Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 72

That was an awesome update and am glad you updated after so long...

thak god that u updated though it was a little small...

oooh. maan is in trouble. this ahana needs a life. but cont soon yaar

Lakshmi 🤗...so glad u updated...been missing Maaneet and Komal...thank u for the awesome update and PM...really appreciate your effort...it must be tiring with the kids...plz continue when u can...will wait ...TC 😊

part 18
nice part...
Maan cant he just refuse that Ahana?
oh ho Geet has seen him like that...
and Daadi and Vicky have heard him talking with Komal...
cont soon dear...

Very very interesting. I loved Maan-Komal-Dadi part more.

Thanx for the PM

continue soon i cant wait sachi

PART 19

Geet didnt realise that tears started welling in her eyes...and when realisation strikes her she turns away and wipes her tears instantly and again she turns to look back at him.

Maan could notice her eyes being moist...her eyes clearly screaming... "I didnt expect this out of you". Those unspoken words were pricking him like 1000 thorns at a time

Vicky was a silent observer of all this. He could see a clear jealousy written on Geet's face.

Maan pulls Geet aside...Vicky is curious and happens to follow them.

Geet... He holds her and looks deep into her eyes that's still moist...

Geet...I myself didnt know about this party.... He is wondering why he's giving her an explanation instead of asking her why she's here in the first place.

Geet looks back at him with her eyes filled with questions. She herself didnt know what's bothering her. Why there's a killing urge in her to give a tight grip on his shirt collor and give him a tight slap asking him... "How dare you" But does she has any right to scream back the same to him?

I...I Mean...I came here for a meeting and this party was a big surprise...

Her silence is killing him within...He's still having a hold on her shoulder

Vicky is kind of excited...WOW... I have never seen bro giving explanations...and here he is giving explanations to Geet...He giggles...he is behaving like a teenage highschool boy being cought by his girlfriend😆

Ahana who was lying on the ground level gets helping hand by two of her friends...One who got blasted by Geet and the other one who had warned Ahana not to play with Maan Singh Khurana before Ahana was inviting him to this farm house. She's also a good girl at heart...lets say a bad friend and a good friend

Ahana: What the hell...who is this behenji? What is she doing here? Who allowed her to come over here?

Bad friend: You know, She was looking out for Maan and when she came to me I asked her to leave and she screamed back at me!

Ahana: Is it? How dare she comes here without being invited and she screams at my friends.. and this Maan, he threw me down after seeing her...how dare he? I have called him here for his own business and also to propose him...where will he get such irresistible offer?...This behenji spoiled every thing...us kit ho main...

Good Friend: Ahana, calm down please stop all this...didnt I tell you are playing with fire. You dont know much about Maan Singh Khurana...but I do...

Ahana was fuming in Anger...Just shut up...I will teach him a lesson. ...ha, the party has just began. He needs to listen to me if he needs to get this business...And that behanji...Let me get hold of her...

Back to Maneet...

Geet looks here and there...and hands over the file to him.

Maan got to see the file in her hand...

Sir...Those foreign deligates are interested to get into understanding with us and they need your signatures on these documents as soon as possible. She still not looking back into his eyes that are actually feeling guilty. I was trying to call you in this regard but coudnt reach you and that's the reason I came over here. You need to read it carefully before signing the documents.

He just takes the documents...doesnt even bothered to open it as he is more concered about Geet...

I know that you didnt like me coming over here...sorry for the disturbance...She feels disgusting to even stay there for a sec. I will take your leave. Please continue with your party. Your friends are waiting for you.

She begins to leave when he suddenly holds her with a tight grip.

Geet...Listen to me...I said, I didn't know about this party and these people are not my friends...

She gives a sad smile and looks back at him...As if she was saying "that's why you were dancing with her that way" Maan could read to her every unsaid and unspoken words which were more dangerous...she remembered his hands snaking thro her body when he lifted Ahana...she closed her eyes with disgust...

Sir...Aap ne kaha aur main ne sunliya (You said it and I listened to it)...Ab main jaavon? (May I leave?)

She again turns to leave...Maan didnt want to let her go with this state of mind...

He again holds her hand...

I will drop you...

No thanks I know my way...She snaps and then controls her self...I mean, I have come with Pandeji...Our taxi is waiting.

She leaves by telling this...Maan standing there just still...when Vicky calls him...

Bhai...what happened? You look tensed...

Wo...Geet is upset with me...

Why? What happened?

She's upset because...He just kept quite for a sec...because...

Bhai...tell me what's ahead of your "Because"...

Maan just remains quite...he knows very well that Geet is hurt...Strangely, he is not concerned about his image but "himself" in front of her...The softcorner built within him for her without his own knowledge has got cracks in it and he needs to rectify it at any cost...

Geet on her way to the taxi...She's walking as if a deadbody just programmed to walk with a slow pace...Her brain is just thinking about all what happend in the party hall.

The guy who teased her comes in front of her again with his friends...

So Ms...Did you find your...your...boyfriend?

Geet again ignores and turns to leave from there...

Hey...I know your BF has found someone else...Dont worry...I am available for you...

His friends were making fun of Geet...kya yaar...are you serious? There are so many glamourous girls around and You interested in this Behenji?

Hmm...she is something different...waise bhi...TIME PASS Ke liye kuch bhi challega...

This guy is just inches away from Geet...about to put his hold on her shoulder and... "BHANG"...this guy was in the floor level with a bleeding nose and mouth. ...Maan heard every single rude words spoken by this guy and he hit this guy on his nose with rings on all his fingers...the hit was in such a force that there's a big tear between his nose and mouth and it needs to get stitches or even needs to get operated

Then comes Ahana in front of Geet...

Hey...who are you?

Geet gives a strange looks to Ahana...

Who called you here? How dare you walk here without being invited?

Listen...I didnt know anything...I just came here to give a file...

Just stop this noncense...I know girls like you just look out for reasons to come over such parties so that you can trap rich guys...

What? Mind your words...I came here for a different purpose and that purpose got over...I am leaving now and I am least interested in your party which suits girls like you...not me...

Geet turns to leave...and Ahana holds her hand...

Yeh kya bathameezi hain? Chodiye mujhe... (What is this mannerless behaviour? Leave me)

Bathameezi tho tum ne ki hain is party main aakar...(You have been mannerless by coming to this party) and you need to get punished for this.

Ahana drags Geet towards the pool and all her friends are cheering her. Except her good friend... "Ahana...where are you taking her? Stop it...she came over here by mistake!"

Ahana doesnt listen to this friend...she has dragged Geet near the pool... This is your punishment for indulging with AHANA...and threw her into the pool...

Geet is just helpless...not able to get out of the pool...

Somebody help ...please...

Everyone looks at each other...

Ahana is smiling and her friends praising her (Except for that good friend of hers)

Bad Friend: Wow...Ahana, no lesson can be the best than what you have thought this behenji...and she smirks...

Good Friend: Ahana...what are you doing...she is drowning there's still time...please help her...

Ahana: I WILL Not...this is her punishment to spoil my day...

HELP...HELP...Mujhe tairna nahin aatha (I cannot swim)....please somebody help...help...

Just then she knew someone jumped into the pool and safely lifted her...she clings on to him closing her eyes...surprisingly she knew who it is...But she is too nervous to open her eyes...

Maan pats on her cheeks...GEET...GEET...

She's not opening her eyes...

GEET...please open your eyes...

GEET...he is patting on her cheeks continuously...and she opens her eyes slowly to look into his eyes...there was so much fear and concern in them...

Are you alright?

She nods for a yes...and he hugs her instantly...

Vicky happens to look at them and take a big sigh not only for Geet being saved but for his bro and Geet get this close...Ahana was fuming with jealousy with what she wanted to do and where it has ended...

Maan again looks at Geet and makes sure she's fine...He cups her face and kisses on her forehead...I am sorry ... it all happened because of me...I would have never forgiven myself if something would have happened to you...Geet hugs him this time assuring I am fine...and tears rolling down her eyes...she even thought about Komal. What will happen to her if even Geet had to leave this world today...she looks up and thanks Babaji... I am fine...

They slowly break out of the hug...he lifts her and brings her out of the pool...

Both are locked into each other's eyes till time they are out of pool and he slowly help her stand on the ground.

Precap: Ahana getting a good peace of mind...(End of Ahana's episode) and some more twists...

Author's note: I myself hated this charector so much...just wanted to teach her a lesson thro my FF😡 and also this helps Maneet getting closer 😳😉

AWSEM UPDATE MAAN SAVED GEET IS AHANA KI PITAYI JALDI KARO AND ADD ME

nice update
waiting for lesson teach
love maaneet moment


hi pls update geetika tooo😆