I luvd the mixture of emotions. Geets' denial to maan was only for the sake of aashas. Everytime she thought about maan, she would give in but everytime she thought about how their relation is percieved , she would deny him... So in the nutshell , I'm not taking this as if maan forced himself onto her rather he didn't submit to the acusations ppl had for their relationship.
Geet's denial was initiated by the asha's but it wasnt b/c of them. they jus awakened her kind of.
he definitely didnt force her to be with him. even though words may beg to differ. her POV explain her real thoughts more than wat she says to maan.
"His hands released me and my hands were finally free to push him away, but despite my conscience shouting to flee, I wrapped my arms around him."
"Halfway my eyes opened, only to see him still watching me and waiting, before I finally gave into those seducing eyes." push him away...geet wud nvr do that. geet has always been in luv with maan. it's just that her dreamland doesn't coincide with her real life. yup lena that was a gud sentence to qoute there. it does indeed express her feelings like clear glass.
awww geet hugged him instead of pushing him away...sooo maan shudn't feel guilty later 👏
It was just a little sad coz geet didn't get to enjoy her body uniting with her soulmate and viceversa. Even maan was very disturbed and scared of loosing geet forevr. It was more of his last choice... Any desparate measures to claim geet forever...
it was his last choice and my last choice. b/c evn if he explained the world to her, she wud stil refuse to comprehend. she was too stubborn. nd no matter how many times he held onto her, she wud stil deny him. so that was his last resort b/c words suddenly seemed too petty. 😊 lena i have a question...whn maan used to bring girls in his house, did he sleep with them or he was just doing the foreplay stuff?
the reason i'm asking this is...if the whole consummation thing is as scared to him as her. geet was a virgin and she had only and only thought about maan as the man of her dreams..but...what about maan? did he actually think that becoming one with geet was the height of his life, was a surreal experience or was it only to put a nametag on her forever?
ofcourse ofcourse i luv u'r maan insanely and have 100% faith in him..but i just wanna read his pov or i want him to say sumthing to geet or u know...u r the author...so hopefully my bizarre way of writing wud make sense to u.
I guess since their relation is so complicated, their first time couldn't b all that rosy n happy. It had to b complicated.
lolz, sry, di. i doubt there wil b a second time in this ff. maybe in their future but not in the ff. i feel very uncomfortable writing sex scenes. nd no matter how many ways i tried to be subtle bout him "sliding in", he WAS sliding in 🤣. lolz, u noe wat my friends say? "you hate when ppl touch you cuz ur so damn ticklish. ur husband's goin to have to buy the entire block cuz u'll b screaming everytime he touches you". I absolutely HATE anyone touching me, shoulder, lap, hand, arm, FINGER. anything. probably thats i cringed so much. it makes me not want to get married 😛
okkk girl...😡 no second time🤢
don't b so sure of it😆 whn it happens , it happens🤣 no one can prevent it😉
ask maan n geet...they have done it already! lena what do u know about the body needs yet 😆
ok ok sorry for misbehaving. that was my way of retaliating towards the news of no nxt session 😲
"sliding in" 🤣 🤬 how about "moving in " from u'r OS 😆
well lena ...screaming aaye😉 u plan on making noises...thanx for sharing that info. 😳
shud i send sum rishtas for u?? i'm sure this info wud b very beneficial for the long line waiting outside u'r door
hmm practice makes perfect 😳and believe it or not...u'r body doesn't get ticklish whn u have goosebumps with sum1's proximity. believe it or ..i was extremely tickilish and still am but really thattickilish feeling kinda gets doomed all on it's own...so no worries. 🤗
I'm scared if guilt will prevail maan in the morning. He is quite a jaanu dude... His pov was the confirmation.
hahaaa. lolz. i guess doing his pov for pt. 27 was a good idea 😛
awww he is so hugable. bechara kahan phans gaya he is running after the girl, wearing his heart on the sleeve like crazy and she rejects him all the time.😭
no wonder he was crying 🤗aww i wanna hug him tight and give him a cute kiss. well how about i drop the idea of cute and just focus on the kiss part...😍mmm i'm in my lala land😆
I really really really hope nxt time it's initiated by geet... So we can have some settlement of scores.
the thing is, geet NVR initiates. its in her character. evn if she "pretends" to be bold, she will succumb anyways.
i know ..i know u r right. that's who she is but how will maan ever b victorious if geet doesn't conquer her fears and her insecurities?PLz aisa mat bolo naaa . don't kill my hopes. i want geet to b triumphant😍
Btw Lena this mustve been a hard part to write. Good job dear.
yes, yes it was 😭. hm, i guess it shows 😆
yeah kinda but it was sweet to sense that... besides u executed the whole update in a way that it left b dazed. very well written 👍🏼
Waise if u get any harsh comments, dil pe mat Lena. U have to have seen the world for long to understand ur update.
i can take criticism. i hav to. or else, i mite as wel forget bout writing. 😆
@bold- mein samjhi nehi. 😕 dear i was trying to highlight the point that it's not about u'r ff or u but it's about ppl's personal depth of experience that wud determine if they cud decipher u'r update or not.
It wud b very easy for sum1 to think that maan took advantage of her. It's kinda hard to distinguish between her rejections for the world and submittance for him. Geet also craves for him but she thinks too less of herself to think that she can b a part of him. So much so that she wud luv to b united with him, she would nvr ask for that... Atleast not for the first time.
oh di, u understand my writing so well. that's my pov. nd it IS geet's POV. haha, guess u noe how she'll react nvt update 😉
That's it for my ranting.
Thank u for a rollercoaster of emotional ride.
was it, rely?
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