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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 33

Maan and geet came out of restaurant. As geet was feeling very hungry she was making faces before maan to take her to another restaurant.

geet: maan ab mujh mein ek kadam rakhne keliye bhi himmath nahi hey...car thak aane keliye bhi nahi...

having said these words geet stopped walking folding her hands over the chest. Maan who was walking turned back and looked at geet. He gave one of his seductive smile to her and came near. Without saying a word maan took her in his arms and started walking..geet got shocked...

geet: maan..yeh aap kya kar rahe ho...yeh hamara kamra nahi...bazaar hey...agar koi dekhliye..tho kya sochenge...chodiye mujhe..aur neeche uthariye...

maan smiled and silently continued his walking...

geet: maan..mein aapse hi baath kar rahi hu...neeche uthariye mujhe...maan..maan...

maan: geet..agar tum chup nahi rahegi..mein sabke samne tumhe kiss karunga...

geet eyes widened in shock.She very well knew that maan will definitely kiss her in the public if she doesnot stop talking...she gave an angry glare to maan and turned her head aside...At the parking lot geet expected maan to keep her down.But instead maan opened the door of car and made her sit in the car.Geet snapped maan's hand away and sat at a distance from him looked at the window side. maan smiled at geet's tantrums and sat in the driver's seat. Maan drove the car to an indian restaurant.

maan: lo geet hum pahunch gaye...dekho...indian restaurant hey...

geet didn't gave any attention and remained silent...maan smiled and got down from the car and stood at geet's side to open the door...but geet was angry...she didn't get down from the car...maan told geet to get down ...but geet turned her head to other side...

geet: mujhe bhook nahi hey

maan: geet...nakhre karna bandh karo..aur neeche uthro...

geet: mujhe nahi ana hey iss car se bahar...

maan: geet..tumhe achcha se patha ki...mein kya karoonga agar tum car se nahi uthrega tho...

geet: aap mujhe dhamki de rahe hey...

maan: nahi...sirf batha raha hu...phir...tumhari marzi...uske baad jo kuch bhi hoga uske keliye mein responsible nahi hu...

geet gave an angry look to maan...got down from the car... stomped her foot and went inside the restaurant...maan smiled and followed her...Both maan and geet sat at a corner table...The lights were dim...giving a romantic feeling...there was light music making the mood pleasant...

at the table...geet sat silently looking away from maan...

maan took geet's hand into his and started caressing...geet took off her hand...but maan again caught hold of her hand and this time tightly..not letting geet to take her hand off ...

maan: geet...ek baath poochu...

geet remained silent...

maan: tumhe gussa kyu aaya mujh per...

geet looked at maan somewhat confused...

geet: aapko nahi patha mujhe kyu gussa aaya...

maan: isliye tho pooch raha hu...

geet: agar patha hi nahi tho...ab bolke ke bhi kya faidha...

maan looked into her eyes seductively...and said "bathao geet tum kyu gusse mein ho?"

geet:woh aap..saare..public ke saamne...

maan: tho issme galath kya hey geet...tum mere biwi ho...tum weakness se chal nahi paa rahi thi..patri hone ke nathir mere farzbantha hey ki...teri madath karu..wahi tho kiya meine...iss mein mera kya galathi thi...bolo geet

when maan asked her innocently...geet herself fell in dilemma...for what she was angry at maan...but she quickly came out of maan's spell

geet: maan aap jo bhi kaho...public mein aisa karna mujhe pasand nahi hey ...mein kisi bhi tarah ki show piece banna nahi chahthi...patha hey maan...i hate attention...kaaskar logon ke attention...mein maantha hu ki aap mujhe meri liye hi ghodh mein utaya...lekin maan...pati patni ki kuch intimacy sirf chaar deewaron ke beech mein hi achcha lagtha hey...agar wahi sab bahar hua tho...hum ko achcha lagtha hey ...lekin dekhne walon ko tamasha lagtha hey...

geet words made maan to think...

maan: geet...maan aisa kaam kabhi nahi karega...jisse geet ko taqleef hoga...

maan kept his hand over her hand as an assurance...geet smiled with tears in eyes...and thanked god in her heart for giving such a lovely and understanding husband...After having lunch in the restaurant...geet and maan came outside...

geet: maan...kyu na hum kuch stropping kare?

maan: shopping? lekin geet yaha pe tho...shopping karne keliye ithna kaas items nahi milthe hey..

geet: maan agar kaas nahi hey tho..jo yaha milthe hey unhe hi khareedh lenge...woh sab cheezein achche yaadein bankar rahenge...

maan: aapke hukum sarankhon per...Mrs maan singh khurana...

geet smiled and held maan's arm lovingly ...both went ahead with shopping...

After shopping...maan and geet reached their cottage...once they entered cottage...maan held geet by her waist and brought her closer...saying "bahar tho tune mana kiya tha..isliye kuch nahi kiya...ab aur nahi...yeh sirf humara dhuniya hye...aur yaha mein apni biwi ke saath kuch bhi karsaktha hu..."

maan then kissed her all over and fell over the bed along with her...for another love making session...

At evening geet slowly opened her eyes...maan was sleeping beside her holding her tightly...geet kissed him on the chek and was about to get up...maan held her tightly...

maan: kaha jaa rahe ho geet?

geet: maan...aap bhul gaye kya...hume promise kiya tha na..nainatara didi se...ki hum dono unke ghar dinner pe jaane keliye..tho tayyar hona hey na...

maan: mein bhula nahi...lekin usse pehle..mere sharath ka kya...

geet: sharath?

maan kept his head over geet's lap...

maan: huh sharath...volley ball...

geet: ufff..volley ball hi hey na..chalo khelthey hey...waise bhi game khelne se thoda frsh bhi lagega...

maan: tho tum tayyar ho game khelne keliye...

geet looked at maan confused...

geet: haan..haan..tayyar hu..bas ab kapde pehnaa baki hey..agar aap bahra chalenge tho mein change karke 5 min mein aavunga...

maan: kaunsa dress pehnoge game khelne keliye...

geet: maan...yeh kaise sawal hey..mein apni hi dress pehanlungi..aur dupatta ko aise bhandhuga ...

said geet showing maan how is she going to drape dupaata while playing

maan got shocked and said "tum salwaar kameez pehen ke volley ball khelogi"

geet nodded...

maan: nahi...tum uss kapde pehen ke volley ball kheloge...jo mein tujhe detha hu...

maan then stood up..took out a packet from cup board...and gave to geet...

geet excitingly opened the packet...after seeing the clothes inside the packet...her face changed...her facial expressions changed from surprise to shock and then to anger

geet angrily threw the packet on maan...

geet: yeh undergarments pehen ke...mein volley ball khelu...

maan: undergarments😕?

geet: aur tho kya? mein aise kapde harkeeez nahi pehnungi...

maan: teek hey math pehno...jo mujhe karna hey woh mein karoonga...

geet looked at maan confused...

geet: kya karenge aap?

maan: wahi jo 1 ghante ke pehle hua tha...

geet : kya? nahi maan..please...

maan: tho yeh pehenke volley ball khelo...faisla tumhari haath mein hey...

geet: agar na kahu tho...maan bahuth wild hojayega...agar yes kahu tho..yeh ghatiya dres pehen na padega..kya karu...geet..tu volley ball hi khel..kamse kam...maan tho tumse thoda door rahega na...

maan kept smiling looking at geet's face...and her confused state

geet: teek hey..mein volley ball hi khelungi...lekin hum kaha khelenge...agar bahar hey tho meri liye...naa hey...

maan: nahi geet...hum yahi andher hi khelenge...

geet: teek hey...ab aap jaayiye iss room se bahar...mujhe change karna hey...

maan kissed on geet cheek and went downstairs excitingly...he took the ball and waited for geet impatiently...After 20 minutes ...door of the room opened...maan looked at the door excitingly...geet came down in the dress gave by maan...maan couldnot take his eyes from geet...her every move was seducing him...he tried hard to control himself...geet came near maan and took ball from his hand...

geet: game shuru kare maan...

maan stood speechles...he was lost toatlly...geet's beauty was making him insane...

geet: maan..game khele?

maan moved unwillingly away from her and started playing...with every hit from geet... maan's heart beat increased...when he noticed her moves..

After 5 min he could not concentrate on the game further...he came near geet..took the ball from geet and threw it away...he then took her in his arms and carried her to the couch...maan's touch was enough for geet to submit herself totally ...that evening maan made love to her sweet wifey wildly and passionately...

9 pm

After a wild and passionate evening...maan started doing push-ups with geet above him...geet was eating grapes and was talking to maan...

geet: maan aap bhi naa...ek mouka bhi nahi chodthe...

maan: kya karu geet..agar tumhare jaise biwi hey tho...

geet accidentally looked at the watch...

geet: maan..zara time dekhiye...woh log hamare liye intezar karthe honge...hume ab nikalna chahiye...

maan: haan geet...ek kaam karo..tum pehle tayyar hojao...mujhe adhi se phone mein kuch important baath karna hey...

geet gave a soft kiss on his lips and rushed into washroom ...After 15 min both maan and geet got ready and reached dev's residence...

Dev and nainatara welcomed them happily...dev was asusual in drunken state...nainatara face was plae...maan noticed clearlly the change in both of them...geet and nainatara went inside the kitchen..whereas maan sat along with dev...

geet liked nainatara...she was very much impressed with nainatara's simplicity...

geet: didi...agar aap bura na maane tho mein aapse ek baath poochu...

nainatara: geet...tumhe izazat maangne ki zaroorath nahi...tum mujhse kuch bhi pooch sakthi ho?

geet: didi...jiju..hamesha aise hi rahthe hey kya...

nainatara lowered her head not knowing what to answer...tears rolled down her eyes due to the pain that she locked in her heart...


to be continued...

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love is not a bed of roses (cont'd)
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oops.. plz ignore this post.. was commenting frm my fone.. but mde my comment on d nxt pge.. 😊

Edited by luv_GurTi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update. Keep it up. Feel swri 4 naintara.. But am really happy 4 maan n geet!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice!!
Lovee the part!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on new thread...
loved the update...
maan is getting naughty with everyday...
as geet said public display of love is like tamasha to others when they stare at u as if v r from mars...
so v get to know the other side of love thro devtara...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread and thanks for the Pm
Sorry cannot read or comment right now
caught up with something
will do it super soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update
Maan all naughty naughty
picks up all the chances to romance.
Geet doesnt like PDA 😲
Bechara Maan has to confine himself to indoors.
But even indoors maan has gotten lot of ways to romance i suppose.
Volleyball in undergarments was too good. 😆
The love birds made it to dinner finally.
Wonder what NT's story is going to be and how it is going to affect geet.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread
Nice update
Loool the volleyball game didn't last very long did it haha
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...

awesome part ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulation for ur new thread!!!
Loved the way Geet explains she dont like PDA. I do agree with her, at times I do feel the same.
I think its fine to holding hands,hugging o small peeks but does it feels good to kiss, smooching among so many ppl. How could they be so comfortable. I feel like shouting Get A Room People!!! This is my POV... Not to hurt anyone.
Oh no Volleyball didnt last long. I was expecting for long long story. But i loved the way she indicated the clothes as undergarment. 😆
Eager to read Naintara-Dev's love story.

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