MG FF: Shaadi.com updated part 12 page 39

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hey hi i'm zooni 20 years old this year!! i'm frm singapore and currently studying and working!!! i have read alot of ff from this forum and got inspired to write one!!
below is my character sketch and first part of my first new ff!!
pls do leave your comment!!!
i will continue updating if i see you guys like my ff!
PS: i have only added their character's name but their character is not how they are shown in GHSP!!
~Shaadi.com~
Character sketch:
Geet Handa is a matured gal, 20 going on 30, very soft - hearted in hard exterior, tend to be angry when provoke and aloof..
Muskaan Handa is a bubbly, down to earth, over friendly, extremely lazy, stubborn and helpful..
Maan Singh Khurana is a sensitive, very kind, rich but doesn't show off, a dreamer and soft spoken..
Neeshi Ora is a tomboyish, fun-loving, friendly, innocent and cute..
Jai Malholtra is a hot, good looking, irritating, helpful and keeps his feels to himself..
Karan kapoor is a flirt, annoying, childish and immature..
Ghan Singhania is an immature, playful, annoying and flirty..
Pooja Sharma is a big time flirty, modern, ambitious and hurt others at time..
Mrs Jo is a kind, strict when comes to work and cares a lot for others..
Armaan Malik
Riddhima Gupta
Arjun Singh Rathore
Imran Malik
Savithri Devi
Sonali
more characters to come...
Shaadi.com Part one:

First year in night class for wedding planner course! At around 6pm, Mrs Jo entered the class where the new students were waiting for her.

Mrs Jo: Good evening students! I'm Mrs Jo your new course teacher.. Ok since it's the first day of class we shall introduce each other before starting the lessons. But please join the tables together by.. wait(checking class list seeing how many students)ok 8..hmmm look like one person is still not here.. Ok nevermind! Join the table of 4 and leave one sit at the side of second row.

Everyone: ok Mrs Jo!

Few minutes after joining the tables.

Mrs Jo: ok settle down! Let's start our introduction. Tell me your name and why you choose this course. Ok you(pointing at the first row first girl at the side)stand up and intro yourself.

Gal1: aahhh me? Ok hi guys! (turned and facing everyone) I'm neeshi ora.. I join this course because I just love wedding!

Mrs Jo: ok neeshi! Now pick one person to continue.

Neeshi: ok this girl beside me!

Gal2: me? Ok (standing up facing everyone) hi guys I'm Muskaan Handa. I joining this course of my si...oh no no I had to join that's why.

Mrs Jo: ok Muskaan you pick one person and sit down!!

Muskaan: ok hmmm that girl behind at the corner!

Gal3: hi i'm pooja sharma. I join this course cause I like to plan weddings. Oh ya pick choose a person rite? This guy in front of me!

Guy1: uff! my turn? oh hi I'm karan kapoor the coolest dude around. I join this course just to pass time. That guy behind me flirting with pooja.

Guy2: karan tum bhi na.. oh hi everyone! Oh hi I'm Ghan Singhania.. I join this course because of my best friend(hitting karan's shoulder).. this guy in front of me..

Guy 3: oh hi I'm Jai Malholtra.. I join this course because I like to do something different so I took this course.. hmmm who haven't been picked? Oh ya you!!

Guy4: hi I'm Maan Singh Khurana.. my reason for joining this course because fate bought me here(looking at a girl in white salawar kameez almost to knock the door)

Mrs Jo: Fate?

Everyone looked at him and turn to the direction he was looking at..

Mrs Jo: ya how may I help you?

Gal4: sorry mdm to interrupt your class. I'm new here for wedding planner course. Is the class for that course?

Mrs Jo: yes dear! You're at the right class. Come in!

Gal4: sorry mdm was held up with work won't happen again.

Precap: continue of intro and Geet Handa's entry!!

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For those guys who are in my pm list and dont want to be in, pls do let me noe also!!šŸ˜‰
Index:-
Part one(page 1):
(above)
Part two(page 3):
Part three(page 5):
Part four(page 10):
Part five (page 12):
Part six (page 15):
Part seven (page 17):
Part eight (page 21):
Part nine (page 25):
Part ten(page 30):
Part eleven(page 35):


Part twelve (page 39):



Remember to comment and HIT the like button..
pls give me some feedback if i have to improve on anything!
For those silent readers pls i don mind if you dont want to comment but pls do HIT the like button!!it would motivate me to continue updating!!
* 😭😭 10000 over viewers and not much people liking it!!! 😭😭 pls pls do hit the like button it motivates me to continue updating!!! thx to those angels who have hit the like button and comment!!! Love u guys!! pls continue to show ur supports!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start/...
plzz add me in...
looking forward for some great updates...
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally! EVERYONE pls make way for my sister! She has finally grown up, plucked up the courage and write this ff.. Love you sister.. Everyone pls like her ff and comment.. Well what i have to say when i already know this ff long ago.. I just have to say, I LOVE IT SISTER.. And i love you zoo baby.. šŸ¤— and you knw i cant like you now because im at grandma place and on phone.. But when im back at home, ill surely like it.. You should knw i love this ff.. Right? And rmb to give credit to me as well for the character sketch.. šŸ˜† I sound despo.. Okay never mind.. Congrats my little sister for the first ff.. Love love love love love you baby.. And you knw that.. 😃
Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara25

Finally! EVERYONE pls make way for my sister! She has finally grown up, plucked up the courage and write this ff.. Love you sister.. Everyone pls like her ff and comment.. Well what i have to say when i already know this ff long ago.. I just have to say, I LOVE IT SISTER.. And i love you zoo baby.. šŸ¤— and you knw i cant like you now because im at grandma place and on phone.. But when im back at home, ill surely like it.. You should knw i love this ff.. Right? And rmb to give credit to me as well for the character sketch.. šŸ˜† I sound despo.. Okay never mind.. Congrats my little sister for the first ff.. Love love love love love you baby.. And you knw that.. 😃

LOVE YOU TOO DI!!!šŸ¤—
thanks for commenting!!
ok here you go THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR HELPING ME WITH THIS FF!!šŸ˜‰
yup i have taken alot of courage to post this ff!! reali hope they like it!!
FOR THOSE COMMENT ON TIS POST>>
THANKS GUYS FOR YOUR SUPPORT WILL CONTINUE UPDATING!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the FF...drawing from ur life i see, i'm sure this ones going to rock...
continue to pm me
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Originally posted by: bangalores

congrats on the FF...drawing from ur life i see, i'm sure this ones going to rock...
continue to pm me

thx di!! you were spot on!! i wrote this with me in mind but i reali wanted to write it as maaneet ff!! will pm you when i update!!!
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congrats on the FF..šŸ‘šŸ¼
thanks for the pm
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Lovely start
Nice character sketch
Do cont soon Xx...
Plz PM me wen you update your next part...šŸ‘
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awesome start
plzz add me in ur pm list
looking forward for some great updates...
keep writing
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Lovely dear...very well written.Go on:)

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