
seriouslyyy wowww
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan Died😭😭😭
I just read it all and Woww,I Luvd Itt😛
Im off 2 track down ur FF😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 3
oh that was so touching...
no words to say at all...
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Posted: 14 years ago

okay...so here i am...SORRY SORRY SORRY for being late last oone...so i will please you by long one...ha ha

chalo...

Part 1 : scary...catchy...loved it...and cried with Maan... hate u fr makin me cry...lol

part 2 : good one...poor Maan...i cried with him...he was jst so nice and look what happedn to him...:(:(

Part 3 : OMG...this is the HIGHLIGHT of the OS...

and maan's line..." You are the one..." Indeed...it was enough...throughout the OS...i loved Maan more and more...you just breathe him...darling...i envy you for your love and undstndg of maan...awesome...and i loved that part...

" Silence was their communication " i thought...it was the best scene...both wer together n they really need nt much words...how deep loved they have...WOW maaadddy...m loving it more and more...

And, dying part...OHhh...i cried like hell...n when maan confessed that he was scared...awww...i cried too much...i so wanted to be ther n hug him...it was natural...any person wud fear death be it MSK or watever...but then he was nt scared it was just WOW...lik he won death when geet was with him...and dyein scene was incredibly sad...awww...he died holding her hand...and with a smile...WOW...u nailed it...perfectly put...and ARMAAN's speech...wow...i was crying in the end when he explained to have a feelin of dad...Maan was indeed his dad...its not necessary that dad has to be biological father only...wat maan taught him was so good...and loved it...

and when u said it was little diff i was confused bt wen i read it i got it tat armaan part was diff...coz if tat was only maan and geet part then it wud be ordinary n little but fancy...coz two people in love may be complete each other's world...but sometimes other relations are also wonderful n needed...like in yours OS...meera and maan...wow i want this friend...pure and innocent...just friends...and maan and armaan...wow...wat a relation...

you indeed is a creator of emotionally involved and masterpiece...yeah i agree when u said this was broad in concept...coz apart from maaneet love there was too good explanation for relations...and i think you should dedicate this OS to maan...it was for him, by him, to him...

Guzaarish...song is my fav...and i read last part with song ON...so you can imagine how much i have cried...😭

a perfect piece of work...another good one from you...i m gonna remember this for sure...and A Prmise...oghhh...i have read it for so many times tat i forgot the count...its by heart to me nw...LOL


Armaan/chhotu's speech was so nice...I actually cried...and Maan...i think it goes with the title..." Playboy " it was all about Maan...and TOO GOOD...:):)

i jst loved ur note...you are the best...what you said was so true...!!!! Loved it...!!!!

i think it ends with a positive note...kya baat...kya baat...kya baat...👏

everytime i read ur work n it become my fav...n i think this is the best...but u keep writing best...race with ur own OS...WOW

i hate you when you make me cry...but u know...I LOVE YOU MUCH MORE THAN THAT...

i m not exaggerating...but i think...you should take a BOW...HATS OFF TO YOU MAN...:))

my fav...A promise...kiss and now Playboy...

how can u write this tragic stories this much beautifully...????????

jst loved it...:):):) And yes...i read somewhere in comments that YOU ARE THE OFFICIALLY TRAGEDY QUEEN OF IF...i wont disagree...

logo ko rulati rehti jo ho...kese karti ho...???

love you...your work...your FF...Maaadddyyy...:):):):)




Edited by maansi85 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Seems you are extremely busy today...u did not checked my PM...😭

don worry...take ur time...and reply me later...i know u hv gt sum marriage or sumthing...i will wait...pls...do reply...i just loved that work...and i cnt tell u how much i have moved...
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg!...i seriously can't stop crying!..😭.
beautifully written!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg i m just speechless.. hatts off u maandy...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb
Amazing OS
Thanks 4 The PM
See You Soon In The Next One
Cant Wait

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