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Posted: 14 years ago

It is old story

i had in Kis desh mein forrum

but the forum is closed

so im reopen the story

here are the old parts

Story and intro

my story concept:

we do not know what our destiny finds for us...

we do not understand what our life will decide for us

but we still love our life without any hestitate

without loosing it

because it is life and love is a blossim

it will fill us anytime at any moment without knowing

and creates lot of emotions at that time gives us strength

to find all the odds...

i strongly belive if u love someone love him such that he never think of others not demanding him from return

love in such a way that he /she only belongs to u if that is pure then sure he will come for u at any time on your life

nobody perfect in this life donot be too positive nor too negitive

but bee pure as ina way.

if you love him love him all his odds,negitive sighs, all his bads, all

because true love never thinks the person tobe rich,adorable, nice,

gentlemen, etc it only sees the heart, feelings,dedication,purity,and sensible

my story main concept is this and as i said it is new all surely will enjoy it...

i said emotions includes sadness, all.

My story starts with a friendship and secret where it is going to be revailed at later parts

Main Casting:

Jiya :my heroine, gentle,fragile,loving,sweet, beautifull but very pure at heart, never sees anyone in hurt. so kind but internally strong

but loves only one person in the world thatis her badimaaa...

Rahul:it is my favourite name guys likeor not but he is my prince in all stories he is arrogant,rich,affulent,cool dude,flirty, player he gets what ever he want in his life

BadeMAA:Rajeshwari saxena:A typical bahu of her saas, a loving wife of her husband and a strong mother who protects their childreen and

a huge bonding between jiya which she feels her parchaiii

because jiya is a daughter of rajeshwari's childhood friend who is lot for her... more than all...

Sekhar Saxena:Father of Rahul,Husband of Rajeshwari and son of Mr Mahendra Sexana founder of saxena empire...

Mahendra Saxena:head of the family every thing aganist his will

he rules all the house.

Veena Saxena:wife of Mahendra Saxena a typical wife a true god lover

she is purely traditional but love the way her husband flirts her...

Balraaj Srivatsav:He is the childhood friend and bussiness partner of Sekhar , for him friendship is more than his world he loves his work and his friend's family

Urvasi Srivatsav:she is wife of Balraaj she is rich,so weird but she loves her daughter very much she will do anything for her daughter...

Diya Srivatsav:She is daughter and she is spoilt girl, her life main ambition is to become the daughter inlaw of saxena family and passinate for rahulll...

mayank:he is brother of sekhar a typical hen picked husband follows his wife foot steps comic charcter

roopa:his wife totally filmy she imagines herself as one of the top heroine and she always follow that

kiran:third and last son of the sexanas he will always in his work he will be in tours

lata:his wife so soft and innocent try to gain his husband's love but fails

shilpa and kamal:these are rajeshwari's nanat and naunduiii a typical

ghar jamai tries to create problems in the house

all of have 1 girls and 2 boys each all are introduced later...

simran:she is second nanat as she is supposed to be last one

as she had married raj aganist the family wishes tht is why all hates her ... but she loves alll...

My story starts a little girl praying to god:

Girl:bhagwanjiii Maa ne kaha aap bahut achhee hai aap sabiki baat sunte hai sab kehete hai maa aap ki paas hai pls mere maa ko mere pass bej dijee mein promise kartee hoon kabhi bi sharaarat nahi karoongi, pls bhagwaan jiii ...pls

A hand comes to her and touches and the girl sees the hand it is an middle aged lady touching her and hugging her

the girl asks who are u she replies maa then says my mother is with god then iam more than ur maa

then i 'll call bade maa...

Then the lady brought the girl to a BIG Building

Where a name written on it as Saxena House...

there a olderly person who is called dadaji,dadima, and his husband called sekhar sexana had been introduced...

after that the lady explained that the girl is going to be with her and she is her responsbility...

there group of boys and girls are shown playing

in that one kid is shown who is bright and the lady introduces as rahul...

the boy is the prince of the house, he is laadla of all...

the boy sees the girl

the girl sees the boy

a background voice:

nobody knows these are the two people in love

these are two different individuals ...

different paths that never met,

two different rivers never club

but still there will

bcause tha tis destiny...

bcause that is love...

love will cross all the hurdles...

it will find its way atlast

because it has no barriers

and other girl comes and says she is diya ...

she says that the girl should always maintain a distance between the boy and all goes from there without meetingthe girl

the girl left alone

one boy comes to her and introduces himself as karan and asks her friendship...

she says yes

what is your name she says jiyaaa...

he says karan...

karan is the friend 'sson of sekhar where sekhar taken the responsbility after their parents death...

at the house

a girl shown doing pooja,preparing all things helpingall poring water making food for animals,

all things...

a girl asks for dress ,some for books all asks everything the girl always doing without hestitate

whenever badimaa asks she says she always feel as she is the part of the family they accept or not...

at the diwali...

all are dresses well

the girl will always keep a dollwith her which is favourite and she often calls maa and she talks toit...

she always feels as maa with her...

on that day she decorates her doll and left her room as soon as she reaches she found it is broken and its dress is tored offf. she felt bad and crieda lot and she saw a dress part in hands of rahul...

same time rajeshwari also see this and she slaped rahul rahul felt insulted and he gavea hatred expression to the girl

rahul:yeh girl for ur sake today my mom slapped me and iam totally felt very bad iam not going to leave

iam going to hate u from the heart...never come into my route...donot show ur ugly face...to me
or else it is going tob e bad for u...

and with that the boy goes from there

the story begins

A Girl is shown

in front of her mother photograph

and suddenly the garden

she tooks a flower

and put it in a mandir...idol of krishna

and she is shown doing everyone 's work

a smile in her face.

a middle aged lady comes and hugs her.

and she says she is cinderalla...

Character Sketch

Rahul Sexana

Jiya Sharma

Karan Malhotra

Rajeshwari sexana

part 2

badimaa:muje pata hai koi tuje na bhulayaa hoga teekh hai beta koi baat nahi mein uske video maang loongi hum saath mein deekh lena...patha nahi kitna handsome hoga mera prince...he goes from there...

kab ayeega woh ghar kooo.

jiyaa:aapka is waqt apke prince ko dekhenge to bura lage ga ...ab apko kya batein badimaa jis prince ki shakal joo logongo dewaneee bana deta hai, jis ka ada sab ko pagall kardetee hai jis ki dance sab par chaaa jaatein hai...par uska saaree adatein itne karaab hai ki aap bardhast nahi kar sakte hai

jis beta ko is ghar ki shaan samjetein hai us beta ka asli roop aap any dekh payenge badi maa...

on the other hand rahul is shown drinking,dancing, and being with hot girls around the songs and background song(maa ka ladla begad gaya)...

and after sometime a 2 dark persons are shown

bringing a person to a room ina very drunken state

he is not in this world...he is shaking...one person leave andother person says thanks to that ...

the person puts carefully on the bed as a mother did for a child, the person takes the shoes, and clears his dress, and close the curtains and come back to the room in the same house..

the person takes the mask she is shown jiya...

jiya:i know u don't like me,i know u hate me..

but still i will do your work...as only one reason

may be u do not deserve to be a prince but still you r but untill i alive i never let this family down not even because of u ...Mr RAhul...

Diya:at the house...urvasi comes to her daughter...

urvasi:baby why ur so upset...and what happened to ur work...

Diya:today mom, it nearly going to happen...

u know mom iam so passionnate with him, he likes me ..mom, he falls for me... but still mom i donot know why i cannot make it...today mom he is not in the state i made him to drink a lot...thought of today i will fulfill my ambition mom to get grip over rahul by tieing him forever...but something is there which is stopping ...and i dont know what it is...

urvasi:donot worry baby today nor tommorrow

ur know ur fatheris a adarshawadi, and bond of freindship he will never suceeded but our success key is only one state rahul...so keep trying baby but bee carefull if any other girl comes into his life it couldbe dangerous...

diya:mom relax i know he is spoilt and he has many girlfriend but don't worry he never get rid off me tha tis the reason i support him in this matter so that he always be mine...

a person who is like a sadhu...he is singing a song...

jis cheese tumhara nahi kyon uske peeche padthe hooo

yeh zindagi hai wus pe kiske aur ka naam hai

kab is brahm mein rahooge ...tooo bahut bura legege...

jis ke liya joo bananya yeh woh milke rahenge

chahein tu laakh kosisih karo joo hota hai woh hoke rahege...

and the same one goes to the window of the jiya

where he says the words...

jo tere kareeb hai tum nahi jaanete hoo

sochte to hooo ki door se ayeega koi..

par joo likaa hai use tum kaise badal dogi...

yeh khel rab ka yeh beta tum kaise samjoogi...

jiyaa sees this and went back to her bed...

part ends

part 3

The next day some preparations on that day...

there is a servant in the house bola ramm...he always suffers from short term memmory loss so he always forget things...he cannot remember...

jiya is asking her badi maa about the pooja...

badi maa:beta this is the pooja on tha tmother 's prays for their kids...their devolopment if a son there is devolopment for his work and if girl forher marriage ...and all mother s will be on their fast and do pooja to devi maa... and takes the prasad...ties the maa ka daaga to protect from evil forces...and gives the blessings andthen they take the food...and one more thing beta today all the girls prepare a idols resemble lord shiv shankar for their husband and if they are engaged or married they are touch by their husband ...or else those who touches will be their husband it is so pure and clean beta so donot waste time and u also prepare and makes others to do...

by that time natasha and mehek are least bothered and they shown servants are helping theya re just putting hand on it.

even the same at diyaa...she is so weird...she says to himself all this iam doing for property an drahul once it is happened then i willmake godto leavethisplace and remove all the old things into this beautifull place

meantime everyone asking something tojiya she is managed to do everything...

by that time diya wants to meet rahul but dadimaa stops her saying tha trahul is getting ready and she is to be with the other girls...and she also handovers the idol to her and told her to keep this carefully without slipping it but she takes it lightly and on angrily she slips the idol and suddenly everyone is shocked but onto everyone susprise karan catches it and prays to god and give back to diya ..reminding her to not to play with anyone's life it is dangerous as it is off themselves loss too.

kudh k zindagi bhiii...

she look weridly at him and says rudely to mind his bussiness...and never cross her path...as he is so downmarket to her...

at that time badimaa is searching forjiyaa...

jiyaa is getting ready she had already prepared her idol with her own hands...it is so beautifulll...and wind blows she feels very happy ...

By that time ...bola rammm is moving around and he is bumped and dashes to rahulll..

rahul:very angrily bola...what's wrong with you and what u have done where is my dress...

bola:sir...jiii...aap ka dress to waha hai aur kyon poochrahe hai sir...

rahul:idoit it was dads don't u think iam too young forthat dress stupid...monkey...dammm...

go get my shirt otherwise ur going to hospital at any minute...

bola:ohb no itna gussa ab kaun bachayaga muje sab neeche hey agar mein ne shirt nayee laya too mera murder ho jaye ga agar mein neeche gaya too waha mera band bajeega oh maa raskha karo in the mean time jiyaa comes to the place and she sees bola and asks what wrong with him...

bola explains everything...

jiya sees kids coming and

jiya:if these people see the idol then they are going to touch this then it willbe become useless ...then i need to hide this and she takes the paper and wipes into it...and put that on the desk and she manages to bring the shirt ...

bola:what's now

jiya:u wrap this shirt ona cove r and give it to rahul,.

then he'll never shout...

bola:yes jiyaa ur right u know ur very good and he takes a paper and wrap on the shirt... and he accidently also carries the idol cover and he places at the rahul's room...

rahul:sees two covers first he tries to see the shirt covers but he touches the second cover and opens it to find the idol and he scolds bola...idoit pata nahi kis mitti ka bana uva hai bewakuff...maa bhi na kis namoonooko utha layee hai...

and he wears the shirt and bring the idoland place at the outside desk...

when he leaves jiyaa which already searching for her cover sees it feels relif and she touches the cover...where mantras are muttering...

om nams swaha...mangala ya tha dhimahe mangala ya tha maha thu..mangalam pundarikahskha

mangalatha tanu medha wata...

it means mangalam means good,pure,solitious,

in this world gold,silver,mangalasutra , are said to be pure as they resemble goddess...

gold and silver resembles godess laxmi for wealth and well being...and happiness...

where as mangalasutra is for soubhagyam for parvati...gouri...as she gives us for husband 's life...they are very important...

and the idol is very good...all do the pooja and all the mothers tie the dhagas to their kids...

rahul and diya are shown not interested but still they tie the knots...

but where as karan and jiya also tie with happiness in the mind...

four are shown ...

it is a merely combination of

good boy:karan:

good girl:jiya:

bad girl:diyaa

bad boy:rahul...

karun Vs Diya

Rahul Vs jiyaa...

part 1-10 pg 1

part 11-18 pg 2

part 19-26 pg 3

part 27-35 pg 4

part 36-43 pg 5

part 44-52 pg 6

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 4

Rahul gets a phone and he leaves...

Diya also follows him...

Next morning:

Rahul comes in his car...

karan and jiya also comes into the college...

diya comes in her car...

Karan is called by principal...

he wents into the room...

he is tensed ...

then principal gives him his semister results..

sees that he smiles and comes to canteen...

where jiya is also with her results...

then jiya 's friend mita comes there...along with her a tomboy type girl also comes she is kamya...

all joins ata table...

karan and waves all...

he shows his results and asks for jiyaa

all says let us have a bet

who scored more will have to give aparty

karan tries to take money ...

but later part jiyaa shows him her results

on which she scored better than him as she is topper both share the money...

they all have the party...

on the other hand rahul and his friends are going through their party..

in that a weird person comes and starts dance with diya

rahul sees this and give him a blamm...

the person fights with himm...

then rahul defeats him.

a voice explains

he is as strong as a blash wind which throws all

but where as she is a tiny flowers with beatifull blossom

he is a huge rock

where she is a sweet pure water ...

if he is a strong beam

there sheis a small tiny layer of softness

how they can be anything between them...

and in next day jiya sees a girl aruging with rahul

as he is behaving so rudely to her

jiya remembers the girl as she had seen both at the rahul's beach house...at night...

she is begging him,pleading him...and crying...

and rahul is behaving like monster to her...

so wierd...

jiya eyes filled up with tears...

and other person comes to rahul:

otherperson:what happened rahul:

rahul:this girl's chapter is over...

and i want a fresh one right now...

he resembles bobby deol's charcter in dillagi and

angad 's charcter in kaisa yeh pyarrr hai...

he even that handsome tooo...

paths are never to be crossed but they will cross

it can happens in anyone life

the two destinations meet...

the two different directions is going to beone

thatis how is the story...

the girl where rahul behaved so rudely had came to rahul

rahul throws down...

she warns him that she is going to ruin his life

rahul doesn't care her...

and she takes the phone and talks to someone

and the other one says it is going to be completed and the girl meets a person and handovers a cover...

the n the person laughs cruelly and says that this is going to be the headlines of next morning news paper..

a person hears it and phones to sexana mansion and

a person listens and calls another person

and the person answers that everything will be under control and i handle the situation...

and the person meets the mask person

and one is jiya and another is prashantmamu of rahul small brother of rajeshwari...

prashant:everything ok beta

jiya:thanks u mamu...

i know the girl she appeared to be dangerous

amar trieda lot to get rid from rahul still rahul fall on his trap...and we know her next moment

she even handovered the photographs of her and rahul to our rivals...rivals are looking opportunity to take the evenge.and even they succeded also

but right time

otherwise tommorrow family mainly dadaji and bade ma willsuffer i donot want them to get hurted at any situation...

prashant:beta all the best ...

jiya forwhat mamoo

tommorrow ur is big day,,,

and i know ur results and ur exam is going to be wonderfull where u are succeed and going abroad for ur studies that s great beta and i wish u all thebest for ur entrance..

thank u mamu

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srilu

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 5

tommorrow morning :

jiya at her motherphotograph:maa today is a big day for me if i succeded this exam im going to select for the scholarship for studying for abroad...

maa i need ur blessings

then she hugs karan and badi maa...

and badi maa tells her to take blessing s from dadaji and dadima

and they bless her ...

after that mayank,kiran,and also lata wishes her...

jiya goes to the mandir...

then the sadho comes

and jiya takes the blessings...

there is a change in your life

one incident can drag u everything from ur life

everything ...

one accident brought u here to thisplace

and one accident change ur life

and not only u all others...

u save life bu t u loose ur dream

because this is life beta it is not in your hands...

everything changes beta everything...

everything including you beta an dhe laugh louder...

and prays to god oh god help her ...

help her...

and she is ready for college suddenly a car comes so fast and hits a small boy playing at the side of the road...

jiya runs to him and sees the car and gets shocked..she takes the boy to the hospital

but still her eyes remembering the car'snumber

doctor's are operating the boy...

and some inspector comes to jiya and he asking for the car...

but she replies she didn't seethe car...

but she is shaking because she know thecar's number..

inspector takes leave and says if she remembers anything she should inform to the police,,,

and she sees a lady crying at the heart..

and she sees the idol of the durga maa,...

she falls on the ground and joins her hand

and starts praying

in mean time badimaa,karan and others trying to call jiya 'smobile and karan enters into the hall and inform that jiya has not attend the exam

badimaa concerned for her.,..and nobody knows her whereabouts...

and jiya praying utters the words...

and at the time phone rings karan is in opposite

he is so concerne dand karan asks her and she explains and karan comes an dsees jiya in tha t stature he felt bad and he asks about the accident

a person,or car who committed the accident...

jiya answers i know karan,,

then whos car and who is the person jiyaa..

answer me ...jiya...

the car number is 9827M R

listening to this karan also shocked

and he also know the car 's owner...

he is none another "MR RAHUL SEXANA"

he also shattered ...

part ends'..

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 6
by that time rajeshwari is speaking with a unknown person the person is not shown
The OP:i know u donot want to disclose the secret as it is very important...if it opens danger forur family as u love them a lot...so u donot want to open the secret so u always give me the money...
rajeswari:iam giving u money as it is my majboori..
as it is very important the secret to be secret...
as it opens brings storm in to lives and happiness of my family ...and she handovers the money to the person
the person smiles weirdly and goes from there...
meantime both karan and jiya are thinnking about the case as if truth comes out then badimaa cannot sustain ,,,,as she loves he r a lot...
karan also thinking the same...
and meantime inspector comes to her ...and asks for the accident...
as karan answers that jiyaa is in shock and she cannot remember anything...
by that time badi maa calls them and ask about jiyaa's exam...
jiyaa is looking at the boy and praying to the god regarding the boy's health...and she is continously praying to devi maa
while karan escorts her to the house...
badi maa goes to her as she is shattered to see jiyaa
her clothes are filled with dust and teared ...
as blood stains on it her hair is also disturbed and face is paled just like a person struck in ahuge wind blow...she is unable to answer...to the questions of badi maa...
as her dream has shattered ...
and she slowly moves to her room...
she is looking at aphotograph and also stars...
in which mother is there...
she stared at the star and saying sorry
maa:all my dreams are shattered...
all my ambitions,goals are demolished
life is made a path but it is completely closed...
and all are finished,,,,
karan comes to her,
and consoles her...
remember jiyaa when we ar eyoung...we had made a garden,,,,we both decorated it ...cleaned it,,,,
made it so beatifull...and that day night a huge rained flushed everything ,our efforts,our work each and everything diya,rahul,nattasha,everyone laughed at us,,,and only badimaa consoled her...
she taken us to the beatifull morning ...and remember she said to us
that
every night always ends with a beautifull morninge
even winds flushes away all but still we live and enjoy the morning as life means to go on...
thunders,winds,storms,what ever comes on
just like the forest welcomes the weather...
we should also removes all our odds and welcomes our new future,.
mayb e ur future is more brighter than other
may be this year u losted it next year u canb e succeded...
and your talent is urs..cannot be destroyed from u...
and they both walk into their rooms..
jiya is about to sleep she hears a car sound..and she sees rahul in his car completely drunk...in a very bad state...
she sees the car is also with the blood...and she takes the keys and calls someone to the place
he is prasad...
a old servant of sexanas...
jiya:prasad kaka accha huwa aap agaye aap hamesha meri madad karte hai...is gadi se kisika accident huwa hai...aur hame ise saaf karna hoga..agar garage mein chale gaye too ho sakta hai ki police ko shakh kar sakte hai...isliye...
and they both clean the car...and place it on the garage...and she quietly brings the keys to the place...
and next morning...rahul comes to take his car...
as jiya observes this she know sif rahul touch thecar he will sure findout somebody had touched it then it is going to be problem...so she is thinking by that timeshe sees kids are playing with water she cleverly put a plant on the top ofthe garage and creates a situation that if anybody touches the door the plant will fall on the side of the car...
and rahul exactly pushes the door and plant fall on the car and he gets angry and ask watchman to clean the car...
jiya smiles at her plan...
by that time diya comes and takes rahul in her car...
badi maa confronts jiya about her exam where jiya lies and says that she lost the exam
mean time urvasi come sto her and
urvasi:jitni level hai usse kahi jyada uddan nahi karn a chaheye...jameen par rehne wali kabi assmaan ko choone ki koshish kare to yaise hi hoga.
kyon bhabiaap hamesha kehate hai ke yeh ladki
bahut unchi udaan karegi...dekha ek hi jatake mein aap kisar kaise neeche ka r de...badi kamand hai na aap ko apne parvirish par kya huwa...
all areseeing them... speech less..

part ends

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part 7
jiya tearsin her eyes...
and badi maa stops her
jiya:sorry badi maa mein ne aap ko nirash kiya
aap ko mujh par kuch jyada ummed hai aur mein apka barosa thoda...
all are looking at them...
then she turns around...and looks atkaran and jiya...
badimaa:if u gone for higherstudies who will help me in all the work and who will guide me for the anniversy party of my saas and sasur...
u all needed aur paagal ladki...tere bina ek kaam hota hai kya kabadhar agar roya thooo..ek bhi anssoo nahi...teek hai and they laugh...
dadaji and dadimaa:ajeeb relationship jai in doon ka
kabi maa beti ya a kabi dost..par doon hi ek doosri ki jaan hai
pata nahi kya hoga jab yeh shaadi karke chali jayagiii...to ghar suna suna lage ga...
by that time jiya goes to the hospital where she sees the lady begging to a doctor,,,
and jiya enquirs an dfind sthat the bills are notpaye dso the boy 's treatment cannot continue and same time jiya gives some money to doctor...but doctor says that the money is not sufficent,, and jiya meets some ashram's father and talks to them
then she works on computer...and even karan also
works..
and jiya goes to a older lady house...
she is mrinalini mukerjiii she is a famous singer...
jiya goes to her...
mm:hello girl, i got a call from guruji...he told me everything ur jiya right,,,,
jiya:yes maam...it is so nice of u.ur notonly good singer but good person also...u help people in trouble...thank u mam for ur help...
mm:it s really hard to find people likeu in this world...,ur work...at this age..and ur dedication and ur doing everything for a stranger is great...i ll appreciate it...girl...jiya live for life----nice name ...
and she hand over a cheque to jiya and jiya so happy...
and rahul is shown in the party dancing for move your body now...
and meantime diya comes to him...
diya:rahul:where were u last night i ranged u but ur phone isnot reachable...is everything ok babe...
rahul:so weirdly if notok even though it is ok...
as god will correct everything so relax babe...
meantime some inspector calls vishal...
vishal:thank u inspector...thanks for ur information...and thanks for ur help...
inspector:sir,no eye seeing evidence...that saved a lot if every one wittnessed the accident then nobody can save rahul sir...
vishal:rahul's mistakes can creates a huge problem for the family i need to findout where rahul is...

meantime rahul dancing for song(move ur body now)
with diyaa...
and jiya happily comes fromthe mm 's house...
where the saint speaks

one is not caring for life
and one gives the life
one only plucks in life
where as she stands for life...
but destiny wants them to unite
one unknowingly spoils one's dream
and one knowingly saves others...
but why god wants them one...
this is the game of life
where he is the player
and we are the components of the game...
we donot know how to be with it...
and they both are shown in different directions...
part ends

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part 8
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next day morning everyone was busy in preparations

dadaji flirts his wife saying soni;

and she blusing at this age

and all are busy for party..

and natasha and their gang are busy in selecting their outfits...

where jiya and badimaa party decorations

flowers,interiors,catering everything...

meantime rahul is busy in selecting his outfit..

vishal comes to rahul..

vishal:rahul... i need to talk to u...

rahul:ya bigB u can go on...attitude way...

vishal:look rahul...u rspecial inthis house as ur stars and planets are very auspicious to this house

and everybody instictly belives these words...

that is the reason u r most loved one in this house..

rahul:appears tobe bored.. what bigB i didn't get ur words...

vishal:iam talking about ur attitude and behaviour

where are u last night...

rahul:u know bro rehersals...as show is coming on...

vishal:i know ur lying as ur car met a accident yesterday and luckily no evidence is registered aganist u if it leaks to public u know what impact it could be...

so please rahul becarefull on your actions..

as ur not only a rock star butalso belong to a very

grand family which has both political and social background...

rahul:ok bigb i will be carefull...

meantime jiya is doing some arrangements for the party and badima comes to her...

badi ma:ladoo...why ur notget ready it is too late

go and get ready...

jiyya:badi maa u know i do not like parties...

and also people so badi maa i cannot come out.

pls badimaa

badimaa:ok not for party...but u know guruji comes first there after party starts and all takes blessings from him...and guruji always likes u

donot forget to come out at tha ttime...

jiya:guruji is comingiu should ready...

and badimaa leaves the place...

and at the evening guruji comes and dadiji in his yellow shervani and dadima in her saree looks beautifull are all well dressed...

and guruji enters into the house with his followers...

and guruji gives blessings for dadaji,and dadimaa

and also rajeshwari and her husband

guruji:blesses rajeshwart u r the pillar of this house and even there is another neev for this house

and already god choosen for ur family

but donot try to hurt that thing going to ruin all...

and that is ur parchaiii always with u..

meantime rahul comes and take blessing sof guruji in aweirdy manner.,,

but still guruji bless him saying there is a being which remains as saaya , for him and protects him from all the evils and danger, he can be safe and no problem cannot touch him...

and guruji leaves...

part ends

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part 9

and saxena's party starts

many big shots,politicians enters into the party...

they are shown coming in their respective vehicles...

and they are introduced by some media people..

lights are on...

party starts...

jiya at the window seeing to the stars...

and karan comes to her..

karan:i know u always be here ?

jiya:and u always find me..

karan:we are best friends. we know each other

and we always share our moments...

jiya:really karan but still uhide lot of things from me

karan:suprised :... no jiyaa not..

jiya: we always like people whether good or bad

and we always be with them...

karan:no, jiya it is not always good we cannot go with a person if he is bad...

jiya:i agree with u karan but it is not meant all are perfect...

karan:i know jiya ur depressed as u lost chance to fulfill ur dreams right!

jiya:no karan...u and badi maa always says that

if we lost something that means destiny had meant some other for us...we had to wait for it to come..

karan:smile...ok baba u and ur positive thoughts are really impressible right now iam starving iam going to get some to eat.

and jiya somehow follows karan..to help him..

jiya:no karan party is started now and it is time for dinner and do u forget the party is on..

and at the party all are dancing and diya sees rahul is hanging with some girls...

where urvasi comes to her daughter...

urvasi:baby what ar e u doing her eu suppossed to be with rahul..

diya:mom,don't worry he is enjoying...

urvasi:donot forget it is family party and all eyes should stick onboth u and rahul.. do something that u andrahul stick and everyone should stareat u then the topic will be u and rahul..

diya thinks of a plan. and she calls some girl and mutters something in her ear

she moves to the diaz and she takes the mike

she starts

ladies and gentlemen

good evening to the party

as we know today is a wonderfull day and we are

gathered here to celebrate the occassion...and it is

said that destiny always fin d some thing for us...

and today is a special day let us find what destiny decide for us..

we always dance with our partners...or else some strangers...so today we will do some different...

as this is a typical game where all wear masks and all lights off and music also off...

when lights turn on..and music also on...we need to dance with the partner which is right front of ours...

no cheating,no hanging it is purely destiny...

and the all are served with masks...

part ends

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part 10

where karan andjiya tries to leave they are unknowingly brought to the dance stage...

all are wore the mask

diya sighs to a girl and tries to reach the place where rahul stands...

and meanwhile jiya searching for karan...

at the same time the voice and again she says

let us see what destiny decide for us

at the sametime lights off and music also off

and by the time music on and lights on...

winds blow and diya is in front of karan

where as jiya in front of rahul..and

the song starts...the first song is

dil kya kare from julie...

rahul gives hand to jiya where as karan to diya...

and jiya donot know what to do and rahul touches the hand...as even jiya didn't realise that the person is rahul...and rahul is trying to see the face...

and the next song is aree ye aree ye kya huwa

from dil to pagal hai...

karan and diya also dancing...

and the third song is so on...bolna halka frm jhoom bara bar jhoom...

groups are stopped only 2 groups are there...

karan and diya rahul and jiya as all clapped ...

where jiya make a escape as she finds it is rahul

due to his bracelet...she know it is rahul's as it is the same been gifted by dadiji on his birthday...

and she moves from the place to the outside...

and she sees her hand...

yeh kaisa takdeer hai

na rishta,na ehsaas

kyon mein use har mushkil mein madad karte hoon

mere liye uske zindagi mein koi amiith nahi nahi koi

ehsaas

uskeleye mein existent nahi hoon...to phir aaj yeh kaisa huwa

aur kudh se wada karte hoon ki aaj ki is mulakaat dubara nahi hogi...

pls maa mere madad karooo...

meantime karan is shown in his room he tooks his drawer and take a photograph...

tu mere liye asmaan ki chand hoo...

tu mere liye subha ki dhoop hooo,

jise mesoos karsakta hoon

par chunahi sakta hoon

kyonki sirf takdheer nahi

hamere pechaan bhi alag hai

lekin is dil to hamesha yeh samaj ne ki

kosish kyon nahi karte hai...

and the photograph is diya...s

the saint again appears

kitne door apne kismat se bagoogi

zoo tere takdheer mein lika hai

usee too badal nahi sakti hai

zitna door bagoogi utna parishaan hogi

uski khel nirali hai

tum nahi samaj sakti hai...

jiya is seeing at the moon and stars.

where rahul is i n his room

karan with the photograph

and diya is angry as she missed the golden opportunity...

contd in next post...

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part 11

at the college

jiya and karan are in the classes...

and rahul and diya come to the college

and at principal's office some person is talking about the college

proff:sir, do you really think it is a wise decision

as we know lotof kids in this college belongs to

rich and affluent families and also hail from

political and social backgrounds and in this time

u choosen the person for the job...

he is aggressive and arrogant...and always go on his terms...in this case may this person creates problem for us sir...

prinicpal:i agree with you professor shukla

but discilipline is lost in students and i want to make it clear and mr avinash chopra is one who can handle this very perfectly... we had no other option

and a long tall person enter into college get bumped with rahul..

he looks rahul...

rahul looks so wierdly at him..

and he is avinash chopra meets principal...and

he came for the solving the problem

and he meet the principal...

where jiya sees the notice board and she feels very happy..

karan:why ur so happy jiya

jiya:u know karan Mr avinash chopra is our new mentor do u know he is the best , perfectionist,

and very intellegent person and he can read once mind...

and jiya is prasing him...

where the other discussion is diya and group

meantime rahul is doing his rehersal...

for ho ne de hungama...(aaa dekh zara)

diya comes to him

diya:yeh rahul..u know there is new mentor for us

and he is strict and very wierdy one and arrogant also and no political and social pressure

and he is very rude regarding marks especially internals...

andthis is very big trouble...

rahul:relax sweetheart...donot worry if problems

persists iam going to handle the situation...

diya:relaxed mood...and starts seeing him..

where rahul is busy in phone...

jiya ahead to the principal room

where rahul also crosses the room

there are ahead themselves

power off and they face each other...r

rahul unknowingly touches jiya's hand...

and jiya feels jerk and take back her hand

where due to dark jiya cannot move...

and they are coming across each other

suddenly jiya about to fall in dark and rahul holds her...

and she adjust s and lifts up and go away and the chunnery flews on him...

winds blow at that time ...

and they goin different directions...

part ends

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part 12

and she hides in the back street of the car...

and suddenly she sees a person coming towards the car...

and the person come sto the car and bends lightly

monty and his friends see rahul and they hide themselves...

the person drives the car so fast and suddenly he stops the car...at a place...

and jiya is so tired as she felt asleep...

so she wakes up when car stops...

as it is SM mansion...

and it is dark

and she slowly comes out of the car...

and tries to say thanks to him

unknowingly say thanks...

and the person replies its ok

and he asks whether he can drop somewhere...

and he goes from there...

he puts his car on the garage and he finds the ear ring of the girl on the back seat of the car...

a nd he tooks it and it sis rahul...

jiya reaches her room...

as she is whooping and she remembering the incident came across when she tried to save mita as monti tries to do bad with her...

and her confront with him...

complaining to principal and his action towards the work...

she realised her mistake and thankfull tothe person who saved her...

jiya donot know it is rahul

as rahul changed his red car after the accident according to vishal's instruction now it is different car...

and meantime rahul remembering the girl who is at dancing hall,at the college..and at the car...

and thinking firstgirl sitting inhis car and he even donot know her...

thinking of the incidents ...he close his eyes...]anjana na rishta shuru huwa

ek ehsaas ek anjaana sa bhandan

shuru hone ko hey

aur isse dil ko chuna hai

aaj nahi to kal...

part ends

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