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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Tich ...u did a great job👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved It So Much. Nidha Go Get Jay. (:
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: matwamango

This is brilliant Tich U did a great job. I am so busy busy busy breaking cars.


I have torn my wheel

Need to et it fixed.

My course is starting soon i am in trouble uff.

Loving NIDHA'S assertivness with JEH a stubborn dude like him desreves this only She'll get her man soon enough

thanks aysha... i'm glad you loved it.
ohh, lagta youneed driving lessons..
and yeah, nidha will get him soon or not i cant say. i''ll probably drag it.
sabki set hogayi hai atleast ek ko toh time do. jeh-nidha and anky-kabir need to be going..
perhaps i'll work on comedy next.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Tich...welcome aboard dearest...

Must I say that I loved...
It was absolutely entertaining not to say funny too (though I would never honestly open my bedroom dressed in a towel😆)
Aha! The famous silent treatment...did you know that I love this kind of behavior from girls rather than all the rona dhona...this is how a girl should be...if the guys think they are smart then we certainly are better than them...
Loved the update and off course l love you...
Muaahhh...

thanks for a warm welcome nidhs,
i'm glad you loved it..
yeah, you know na comedy is my element.
and yaar jeh knocked bathroom ka door not bedroom ka. he is a gadha, bathroom door knock karega toh what he'll find a girl in towel or saree?
and yes, girls unless they give these male chauvinist pigs a face off they'll continue their lectures.
aww, love you too yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pri01

Lovely update Tich ...u did a great job👏

thanks priya😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Tich. . .You did a fabulous job. . .Awesum loved it. . .i loved these lines most-"first stop that exposing like a film heroine" he said bluntly.

Nidha rolled her eyes. -"just a second" she closed the door. She cursed him, her towel was too long upto the knees, in that case better than the dresses she wears daily and this hero doesn't mind seeing midnight masalas with bikini babes and acts all saint before me, bloody hell!


and my darling shona is all set to torture him with her silence. . .i second Nidha its fun coz the silence make them pull their hairs in thinking"whats wrong wid her or whats going on in her mind?" . . Gr8 work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sur001

Hey Tich. . .You did a fabulous job. . .Awesum loved it. . .i loved these lines most-"first stop that exposing like a film heroine" he said bluntly.

Nidha rolled her eyes. -"just a second" she closed the door. She cursed him, her towel was too long upto the knees, in that case better than the dresses she wears daily and this hero doesn't mind seeing midnight masalas with bikini babes and acts all saint before me, bloody hell!


and my darling shona is all set to torture him with her silence. . .i second Nidha its fun coz the silence make them pull their hairs in thinking"whats wrong wid her or whats going on in her mind?" . . Gr8 work
👏 👏



hahaha... thanks sur for your lovely comment.
yeah you and nidhs are right,
i think you really want jeh pulling his hairs.. dont worry your wish will come true soon..
thanks jaan..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
firstly for some reason i didnt get the pm for this chapter i was about to update the next ch so i wanted see where nidha left off and i came across this update so for ch 66 i must say tich kya roking entery you made i must say i loved the chapter to bits really awesome i too was thinking of bring virat and virein in to the ff great minds think alike i gusse i loved it too good yaar keep up the god work and welcome aboard the pyaar ka jashan tean truely refreshing update love jeh and nidha tit for tat you go nidha show that jeh that with out saying something ones can say so much 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ch 67: valeintines day or fathers day?

Aysha POV

This all my fault this was suppose to happen I didn't even think that this would happen I just thought that it would be fun romantic night for all us friends and couples to enjoy our self the night that was supoose to be romantic and make the ones in love more closer to each othe and ones who our but don't want accept make them realize and confess (jeh nidha) and to make new memories but was instead a night that ended up getting sanju disowned by her father and family and if that wasn't enough my papa and Sharma uncle(fiza's dad) found us in the arms of our respected bf and decided to get us eneaged to the guys they think suitable for us and we have no say in it at all '.today my father is forcing me to get enaged to sujal garewal(kahin tho hoga) and it wont be long when fiza di gets enaged to arnav singh raizada ' I know fiza di wont let that happen in fact she is more worried for me even at last minute she is talking to my papa ' but are fathers have treated us like criminal in our own house we are like jailed and poor sanju because of me she has cried her heart out because bedi uncle met her but totally didnt even want to acknowloged her once he found out about her wedding with shuarya even after it been 3 months he still hasnt forgiven her '.

Fiza di and me have no way to contact anyone not abhay , armaan just sanju only the girls can vist us. And since its my enegement they are coming today god please help me stop this if I get enaged today then I know my wedding wont be far off I sit on bed with eyes closed thinking about what happened a 2 days ago

Flash back*

Valentines day party house is decorated fully with balloons and flowers and candels

Aysha invited armaan, abhay, shaurya, shaurya brought his friend preet (from kis desh) aswell , jeh, neel,kabir and of course the girls

Fiza wore this

Aysha wore this

Nidha wore this

Sanju wore this
Anky wore this
sur wore this

Aysha greeted everyone shaurya introduced preet to everyone nidha had a smirk smile on her face shuarya don't worry ill keep preet company you go and spend time with sanju says nidha

Oye nidha yeh kya hai slient treatment ki saath the j game haan good good ill go find my man says

Aysha

Abhya where did he go suddenly there is a back hug

You are looking so hot in this dress im so lucky your mine says abhay

I dress like this only for my man and no im lucky to have you really every girl dreams of a prince and I have found mine says aysha

No aysha im no prince just a blood sucking vampire says abhay

Aysha looks in his eyes you are my prince charming with a dark side that I like even though what you are I accepted you and your life style I love you happy valentines day she kisses him

Well valentines is tommrow right so ill give your gift then I promise says abhay kisses her fore head

Shaurya and sanju are in the other coner of the room looking at them

She looks so happy they are so cute together aren't they says sajnu

Yes they do but we aren't so bad either says shaurya

Shaurya I know we don't but before she could finish but what huh he is walking in front which makes sanju walk backward shaurya yeh kya her back hits a wall

But what I love you damn it and he kisses her and moves away

Sanju is absolutely lost for words

Listen sanju I really love you and today I had to tell you how I feel I know you feel the same but don't want to accept it that's fine for now my love for you is enough for both of us says shauraya

He walks away

Sanju is is totally confused

Shaurya why did he have to make thinks so akward for me everything was great now him and his emotions and me in love no im not ' am I thinks sanju

Ok everyone now that you all are here lets gets this party started and don't worry papa is not home he is gone with Sharma uncle(fiza's day ) to a business meeting since they are business partners I've told papa im having a small gorls night in so lets enjoy everyone on the dance floor AbSha ,FizMaan, ShaJu, SuNe , go to the dance floor

Anky and nidha also go on the dance floor and just enjoying

Humko kehte superman
On karlo handy cam from AM to PM
Bande at your service ma'am

Nidha sees jeh and goes to preet and dances a lil while with him
jeh is all irrated

Then she goes back to anky but then kabir nidha and anky preet dancing all in a group as friends(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_PghtpDF7A)

Subha hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek doosre ko hum sone na de
Sone na de...

Tenu main love karda(armaan abhay point to their gfs )
Bematlab karda
Baahon mein aa soniye
Bas aaj raat ke liye
Saadi taan desi hai adaa
Saade te hoja ni fida

Baahon mein aa soniye
Bas aaj raat ke liye

Subah hone naa de
Saath khone naa de
Ek doosre ko hum sone na de

girls mouth to there bfs

Tu mera hero (O o o...)
Tu mera hero (O o...)

Subah hone naa de
Saath khone na de
Ek doosre ko hum sone na de
Main tera hero ( O o...)
Haan hero (O o...)
Haan hero, main tera hero..

after a while nidha he all you love birds it gonna be valentines day in 10 '9 '.8'7'. 6' 5' 4' 3' 2' 1 '. HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

Abhay takes aysha in the coner of the room and gives her a red box to open

This is for you something a token of my love happy valentines day ' says abhay

Wow its beautiful I love this ruby bracelet thank abhay

She kisses him

He put the bracelet on her


in the other coner armaan hands fiza a red box o

she opens it

just something small I hope you like it jaaneiye happy valentines day says armaan

wow ruby earings their beautiful says fiza

shaurya takes out a small ring box this for you happy valentines day says shuarya

it's a ruby ring with diamonds around it

this for you my dear wifey says shaurya

mean while at the airport

raj ( aysha dad) Rajeev(fizas dad) and veer bedi(sanjus dad

why don't you come to my house we will sign the deal there and discuss the details says raj

are you sure mr. kapoor at home says mr.bedi

yes I am my daughthr is havinga small little party with her friends girls night in they will be in her room we can be in my study no problem

raj phele aysha beti ko bol do na says Rajeev

nahin yaar ill suprize her its been a while she will be happy to see me and fiza beti will be too chor na yaar lets go says raj

back at the party

all the couples are on the dance floor here is a song I deicate to the love of my life and all my friends says aysha(better affect plz liten love this song( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbjY5eMmbSA)

Mujhe toh chand mil gaya, aaj teri aankhon mein
Karoon kya aasmaan bataa, neendhon bin main raaton mein

Sabhi bechain dhadkane, rakh de mere haathon pe
Zara uljhi hai saans toh, rakh de meri saanson pe

Sharma rahi hain nazrein, tere chehre se jo guzre

(Aysha looking in abhays dreamy eyes)


Sharma rahi hain nazrein, tere chehre se jo guzre

(fiza is blushing as armaan I brings her closer to him)


Main kaise keh doon dil ki yeh dastaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan

Na na na.. pyaar mein

Chehre pe tere ghabrahatein hain kyun
Ruki ruki kadmon ki aahatein hain kyun
Sehma hai pyaar ke, raasto pe dil
Mujhko zara sa tu, faaslo pe mil

Dil mil jaaye toh kaisi yeh dooriyan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan

(Sanju cant you see how much I love you thinks shaurya while dancing with her)

Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan

Ho dil yeh mera kisi ke paas beh gaya
Saanson mein ek naya ehsaas reh gaya

Hota hai sabko yeh tujhe bhi hua
Poori hui hai tere khawabon ki dua

Na jaane kaise badla mera jahaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan

(Nidha thinking why cant you understand that we can make this work but only if you are willng jeh)

Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan

Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan

Ho sharma rahi hain nazre, tere chehre se jo guzre

Sharma rahi hain nazre mere chehre se jo guzre

Toh kaise keh doon, dil ki yeh dastaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan
Ishq hothon se toh hota nahi bayaan
Iss liye pyaar mein aankhein bani zubaan

AbSha , and FizMaan, and ShaJu are slow dancing very close together girls have ther heads on the bfs chest while dancing just then

Aysha! Yells raj

Imeditaly aysha moves away from abhay and so do the others girls from there bfs

Yeh kya hai !

Papa tum itne jaldi yahaan says aysha

Yes and acha hai what is all this says raj

And fiza tum bhi yeh sab says Rajeev

Fiza just put her head down

Sanjana you here mr . kapoor ill leave we will sign deal later says veer

Papa please stop dont go abhi bhu gussa ho im your daugther says sanju

no your this mans wife not my daughther i told ... you before i only have one son and no even if i did no daughter of mine would wear just clothes says veer

Papa please maaf kar do na papa says sanju

No never says veer

sir please if not me atelast sanjana ko maaf kar do she is your blood says shaurya

yes and that is the sad part aaj ki baad i dont want see you again i tol dyou before when i found out the two of you i had said i dont have anything to do with you or your wife mr. kapoor ill take your leave says veer and is walking away

when Sanju runs after him so does shaurya

papa please stop if not for me for your grand child stop tum nana bane wale ho says sanju
shaurya is looking at sanju in shock thinking ek aur lie
kya says veer haan papa mein kal hi pata chala please ab tho maaf kar do na says sanju
main nana theek hai only for my grandchild not for you he leaves
shuarya and sanju both leave
outside the house
what the hell ek jhoot wasnt enough kya that you said sucha big lie sanju this not like are fake marriage we can hide this lie has to come out and it will people will know your not expecting says shaurya
i know shaurya and ihave way to get out of it relax says sanju
and what is that says shaurya
miscarriage simple says sanju
you are unbeliveable sanju this just utterly wrong you your self dont know how wrong this is... next week im going to london do what ever you want ...you make me sick ...i love you but this doesnt meani will supoort you in this you deal with is untill you understand this i dont want to even talk to you only in front of people says shurya
you wont understand your a son your mom will accept you one day or another my family is diffrent says sanju
back inside
Raj grabs aysha and pulls her upstairs and takes her to her room and don't even try to leave this room says raj

Raj comes back down

Looks like valentines day has become fathers day sanjus dad , aysha dad and even fizas says kabir

Shh shut up says anky

Yeah dude fathers day hi hai says neel

Chup kar says sur

This doesn't seem to be going so well says nidha

Walk to abhay and says

Before next week is over I will get my daughter married to someone suited for her not some awara ashiq

Not just aysha raj looking at armaan but even fiza I too will get her married asap come fiza lets leave h grabs her and walks out

*Flash back done*

Fiza walks in

Fiza di did you talk to papa what he say did he agree asks aysha

Sorry aysha he didn't want even listen I tried uncle asked to go get flowers ill be back just don't leave get ready ill be back says fiza

A little while later

Fiza sanjana go and bring aysha down for the engagement

Fiza sanju coming running down uncle aysha isn't in her room says fiza

What where is she asks raj

Im here papa walking in the front door with abhay and armaan by abhays side

They look like this

Oh shit abhay kya kar diya says shaurya

Omg aysha ab tho uncle ka gusa says nidha

Everyone is shocked

thats it for now do comment i hope u like the ch it didnt come out exactly how i wished it would i tried hope u all like it had a bad case of writers block

Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hayyo rabba! Ek shaadhi ki aandhi uthra nahin ki dhoosra utha...Sanju u r unbelievable ithna bada jhoot
Jhoot par jhoot bolkar aap apne liye hi trap bana rahi hon...trust me
Ab rab hi khair karein
Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago

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