ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11 - Page 9

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome , brilliant update.
loved it.
continue soon.

Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome part

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

"Yes, Yes, Yes,...I will marry you raj...veer"😳...arre ye main nahi...e to naina kahegi na...😉 ha ha ha...pata nahi...Naina kya kahegi...😆

ab naaz ko kya hua...wo to bilkul mujhe confuse kiye jaa rahi hai...agar uska character jaldi se apni mystery se bahar nahi aata hai, aur uski aur gunny ki chemistry aage nahi badhti hai, to i am sure soch-soch ke mera mansik saltulan history ho jaayega...😕 koi baat nahi...main tumhare mansik santulan ko barabar banmaye rakhne ke liye...fic ke end hone se pahle...tumhare confusion dur kar dungi...😆

and yudi, gusse me cool lag raha hoga na 😎...chalo dr. shalini jaldi se maan jaaye, taki yudi ko bhi finally ladki patane ka chance mile...⭐️ yeh bhi main nahi bata sakti ke...aage kya hoga...😆

I forgot...alekh aur neelu ki shadi ho gayee hai na???🤔 haan...maine fic suru karne se pahle hi yeh subh-kaam kar diya tha...par dono me thodi si prob chal rahi hai...!!!topic vohi hai...jo LRL me DJ's ne ek bakwas chiz creat kari thi na...Neelu ko pregnent kar ke...vohi...!!! Neelu apne guilt se aaj tak bahar nahi aayi hai...par jo kachra...DJ's ne LRL me bheja tha...maine use phynile se saaf kar diya hai...ha ha ha...😆

Waise, Huda jee ka kya hoga...poori life sirf bhains aur tabele...😆jaldi se uski bhi setting karwa do na...umm,,..wo ladki jo hotel jate time mili thi, jise huda ne ride di thi, uske sath fix kar do...yaad dilane ka shukriya...😆

In saari settings se result hoga:- 'Raj happy...Naina happy...Yudi happy...Gunny happy...Shalini happy...Alekh happy...Naaz happy...Huda happy...wo bhaag rahi ladki happy...and yonki ye karne ke liye ek lamba-chauda update dena hoga...to readers bhi happy'...😆 arey...vaah...sab ke HAPPY hone ka khayal rkha hai tumne...par mera kya...??? Itne bada ud likhne ke baad...mera kya hoga...kabhi socha hai...😆

Update sooon

luv

Vidushi..

Originally posted by: -purnima-

lovely update 👏👏...spclly last line ... hope Raj ki film ka promotion bhi ho raha hai 😉 😉 😉he he he...Thanqqq dear...😆

as 4 Naaz--- dont kow what to say abt her 😆😆😆...so i better keep quiet abt her & focus on major 😍 yehi behtar hai sabhi ke liye...Naaz par jyada dhyan mat do...voh kya karr rahi hai...usse karne do...!!! apne Maj saab hain na...baki sab sambhalne ke liye...😆

*sigh*major taking naina out for dinner 😳😳... & yahaan bimaar ka halchaal acha nahi hai 😆😆😆 voh toh kisi ka bhi nahi hoga...samne agar Raj hua toh...😆

& major ko flirtig bhi aati hai 😲😲 😆😆😆 kyoun nahi...bade chupe rushtam hain...apne qualites chupa kar rakhte hain...😆

yudi-shalini ki ishq ki gaddi chal nikli 😆😆😆 atleast start to ho hi gayi 😆😆... haan...yeh jarur keh sakti ho ke...Start ho gayi hai...😆

overall mast update 👏👏👏.. Thanqqq😃

was it oly me .or update sach mein chotta tha 😆😆😆😆 update sach me cota tha...aur mujhe laga ke koi pakad nahi payega...ha ha ha😆

continue soon 😃😃

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

it was not only you update to sahi me chhota tha😆😆

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Why did u need to make Rajveer address Naina??😆😆 Agar wo sirf "Will You Marry Me?" kehta...then mera kaam asaan ho jata na...😆😆 and lage hath film ki achhi promotion bhi ho jati...😆😆😆😉 okkk...film promotion ki baat toh samajh me aayi...par tumhara koun sa kaam ho jata...yeh samajh me nahi aaya...😛

Coming to the part...its...BEAUTIFUL...But SMALL!! 😆 he he he he...😆Thanqqq...😃Seriously...mujhe thoda chhota laga...pata nahi kyun!! Shayad Rajveer ke scenes kam the...😆😆 bilkul nahi...pura last part sirf Rajveer ka hi tha...par yeh sach hai ke maine chota update post kiya tha...aur yeh socha tha ke...main pakdi nahi jayungi...😆

Waise wats wid this bro-sis? I mean Rajveer and Naaz? Dono apni hi dhun me kuch kiye jaa rahe hai...kuch soche jaa rahe hai...and yaha hum sab sir pakar ke baithe hai...😆😆 wat did Naaz hear that shook her so badly? naaz ne kya suna...voh chodo...voh toh aaj nahi toh kal pata chal hi jayega...!!! par agar Maj par concentrait kare na...toh voh toh kuch galat karr hi nahi sakte...hai ki nahi...😆

And well, in case of Rajveer...I dont need to knw...mujhe pura bharosa hai...jo hoga sahi hoga...😉😆 dekha...hum dono dimag-less ki baat kitna milta hai...😆

The Yudi-Shalini scene was nice...the way he storms in and expresses himself was nice...😃😃 ab...kab tak use sirf ek bachha dikhate DJ's... mera bhi toh farz banta hai na...ke usse thoda sa bada dikhayun...😆

Next is RN scene...jo tumhare mutabik tumhari dimagless dimag ki koi ajeeb creation hai...huh!! I wonder...mera dimagless dimag itna achha kab sochega...😆😆😆 I just loved it dear!! Maj. Rajveer trying to flirt!! First tym...wid his wud be wife!! 😆😆😆 Gr8...😉😳 thanqqq Yaar...😆...!!! par sahi me...main samajh nahi pa rahi thi ke agar maj rajveer kabhi naina ko propose karte...toh kaise karte...!!! kyoun ke Rajveer ka pura charch baht hi tough tha LRL me...!!! aur rahi baat flirting ki toh...maine bass apna dimag bandh kar ke ...yeh scene likha tha...isiliye kya likha tha...kya nahi...mujhe kuch yaad nahi...😆

And wow...how intensely he says..."will you marry me?"...😳😳...YES YES YES...the only possible answer is a YES cutie!! 😳😳 he he he...aur koi answer ho hi nahi sakta yaar...hai na...😆

Abhi pls...apne dimagless dimag ko phir se chalao...and jaldi se next UD post karo...I wanna read the full scene...huh!! Adhe me aa kar rok diya stupid!!😲 Pls jaldi jaldi part post karna...ok? 😉 jo hukum sarkaar...!!! jaise hi tumhari galiyaan mili...maine toh likhna hi suru kar diya tha...😆bass ek do din me ud karti hun...pakka...😛

W8ing... okay...😆
Sumi. 😉

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

😆😃sherni ko salaaam ,😃 salaam...salaam...😛

as usual update was really very fantastic !!!!! 😊👏👏 thanqqq😃

lekin jumbo airbus key size wale update se helicopter key size ka chhota update kyun likhaa😡 garmi ki wajah se mera dimagless dimag ne jawab de diya hai...jyada kaam hi nahi karta...😆

but still me and my brother Shashank loved it specially the last part of proposal😃thanqqq...tumhe bhi aur Shashank ko bhi...😃 aur woh lake wala convo , bada hi accha aur light hearted tha😆😆😆 iss ka matlab...tum dono ko voh part pasand aaya...hai na...??? maine toh darte darte likha tha ke...pata nahi kaisa reactions milega...tum sab se...😆

but sad for yudi and Shalini😭😭 i hope unki gaadi bhi daud jaaye😉😉 pata nahi...unn ki gadi daudegi ya phir nahi...kyoun ke petrol kitna mehnga ho gay hai...aaj kal...😆...par next part me kuch hai..unn ke liye...😛

aur Naaz ne aisa kya sun liya jo woh ekdum shocked ho gayi, ab yeh toh Naaz ko hi pata hoga na...mujhe abhi tak bataya hi nahi...jaise mujhe pata chalega...pakka main tum sab ko bata dungi...😛

rajveer ne jis tareeke naina ko propose kiya ,,,,,,hayeee marjaun gud khaake!!!!!!!!!! he he he...full confused ho kar yeh scene likha tha maine...😆

iss dhang se toh koi agar sherni ko propose karega toh woh bhi sharma jayegi,arye nahi...sherni nahi sharmati...voh toh dahad maarti hai...!!! par haan...agar samne Raj hua tohhh...iss sawal ka jawab na hi dena behtar hai...😆{tumhari baat nahin kar rahi hun😉😆 par mujhe laga ki tum meri hi baat karr rahi ho...😆} aur naina to haan keh hi degi na😃😃😃 ab naina kya kahegi...yeh toh mera next part hi batayega...tab tak hum chup rahenge...😆

over all update ko A+++++ grade ,😃⭐️ chalo...achha hua...Pappu pass ho gaya...😆

lekin prarthna hai Prathna...yeh koun hai...tumhari frnd...toh nahi...😆( kyunki sherni ko dhamkaa toh nahi sakte😉 achhaaa...uss waale Prathna ki baat karr rahi ho😆...phir toh order diya karo yaar...😛) ki update ko usi jumbo airbus key siza ka ho,,,,😆 sorry yaar...yeh vaada nahi karr sakti...kyoun ke likhte likhte...jitna likh pati hun...likh deti hun...and and and see you back with new update as sson as possible...😃 apne dimagless dimaag ko daudaayo aur jaldi update post karo😊😊😊 jo hukum...jaise hi tum se order mila...maine apna dimag-less dimag ko daudaya...aur update likhna start kar diya...abhi update toh bilkul ready hai...par sayad post karne me ek-do din lag jaye...😃

thank you and bye bye👍🏼 arey...yeh thank you...kis khushi me...😕

Originally posted by: danish1

wonderful update...what a way to propose!

Originally posted by: psrn

haye so romanticcc

Originally posted by: sania_58

finally marriage proposal, nice update