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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply awesome...plzz add me in
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls add me to ur pm list and update soon.. i've sent u buddy req:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART -2
AFTER TWO DAYS GEET AND MEERA AT KM WAITING FOR DAADI AND MAAN

MEERA : muje bahut darr lagraha hai
Maan was walking down from his room when he heard geet's talk
GEET : arre meera don't worry.Dev ka family bahut acha hain .uski daadi is just like an angel.aur uska bai woh toh bahut sweet hai.
Maan suddenly stopped he couldn't believe his own ears.someone said him "sweet"
Maan (to himself) : did i hear it right.woh ladki ne muje sweet kaha,MSK ko.i have not even talked with her.
When maan was thinking all this daadi called him and they went down.
AT DINNER TABLE
Maan was looking at geet all the time and was carefull that no one noticed.he was astonished she is the one in the whole world who thought him to be "sweet"
Daadi was enjoying Meera and Geet's company.Dev was happy that daadi liked Meera.Daadi wanted to move meera and dev's marriage talks to next level.Maan just learned that geet wanted to help dev and meera and at the same time had some project that is why she was in Delhi.
Though they have met twice Maan and geet have never spoke.
the whole night throughout the sleep the word "sweet" was echoing in maan's mind.
MAAN : ye ladki muje pagal kardegi....

PRECAP: geet in KC
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sorry if this update is small . will post part 3 b4 tmr.
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GOOD DAY AND STAY "SWEET"
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome.
love it.
do continue plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update.. pls make ur updates a bit longer and cont soon.. yhanx for the pm:)
loved it:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART -3
AT KC
That day was stressful day for maan. it was almost lunch time and he was not done with the file.He was storming at all staff.while he was looking at the file in anger he heard a knock at the door.
MAAN (with temper) : come
He couldn't believe his sight it was Geet.
MAAN (thought) :oh! the "mishti girl" (sweet)
this bought a smile which he didn't expect.
MAAN : come... sit
GEET : main aap ko disturb to nahi karahi hoon na?
MAAN(in usual tone) : its ok
He didn't want to show his surprise on seeing her.
GEET : i want a favour. maine daadi maa se baat ki lekin unno ne aap se baat karne keliye kaha.
She gave a card to him but he didn't notice that he was waiting to listen from her.
GEET ; ye "Make a wish foundation" hai they take care of diseased and physically ill children.
Both were avoiding direct eye contact as they both felt awkward
GEET : they want to visit "Fun world park" .but they cannot be taken publically .You know how it is.
Maan didn't answer he was just listening.
GEET :wo daadimaa keharahi ti that you know Mr.Khanna in person.agar aap poochengey toh... i mean...
MAAN ; i can understand .Tum bahut achi kaam keliye poochrahi ho lekin MSK kissi se madat nahi maangta.
For some reason Geet was not angry with him she just thought that he was soo sweet saying that.
GEET(with smile) ; MSK kissi se nahi par koi MSK se madat maangraha hai.
Maan was surprised no one had ever talked to him like that more importantly it was convincing.
GEET(with same smile) : Mr. Khuranna i was just kidding. aap bas unse mera intro karvaiye i ll handle.
Some how Geet talked with Mr. khanna and he agreed as she was from MSK.
Maan was feeling bad for not being able to help her.He was thinking about it for a couple of days.

A WEEK LATER
Maan was crossing the fun world about which geet was talking.He has not met her from that day.He thought that she may no more think that he is sweet.that somewhere bothered him.
After meeting maan thought of visiting that place. He tried to control but he was unsuccessful and landed there.Before he thought of moving out he encountered with geet.
GEET : Mr.Khuranna aap?
MAAN : wo i was crossing by so socha bus aake dekoon.
GEET : thats nice .andar aaiye.
Geet took him to video park where few kids were playing and few volunteers helping them.when they enterd two girls who were attending the kids stared at them or may be just him.maan and geet both noticed that.
GEET (pointing at a side) : wo red shirt waali huge fan of yours.
Maan didn't notice her and took the juice offered. he wondered why geet didn't take.
MAAN : muje inn sab mein koi interest nahi hai.
GEET: not interested in girls!!! matlaa...b (she dragged)
maan was angry .he understood her satire.
MAAN :saaf matlab INTEREST NAHI
GEET : Relax. main jaanti hoon zayada nahi par Dev ne aap ke baare mein toda bahut bataya hai.
Maan wondered what all she knew.They sat near toy stall.
GEET ; its reasonable that aap jaise business man ke peeche ladkiyan crazy hote hain.phir bhi...
MAAN : phir bhi kya? i am MSK.
Maan felt a bit foolish after saying this.
GEET : arre muje complete toh karne dijiye . woh...
She tapped her head with her fingers to recollect.Maan found that cute.
GEET :haan .phir bhi aap kissi ke faida nahi utate hai. thats soo sweet of you.
Maan was amazed she still found him sweet.After all the rudeness in office. they would have talked long but was interrupted by Adi.
ADI : sir... may be we should go.
Maan looked at geet.
GEET ; ho... thanks
MAAN : for comming?
GEET ; for that also.
Geet understood the question in his eyes.
GEET: Its coz of you the kids are here.
MAAN: but i
GEET; aap ne baat nahi ki toh kya hua your name is enough." MSK".
MAAN (repeated with fun) : MSK... ok bye
GEET: meet you tmr
Maan didn't know if she really meant it or was just formality. But he wished it was true.
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PRECAP: MAAN : MSK doesn't offer coffee to girls often.

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Edited by RATII - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
interesting...
love it...
do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeahhh luved it. this update was much better in length wise...continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow maan couldnt sleep
because said his sweet
love how maaneet there
pregressing
both parts lovely
love it
thanks 4 double update dear
thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
geet is so cute n sweet...i love her here...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

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