MG FF: Shaadi.com updated part 12 page 39 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
liked the domesticated maan😉bossy geet ..diff from the regular geets...
thanx for the long update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
hey i like ur ff its really nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Great update. Thanx for the pm...
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Wow Zooni. that was simply gr8. U are getting better and better every time u write. And thanx so much for the pm.Waiting eagerly for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is to all those who comment me:
REPLY FOR PAGE 19:
preethia: haha thx for the comment!! well glad that u loved it!! ya but more to come...😈😈😈will be updating geet's past soon!!
MaaneetLuverr: hmmm hapi that you loved the update.. and ya thx for the long comment!! more to come dear... full of surprises!!! will be updating geet's past soon!!😈(well my evil smile do have a reason.. read my next update u will noe)
ruhakhan: hey glad you like my ff!! you want me to add you in my pm list do tell me!!
REPLY FOR PAGE 20:
Mehek25: thx for the commnt.. hmmm i geting better and better ok now i'm in my cloud9...😉yup will be updating soon!!
REPLY FOR PAGE 21:
simi91: thx for the comment!! i've added you in my pm list!!! hope you do continue read it!!! moe surprises to come!!! will be updating soon juz that i'm currently busy with my project research!! will pm you when updated!!!
OK GUYS NEXT TIME I REPLY TO THOSE WHO GIVE ME LONG COMMENTS AND TO NEW READERS!!!! AND FOR THOSE ANGELS WHO COMMENTS THANKS IN ADVANCE!! LOVE U GUYS FOR UR SUPPORT!!
PLS DO FEEL FREE TO LEAVE BEHIND UR FEEDBACK AND HIT CONTINUE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON!!
Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
awesome update well done zooni
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
interesting & amazing concept
read in one go
love the btw geet & sonali,maan
omg jai after muskan i hope
maaneet rescue her on time
wow geet has her own company
cant wait to know geet past
ur doing awesome job
love it core
pls cont soonnn
do add me ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just came across ur ff
it is really awesome
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shaadi.com part eight:

Maan emailed the details and both went to the destiny mall.. they reached the mall juz in time the protection arrived.. Geet and maan rushed towards the restaurant.. they both saw muskaan and got the protection secured around her immediately making sure no one is near her.. geet ran to muskaan and hugged her tightly making others shocked to see tight security in the restaurant..

Muskaan: geetbaby what happen? (moving her in front and looked at her)

Geet(turned looked at jai): JAI CHOPRA or should i call you JAI SINGH RATORE?? (looking at him with an angry face) how could you even think of hurting my di to get back at me LOSER? As long as Geet Handa is alive you can't even dream of reaching her shadow! (the police arrived and got jai arrested)

Jai: you can't arrest me without evidence?

Maan: we will see about that!! ( saying this maan bought geet and muskaan away frm there... maan drove with the security behind them and in front..)hey you both ok?

Muskaan: yup! (looked at geet who has been holding muskaan's arm since they left) geetbaby are you ok? (geet didn't answer.. both could understand how she was feeling and let her calm down..they reached the mansion and the three of them went in..)

Dadi: hey where you guys went?

Maan: oh dadi nothing to worry! Why don't you go and rest... i'll explain in the morning..and ya she is muskaan, geet's sister!

Dadi: oh how are you beti? ok it's late! Go and rest!! (geet went to her room and sat by the window.. maan and muskaan went out of the room not wanting to disturb her.. maan showed muskaan her room and left to his room.. geet sat by the window seat and thought abt her past that happened in London)

Flashback in London

A new year in a new college! Geet entered inside her new school feeling nervous as how she going to face this life in this school. Geet took a deep breath checked her name list which class she was going to while looking for it she saw a guy handsome charming with a sweet smile approaching towards her.

Guy: hi I'm imran.. I'm the peer leader here.. you look new.. are you looking for your class?

Geet: hi I'm geet.. ya do you know where G2-306 is?

Imran: come I'll show you.. (while walking) so geet what course did you take?

Geet: business studies! How abt you?

Imran: I'm in wedding planner my last year!!

Geet: wow wedding planner course! How I wish I would have sign up the course..

Imran: then why didn't you?

Geet: oh my parents.. they want me to take over their business and I don't want to hurt their feelings by saying no I want to wedding planner course..

Imran: oh that's nice of you!

Geet: anyways how you find the course? What you do in it?

Imran: I enjoy every moment in it!! Though it's tough it's reali fun to plan a wedding..maybe i can show you some of my projects that I done..

Geet: oh thx! I would love to see them! is my class that far?

Imran: ya it's a big sch and your class it's at the end..

Geet: ok!

Imran: did you get your timetable?

Geet: oh ya I have! (showing her file which she got frm her orientation)

Imran(looked at the timetable): hmmm looks like you have free time two hours after the first lesson..

Geet: hmmm ya not sure what I'm going to do? I have lunch break after that also!

Imran: ok then wanna meet up I will show you around the sch?

Geet: well before that friends?

Imran(laughed at the cute way she has put her hand forward): friends! So now your ans?

Geet: oh ya sure! Where to meet you?

Imran: will come to your class!

Geet: ok..

Imran: that's ur class!

Geet: ok thx! See you later..

Imran: sure! Hey ur number? (geet gave the number and went in her class..)

When geet entered the class she again took a deep breath seeing all those eyes at her as if they were seeing an alien entering the class'

Geet: sorry big sch got lost!

Teacher: it's ok! Come in.. I'm Mr Steven! (geet smiled at mr steven and went to sit in an empty sit at a corner..)

After an hour of bonding section, geet made a few friends..

Mr Steven: ok guys class over' see you again day after tmr!

Mr steven left and geet carried her bag to meet imran who was waiting outside. Outside she saw most of her gals frm her class was flirting with him..

Geet: hi imran!

Imran: hey hi geet! (walked towards her)let's go..

Geet: wow someone seems busy!

Imran: stop joking! Hey I'm hungry.. let's go grab something before touring the school!

Geet: ok! (both brought their food and walked to a bench near physical department..)seems you like this place a lot!!

Imran: yup mine hideout!! (settling down)

Geet: you don't have lesson today?

Imran: since i'm a peer leader..i'm excused from lesson.. (geet's phone rang)

Geet: sorry my dad! (ans the call)hi dad? How are u?

Dad: fine dear! how is ur first day of college?

Geet: oh not bad.. I made a few friends..how's mum?

Dad: she's fine dear..

Geet: when are you comin? I reali missed you both!

Dad: '

Geet: dad?

Dad: ya dear we missed you both also..

Geet: so when are you comin?

Dad: sorry dear we wont be able to come this time.. (geet kept quiet as she was upset they are not comin again..)geet sorry you noe we miss both of you'will try to come if we have finish the work.. do me a favour?

Geet: hmmm what is it?

Dad: go to office and sign some documents for me! It's urgent!

Geet: but dad?

Dad: pls geet it's urgent!

Geet: ok fine! Will miss you both!!

Dad: me too.. ok got to go!! Bye.. take care..

Geet: ok bye! Take care'

After the call hang up, geet sat missing her parents..

Imran: hey geet you ok?

Geet: no it's juz that i missed my parent alot!! They promised us they would come this time but...

Imran: us?

Geet: me and my sis, muskaan!

Imran: hey come on its not that they mean to break their promise...come on cheer up! Ok let's go walk around.. come..

Both went around the school while going around imran's friends called him from behind. Both turned around hearing their name..

Imran: hey hi!

Guys: hi!

Guy1: hey you not going to introduce us to her?

Imran: this is geet new student.. geet this is jerry, Kelvin, Andrew, vinod, Katie and cindy..

Geet: hi!

Andrew: hey babes you look gorgeous!

Imran: hey stop flirting with my gal..

Andrew: ok chill dude! Ok we are sneaking out! Wanna come?

Imran: not today.. you guys carry on!

Jerry: yup we get it.. bye!

C/Ke/Ka/A/V: ok bye! (after they left)

Imran: hey sorry abt that!

Geet: no its ok! You guys sneak out?

Imran: at times!

Geet: wow cool! But dont you guys get caught?

Imran: no we have our way!

Geet: what u guys normally do?

Imran: compose music at jerry's place..

Geet: music? What instrument you play?

Imran: guitar!

Geet: wow love to listen to it!

Imran: sure anytime! So wat are ur hobbies?

Geet: shopping with friends, travelling and listening to music.. what abt u?

Imran: playing guitar, hanging out with friends and love researching in net abt types of wedding..

Both spend the whole break chatting and touring the school.. after lunch break, geet went to her class. She settled down in her place when a guy came sat beside her..

Guy: hey hi i'm jignesh! U're?

Geet: hi i'm geet!

Jignesh: had ur lunch?

Geet: yup with a friend of mine! Wat abt u?

Jignesh: ya sadly i ate alone..

Geet: dont worry next time you can eat with me! So why you join this course?

Jignesh: found other course boring so tried this one... u?

Geet: well my parent choice so i'm here!

Jignesh: if not?

Geet: wedding planner!

Jignesh: ok so will you be one in the future?

Geet: definitely!

Jignesh: then i book you in advance!!! So i would get discount..

Geet: haha very funny.. but love to..

After some time their lesson started and end at around 5pm.. Geet packed her bag said bye to her friends and came out of the class when she saw imran sitting on the railing outside her class..

Geet: hey hi imran! What you doing here?

Imran: waiting for you! (jumpin off the railing)

Geet: me?

Imran: yup i'm going to a bridal shop to pick up a gown so i tot of bringing you along!

Geet: gown?

Imran: yup for my project!

Geet: oh but i have to go my dad's office to get some documents signed!

Imran: oh will it take long?

Geet: nope!

Imran: ok then we'll go there then get the gown!

Geet: ok then! (both walking out frm their sch when her phone ring.. ) hello?

Person: hello mdm? It's me Jason!

Geet: Jason? Oh what is it?

Jason: mdm ur dad told me to get some of the documents signed by you!

Geet: yup i noe.. i'm on my way!

Jason: no mdm it's urgent so i came to your school!

Geet: WHAT? who told you to come here?

Jason: the documents are urgent mdm so i came over..

Geet: ok you wait there! i'll come out.. (after hanging up the line)

Imran: hey who was it?

Geet: my dad's manager!

Imran: what happen?

Geet: he came to my sch!

Imran: for what?

Geet: to get those documents sign!!

Imran: but you were going there rite? ( both went out of the sch saw her dad's manager..)

Jason: good evening mdm!

Geet: where are the documents?

Jason: here mdm! (took it and went through it.. she sign it and gave it back to him)

Geet: ok done!!here.. (looking at imran) let's go..

Jason: huh mdm?

Geet: what?

Jason: want me to drop you at ur house?

Geet: nope i'm going out!! (went off with imran)hmmm so where is the shop?

Imran: Churton Street!

Geet: oh shit!!

Imran: what happen?

Geet: arjun!

Imran: huh? I dont get you! (geet pointed at a guy staring at her frm far.. he started to walk towards her)

Arjun: i need to talk to you! Come with me! (grabbing her hand and pulling her away)

Geet: arjun leave me!! (imran pushed arjun off.. )

Arjun: hey you stay off!! She's mine!! (grabbin her towards him)

Geet: i'm not and never urs!!! let me go arjun!!! (pushing him away she grabbed imran and walked frm there..they both got into a cab and went frm that place..)

Imran: hey you ok?

Geet: hmmm ya!

Imran: who was he?

Geet: arjun! Schoolmate frm my previous school!

Imran: stalkin you behind??

Geet: ya!!

Both spend the evening choosing gown after that had their dinner and went back home.. Days turn to weeks then months, both got to know each other better and soon become best friends..

Geet(called imran): hey imran where are you? Did you forget we suppose to go for a movie today?

Imran: oh geet shit i totally forget abt it!!

Geet: IMRAN!!! Where are you?

Imran: at the airport with mum!

Geet: what are you doing at the airport?

Imran: my bro is coming today frm India!

Geet: oh ok! We shall go next time then..

Imran: sorry geet!

Geet: it's ok.. bye.. (when she was about to hang up)

Imran: hey geet?

Geet: ya!

Imran: why dont you come to the airport? I'll introduce him and my mum also...

Geet: no ur bro and mum might want to have some time together.. maybe next time!

Imran: you wait i'll ask her! (after asking his mum) hey she didn't mind.. she love to see you!

Geet: reali?

Imran: yup.. hey do something since there is some delay in his flight why dont you meet me in the airport?

Geet: ok i'll meet you there! (geet went to the airport and saw imran and his mum) hey imran! Hi aunty..

Imran: hey hi! (hugged her)that's my mum! And mum that's geet!

Imran's mum: hello geet how are you?

Geet: i'm fine aunty.. (all waited for around 45 minutes until a guy waved his hand frm far at us..)

precap: imran's bro is being revealed!!

ACCIDENT!!!😲
maan finds out geet's past..
ok guys sorry couldnt update more.. 🤢 my eyes are feeling so tired it's 4.45am here got to sleep... 🥱 well hope you have like the update...thx to my mum and di for the names given in this update if not i would have been stuck there thinking of names(well you see my brain onli tot of GC and MSK name)🤣🤣.. writing a story is so much easier than writing those names... LOVE U MUM AND DI!!!😉 ok will update the rest of the past soon... pls do leave your comment on how was this update and HIT the like button!! For those who given me long comment, i have replied to you!! thank you all those who have shown your support!! i'm always pleased with your comment and am looking for to read it!!😃
Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

waiting for next update.. pls update pretty soon...😉

Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago

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