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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Loveee the ff.
Maneet r cuteee especially geet!
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
hi
interestting updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
loved the ff...
its very interesting...
maan jo bhi kartha han geet makes it looks like he is sweet...
man she is so optimistic...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
So cute update
Do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
I am very happy that u all liked my FF ... thank you...thanks 4 lovely comments

PART - 4
AT KM

DAADI : Geet beta acha hua aap aagaye.Aap keliye hi wait karrahi ti.
GEET : Kya hua daadi.
DAADI :humne meera ke parivaar se baat karli hai.Doo din mein sagayi karna hoga.
GEET : itni jaldi!!
DAADI: aap humare madat karengey na?
GEET : ji daadi
Daadi went away to attend the call she was quiet tensed . Geet was sitting alone . Maan enters.

GEET : Good morning.
She said with cheerful smile.It was a smile which would make anyone's morning good.

MAAN : good morning.
He sat opposite to her.

GEET(in filmy style) : arre aap MSK aaramse paper padrahe hain ab KC ka kya hoga?

Maan didn't know how he got trapped into her filmy andaaza. He said in same style.

MAAN : kya karen MSK ka naan hi kaafi hota hain.
GEET (rolled her eyes) : acha!
Both bursted into laugh . Maan started feeling comfortable with her or may be she made him comfortable.Daadi came to geet.

DAADI :Geet beta hum kal milte hain coffee peeke jaana.
GEET : par daadi...
But daadi didn't listen she already went out.

MAAN :Peelo coffee mere saath. MSK doesn't offer coffee to girls often.
Geet couldn't believe what he said . Maan himself couldn't believe.

GEET : Arre iss mein konsi badi baat. aap ke ghar aayi hoon toh aap ke saath hi coffee peena padega na. hum todi kissi cafe mein baite hain.
Maan was angry.He looks at Nakul

MAAN : rehane do nakul. hum bahar jaa rahe hain.
GEET : kya???
MAAN : tum bhi toh MSK ke saath coffee peeke deklo.
Geet didn't know what to say at the same time she didn't want to deny.
Maan didn't understand what foolishness he was doing. He just asked a girl for coffee which he hadn't done even in college . But her eyes was making him do weired things .
Maan was about to enter a big posh restaurant. Geet was surprised.
GEET : aap yahan coffee pilayengey?
MAAN : kyun?
GEET : Mr.khuranna ye koi official meeting nahi hai. Hum koi simple jaga jaasakte hai na.
MAAN : ye acha hain tumhe MSK ke saath coffee peene ka moka mila hain aur tum mujse hi demand kar rahi ho.
GEET : ae lo ... maine nahi aap ne muje coffee offer kiya. aur muje koi shok nahi hai aapke saath coffee peeneki.
MAAN : tumari wajese maine apne saare meetings postpond karli aur tum muje sunarahi ho.
GEET : muje aise jagad ke koi coffee nahi peeni hain. main jaa rahi hoon.
She lifts her bag and walks away.

MAAN : ajeeb ladki hain. ye ladki muje paagal kardegi.

He leaves to office in anger.

PRECAP :long night spend in phone...


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Edited by RATII - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
amazing update.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Interesting ...Beautiufl FF.

loved it ...add me in ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
oye geet...how cud u refuse to have cofee wiz msk...i was in ur place, i wud have neva refused...lol...nice update...i loved it...continue soon n thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
interesting...
love it...
precap looks interesting...
long night spend in phone...
waiting for the next...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wonderful part
love it
thnaks 4 pm

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