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Posted: 13 years ago
Jeh Khuranna!
Thank you for nearly scaring me to death and the fringe benefit of giving Virat an extra soul...as if we didn't have enough troubles on our plate...!
Tich everything about your work is always superb...
And this one was simply best...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 71


Deep in the Forest'..

The golden tinged green eyes roved through the forest seeing past the trees. The mind behind the eyes were racing through memories which were made in a different place . The kaleidoscope of thoughts made her shut her eyes, something she otherwise need not do often. After all she was a vampire, fashionably called creature of night, in more brazen terms a blood sucking monster. Normal human behaviour was not their style. None of the human weakness affected them. But they were weaker than humans though they wouldn't care to admit. If humans were prey to their emotions, vampires -once they allow their emotions to surface- were even more so. Precisely for this reason most vampires didn't allow their emotions to get the better of them. This was a boon and bane mix because many emotionless vampires were also downright evil.
She sighed as the onslaught of painful memories subsided. She didn't know why she allowed those memories to torture her every time. But for some reason she did maybe because this is what kept her humanity alive. Yes, she did keep her humanity alive albeit with a big price of living through those horrific memories. She had vowed that she wouldn't let the human in her die so that she could prevent her greatest enemy from killing humans too much.
She sighed and started moving, she was in desperate need of some animal blood or else the circles below her eyes would deepen making it even more difficult for her to appear in human world.
She heard a rustling from her right and a smirk appeared on her pretty face further adding to it sexiness.
"Sorry darling" she said to the animal "Tonight you are mine"

Palekar Residence''


Spinning the tall glass of whisky in his hand, Virat's eyes roamed through the stars. Owning two souls wasn't exactly a bed of roses especially when his brothers emotions kept playing in his head. Virain was always slightly more hot headed than him. Combine it with their hatred for the Khuranna, he was right now having a field with the two souls.
This was a curse placed on them some hundred years ago. They had been on a hunting or rather killing spree with a vicious pack. They had killed a family in midst of a marriage function. Unfortunately for them there was a witch amongst them. While torturing her she had screamed
"Together you shall never find peace" and this is how the curse had manifested.
"All the better'..with your power added onto mine brother I shall finish of the pathetic Khuranna's"
Virat vowed.


Back in the Forest'

She wiped the last trace of animal blood from her lips and leaned against the tree. The blood would do it's work on her face now.
"Tsk tsk sister still on animal blood" the very familiar voice sneered at her.
"Niyala" she said through gritted teeth. Her eyes sprang open with furious fire blazing in them.
"Nice to meet you Tirtha darling'after 100 years na" Niyala said with her classic evil smirk.
"Yeah'.hundred years you evaded me and succeeded in killing so many innocent humans'not any more Niyala" Tirtha stood an inch away from her sister.
Niyala cocked her head to one side and looked at her elder sister. She was still the same always trying to correct her. Why didn't she understand that she didn't like to be corrected.
"I had decided to meet you big sister'that is why I asked the witch to remove the spell which hid me from you'.because I felt like playing with you" Niyala said in an innocent voice.
"Is that so? Then I shall enjoy the game" Tirtha answered back coolly.
Niyala turned and said while walking away while saying.
"Until we meet later big sister, take care"

Meet our new character...
Tirtha (Tich)
A 150 year old vampire, she is trying to both undo her past. It took a precious loss to teach her what the value of love is. She has only one aim, bringing down her vicious sister Niyala, Aldar's daughter. Let's see where this journey takes her.

Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome chapters gals u did a good job
Thxs for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates guys
Poor Nidh jeh scared her to the hell. . .Virat has become so dangerous now . . .
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nidhs, awesome part...
ah, ashish kapoor as virat...
wow too cool yaar..
i was imagining kushal who is equally hot.. but still i love UV too..
and me a goody good vampire??? that's so sweet of you.. yet witty, sarcastic and smart.. i love this character sketch.. nice job jaan..
waiting to see what's the past...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Posted on behalf of Fiza...



Ch 72
Yeh dooriyaan

Sanjus POV

It had been almost more then two weeks since shaurya was gone out of town on the business trip.
why is his absence worrying me so much why . I mean I am a big girl. I can Handel myself a it shouldn't bother me- him being here or not I'm mean it has been fun I don't have n 1 to cook or clean or come home early to just enjoy party with the girls, live life khulke err then why am I thinking so much about him why maybe it's because of the fight I had with him before he left for New York

* flash back*
What the hell shaurya I just packed your bag why are you messing it up n repacking it says sanju

I don't want a liar , someone who calls them self a woman, lies about gods blessing a baby this is just wrong Sanjana how could you have said that to Papa huh how dare you? are you so dumb says Shaurya

Oh god shaurya please for the 100th time I'm explaining but not after this I did it beacuse I love my parents uff now please just drop it says sanju

No I won't you won't get it trough your thick head the seriousness of this it's not just that damn it I ... he stops

I what just say it come on spit it out ? says Sanju

I know this just a contract marriage but a wife and family is something I always wanted and you lie about expecting my fake child n planning on killing it with a fake miscarriage just disgusts me n what you say you love your parents yeah right Sanjana you only love yourself your freedom you are just so cheap and your down market ideas good bye I'm getting late says Shaurya nd leaves

Flash back ends *

Nidha's house...

"Thanks girls I so need this" Sanju grabs a soft drink and plomps down on a sofa "uff that shaurya he just irritates me" says sanju
"Oho you missing him already" tease sur
"Oh please Sur...yaar uska naam kyun li" her face drops
"Hey I am going I just remembered I had some job at home" she got up and left without much warning
"Dakkan uski mood kharab karne ki kya zaroorath thi" Anky hit her sister.
"Mujhe kya patha tha" Sur said rubbing her head.

Sanju's home...

The moment she steps into the house, her eyes widen. The hall central hall was trashed , the vases and table shattered to pieces.

She feels a presence on her right side and turns only to black out the next second.


"Yaar why did you lie to Sanju that you are going to NY?"asks armaan
"Yaar yeh mere aur mere biwi ki baat hai" says Shaurya brushing off the topic.

"He is right armaan don't ask" says abhay
Shaurya calls sanju "uff she doesn't even want to talk see her attitude"

"Yaar is she ok or" says Armaan

"She must be partying n having blast without me who cares" says shaurya

Armaan's phone buzzes up and from his face the others know that it is not good news.

At City Hospital...

Shaurya runs to the ICU door his heart banging against his chest wall. He didn't care about the rest of the world right now. The only name ringing in his ear was...

"Sanju" her name escaped his lips as soon as he saw her lying in the ICU. Her face had wounds and her hand was in a cast.

"Doctor's say she is in coma" Anky told Armaan.

"No! This can't be...she was all fine when I left her what the hell happened to her?" Shaurya shook Anky.

"Shaurya leave her! The Police are here, they might tell us something" Abhay pulls him off...

Inspector: "It's bit weird , we found dog prints that's a bit impossible and fur we feel as if some one dressed up as a dog or werewolf maybe a costume party"

Armaan and Abhay exchange a glance.

Shaurya completely clueless "What the heck! Stop this bullshit sir, please my wife is in the icu and you are talking crap...I need to be with her and you better figure out who is behind this" he storms into the ICU.

Inside the icu

Shaurya holding sanjus hand "I'm so sorry I left you alone please forgive me" a lone tear escapes his eye and rests on Sanju's hand, slowly seeping into her skin.

In the middle of Forest...

"Better let go off me you bloodsucker or else" Jeh said trying to pull off Abhay's hand from his collar.

"Oh really! and I am suppose to believe that" Abhay shot back.

"And I and my brother aren't that daft to leave behind prints you idiot" Jeh shouted back.

"Abhay let go off him, he isn't lying...they wouldn't do this to the girls" Armaan said while eyeing Neel. They were having a mental talk while Abhay and Jeh where trying to kill each other.

"Armaan these dogs killed my family a century ago...why wouldn't they do it now" Abhay asked Armaan not ready to see reason.

"Abhay we weren't even there at the time...we aren't ancients like Virat and Viren and it's them you should approach for answers as to your past" Neel said while keeping Jeh at bay.

"Bhai quit explaining! These leeches are never going to listen to us" Jeh intervened.

"Virat was in a coma right...after you handled him for taking Sur and Nidha hostage" Armaan quizzed "So this must be Viren then"

"Nope this is Virat who unfortuantely is out of his coma and Viren fyi is dead" Neil explained.

"Viren died or" Abhay narrowed his eyes

"I killed him" Jeh replied shortly.

Abhay gave Armaan a see-what-he-can-do look.

"Abhay your doubts are well placed but why would they leave behind traces and more precisely they are freindly with the girls just as we are" Armaan said.

"Listen Abhay whether you believe it ir not I love Sur and the rest are like sisters to me...so harming them is out of question...if we wanted them harmed why would we save Sur and Nidha that day? Plus why should we harm the girls...what motive could we possibly have" Neil asked. He exchanged a glance with Jeh. They where more than sure who was behind this. Jeh was an inch away from flying off the handle.

Abhay started thinking. Neil and Jeh didn't look like they were lying and they wouldn't be daft enough to leave behind evidence.

But there are other wolves here too and Virat...who among those wants to give us a message Abhay thought







Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg. . .Virat is a real devil,he tried to show his presence by attacking on a girl. . .This came as a real shock for the girls and Shaurya. . .Atleast the MU got sorted out and they came to know about Virat
Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice. Loved It. But I Think Nidha You Should Put In Some New Characters. Cause They Are Alot Of New Shows Lately.

I Would Tell You About It If You Want.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing fiza... virat!!!! how how could he stoop??? oops was i expecting much after nidha's ashish pic..????
thank goodness... abhay's misunderstanding got cleared..
now can i hope for friendship between them??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sur001

Omg. . .Virat is a real devil,he tried to show his presence by attacking on a girl. . .This came as a real shock for the girls and Shaurya. . .Atleast the MU got sorted out and they came to know about Virat

Virat is a real devil for sure...but one with brains..
So you will see what the real deal is bhabhiji...

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