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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

He feels bad

He gets down

Yeh kya hora raha hay mera saath kyon yesa mehasoos kar rahe hoo mein aaj

An d he close his eyes

He remembers ….jiya in rain, playing with the kids…………

He opens his eyes

Why iam thinking of jiya more………………..

And he sees bus is coming

The bus stops

And he gets into it

He sees a place is vacant

Where a girl is sleeping and duppatta is covering her face………

He seats next to her

Suddenly winds blow

And the covered duppatta falls

And rahul on seeing her shocks………

Rahul:tum

Jiya:tum.yeha…………….

Jiya:muje bademaa ne phone kiya …..mere holidays katam huwa is liye

Mein jaa raha hoo……………

An old couple……is sitting ……………..besides their seats

The old person:kya baat hay.tum ek doosre ke saath hoo kya

Rahul:nahii…………..

Oldperson:toh…….kaha jaana hay

Rahul:mumbai

Oldperson:accha mumbai mein kaha………

Rahul:aap ko kya

Oldperson:accha tum kaha

Rahul:mein jaha rehta hoo….yeh wahi rehete hay

Old person:kya tere padoson

Rahul:nahii mere ghar pe

Old person:accha pati aur patni………….jagda huwa hay kya

Jiya:nahiii….yeh aap kya bol rahe hay……………ha hum ek ghar mein rehte jaroor hay.par hamara ek doosre ke saath koi connection nahii hay

Old person:acccha dost hoo……

Rahul:nahii…………

Jiya:hum ek doosre ke liye ajnabhi hay………………

Rahul:ha hum ajnabhi hay………..

Old person:confused…..

Rahul:ha hum bees saal se ek ghar mein rehte hay.par ek doosre ke samne kabhi nahii aya hay..isliye ek doosre ke liye bil kull ajnabhi hay…………………….

At that time all listens to them.and they are surprised……………………..

Winds blow…………………………..

Hum dono sirf ek rishta accha lagtha hay

Everyone suprises

Is ke bade maa…….aur mere maa……………………..

And the bus moves on………..

Pata nahii mumbai kab pouchoogie………………………

Jiya is sleeping

Rahul feels cold

He moves to shut the window glass……..

He turns his head………….

And finds…….jiya……………….

She is sleeping

Hair locks on her face…………

And duppatta is flewing…………..

He is immensed……………in her beauty…………………

He puts his hand…………..

Unknowingly he touches her hand…………

He feels happy…………..

kuchh has padi tanhaiyaan
Kya ye khumar hai ya aitbar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad
Kya ye bahaar hai ya intezaar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad

Kuchh khaas hai kuchh paas hai
Kuchh ajnabee ehsaas hai
Kuchh dooriyaan nazdeekiyaan
Kuchh has padi tanhaiyaan
Kya ye khumar hai ya aitbar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad
Kya ye bahaar hai ya intezaar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad

Kuchh saaz hai jaage se jo the soye
Alfaaz hain chup se nashe mein khoye
Nazar hi samjhe ye guftgoo saari
Koi aarzoo ne hai angdaayi li pyaari
Kya ye khumar hai ya aitbar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad
Na inkaar hai na iqraar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad

Kehna hi kya mera dakhalna koi
Dil ko dikha dil ki shakal ka koi
Dil se thi meri ek shart ye aisi
Lage jeet si mujhko ye haar hai kaisi
Yun hi khumar hai kyun beqraar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad
Jaadu sawaar hai na ikhtiyaar hai
Shayad ye pyar hai
Pyar hai shayad
Pyar hai shayad

Kuchh khaas hai kuchh paas hai
Kuchh ajnabee ehsaas hai
Pyar hai shayad
Pyar hai shayad
Yahi€.

He also close his eyes………………………..

Jiya wakes up in the morning

She sees…..

That she is sleeping on the shoulder of rahul…………………….

And rahul is holding her hand

Rahul also wakes up…………..

Jiya wakes up………….

The old person:are wah kal kaha tha ki ajnabhi hay……………..dekha sab mitgayee na………………..aur jis tarah se soya hay…kisi ko pata nahii chalta hay…..ki ajnabhi hay……………….

And before they move ………..

The bus stops……………….

And the driver informs that ……………..

The bus broke down………and it takes lot of time for repair……

And if people want they can stay…………………..

Rahul asks for where abouts……

The driver informs that……….they can take vehicle and they can go…as the drive is hardly……..3 to 4 hours from there,,,,,,,,,,,

Rahul moves…..

The old person informs

Dekho…..chahe ajnabhi hoo……yeh kuch aur…..

Lekin yeh safar tum dono tair karna hay

Ek jagah par chalna hay….toh alag alag hi kyon………agar rab ke marzii nahii hota.na toh kuch nahii hota……………is liye agar shikayate.aur farmaishoo…..ko chodkar ………manzil ke taraf dyan doo…..

And he moves away

Yeh bashaan jya da deta hay…………

Lekin………….sahi bola……….teek hay mein toh samaj gayee lekin iss dabbu kaun samjaaye

And he turns round he didn't found jiya………

He sees mandir

Accha …….yeh ladki bee na……………..

Jaha mandir dekha waha se ……………..

Praradana shuru

Isse toh……….kisi ashram mein hona hay……

He also moves into it…………..

He sees jiya is praying to god….

She turns to find rahul……..

Rahul:arewoh bakti ki packet….ab chale hame deer ho raha hay

Jiya:kis ke liye….aur mein tere saath nahii arahi hoo.pagal hoo kya.jo tere saath chalo.muje raastha maloom hay..mein akele jaa sakthe hoo……………

And she moves from there……………

Rahul:badi ayee apne apko jhansi ke raani samajne wali…………

And he follows her

He informs her shouting

Yeh jhansi ke raani…..age jungle hay……………….aur uske raasthe par hii……..main road ayega………….

Jungle jhanvar hay.sambalke

Jiya:lekin tujse jyada katarnak nahii hay

Rahul:iss ladki ko….na ……….dabbu ke bachee………………….

Rahul:kyatum ne muje jungle jhanvar bola……….

Jiya:sorry………galte se un janvaaroo ka apmaan kiya hay…………….

Rahul:teretoh mein na…..

Suddenly he didn't hear any sound

Ab kaha chal gayee…………..

Kya sach much kisse jungle jhanvar ne apna samaj kar le toh nahii gayaa na………

He sees around

And suddenly shouts

Dabbu………….dabbu………..

Are …….jiya……………..jiya………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

He moves forward

At that time jiya '''

Jiya:are yeh mein kaha agayee''..pechele baar mere pass toh map tha

Lekin yeh jagaa sach much ajnabhi hay.kya karoom mein

Hey hanumaan jii mera madad karna

Pls'''''''.

On the other hand '.

Jiya sees some people'''..around here

On the other hand''''..

Rahul is searching for her

Suddenly he sees screams of jiya

Yeh dabbu''..jiya''''''''''''

Where he sees she is circled by some weird persons'''''''..

Rahul'''..

Oh no yeh kya huwa'''..ab mein kya karoon''''lagtha hay'''.yeh kuch local gundee hay''''''''

He goes to them

The weird persons

Trying to catch her

And she is trying her level best to get rid of them but it isnot possible for her

At that time suddenly she sees rahul is standing there'''''''

And he is looking at them

Some weird person

Oh toh tu iska hero hay.bacheene aya hay kya

Rahul:nahii'''.galat fami yeh apka mein toh apke madad karne ke liye aya tha

Jiya looks at him angrily

Rahul:ha''yeh ladki '..jaise dikthi hay'.waise hay nahi'..jiske bhi iska saath hota hay na'..who katam ho jaata hay

The person:kya'hame bewakoof samajthe hoo kya'''

Rahul:kyonki yeh pagal ladki hay''iska nakoon dangerous hay'''..kisi bhi admi ko apne nakoonse chibthi hay toh who marjayege'''agar yekeen nahii hay na''..toh teek hay''''.pechele hafte is ne ek bachee ko maraa'''..iske baremein paper ne bhi chabaya''''.yekeen nahii hay na'''.yeh doctor report'''mein doctor ko phone kartha hoo''..and he acts like he phone''..and he switch on s''.speaker'''''.the othe side ha katarnak bhimari hay.,,,,iskal ilaaz kuch bhi nahii hay'sawadhaan''''the person runs from there''..

Jiya starts fighting with him

Yeh kya kaha tum ne'.ki mein bhimarhoo''.yeh sab kya nataak hay''''..

Wow recording''''yeh sab kuch kya hay

Rahul:kamal hay mei ne tuje bachaaya

Tume kya laghta hay'.mein hero bankar fight karoon''''tumaree liye itna scene nahii hay'''.and he moves '''''..

She follows''''''''''..him'''''..

They moving'''''.

They resides at a tree

He looks at her'''''''''''.

They finds some old house

Kya baat hay'''

Jungle mein mangal'''.

Lagtha hay naseeb accha hay'''''''''''.

Anjana safar''''..

Ajnabi yeha saas hay''''

He is at the outside'''

She takes fruits''''''.

They both eat''''''''.

He thinks

Kya hay sab kuch''''''.

Iska saath mera ristha kaisa hay''..

Kyon eisa lagtha hay''.ki iske saath mera '''''''''..rishta hay''.har baar'''''''..kyon''''..

Yeh nayaa ehsaas kyon'''''''

At that time suddenly jiya listens to some sounds'.and she searches for light'''

As she moves she falls

And rahul catches her

O Re Piya Haye 3
Udne Laga Kyon Man Baawla Re?
Aaya Kahan Se Yeh Hosla Re?
O Re Piya Haye 2
Tanabana Tanabana
Bunti Hawaa Haaye Bunti Hawa?
Boondein Bhi To Aaye Nahi Baaz Yahan
Sazish Mein Shaamil Sara Jahan Hai?
Har Zarre Zarre Ki Yeh Iltiza Hai
O Re Piya?
O Re Piya Haye 2?
O Re Piya
Ni Re ,Re Re Ga?Ga Ga Ma?Ma Ma Pa?Pa Ma Ga Re Sa?Sa Re Re Sa?Ga Ga Re?Ma Ma Ga?Pa Pa Ma?Dha Dha Pa?Ni Ni Sa Sa Pa?Pa Sa Ma Pa Dha Ni Sa Ni?Re Ni Sa Sa Sa.. . . . ..
Nazrein Bolen Duniya Bole?
Dil Ki Zaban Haaye Dil Ki Zubaan?
Ishq Maange Ishq Chahe Koi Toofan
Chalna Aahiste Ishq Naya Hai?
Pehla Yeh Vada Humne Kiya Hai
O Re Piya Haaye 2?O Re Piya?
Piyaaa...Yehhh PiyaNange Pairo Pe Angaro?
Chalti Rahi Haaye Chalti Rahi?
Lagta Hai Ke Gairo Mein?
Palti Rahi Haaye?
Le Chal Wahan Jo?
Mulk Tera Hai?
Jahil Zamana?
Dushman Mera HaiHaayeO Re Piya Haye 5
At that time stranger'..sings
Jab jab jisse milne ko likha hota hay''''.
Unne milthe judh jaate hay
Kab badal tha hay zindagi ka dastaan ''..
Koi nahii janta hay''
Siwaya rab ke
Kyonki kal thak nafrat ka tashaan
Badal gayaa mohabat ka junoon
Dekhna hay,,,,,,,,,ki kab ''..chalege''
Yeh daastaan''..
On the other hand
Diya is thinking
Yesa kyon lagtha hay'.
ki mein ne apne zindagi
mein kuch koya hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
At the same time
Karan also thinking'something''''
Aaj hawa mein bilkul naya a ehasaas hay'''''
On the other hand balraaj thinking'of something'''''..
Yesa hawa hay'.us din''..
Jaha pyarr ka ehsaas''''''''
Pata nahii''''.
ladoo abhi tak ''''..
Kya baat ho sakthi hay
Phone bhi nahii aya ab tak''''''''''..
And she looks at the moon'''''''..

and she gets worried
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Jiya comes back

She sees around

And rahul also comes back

They both feel uncomfortable

On the other hand

Karan worries for jiya

Pata nahii yeh jiya kaha gayee

Uske bina sab kuch kali si lagthi hay

Badi maa comes to karan

Badimaa:karan ……..kya baat hay parishaan hoo

Karan:kuch nahii badimaa……….

Badimaa:mein jaanta hoo..tu apne best friend ko miss kar rahe hoo na

Karan:kyon badimaa……..aap miss nahii kar rahe hoo

Badimaa:kya karoon beta mera ladoo hi yesi sab se acchee….aur sab se pyarri

On the other side

Rahul suddenly wakes up

And finds jiya is sleeping

Hair locks on her face……..

She is beautifull……….pretty………….

Sh e is so good…………..

Innocence on her face

Just like a small child

So cute………………….

Rahul:yeh bees saal se mere ghar mein hay

Aur muje pata nahii..chale…………………

Aur isne muje uss moti se kudh ko compare kiya

And he smiles………..

Ab kuch badelega………jaroor badelaga………………………

And he looks at the moon……..

Tu bhi kamala hay yaar

Ek se badkar ek banatha

Aur chupata hay

…….

He remember s his words regarding his dream girl

Cute face…………….very beautifull……

Just like moon light's essence

Wow………………..gorgeous…………………….

He then looks at jiya……………….

She is the same……………..

On the other hand

Diya is very much worried

As she cannot trace rahul………

Kaha gayaa hay rahul………..

Muje dikahii kyon nahii hay who………

Pata nahii kaha chala gayaa…………………

Rahul:iss baar mein tuje kahi bhi akele nahii jane doonga……………………

Aur mera wadaa hay tujse……………..

At the second stage

The personon the phone calls sahil

Sahil:ha bolo kuch pata chala jiya kaha hay

The person:pata nahii saab

Sahil:daffar……..tuje pata hay.jiya naini taal se nikalkar ………24 hours huwa hay

Kaha gayee hay

Asmaan khaa gayee yazameen mein lipat gayee

Dekho..apne poori taaqat lagado.muje jiya kisibii haal mein chaheyee………………..

On the other hand

Rahul wakes and find jiya is not there

He searches for her

He hears some sounds

He goes to the place

He finds jiya is playing with water………………

She is playing………………………

He goes near to her

Suddenly she finds someone there

And jiya screams

Rahul stops her and put his hand on her mouth

And both eyes are locked…………

[Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai ]2

Aai aise raat hai jo
Bhahut khushnaseeb hai
Chahe jise door se duniya
Woh mere kareeb hai
Kitna kuch kehna hai
Phir bhi hai dil mein
Saawal hai kahin
Sapno mein jo roj kaha hai
Woh phir se kahun ya nahi

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai

Tere saath saath esha
Koi noor aaya hai
Chand teri roshni ka
Halka sa ek saaya hai
Teri nazaron ne dil ka Kiya jo hasar
Asar yeh hua

Abb inmein hi doob ke ho jau paar
Yehi hai Dua

[Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai ]2

Jiya sees that rahul is staring at her

She comes back and leaves from there

And she goes inside

Rahul………….

Follows her

Tum ajeeb ladki hoo

Kabhi bhi kahii bhi shuru ho jaate hoo

Pagal ho kya

Accha huwa yeh jungle hay

Agar ghar huwa hota toh mere band toh bajate hay……..pata nahii iss jungle se kaise bahar ajenyenge..its strinks yaks

Hello…..rajkumar ki bade aulat………

Tume kya lagtha hay……..yeha laat saab ke liye sab kuch milega jaisa……..ghar mein mil jaata hay

Ha.waha toh naukar kaam kartha hay……tanqqwa lete hay who kaam karne ke liye…khaas kar govind…mrs merina….all are fantastic…………

Toh toh aisa kehrahi hoo ki tum mera saara kaam karthe hoo……………………….

Jiya:kya….mrsmelina……….unne toh apne make up ke hi fikar nahii hoti..aur govind.who toh itne bulakaad hay….ki kabhi kabhi kudh kobhool kar who hero banjaata hay

Rahul:accha…….toh kya huwa…maa hay na,,,,,,,,,,who toh mera khayal rakthi hay

Because she is mother

Jiya:haa….badimaa ko takleef nahii hota hay….isliye…………..

Rahul:isliye……………………………

Jiya:mein tumara kaam karthi hoo.pata hay.kitne gandee karthe hoo..jab bhi tumara foot ball ka match hoo ..ya tera nayaa show hoo……….tum toh nayaa kapada lekar ghoomthe hoo…aur raat ki jab deer raat tak ghar mein guss nahiii jaate hoo.pata hay kitne bad state mein puchte hoo…….ki pata nahii chalta hay..badimaa deer raat tak intezar na rahe……is liye vishal bhayya………mein aur karan……tere har harqat par parda dalte hay.aur tum…….laat saab………..dadaji ko ab bhi apne suppote par jyada barosa hay..ki who unke naam roshan karenga..unne is liye

Rahul:shut up…toh koi ehsaan kar rahe hoo kya

Maa ne kiya hay ehsaan jo tuje ghar pe laakar nayee toh kisi……….hostage home mein.rehte

Before he say some thing

Jiya eyes filled with water and she……is crying……….teek kaha hay tumne………….

Sorry…………………

So sorry………………………………………..

She goes back and runs from the place

Rahul also follows her

They moves

Rahul tries to say something

But jiya's mood is very upset………………

Before they reach road

They find someone is waiting for them

It was sahil and his group…………..

Jiya is totally confused……..

Where rahul…………………

Aap sab log yeha

It was vishaal……..

Ha rahul maa bahut parishaan hay

Sim didi ka phone aya tha ….unne kaha ki tum naini taal mein hoo…..jiya bhi waha hay……….

Aur jab 24 hours tak tum dono ka pata nahii chala is liye……………..

He looks at jiya……………….

But jiya already at the jeep……………………..

His face turns sad……….

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Jiya is very upset

At the same time rahul is wondering why he talked to her in such a way

As she is hurted……….

He is feeling

Hamesha mein kyon karthe hoo……………

Rahul is feeling guilty

Both reaches home…….

Diya comes and hugs him……

Where badimaa comes

Rahul looks at her

On to every one surprise she comes and hugs jiya………………

But rahul smiles……….as he knows tha t it is going to happen

He then wonders

Everytime he used to feel jelous as his mother giving preference to an outside girl but today his heart is feeling nothing………….

Badimaa:pata hay…..kitne parishaan ho gayee mein tere liye……..

Jiya smiles pale…..

But her eyes are red………..

Karan comes to her

He also sees jiya is upset……..

Kya baat ho sakthi hay

Jiya itne udaas yesa pehle kabhi nahii huwi thi

Kisi ne kuch kaha hay kya………

Baat kya ho sakthe kya………..

Miss melina and govind and welcome srahul……….

Rahul moves into his room………

He takes his wardrobe and finds it is untidy

He calls all…………………

Kya baat hay…yeha miss melina aur govind hay

Maa……toh bahar gayee huwi hay….iska matlab

Jiya sahii bol rahi hay…………….inn log pakka kaam chor ho….he calls them

They will give excuses..but rahul gets angry

Kya huwa hay rahul baba ko….who itne frustuated kabhi nahii hay toh aaj kyahuwa hay…..diya comes to his room…….

Diya:I know baby….uss weird girl ke saath 24 hours forest mein..oh my god………

koi aur hota……………..toh

but rahul is looking at the door…out side the room………………….

He cannot forget all the incidents

At the night……..

Holding jiya…….first seeing her………………….

He is so different…………………..

He is full immensed in the thoughts……

On the other hand

Jiya is very upset

She is in the room….

She is looking at the moon……………………………..

She is immensed In the thoughts

Eisa kyon huwa mere saath…….mere mata pita kaun hay….kyonaur kaha hay…..kyon baghwaan ne muje annadh banaya………

Yesa kyo n kiya………..

And she bursts out…

She comes to the Krishna idol

Aap ne mere zindagi mein joo takleef de hay

Uska jawaab mein ne kabhi bhi aap se nahii manga hay.

Lekin aaj apko mere saari saawaaloo ka jawaab dena hoga….

On th e other hand………

Guruji is in his mandir

He suddenly opens his eyes

He looks around

He then calls a person

And he calls to rajeshwari

Badimaa…….lifts the phone

Rs:guruji itne raat ko sab kuch teek hay………

She takes the phone haa guruji kya baat hay.aap itne raat ko phone kiya.sab kuch kusal mangal hay na…………

Rajeshwari:hawa badal rahi hay.ab muje laghta hay tu jyada dinoo tak.sachii nahii chupasakthi hay

Abhi bhi mei n ne kuch ajeeb dekha…is waqt hame aur choukarni se rehne…….hoga…………..

Kyonki……..us se sachii tak pouchne ke bahut chances hay……….

In meantime………jiya feels some wind……….

And the cloth placed on the Krishna idol………lifts ………..

Jiya moves her hand to take the hand

And her she puts back on the idol……before she moves her duppatta blocks at the idol s mandir s down ……

She takes….and findsa drawer…………

She opens and finds a key……..

Yeh tala…………yeha kyon chupaya……..

Kisiki chaabi hay yeh

Aur yeha …….

She takes the key andremembers the incident which is the last room…of the back side of the garden…which only badimaa knows that………..

Kya hay uss darwaa je ke peche …kyon badimaa……usse safaii karne ke bhi nahii khol thi hay……………

Jiya tum pagal ho gayee hay….ke tu……..badimaa par shaqkarthe hay……………and she again keeps back at the place…..

She moves into herroom………..

At the night…………

The person informs….

Kya aapsach kehrahi hay

Guruji ki adi raat ka phone

Aur jiya ka upset hone

Kahi yeh sab iss baat ka isshara toh nahii….

Ki ab jiya ko sach jaana jarori hay…………….

Hayehi teek rahegee

At the time

Jiya gets a paper

Jiya:tume jaane ke jarorat nahii hay

Ke mein kaun hoo……..

Lekin itna jaan lo ke jis sawaal is waqt tere dimak mein chal raha hay.uska jawaab tuje issi ghar mein milage…..uske liye tum ne jo chabi wahi chod diya hay.usse wapas lena hoga.aur uss darwaja khol na padega……….jisse mein tere saari sawaal ka jawaab milega……………..

Jiya is worried

And she wonders why she is thinking all the rubbish………………………

Muje eh sab kuch nahii sochna chaheyee

On the other hand…………………

Rahul is upset……

Kal mein jiya se baat jaroor karunga……………

Precap…………..

Jiya is moving at the back garden

jiya is opening a sandook/,,,,,,,,,,in which a picture is where a lady which is resembling jiya and rajeshwari…………

Holding each other………………..like best friends

Jiya is shocked……………………

Part 52

Yeh aurat kaun hay aur mere jaise kyon dik rahi hay'''.

Aur yeh badimaa ke saath kya akr rahi hay'''''

Aur isne rani oo jaise kapade kyon pehen rakha hay''''

Aur yeh toh kise portrait hay''''''.

Aur yeh tasveer chupake kyon rakha hay''''''.

At that time she hears foot steps of some one''.

She sees the watchman coming to the way'..

She manages to hide herself

And she returns back'''

She remembers badimaa going out to the room'..

She immensed in her thoughts''''.

She is looks at the room''..

She is totally confused'''..

And she is thinking..is badimaa hiding something and if it is''what might be''''

Muje badimaa se baat karni hay''''''.

At that time even rahul is also wondering what had happened. Why he is so upset

And why he treated with her in such a manner , so that she is hurt and it is hurting him..

On the other side even diya is thinking of change of rahul's behaviour'''.

At that time karan comes to jiya

Karan:kya baat hay jiya jab se aye hoo khoyee khoyee se hoo'.kisi baat tuje parishaan kar rahi hay aur tum use chupane ke koshish kar rahi hoo'''..

Jiya :nahii karan yese koi baat nahii,'mein teek hoo''..woh safar ke wajah se parishaan hoon'''

KaranLinner'. Jis ladke ghar ke saari kaam karke bhi takthi nahii''..woh ladki aaj yesi baat kyon kar rahi hay;kahi rahul ne uske dil ko phir se choot pounchaya kya''''yeh pata nahii'''muje iske baremein pata lagana padegaa'''''.

On the next day morning''''

Balraaj moves in a car'''

Muje pata lagana hi hogaa''''

At the mansion''''

Rajeshwari in front of mandir''''''..

She is praying'..

Apko lakh lakh shukriya aap ne mere beti ko wapas kar diya'''muje''''..mein toh darr gayee thi'

Balraaj goes to a office

Mr ramesh'''..mein ne apko bahut jyada waqt diyaa lekin phi r bhi aap use bachee ko dond nahii rahe apko pata hay na who mere liy e kitna important hay''''''.

Ha mr balraaj par kya karee us bachee ka koi tasveer nahii hay,''..nahii koi pechaan lekin mere kosish jarii hay''''''

At that time jiya reaches college''''.

She is very upset''''

Nimmy sees her''''.

Hai'''.jiya''..

Hai nimmy'

Kya baat hay'.tumara chehra upset hay..sab teek hay kya''''.

Rahul also reaches college'''

But his eyes are searching for jiya'''

Diya comes and hugs him'..

But still his eyes are searching for her''''..

At that time he sees jiya''''''..

Tere saath saath esha
Koi noor aaya hai
Chand teri roshni ka
Halka sa ek saaya hai
Teri nazaron ne dil ka Kiya jo hasar
Asar yeh hua

Abb inmein hi doob ke ho jau paar
Yehi hai Dua

[Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai ]2

Jiya also sees him'''..

But in anger''.

Before he says something'''.

Diya takes rahul from there'''''''''..

And rahul sees this in a shock''''''''



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From past week.

He cannot able to meet jiya………..

Due to his busy schedule..

Next day

New morning…………..

He came out of the balcony

To find jiya is talking to ramu kaka……..regarding flowers……………

She is pouring water to plants………………………….

He just look at her

Her white duppatta flewing……….her eyes are ……………………..down………………………

And she is smiling….

He just starting at her……………

He just came down ran from there.

Luckily no one at the hall……………..

He start shouting at govind.

Govind mera white strip shirt kaha hay'agar 5 minute mein nahii mila…..toh.mere tera jaan lelunga……………..

he smiled.at his plight……..

ab dekhna jiya sharma how could u resist to come to my room,

I know.it is very difficult..for govind to find the shirt.

Govind is hiding behind the wall………………………scaring to death.

Jiya saw him……………

Didi.aap jaante hoo na,.pls mere jaan bachavoo………..

Seeing the striken face of………………….govind..teek hay bhai….iss baar………….agle baar se nahii………….aap ko pata hay….na………………rahul ko pata chala………………………ko apka kya haal hoga……………………

Jaanta hoon didi.just last time…………

Ok………lekin check karna ke ……………who kamre mein nayee hay na.

No madam………………….

She quickly sneeks to his room……………

She saw his bed is mess………………………..

She know the state………………………..

She open the wardrobe…..and check for the shirt.

Aware of the fact that rahul is in his room…………………….in the closet itself……………………

As jiya going to touch………………..the closet.

She felt pull..

And next minute he pinned her to the wall………………..

One hand in the waist and other hand…………….closing her mouth to stop her screamed……….

He just staring at her eyes……………………..

She is hell scared………………………….

But he is enjoying the touch……………………………..

Not want to break the moment.

Until unless the govind voice

Jiya didi……………….

Rahul gave a angry glare….didi……………………

As her mouth is closed……………………

The sweet lips below his hands……………..

mmm……….mmm

he remove the hand.

Tell him ur ok…………………………

Haa govind bhai…..

Didi……….kya baat hay shirt mila hay kya

St naii shirt wala milgayaa………………………

Leave me………………

No……….

Pls…………..

Ok.until promise me that u will meet me in the college

Other wise stay here……….i have no problem…………………………………….

Ok………..i will meet u…………………………..

Ok see u………..

By the way ,,,,my white strap shirt is here…………….

He took the shirt from the closet………………………………

She ran from there………………………..

And ran from breath…….

Govind scared……………….didi are u fine ……..why ur face was pale……….did u see any ghost in the room……………

With out answering she ran towards the room….

Bumping with Natasha…….

Sorry didi…………………………yeh kya huwa jiya…………………………..

And again with karan;

Araam se jiya.marathon mein participate kar rahii h o ky.a….

Where rahul came down at sharp 8 o clock……………………………

At the breakfast table…….greeting everyone.with a very unusual smile…..something is there…………………………..

His eyes are fixed at the opposite direction………

When suddenly he saw karan and jiya are coming..talking regarding their…….assignments………………………..

They are busy in their……….convo……….no karan……………u should also make u theory….quite interactive………

That means if u had taken opinion poll.then could be helpful in the project…….suddenly shekar came there……………….

What are the theory………………………….

Karan:actually dad….we both are doing a project regarding a realize of new product in market……with least cost price……………

This is in theory basis….

Major part is done by jiya itself…………..i just added her………….some few points……………………………….

And what is the opinion poll……………………..

Jiya answered…………kuch nahii bade papa…….hum iss project ke baaremein…………………..kuch business associates aur analysts…….aur market techns se opinion lelenge..

Aur unke view….we will make reports……………that will be support for our project….

But what about the finiance……….

It s ok badi papa…..agar opinion.poll is giving positive results then we will make sure…………………..we will get some loan easily…..

But that will be second pharse for our plan…………….

She smiled.at karan…………………

Karan……………….and jiya look at each other……..

Shekar:sabash bachoo….tum dono ke hardwork…………………well done beta……………………

She got a call from nimmy

Haa nimmy bolo..

Nimmy.rahul gave a look for her………………………………..

No nimmy misra sir class is second half….

First half we are free today………………………………….

Nimmy:why…………………

Hay………………………exams are nearing there na…………………

That is why practicing free periods.

Rahul turning his head smiling……………

U cannt..escape……………………..

She look into his eyes

Their eye lock……………..rahul winked at her…

Jiya.turned……………………..to the other side…………………………….

First time………jiya is trembling………………to go for college

On the other hand…………………………

Rahul enter the college…

With a smile in his face………………

He is jumping..exicting for hiscollege….

Suddenly he felt college is looking beautiful………………

Payal comes to hug him……….

Even diya also watches him………..

But he is in his world………..

He looks for jiya………….

Come on jiya.kya soch rahii hay tuu

Who rahul hay.itne asaani se badal jayageee…….

Shayad mazaak kar raha tha…..chal library.mein chal………………….

Meantime…not aware of the fact that rahul made a cute escape……………………..

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Rahul is in library

He saw……………………………….jiya is busy in books

Just then.sahil came inside and took the opposite seat.

Congrats

She looked at him and smiled………………………

J:Congrats kis liyee

S:Tumare project kee baaremein suna tha is liye

J:Toh aap mere jasoosi kar rahi ho kya……………..

S:im honoured

And he bowed.

Jiya smiled.

Rahul looking at them.but somehow he felt bad……

He did not want to see jiya with others

What's wrong with him.even diya dance with others.he never felt the feeling where…………………jiya…………………….s closeness with others disturb them.

Just then.sahil got phone …………….

And jiya went to other side for more books.

And to the other side….

It is dark…………

Just then she felt hand on her waist……..

Turned to find rahul………….behind…………her……………………………….

She turned for sahil.but he is not there.

He took her hand.and dragged to the back side.

It is lockers room……………

There will be no one.it is old staffs room……………………………

Rahul………………jiya gasped….

First time rahul felt his name sweet to him……………………

He is in his world.

But jiya is wringling……………in his hand.

But he is too strong.

Kya baat hay…….dabbu why ur running away from me.

What u want…………..

If u want any work….then…………….i will do it

Please……………..leave me…………………………..

He knows that she is angry…because he hurted her………………….

He tightens his hold………………..

And bends his head.

First time he saw the eyes….dark brown honey eyes…………………which ar e so beautiful……………………..he is drown in that eyes..he want to stare at them until his end of life………………the purity and innocence in that eyes……….no one cannot be so beautiful then hers…………………………….

His hand on her waist

Jiya lifted her head to look into the eyes….it isdark intense eyes……………………………….

There is no wildness…………………..in that ..case…………….his eyes are saying some other thing…she never see In that eyes………………

She is confused………………………….

Just then he is looking at the beautiful lips that is tempting him to do something…………………

He ……………ben d his head lower……and brush his lips to…………the ear…………………………..

And whispered sorry……………jiya…………looked at him………………..

She didn't believe what she saw and what she hear…………….

She just walk from there

Where rahul smiled.

And just walk.into the floor………………..

He saw jiya……………………….

Then he starts singing

Jaaniye heeriye
Jaaniye heeriye
Mere mann ye bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu
Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhundh raha hai tu
Jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

Mere mann ye bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu
Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhundh raha hai tu
Jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahe dhadkan hain tujhse pyar
Mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

Jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein - 2
Aaya nazar mein jab se koi hain
Tu sochta hain tu puchata hain
Jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hain
Haa yeh wohi hain - 2
Tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadi hain
Kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye
Jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

Teri nigaahen
Par tu yeh soche jaaun na jaaun
Yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
Kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanv
Preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
Udta agar hai udne de aanchal
Kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye
Jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
Mere mann ye bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu
Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhundh raha hai tu
Mitwa...

Diya and others enter into the room……….

But rahul moves from there…………………….

At night…………………..

He sat in his room…

Thinking how can he meet…………………………

He thought of sneeking into her room………….

He comes out of the room.

To find bindiyaa……………………….in the kitchen………………

She sees the shadow…….

She screams.but remembers the words of jiya.

She close her eyes…………..and starts mummering……………………..the god names…………….

Rahul mean time..reaches karan's room………..finds him reading book.

Yeh karan bhi nahii…kitna padakoo hay………………………………

He crosses the room……….

To reach the last room.

Enter into her room…………….and looks for her.

The room is very big.

But beautifully decorated……….

Books are at the table…….and the window………………………..moon light enters into it……………………………..

He didn't find…….jiya……………………………………

He listens to the door knob……………………………….

He turns to find jiya coming from the washroom…..with a night dress………………….

Her cream satin night dress..complimenting the color…………………………..

She comes and sit at the table…….

He sees the picture of her and his mom……on the table…..and another photograph of karan and her

And one family portrait…………………………………….all are included……………..

She quickly calls…

This time whom is talking…………..

He make face.

But it is karan

Karan:Ab tak soya nahii

Tune bhi abhi pad rahi hoo….

Jiya :kitna koshish karlo mere percentage beat nahii karogi…………………

Karan:jiya sharma ko beat karna…..impossible hay………….'s

She smiles.

Agar 2 minutes mein tum nahii sougii..toh muje majbooran.badimaa ko bata na padegaa..ki tum der rat tak…padke apne tabiyat ka khayal nahii rak rahii hoo………..

Now 10,9 8she is counting no

No;………..with in seconds he saw lights are off………………………...in karan's room…………………………………….

She stretched her hands…………………..

And move to the window………………………

Lights are off…………………………..

The moon light is touching.her …….making rahul to forget the senses………

He slowly reached her……………………………………

And she felt someone presence in the room.

She about to turn on the light……………….

Rahul put his hand onher mouth

She recognized his touch…………….

Just then………………

The door……………………..knock…

Both shocked and turned towards the door………………………………

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lovely part...who's at the door?
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Jiya didi darwaza kholeye.mein hoo……….bindiya……

Bindaya.rahul fumed……………

Where jiya freed from his grip

She open the door.

Didi muje bachayee.

Who bhoot ab mere peeche hay.

Bhoot…..

Haa bhoot.

Aap ne uss din kaha tha………..ki rahul bhayya mein bhoot guss gaya hay…

Aur who har kisi ko nahii chodege joo uske raaz jaanta hay

Pls………….iss baaraap aur bade maam saab…………….guruji se milne jawoogi naa…toh phir mere liye ek daaga lana………………………please didi…………

Haa launga.tum so jaoo…..

Lekin didi.woh bhoot apko kuch kare get oh……….

She looked at the window.

Find rahul is not there…

Lagtha hay.chala gayaa.thank god…………………

Didi aap kuch bhool kyon nahii rahe hoo.

Who mein dekhlunge………..uss bhoot ko…..tu tension mat lena.

Agar kisi ne inte raato ko tuje dekha toh bekaar kee sawaal karenge………………………..lekin too uska jawaab nahii de payega…………..tu chale jaana ok

Bindiya leaves from her.

Jiya feel relived.

Thank god rahul was also gone.

And she closed the door………………………….

And unknowingly locked………………………………..

As soon as she turned.

To find rahul is looking at her…………….

Rahul………

Her own voice is trembling…………………….

Ofcourse.

He is in vests and pants………….his broad shoulders……………..

But his eyes on her.

The creamy ………………………..white …….night dress………………….the beautiful…….eyes.

The trembling hands.

Want to hug her………………………………..

Came towards her.

She is moving back………………

Until she is cornered…………..

Why ur scared.

And who is bhoot……………

Is it me……………………………………..

Noo……..

She cannot answer…..

Who.usdin tum mere kamre mein aya tha…….

Us din bindaya ne tume dekh liya tha.

S liyee us din mein ne tumee bachane ke liye jhoot bhola ki………………..bhoot ka drama…karna pada.

She is telling the incident..

With a cute face.

He just want to pull her cheek and hug her and give her cute sweet kiss………………………..

He smiled……………………………..

Dekho isse pehle koi ajayee……….tum yeha se jawoo.please……….

Teek hay.issbaar sach mein college mein milna.

Agar bhag ne koshish ki na……………..toh mujse boora koi nahii hoga…………………..

Hey bagwaan….yeh toh such men serious nahii naa………..

Toh mein problem mein passungi..

With that thoughts she closed her eyes..

She felt his eyes on her.

What 's wrong with him.

Why he is seeing like this………………………….

Next day…..in the dancing room

He is practicing.

Everyone was breathless watching his moves.

He is dancing hard……

His muscle strech…………………………………….

Dil laga na diljale se
dil jal jayega
Ishq kar na ishq hi tujhe tadpayega
Koi yeh maane na
Koi yeh jane jan
Mene to jana hai
Ishq leta hai jaan
Dhoom Dhoom just take my life
dhoom dhoom just break my heart
Dhhom dhoom just tear apart
Aa Lele tu meri jaan
Just freak out
Yeh ishq hai rab ki dua
Yeh ishq to sab ko hua
Yeh junoon hai nassha hai
Sukun hai mazza hai
dilo ki sada hai
Yeh tu jaan le
O yeah love hai forever
Yeh love choote never
Yeh love for you dilbar
meri maan le
Koi yeh maane na
Koi yeh jane jan
Mene to jana hai
Ishq leta hai jaan
Dhoom Dhoom just take my life
dhoom dhoom just break my heart
Dhhom dhoom just tear apart

Aa Lele tu meri jaan
Iska pata yeh pal na ho
Jo aaj hai kal na ho
O yeh love take to highe
Yeh love hai desire
Yeh love to hai fire
Yeh love takes u far
Yeh jala de bhijha de
Bana de mita de
Wafa de daga da
Koi yeh maane na
Koi yeh jane jan
Mene to jana hai
Ishq leta hai jaan
Dhoom Dhoom just take my life
dhoom dhoom just break my heart
Dhhom dhoom just tear apart
Aa Lele tu meri jaan
jiya is in the class……

Just then a message

Mein tumara wait kar raha hoo……….

Rahul number….

He smiled how he saved his number in jiya 's number

He called jiya 's number from his mobile.and took jiya's mobile and saved it..

Message

Agar tum nahii aye…….toh mein tere class room mein avunga.

She thought he is joking…….

Just then………………………………….

The window is opened.

And he is sitting near the window……..

She is scared.

How it is possible.

She saw him practicing………………

Then how can he………………………….

As little of her knowledge

FB………….

He saw jiya………………….

And he quickly ended his reharsales……….

And told his assistant to …make the troup to perform.

As he is busy In checking the videos.

In the dark room.

As in everyone 's thoughts that he is In dark room.observing their moves……..

As there is only jacket.

Rahul enter the room.

Remove the jacket.and the camera is on…

If everyone look at the room it appear like someone is watching them……………

But it is jacket…..

And he changed his jacket.and left the room with other door..and a dark cloth to cover his face………………..

He took the keys…

And enter jiya classroom………………..

FB ends

Jiya saw him shocked expressions……………………………..

He smirked………………….

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