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Jiya is completely confused

And this was shocking for diya

As he didn't noticed her once

She enter the mehendi part and diya insisted to put mehendi on……………………

As the lady ready to put mehendi on jiya's hand diya dragged it……………

And she made lot of things that caused jiya to not to pu t mehendi

Jiya became upset and went to her room……..

Oh this diya im going to kill her

But before that I need to do something but what…..

He came to her room to find her sleeping………………………………………………

He bend her.

And he went to his room………………………………..

He took internet.and browsed something…………………..and he came down…………………………………………

He went to store room managed to get one cone…………………..

And applied on jiya's hand

Next day morning jiya woke to find something on her hand shocked to find mehendi on it.

She turned to see………………….karan

She smiled so again karan put mehendi on her

He always do for her happiness

She looked at the design it is messed one

But karan always makes good mehendi as he is expert in that…………………….

But this is different mehendi…………………….

She is confused…….

And washed her hands

It is dark shade of red……………………………..

She smiled………………………………..

And she came down

Diya shocked to find .mehendi on jiya's hand…………..

She turned to look a trahul.coming down in his track shoes…………….

He is yarning.yes he spent 5 hours for the work.,first he used to stop but on seeing the tired smily face of jiya he used to work

He forgot all pain when he saw her smiling with all.

Diya watched why he is staring at jiya always

Simran also observing that he will work only jiya always…………………………………

And helps her.

But he knows jiya is avoiding him,,…………..completely………………………………………..e

At the store room jiya is trying to get things an dher hand gets hurt

Rahul rushed towards her and took her fingers

Tum dekh ke kaam nahii karsakthi hay kya govind ko koi kaam nahii deti hoo.,with that he picked her up

She wringled and he put a finger on her lips

Chup ek dum chup…….don't say anything………..tum yeha araa m karogi..aur agar hillaya.na toh mujse boora koi nahii hoga………………………

She looked at him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,with amused and shocked.

Diya is searching for Rahul.she wondering Rahul is not only ignoring her presence………….

Just then RD came there and said are wah Rahul……………kaam kar rahe hoo

Kahi tume bhi shaadi mein jaldi hay kya………………………………………..

At the sangeet function lot of girls pressurize

And jiya start singing

Ho~, aa~, aa
Sheesha ho ya dil ho -2
Aakhir (toot jaata hai) -4
Lab tak aate aate haathon se
Sagar (choot jaata hai) -3
Sheesha ho ya dil ho
Aakhir toot jaata hai

Ho~
Kaafi bas armaan nahin
Kuch milna aasaan nahin
Duniya ki majboori hai
Phir taqdeer zaroori hai
Yeh jo dushman hai aise
Donon raazi ho kaise
Ek ko manao to duja (rooth jaata hai) -3
Sheesha ho ya dil ho
Aakhir toot jaata hai

(Baithe the kinare pe
Maujon ke ishare pe) -2
Ham khelein toofanon se
Find More lyrics at www.sweetslyrics.com
Is dil ke armaanon se
Hamko yeh maloom na tha
Koi saath nahin deta -2
Maajhi chod jaata hai
Saahil (choot jaata hai) -3
Sheesha ho ya dil ho -2
Aakhir (toot jaata hai) -4
Sheesha ho ya dil ho

Duniya ek tamasha hai
Aasha aur nirasha hai
Thode phool hai kaante hai
Jo taqdeer ne baante hain
Apna apna hissa hai
Apna apna kissa hai
Koi lut jaata hai
Koi (loot jaata hai) -3
Sheesha ho ya dil ho
Aakhir (toot jaata hai) -4
Lab tak aate aate haathon se
Sagar (choot jaata hai) -3
Sheesha ho ya dil ho

After sometime Rahul started

chaand mera dil chaandni ho tum

chaand se hai door chaandni kahaan

laut ke aana hai yahin tumko

jaa rahe ho tum jaao meri jaan

waise to har kadam milenge log sanam

milega saccha pyaar mushkil se

ho dil ki dosti khel nahin koyi

dil se dil hai milta yaar mushkil se

yehi to hai sanam pyaar ka thikana

main hoon (3)

chaand mera dil chaandni ho tum

chaand se hai door chaandni kahaan

laut ke aana hai yahin tumko

jaa rahe ho tum jaao meri jaan

jaao meri jaan, jaao meri

and some other songs

and the final song

\(Hulcul Huyi Zara Shor Huwa, Dil Chor Huwa Teri Or Huwa - 2Aisi Chale Jab Hawa, Ishq Huwa Hi Huwa - 2) - 2Ishq Huwa Haaye - 2 Palko Se Hoton Tak Jo Raah Nikalati HaiGujare Na Wahaan Se Yeh Teri Galati HaiPalko Se Hoton Tak Jo Raah Nikalati HaiRehte Hain Abb Hum Wahaan, Ishq Huwa Hi HuwaHo O O Aisi Chale Jab Hawa, Ishq Huwa Hi HuwaHulcul Huyi Zara Shor HuwaDil Chor Huwa Teri Or Huwa Ishq HuwaKadmo Ko Sambhaalein, Nazaron Ka Kya KareinNazron Ko Sambhaalein, To Dil Ka Kya KareinKadmo Ko Sambhaalein, Nazaron Ka Kya KareinDil Ko Sambhalein Zubaan, Ishq Huwa Hi HuwaAisi Chale Jab Hawa, Ishq Huwa Hi HuwaHulcul Huyi Zara Shor Huwa, Dil Chor Huwa Teri Or Huwa - 2Ishq Huwa – 2

Twists are coming in the story from coming 2 updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome parts
loved it dear
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lovely updates
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Rahul looked around

To find jiya dancing with karan

He know karan and jiya are friends

But cannot see the sight

Simran smiledon seeing the expressions.

Diya came and took his hand

He looked at jiya

She just gave him a hurted look and turned her face away

He smiled lightly

And thought of plan…………………..

Suddenly the lights off

And switching the partners

And pulled jiya back to him

Where diya left no option to dance with karan………

Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah

Nazron se nazarein mili… toh
Jannat si mehki fizaayen
Lab ne jo lab chu liya…. toh
Aasman se barsi duaayen
Aisi apni mohabbat
Aisi rooh e ibaadat
Hum pe meherban do jahaan

Rahul lifted jiya and twirled round

He felt tears on her eyes

Trying to hide their emotions………………………

He just wiped.

He is cooling his heart by touching

Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah

Teri baahon mein yeh jism khil gaya
Teri saanson mein chain mil gaya
Kaise rahe ab hum judaa
hoo hoo…
Tere pass hum itne hue
Tere khawab apne hue
Aise hue ab hum fidaa
Aisi uski inaayat
Mit gayi har shikaayat
Hum pe meherbaan do jahaan

Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah

Wohh… Allahhh… Shukran Allah
Ohh hooo Allahhh….hooo.. Shukran Allah

Tere saaye mein mili har khushi
Tere marzi meri zindagi
Le chal tu chaahe jahaan
Ha haan
Meri aankhon mein nazar teri hai
Meri shaam o sher teri hai
Tu jo nahi to main kahaan
Khil gayi meri kismat
Paake teri yeh chaahat
Hum pe meherbaan do jahaan

Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah
Shukran Allah wallah hamdul illah

The long passionate dance came to end

What is wrong with me………..why everytime I lost myself in front of him

She is fighting with her emotions

Least to know that…simran is watchi ngher

She gone back to the words………she spoke in nainataal.

Where she said about love.

Where………she saw Rahul eyes the guilt and l,ovein his eyes.

She know what is love

She felt the same pain .when she came to know that raj is going away…she thought she nee d to help them,

Just the n karan came there and called her

What happened jiya why are u crying,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,\

Anyone said anything to u…………………………

No karan

Nahii aaj mama ke yaad aye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Mama ke yaad……………………………………………………..

Are u surer…………………..jiya……………………………….

Yes karan chalo na…………………………….

They made wayto her room.

Karan bidded her fare well and went back to the room

He took the wallet and open diya s portrait

Today I don't believe my luck u danced with me,

But I need to find out the reason behind gloomy face…………………………..

Next day haldi rasam.

And all re busy.

Jiya came with haldi bowl.everyone kept teasing Natasha………..

Mean while jiya in kitchen,………….

She turned to find Rahul in his sherwani leaning againt the fridge door……………………………….

Looking at her …………with his hypnotic eyes

He cannot wink properly……………….

She is in his amrs……………….

Her eyes welled in pain………………………

He gave a smile…………….

And blocked her way

As rd came and called…………………………her

But she cannot move an d Rahul blocked.

His eyes are stopping her…………………………………….

And also hands.

She cannot escape.

Muje jaan a hay jiya said in low voice

Ohmy god…………pehle iska gussa aur upar se pouting…..face

Oh my god cannot stop myself by kissing

Yeh ladki muje pagal kardegi…………………………………..

Suddenly nimmy cam ein calling jiya

Hey jiya.

She turned towards nimmy………………….

And Rahul also turned…………………….to find nimmy

He remem bered how jiyaf ooled him,..making him belive that she is jiya

He gave a unique smile to nimmy

By looking naughtily to jiya

Jiya shocked she didn't expect nimmy there

But nimmy in her world lost in rahul's smile

Rahul said ……………..ab ayaga mazaa……………………………………..

And looked a tjiya………..

With a got u know look

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lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Rahul in his room………………………..

He is so worrying

From morning incident jiya purposefully avoiding him

Just then simran enter…………jaan saktha hoon k e har ladki ke sapnoo mein kho ne rehne wala mera rockstar bhai……………..kis ke khyal mein dhoob ee hay.

Simi didi….please

Oh comeon.

Teek hay ek idea de sakthe hoo,.agar who ladki hot and happening ladki hay toh usko gift do who kush ho jayegee

Aur aga r simple hoo.toh kuch yesa karoo.ke uske dil ke rasthe tak jaane ke koshish karo.aur pata lagaoo ke use kish cheez ke jyada kushi hogi……………….

On the other hand karan is tryinghis level best to findout jiya s glumpy behavior…………………………………….

On the other hand…….jiya got ready for phere

And both Rahul and……………simran.also managed…………….

Jiya came into her room looking for some things left over or not……………

On the other hand Rahul entered…………………..

Looking dashing in his blue sherwani every girl forgot to breathe he directly went to ……………………dulhan room.stopped a the door………………finding Natasha.

She looked gorgeous.

Lagtha hay aaj uss sanjay ke bachee se sab………………..jalenge.

He smiled

Bhai.

She smiled

And they hug and he said there is something missing.

He open a packet and gave it to her

To find beautiful pendent…………………

She wore it it matched her accessories………………….

Just then jiya call.natasha……………tayar hogayee kya.

Rahul turned to find blue lehenga.looking gorgeous taking his breath away………………

She looked at Rahul.eyes met………………

But Rahul.stop staring idiot.u need to impress and u remembered what di said u need to win her so stop eating her withur eyesand concentrate on work.

He gavea light kiss on forehead to Natasha and reached downstairs.

Meantime Natasha brought down for varamala…………………………….

She wondered rahulne Natasha ko gift kiya…………………………..

Natasha………….and sanjay.exchanged garlands,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Rahul dragged Natasha and sanjay almost fell.and nobody to rescue him as Rahul is so strong.

All all sanjay cousins busy in watching,,,,,diya ,,,,,,and girls are watching Rahul.

Karana and jiya smiled and took to sanjay side when his side came……………………and twisted sanjay so that Natasha cannot put garland on sanjay s neck

Everybody enjoying the cat and mouse fight…………………………………s

Afte r sometime.e pheres are started.

And coming to shoes.one

Sanjay can't find shoes………………………..as once again they are busy In watching rock star…………………….

But karan managedto hide them.,after sometime…………………..

Jiya went to room………….to find the shoes……………….where they hide

As not knowing some weird cousin of sanjay is watching her…………………………

As he saw jiya his eyes on her………………………..

Before he close the door..before he touch………………….jiya.

A strong hand stopped him to touch her……………………….

He turned to find rahuls fury eyes………………………………

Fb:

Rahul is busy staring his anuddengel..s

Suddenly hesaw a person bumped with jiya

Jiya softly said sorry………

But the person is looking weirdly at jiya……..

His blood boil……………….

And even he saw the person following jiya…………..so he……….

…………….

Rahul is beating furiously…………

It is like he is going to kill him………….

Jiya feared and shouted Rahul.

He turned and the person ran from there………….

He hugged jiya……………………………………..

Jiya is sobbing…………………….

Just then RD came In searching of jiya.

She saw her crying

Kya baat hay beta kyon roo rahi hay………………

And everyone came and started asking questions……………………………

Rahul looked at him

Jiya looked at him in fear.

He said

Uffo mom.,.dad aap sab naa itna filmy hone ke jarorat nahii

Aap toh jante na inn ladkiyoon ko rone kee adaat hay

Khaas kal jiya ki,

Yeh na…natasha ke bidaai ka practice kar rahi ha

Issee yehi samjaraha hook e daboo…………………….bidaai Natasha ko hone hay,technically……….tuu kyon ro rahe hoo use rona hay.

Lekin hameere nats k o rona nahii atahay na,.,.isliye uske badle yeh rohi hay.scene complete karne keliye.

Everybody laughed

And jiya went along with them,

She turned and said thanks with the eyes

He looked at the sky.d

Oh god

Andsaid next time…don't make all these things

I can't let anyone touching my jiya except mee ok……………………………….

He winked at sky………………………………..

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Nice Update
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Everyone were sad due to natasha's bidaai.

Jiya in thoughts rembered how he saved not only her but surprised how come Rahul become so responsible and how he handled the situation………………

He looked at jiya……..lost in thoughts

He smiled……………………..

I know who mere baaree soch rahii hay……………….

She unknowingly enter the wrong room

Somehow Rahul caught her hand

And whispered baad mein mera charcter badlne ke baaremein sochna……pehle concentrate on natashas bidaai…………….

And start crying for that………………………………..

I didn't like crying but cannot avoid rituals

And ur badimaa needs u there………………………..

He said and moved from there

Is the same person who used to hate that I had taken mother love from him.

But brushed off and concentrate on Natasha bidaai

Everyone retired to their rooms

Consoling each other

The sad atmosphere……………

And retired to their rooms………………..

Jiya came back and looked at the hand,,,,,,,,,,,,

And how she hugged Rahul……………………………………..

Everyone dies for his touch and she hugged him………………………………

Next day morning he work up early to talk to dad

He saw his mom giving him arthi and feed him prashad,,,,,

And the same is repeated by preeti bhabi to vishal bhai

He is busy in watching not,,,,,,,,,knowing that his mama is looking at him surprise

And he remember……………………..

Coming out of the room where jiya is giving him arthi…and he giving return kiss on her forehead…………………………

Mama understand something

Kyon bhai shaadi karne hay kya

\haa mamu but usko manani hyay

Kisko manani hya bhai.turned to shocking mamu open mouth………………………….

Mamu aap yeha…………………………..

Haa beta..kisko manani hay.

Kuch nahii.,

He came to the breakfast table saw jiya coming out from the mandir.with a thali in her hand.

Hair is open.and Rahul forgot the sourroundign and lost In her……………………………..

Mamu again tapped his shoulder.

And jiya beta……………….

Rahul fumbled ji mamu.

Mein ne jiya ko bhualaya tume nahii., liye acchee wali chai lana……………

Ji…………………mamaji…………………….

She replied softly……………e ..

The anklets…………………

Now boy action……………………..

Oh comeon……………..aap ne replacement ke baaremein socha nahii…………………………..

Oh come on aap ne 25 ladki ko beja……………..aur mein ne sab ko rejectkiya karn atha.

Kyonki muje dedicated.aur sincere aur kaam karne ke log chaheyee nahii ke ghor ne wali.

Unn ladkiyon ke liye mein ek chaltiphirti chocolate………hoo.

Aur kaam bas subha se sham muje dekhna…aur drool karna………………………………..

Aur yesii log se kaam karwana chahtee hoo..

Jaante hoo,aap ko heartattack ayaya huwa hay.

Aur mere liye toh bhi koi chaheyee naa kaam karne wali……………………………

His heart jumping.

Kya baat hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, beta tum parishaanhoo…………….

Just then simran came and agar tum chahoo toh mein tumara help kar sakthinhoon rahulm waise bhi ghar pe bore ho rahii hoo.

No di ,,,,,,,,,,,,,u should take care of health

Other wise I had aperson who can do ur work

But leave it u won't agree for that

And she doesn't even matches ur work………………………….its k drop the idea………..

No di its ok I didn't have other option I agree to it

His internal happiness had no boundaries as h e know what the name di going to propose………………

Badi maa siminkaun hay

Hamaree jiya aurkaun,,.

Hum jante hay na kitne hardworking and sincere hya

Jab tak Rahul ko nayee manager mile who sambalagee

Agar jiya ko koi problem nahiitoh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Badimaa turn nto jiya are ladoo tuje koi problem nahii naa,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

As jiya softly said yes as she cannot say no to RD………..

Rahul said ok then get ready we need to leave in 15 minutes'with that he left to his room,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

To control his racing heart

On going to room he closed the door and screamed yes…………………………………..

Jiya infront of my eyes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,24 hours……………..

Andn start twirling nrandomly

Mamu looked surprised.so yeh chakkar hay……………………………………………………

Lekin kya Rahul iss baar serious hay….i need to test before support……………………………

Jiya…………………..yeh kya horahay mein ne use door rehne ke koshish kar rahii hoo.aur aap use mere saath aur kareeb are hay…………………

Abhi kuch dino se, lag raha hai
Badle badle se hum hai
Hum baithe baithe, din mein sapne
Dekhte neendh kum hai
Abhi kuch dino se, lag raha hai
Badle badle se hum hai
Hum baithe baithe, dil mein sapne
Dekhte neendh kum hai

Abhi kuch dino se suna hai dil ka prob hi kuch naya hai
Koi raaz kambhakt hai chhupaye, khuda hi jaane ki kya hai
Hai dilpe shakk mera, isse pyaar ho gaya
Abhi kuch dino se main sochta hoon ki dil ki thodi si sunn loon
Yahan rehne aayegi dil saja loon, main khwaab thode se bunn loon
Hai dilpe shaq mera, isse pyaar ho gaya
La la la..
Oo hoo..

Tu bekhabar, ya sab khabar
Ik din zara mere masoom dil pe gaur kar
Pardon mein main, rakh loon tujhe
Ke dil tera aa na jaaye kahin yeh gair par
Hum bhole hai, sharmeele hai
Hum hai zara seedhay masoom itni khair kar
Jis din kabhi, zidd pe adde
Hum aayenge aag ka tera dariya tair kar
Abhi kuch dino se lagey mera dil
Duth ho jaise nashe mein
Kyun ladkhadaaye yeh behke gaaye
Hai tere har raaste mein
Hai dilpe shaq mera, isse pyaar ho gaya

Banke shehar, chal raat bhar
Tu aur main toh musafir bhatakte hum phire
Chal raaste, jahan le chale
Sapno ke phir teri aahon mein thak ke hum gire
Koi pyaar ki, tarkeeb ho
Nuske koi jo sikhaaye toh hum bhi seekh le
Yeh pyaar hai, rehta kahan
Koi humse kahe uss se jaa ke pooch le
Main sambhaal paun, fisal na jaun
Nayi nayi dosti hai
Zara dekh bhaal sambhal ke chalna, keh rahi zindagi hai
Hai dilpe shaq mera, isse pyaar ho gaya

Abhi kuch dino se suna hai dil ka prob hi kuch naya hai
Koi raaz kambhakt hai chhupaye, khuda hi jaane ki kya hai
Hai dilpe shakk mera, isse pyaar ho gaya
La la la..
Oo hoo..

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lovely update
cont soon
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