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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

amazing fiza... virat!!!! how how could he stoop??? oops was i expecting much after nidha's ashish pic..????

thank goodness... abhay's misunderstanding got cleared..
now can i hope for friendship between them??

Virat is a brainy wolf Tich...do you think he will really do that...
Lets see the real deal...my sweet little vampire...
Abhay and Jeh...they are always at loggerheads na...lets see if we can actually make these tow age old enemies fraternize...
Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artemis678

Nice. Loved It. But I Think Nidha You Should Put In Some New Characters. Cause They Are Alot Of New Shows Lately.

I Would Tell You About It If You Want.

Thanks Nikki..
Your suggestion is always welcome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you Tehzee..
For still keeping pace with this ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 73...

Hopes and Warnings...


Aladarians…..

Viraat gave a contemptuous glance to the vampires around him. He heard the cry of a girl being sucked dry and gave pitiless glance to the girl's body as it hit the ground.

"So are we any closer to finding the sceptre" he quizzed Niyala, who sat crossed in front of him wearing a dress that left nothing much to imagine.

"Very slow progress ….my fool of a vampire toy is taking his own sweet time….he is planning on using his baby sister" Niyala replied while sipping her glass of blood.

"Akanksha Mehra if I am not mistaken….but he should very well know that none of your vampire hocus-pocus will work on those girls….they are protected from all kind of your mind games….so your vampire toy should have a backup plan" Viraat said with a skeptical smirk.

"Don't worry fur ball we know what we have to do…..we will have the sceptre before the next new moon" Niyala said.

"Speaking of plans how is your new assistant coping Viraat" Aldar asked, striding into the room "His latest crusade has become quiet a case…better put him on leash if you don't want yourself dead"
He warned.
"He is very much under leash Aldar...he is a newborn so you can expect the consequences...the girl is very lucky to have survived" Virat said unsympathetically.

"Dead reminds me…you didn't exactly tell us how you came back from coma…..what's with the great punarjanm secret wolfie" Niyala asked twitching her eyebrows.

"I don't really trust you with my secrets vamp Barbie….and for now I think I will keep that to myself" Virat replied in mock sweet tone.

Aldar gave him a piercing look as if to X-ray him. Being ancient rivals they couldn't read each others minds and this was to Virat's advantage. He didn't want anyone knowing that he had double soul now. And it was getting harder because Viren wanted to surface at times.

"Well I think I better be going….I have to teach my puppet a few lessons" he stood up and straightened his coat.

"Teach him well Viraat…you know that I don't really tolerate lack of finesse….you and your brother have messed up things already by giving away your secret….I don't carry along liabilities" Aldar warned.
"I am not a liability Aldar…not anymore" Virat replied without turning back.
I am stronger than you will ever be he added mentally with a menacing smirk.

After he left…..

"We should be keeping a watch on him father….he is a slime ball" Niyala cautioned.

"I have already posted someone to do that Niyala" Aldar replied.

"Oh and someone has blown into town" she said with a smirk.

Aldar raised an eyebrow.

"My sister and your favourite daughter Tirtha" she said in a taunting tone.

Aldar's gaze all of a sudden sharpened. Tirtha was a big loss to him. In their initial days Niyala and Tirtha were instrumental to his plan to usurp Dehradhoon and control the supernatural elements in here.
Tirtha was, like Niyala said, his favourite. Because in her initial days, with the blood cravings full flung, Tirtha was lethal. The prey she set eyes on became hers the next instant. She was his tiny weapon of mass destruction. Small in size but hugely resourceful. He hadn't expected the setback of loosing her when he killed of the girls brother in front of their eyes. Tirtha was much too attached to the boy. He had been turned a vampire just like them but he refused to feed on human and Aldar did not like liability. So despite Tirtha's beggin he drove a stake through her brother's heart.
This cost him Tirtha and now she was a sorry excuse for a vampire.

"Reminiscing the old days father…should I prepare a red carpet welcome for my dear elder sister" Niyala mocked. She hated the place Tirtha had in Aldar's eyes.

"You very well know that I don't take back those who have left us…..Tirtha should have been killed off earlier and it's only her excellent evading skills that keeping her alive…believe me I will personally see to it that she is dead" Aldar said sipping blood from his tall glass.


Mount College….

Fiza took down the notes as the lecturer continued on. These were going to be among her last classes and she didn't want to miss a thing. College would soon come to an end for her and Anky and she felt it was much too soon. Their lives were so unpredictable that she now wanted to live every moment of it with full zeal.
Her father had finally listened to her. He hadn't accepted Armaan and she didn't expect him to do that outright either. After all a parent would always be cautious. But he had agreed to give him time. To consider and that was more than she could ask for. She couldn't even in dreams antagonize her parents and Armaan would anyway would never allow her to do that. They both were satisfied with the current state. Armaan had met with her father and they talked for a while. He had promised to not meet her much (this was going to be difficult) and give Mr. Sharma enough time to consider.

The lecture and Fiza smiled content. The first lecture of the day was good. The day itself had started on a good note. She had seen her dad smile genuinely at her after long. Though Sanju's current state hovered like a shadow on them, they all needed little hopes to survive. Little things in life should be enjoyed.

She walked towards the library. Even though she was watching her steps she bumped into someone or the someone bumped into her.
"Careful Miss. Sharma" the sexy voice she knew well said.
Fiza looked up at her heart with a dazzling smile.
"What are you doing here Mr. Malik don't you have a company to run?" she quizzed him.
"Ah yes….but unfortunately I was distracted by the image of a 5'5" beauty's portrait hanging on my office wall and I decided to see her" Armaan replied leaning onto the wall " How are you" his tone became more serious now.
"I am fine Armaan….in fact I now feel everything is going to be fine" she replied confidently.

"I thought Sanju's current state might be disturbing you" he said
"It is disturbing….but I am sure she will make it out…she has always carved a way out for herself…and I know God will not ignore so many pleas….especially not Shaurya's" Fiza replied hopefully.
"how is Shaurya?" she asked.

"He is coping…and the good news is the maami has come around…she is keeping him company at the hospital….Sanju's parents are here as well" Armaan updated her.

"Oh god! I think they will catch her lie now" Fiza looked alarmed.

"They didn't….Shaurya covered up for her…and even if they did wouldn't they forgive her now?" Armaan asked.

"They would Armaan but still they might feel a little betrayed" Fiza said fairly.

"Hmm…so headed to the library miss bookworm" Armaan asked with a smile.

"Excuse me….my finals are just a few months away…and passing is crucial…you do know that is a criteria for our future together" Fiza said.

Armaan encircled her waist and pulled her closer.

"I do know that…but do you know what the main criteria is?" he whispered near her ear.

"What?" she asked blushing.

"Love" he said with a wink before placing a small peck on her lips.

"Miss. Sharma…I suggest you full fill both the criteria" he said placing back his Ray Ban and giving her a killer smile before walking off.

Fiza shook her head and got into the library. She moved to the third shelf and picked up a text. When she turned a weird site met her eyes.
Anky was pacing back and forth looking all worked up between third and fourth shelves.

"Anky is something wrong?" Fiza asked, her first thought being of somebody else being harmed "All fine with Sur and Nidha na"

"Thank god I found you Fiz…I need your help" Anky hurriedly came to her.

"Anky calm down and tell me what's wrong?" Fiza said placing the book on the table.

"Everything is wrong Fiz….I mean you are in love with a"

"Anky!" Fiza stopped her before she could spill.

"Eek! I am sorry….you love you know who and my sister loves another such being and we have other you know what's among us….and now the weirdest thing happened" Anky said

"What happened Anky?" Fiza asked again, completely at sea.

"Kabir asked me out and I said yes" Anky said in super speed.

"WHAT!" Fiza shouted earning a 'Silence' from the librarian.

"I mean wow! Anks…that's amazing….." Fiza couldn't control her happiness.



"And why is that weird" Fiza asked controlling her giggle.

"Come on yaar…tu tho mujhe jaanthi hain….me and dating doesn't exactly fit in a sentence" Anky said glumly

"Anks listen" Fiza said sitting down near her " Relax and take a deep breath" she waited until Anky did that
"There is no harm in giving Kabir a chance….he had explained himself to you right and for sometime now we haven't seen any Kabir Rathod stunts….so maybe he changed or maybe he is changing….so why not give him a chance" Fiza explained.
"But what if he is back in his game? I mean we don't know him much right" Anky was doubtful.
"Dating is for that very purpose sweetheart getting to know each other…..and you aren't dumb Anky, you are smart enough to know when someone is playing you" Fiza encouraged "Come on Anks…give it a shot"
"So am doing the right thing by going out with him tonight?" Anky took Fiza's hand "I mean what with Sanju in coma and all"
"Absolutely, we all need to go on with our life and there is nothing much we can do for Sanju rather than be with her and today I and Nikki will do that...….if you want I will ask Armaan to come as your bodyguard…you know just in case" Fiza said with a teasing smile.
"Rehne dho….warna kahin mein apni bodyguard se hi pyaar na kar betu" Anky replied with a wink.

"You!" Fiza aimed to hit her but Anky dodged off with 'see ya later'

In the Badminton court….

" I am winning here" Sur taunted Nidha who stuck out her tongue.

"We have one more set to go buddy" she said while moving back to hit the cork. She slammed into someone and faltered.

"Hey what are you" she began but was stopped when she saw a pair of menacing black pools gazing at her with an evil smirk.

"Virat!" she blurted shocked to see him "You…you were in"

"Coma….unfortunately I woke up and I had a strong urge to see you dear" he said with his smirk still on. Nidha was still recovering from the shock of the night at Khuranna Mansion and she still had nightmares. Seeing Virat didn't help matters. She stood rooted to her spot, fear taking over her senses.

Sur was beside Nidha now and she pulled her back.

"Better get out of here Virat….before Neil or Jeh catches you….you sure don't want to go back into coma" Sur said giving him a dirty look.

"Oh really! I might give it a try" Virat taunted.

"Just get out" Sur spat at him.

"I will senorita…just came to tell you that I am back in action" he said "And this time I intend to get my revenge" he ended in a dangerous note.













SilverBell thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Nice. But Please Add Aranv In This Story Too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Nidha
Thxs for the pm🤗
TC love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update..
carry on..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 74: the honeymoon phase

Raichand house

"Abhay kisses aysha on the cheek Mrs. Abhay raichand wake up or you will be late for class" says abhay

"Good morning my wonderful hubby dear thank you for such nice wake up" says aysha

"Omg phir se I didn't get up on time … I always do this im sucha horrible wife I should wake you up give you breakfast" says aysha

Abhay hugs her from the back

"No need wifey dear you know I don't eat only when its necessary im fine and you don't need to do anything servants hai na just concentrate on studies and me that's all". Says abhay and( kiss her neck)

"What are you doing leave me I need to get ready romance so early in the morning isn't not the time for this abhay jaane do na I need to shower says aysha"

Aysha is walking to the bathroom

"Should I come with you" winks abhay

"No thank you I can manage alone" says aysha (shuts the door on his face)

"Aye Haye what attitude" says abhay

(Aysha from the bathroom) "abhay I left my clothes on the bed plz hand them to me" says aysha

No answer

"Abhay give them please" says aysha

Still no answer aysha in her towel walks out of the bathroom into the bed room

(Hears a whistle) " oye hoye mahiya looking sexy wifey" says abhay

"Abhay tum …you were here and didn't answer ufff turn around im in my towel) says aysha

"Kyun …why im your husband and ive seen you without a towel so problem kya hai" smiles abhay

(Ayesha eyes widen she is shocked & blushing) "Abhay badmash she grabs a pillow and is hitting him" says aysha

"Becareful what if you drop your towel then what huh"?says abhay as he smiles

"Abhay you…I never knew you are so naughty" says aysha

(Abhay pins her to the wall) … "by the way wifey you are looking very very sexy ..im very lucky to have such a hot wife… worlds most beautiful girl is with me god really likes me" says abhay

(Ayesha puts hand around abhay's neck "Acha that's true but im also very blessed to have you) to kash just papa and ma would forgive us "

(Aysha moves away walking to the bed to get her clothes lost in thought hits her knee on the edge of the bed) ouch she is bleeding abhay turns and see's the blood he goes to heal her but the smell is taking over him he suddenly looks at aysha his eyes change and fangs come out aysha looks up at abhay scared very scared

"Abhay are you abhay please calm down" says aysha

Abahy turns around and clams hims self he controls the temptation of the blood he gets back to normal and gets the first aid box and cleans the blood and then heals aysha with his powers

Aysha notices abhay is quite and sad

(Aysha puts her hand on his face) "Abhay its ok I understand look at me im fine nothing happened you didn't do anything ") says aysha

(Abhay moves her hand away) "no aysha no matter how normal of a couple we try to be this will always happen and I feel horrible ….you left her parents, family for me .. for a animal see what happened this what I am a janwar ..understand aysha to some point you might but not all of it you don't know how I feel …but aysha (takes her hand in his )I promise I will never harm you never" says abhay

(Aysha hugging abhay )"I know abhay and I don't regret at all being with you I love you" says aysha

She grabs her clothes and changes in the bathroom and thinks

"I know abhay this won't be easy…but nothing ever is we will get through this"

That's it for now do comment

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Posted: 13 years ago

Firstly before the next chapter I just want to says congrats nidha , aysha, and Tich we made it to 75 chapters! Yay! way to go ...really rocking Nidha I have said this many times but yet again im very greatful for being a part of such a wonderful ff with such amazing people which ihave got to meet here they are not just friends but my sisters '. Love you my pyaari bhenas nidha(my sweet choti bhena ) and aysha (amazing person with wonderful flare of life ) and tich(you have become such a great friend love ya) inshallah lets make it 100+ chapters

Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago
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now here is it is the next chapter

Chapter 75:All is Well

Later that night At the hospital

Outside the room

Armaan was there with fiza nikki had gone home to rest nidha had brought food for them

"Any news of sanju" asks nidha

"No not yet just the same no improvement" says armaan

"Atleast uncle and aunty have forgiven her and shauryas mom has accepted her" says sur

"But why did have happen this way only if was in better circumstances" says fiza

"I know but everything happens for a reason" says sur

They all are waiting outside fiza is fallen asleep on armaans shoulder

Nidha is also asleep on sur shoulder

inside the room

Shaurya had taken off of work for a few days ever since sanju had gone in coma just to be with her 24/7 just incase she wakes up he wanted to be right there when she did

Shaurya was sleeping on a chair holding sanjus hand when

He feels movement he wakes up and notices sanju moving her fingers and turning her head

Shaurya jumps up and runs out of the door

"Doctor doctor" he says

They all wake up

What happened shaurya asks armaan

"Sanju she is moving her hands and head" says shaurya

The doctor comes in and checks her

Everyone in the room

Sanju slowly opens her eyes

And looks up

"Shaurya" she says

(he has tears in his eyes) "Yes sanju im here with you im sorry I wont leave you alone again" says shaurya

"She is recovering you can take her home in a day or 2 but bed rest and no stress" says the doctor

Sanju thankgod you are alright says nidha

"I know you really had us all scared but the one who was dieing each moment seeing you like this was your loving husband shaurya" says fiza

"Yes I have never seen my bro so tensed and stressed like he was for you" says armaan

"You were in coma but he was suffering" says sur

"And sanju good news uncle aunty darji have forgiven you" says fiza

"Not just that but mano mami has accepted you as well" says armaan

"Enough talking she should get some rest" says the doctor

"Sanju go to sleep im right here next to you if you need any thing tell me"

"Shaurya I have been asleep for so long im not tired just look at you ..what have you done to your self you haven't shaved in days it seems facial hair a you have lost a ton of weight …I worried a lot na" says sanju

"Ofcourse I was worried ..mere jaan nikel gaye thi sanju ….if I had lost you I would never forgive myself I would have died" says shaurya

"Why shaurya kyun" says sanju

"You know why sanju but I will tell you again today and everyday I love you sanjana" says shaurya

she sits up

"Careful sanju easy says shaurya she hugs him I love you too shaurya"

Next day they come home

Shaurya helps her walk inside the house

"Ah good to be home finally" says sanju

"Good to have you home" says shaurya

Shaurya puts her on the bed "a nurse is always gonna be here with you until you are better understood and I have take a few days off as well"

"Jp sanju get soup for sanju" says shaurya

"Soup please shaurya I want real food like pizza please" shaurya

"Nope not till you get well and anyways you have lost so much weight you want to be moti again kya" says shaurya

Sanju pouts her lips and looks away annoyed

"Again meaning what …. I was fat before huh excuse me but im a size 0 understtod what ever ieat I wont get moti uff" says sanju

"Yaar I was just joking don't be mad" says shaurya

Jp brings the soup

"Here let me feed up your arm is broken in a cast n sling now open" says shaurya

"She opens her mouth a makes a face yuck I hate this" says sanju

"Come on sanju don't act like a kid open your mouth" says shaurya

"No" looks the other way

"Aww my baby doesn't want to eat this huh? Here comes the airplane zoom open up" says shaurya

Sanju starts laughing "shaurya tum bhi na" he feeds her

"Oh look you have a little bit on your lip wait ill clean it" he takes a napkin and whips it (eye lock)

Sanju puts her head on his chest "I feel safe here with you shaurya I love you so much you made realize what love is" says sanju

"I love you more then you can even imagine" sanju he puts down the soup and wraps his arms around her and just holds her close to him

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