MAANEET IF - KAISA YE PYAAR HAI - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 31

Maaneet ff--kaisa ye pyaar hai

Inside the cabin

Maan: get out

Geet:

Maan: tumhe ek baar me sunai nhi deta

Mere cabin se bahar niklo...

Geet: aapka cabin?

Maan: ha...

Mera cabin...

Jis company kit um baat kr rhi ho

Wo meri company hai

"Maan singh khurana ki"

Tumhe meri secretary ki job ke liye appoint kiya gya hai...

Geet: kya?😲

{he babaji, apko pure jaha mein inhi ki company mili thi, mujhe job dene ke liye...

Abhi job mili, aur gyi bhi...

No...

Babajiii...}

Maan: tum jar hi ho yha nhi

Ya mein security guard se khke , tumhe bahar nikalwayu...

Geet: wo mein...

Maan: bhut khliya...

Go away...

Outside the cabin

Pinki: geet kya hua

Geet:

Adi: geet kuch bolo bi'

Maan sir gussa kis baat pe huye

Geet: wo adi sir

Sasha: ye kya khengi

Jo khehna tha wo isne phle kh diya

Aur isse dekhke lagta hai

Naukri ke phle hi din isse nikal diya gya hai

Adi: sasha

Tum asa kaise kh sakti ho

Sasha: oh common

Adi

Maan came out of his cabin and said in loud voice:-

Mein tumhe yha baatein krne ke paise deta hu

Ya

Kaam krne ke

Go to back your work.

Sasha: yes MK

Maan left the place and enter in cabin.

Pinki: geet tu mere sath chl

At other side

Adi: geet kya hua

Maan sir ase gussa kr rhe hai

To jarur koi baat hai

Geet speak all conversation those happen few minutes before.

Pinki: kya😉

Tune DD ko unke cabin se nikal jane ke liye kaha

Geet: ha pinki mujhe nhi pata tha

Wo is company ke MD hai

Ab mein kya karu

Adi: hehehe😭😆

Geet: lagta hai adi sir ki tabiyat khrab hai

Adi: mein to thik hu geet

geet ab tum nhi maan sir karenge

jo unhe krna hai

ab mujhe kaun bachaynga

pinki: adi sir aapko kisse bachana hai

adi: pinki ji maan sir ke gusse se

pinki: hmmm

geet: sorry adi sir

mujhe nhi pata tha

adi: geet sorry maan sir se jake kaho

geet: ok

adi:

{Monologue}

oh god ye geet ne kya kr diya

Ab mera kya hoga

{Monologue end}

Pinki: oye geet to kha jar hi hai

Geet: sorry khne

Pinki: ok

Pinki:{ ye adi sir kha kho gye}

Pinki: sir

Sir

Adi: hanji'

Ye geet kha gyi pinki

Pinki: maan sir ko sorry khne

Adi: tumne roka kyun nhi

Abhi wo bhut gusse mein honge

Naukri to gyi

Pinki: don't worry sir

geet ki naukri nhi jayengi

Adi: geet ki

Mein aapni baat kr rha hu

Pinki: sir uski koi guarantee nhi hai

DD ko to jante hai na aap

Geet knock the door of his cabin.

Geet: may I coming sir.

Maan: come

He looks towards the door.

Maan: tum

Geet: sir mein wo aapse

Flashback

In hospital

Outside the patient room

Naina (self talk): ab mein inhe kaise batayu , maine abhi tk geet ko kuch nhi btaya hai.

Aur btaati bhi kaise " mein yha kisi ko janti tk nhi hu'

Mujhe uske naam ke alawa kuch nhi pata hai''''.

''''..

Us accident mein to phone tut gya tha, number tk nhi pata mujhe uska

Ab mein kya karu'''

Inhe kaise batayu''''.

Pr mujhe btana to padega inhe'''..

Unke ghar mein sb pareshan hoge maan ko leke'''''

Nurse: madam''.

Madam'..

Naina : ji

Nurse: aap ye medicine jake le aaiye

Naina: kya mein unse mil sakti hu''.

Nurse: abhi wo so rhe hai,

Madam aap baad mil lijiyenga

Naina: ok

After few minutes, she came.

Naina: nurse medicine mein le aayi hu.

Nurse: ok

Naina: kya unhe

Nurse: aap unse mil sakti hai

She smile and left the place.

She runs and enters in room and hugs her husband.

He: jaan aaram se, mein to yhi hu

Mein tumhe chodkar thode jar ha hu

She placed her hand on lips please don't say that.

He kissed her palm.

She removed her hand instantly.

Naina: ye aap kya kah rhe hai, kbhi chodke jane ke baare mein sochna bhi mt

Nhi to aapki naina aapke bina nhi rh payengi,

Wo mr jayengi,

He: naina, abhi tum mujhe kh rhi thi aur ab tum

She held his hand and kissed on his hand.

Naina: sorry jaan, apni naina ko maaf krdo

He: maafi to ase nhi milengi

Naina: to kaise milengi

Nurse interrupts his conversation.

Nurse: sir aapki medicine ka time ho gya hai

He: hmmm



Precap: you guess


part 32

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends koi nya hai jo
ye story starting se pdna chahte ha
please go on 1st page
wha saare link hai

enjoy
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...i am sure there are two patients...Maan and Naina's husband...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ummm ,,, naya bande kaoun hain?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear plz continue soon :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago



nice..ab maan kya karegi..hum maneetka off scenes dekhsakthe haina..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum;D
Loved it;D
thanks for the pm;D
cont.soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update...are there two patients in the hospital but the other patient's style of talking is just like Maan...I think Priyanka u should open this suspense now...from many last parts we are confused about the hospital scenes...

thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
good one
do continue soon

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