MAANEET IF - KAISA YE PYAAR HAI - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
ritzy09

awesome update...i am sure there are two patients...Maan and Naina's husband...


dear jldi pta chl jayenga
ki patient do hai ya ek
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
18mypride

ummm ,,, naya bande kaoun hain?

dost ya dushman honga
ya maan
do hi ho sakta
ek to geet ka dushman ho
ya dost
ya pyaar
ya kuch aur
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
tushti-kiran
very nice update...are there two patients in the hospital but the other patient's style of talking is just like Maan...I think Priyanka u should open this suspense now...from many last parts we are confused about the hospital scenes...

thanx for pm.


ok dear

next to next upadte mein mil jayengi
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

par ek problem hai ... u repeat things a lot ... jaise abhi woh naina aur nurse ka convo ... its all repeated ...

n starting part of maaneet convo ...

plz ... try n avoid repeating ... its a request ...



dear naina uar nurse ki conversation maine isliye repeat ki pichla scene kha khtm huya tha yaad aa jaye
khi koi confusion na ho
ok
next time mein repeat nhi krungi
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
Harneetluvesksg
nice part
who is da man with naina :\
cont soon

harneet <3


naina kaun hai jldi pta chl jayenga
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Posted: 13 years ago
TUH GENIUS HAI MERI BAHNA, EK SAATH 2-2 STORY LIKH RAHI HAI👏😛..MAIN TOH EK KO LEKE HI PAGAL HO GAYEE THI...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
$ara_$hachi
forget to mention before - the banner is awesome ... loved it

loved the update & honey bunch stop posting same pics again, me poor soul think i am reading the same part again and again whenever i see those pic😆 ... well, waiting for the update about past & present, both ... eager as ever

do cont soon & do PM me


dear pics aur kha se aayengi
1st day office ki whi pics thi
pr yha situation alag hai
isliye expressions ko smjhane ke liye pics repeat krni padi

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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
preethia
loved the update...
who is naina?

bhut jldi pta chl jayenga dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends thanks for all comments
aur apne views ko share krne ke liye

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 32

Maaneet ff--kaisa ye pyaar hai

She runs and enters in room and hugs her husband.

He: jaan aaram se, mein to yhi hu

Mein tumhe chodkar thode ja rha hu

She placed her hand on lips please don't say that.

He kissed her palm.

She removed her hand instantly.

Naina: ye aap kya kah rhe hai, kbhi chodke jane ke baare mein sochna bhi mt

Nhi to aapki naina aapke bina nhi rh payengi,

Wo mr jayengi,

He: naina, abhi tum mujhe kh rhi thi aur ab tum

She held his hand and kissed on his hand.

Naina: sorry jaan, apni naina ko maaf krdo

He: maafi to ase nhi milengi

Naina: to kaise milengi

Nurse interrupts his conversation.

Nurse: sir aapki medicine ka time ho gya hai

He: hmmm

In khurana construction

Adi: geet

{isse kya hua}

He placed his hand on her shoulder and said "geet".

Geet: ji adi sir

Adi: geet tum yha file lene aayi thi, aur wapas hi nhi aayi

Geet meeting

Geet: wo mein

Adi: geet jbtk maan sir wapas nhi aate tbtk tum hi ye sab sambalna hoga

Geet: ji

Adi: geet ab chlo meeting over ho gyi hai

Deal tumhe hi sign krni hai

Geet: chliye adi sir

Monologue

{Us din maan is naukri ko bachane ke liye aapko manana pda,

Sorry khena pda,

Pr maine wo galati janbuzkar thode ki thi,

Tarika chahe kuch bhi rha ho

Chahe "Maan singh khurana" ko challenge kyun na krna pde.

Pr iss bahane maan aap mujhe mil gaye

Pr maan ab aap kaha ho

"Jo tum nhi pass fir sath ho kaise,

Jo tum nhi pass fir sath ho kaise

Ye mere bina,

kuch baat ho kaise,

ho sham ho ya savera,

Hr wqt h bs tera,

meri kahani mein hr lvz tera h,

krna ye izhaar hein,

kaisa ye pyaar h ,

kaisa ye pyaar h"

Ye kaisa pyaar hai jha aap mere sath nhi hai, fir bhi sath hai,

maan aap jha bhi hai

bs ab aa jaiye

Tears fall down from her eyes.

Monologue end.

Adi: geet

She smiles and come out from his cabin.

Flashback

Geet knock the door of his cabin.

Geet: may I coming sir.

Maan: come

He looks towards the door.

Maan: tum

Geet: sir mein wo aapse

Maan: abhi tumhe aur kuch bhi khena hai

Geet: ji

Maan: kya?

Geet: mere khne ka mtlb wo nhi tha

Jo aap samajh rhe hai

Mujhe nhi pata

He looks towards in her eyes.

Sch mein mujhe nhi pata tha

Aap mere boss hai

Mei wo aapse

She closes her eyes and said "sorry" to maan.

Maan{ kh to ase rhi hai, jaise mujhpe ehsaan kr rhi hai}

Maan: leave

Geet: sir, meri baat to suniye

Maan{irritating voice} : itni der se mein tumhari hi bakwas sun rha hu

Ab yha se jayo

Leave

Geet: aapko meri baat bakwas lag rhi hai

Ek to mein aapse "sorry" kh rhi hu

Aur aap upar se ye khne ke bjaye 'maine tumhe maaf kiya"

Aap mujhe jane ke liye kh rhe hai

He stands and come forward to her and she stepped back.

Geet: mein wo

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Both look into each other eyes and short eye lock happen.

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve''''..

''''''''''''

previous part 31

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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