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Originally posted by: kareena32

AWESOME UPDATE MAAN HAS FORCEFULLY MADE LOVE TO HER SO THAT SHE WONT GO AWAY FROM HIM I KNEW IT HE WONT LET HER GO SO EASILY

I HATE these ashas they are such witches hate them so much

maan is realy a dark angel for geet

waiting for next part eagerly want to know what will happen now

ur rite, he wud nvr let her go. but not easily. he wud simply just NVR let her go. 😆
hey but u cant blame them for wat maan did. 😉

Originally posted by: SiniHanda

Never before have I read as perfect a consummation scene. NEVER.

im guessing consummation means sex rite? 😳

Originally posted by: zaqxsw

Beautifully written...
A difficult part indeed... After I read it completely, I was just wondering how difficult it must have been for u to write this part...
Great work... hats off...
and I love the ending line... 😊
Thanks for the pm
Please update soon...😊

THANK YOU. for understanding my difficulty. yes, it was more than difficult. it was torture 😆
glad u enjoyed it though 😆

Originally posted by: simi91

congo shongo

new thread

uff i hate those evils

wow maaneet became one

love this line

I fell asleep with my lover beside me, until I would have to awaken to the catastrophe that anticipated my arrival.

simply fantastic

love it

waiting next part

thanks pm

Asha's got a new name huh. Evils 🤣
neways, i am guessing ur taking the whole thing as positive 😳

Pg. 7

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Congrats on the new thread.

"...his exhausted and desperate gaze that awaited my response".

In face of Geet's constant running away, Maan did what he thought would finally anchor her to him.

Hope it stays that way, rather than creating another wedge between them.

yes. he had no other choices left but he refused to give her up. so he resorted to what he believed wud make her his forever.
i hope so too.

Originally posted by: Teenage.dream

Amazing part . . Their first intense moments . . I guess Maan did it to confirm that Geet is not leaving him . . He lost it when Geet ran away from hence the intimate moment was outcome of it . .
Beautifully written . . 👏

yes, he wanted make her his.
i think he lost it way before she ran away 😆

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Congrats on the new thread
I always look forward to your updates because I love the way you write
I can't help but think that Maan forced her to sleep with him, especially as poor Geet has a million & one thoughts running through their head about their relationship. I do get it from his point of view though, that he wants her to accept what she's always trying to deny - I hope this makes sense lol, it doesn't make much sense to me but I hope you'll understand what I'm trying to say 😊

aw, glad my writing style appeals to you.
in the way i portrayed it, the diversion of the whole perspective makes it difficult to say he didnt force her or he did 😆 i wil let u choose for urself 😉
lolz u make perfect sense. bcuz that was wat i was trying to portray 😳

awesome!

amazing FF, please add me to ur PM...

M simply speechless, only u would have done justice in writing such intence scene n u have done it... Loved the way u wrote abt d inner turmoil of geet. Amazing update

rocking update