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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
fantastic👍🏼 love the update,, ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Nice updates yaar please can u add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
wow awsome yaar ...loved it !!!
waiting for the next part !!
do add me to ur pm list !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
PART -5

THE SAME DAY EVENING
Daadi and dev were sitting in the living room watching all the dresses that they purchased that day.Maan walks in after heavy day of work.

DAADI: Maan beta aap aagaye. idar aaiye deekiye na humne aaj dresses shopping ki.
MAAN: Nahi daadi aap jaante haina muje ye sab nahi pasand
DAADI: arre aap keliye bi sherwani pasand ki hai phir ye mat kehana ki nahi pehanoonga.
DEV:bro ek baar dekiye to sahi.
Maan didn't want to argue.so he went to look at his sherwani.Though he doesn't pay much attention to all this that sherwani was really amazing and he loved the material and colour combo.

MAAN (in usual tone) : teek hai.
DAADI : acha hua aap ko pasand aagayi kyun ki geet ne select kiya.
Maan was amazed why geet has to do this for him after the morning fight.

MAAN : teek hai daadi main chalta hoon.

MAAN'S ROOM
Maan was wondreing if geet is angry on him or not.His phone rings.

MAAN :hello...
"acha laga?" it didn't take much time for him to know it was geet.
MAAN : kya acha laga?
GEET : Mr.Khuranna Dev ne batadiya ki aap ne woh sherwani dekliya hai.so saaf saaf bataiye kaisa laga?
MAAN :it was good.
GEET: Matlab aap ko sach mein acha laga.(in excitment)
MAAN: haan...per aise kyun poochrahe ho?
GEET :woh... Dev..(she stops) pehale aap promise kariye ki mujse ya dev se gussa nahi honge.
MAAN (was confused): teek hai bolo.
GEET : We had a bet.Dev ne kaha ki aap ko wo sherwani pasand nahi aayegi aur maine kaha ki you'll like it.
MAAN : Kya? aap dono ne MSK par bet lagaya.
GEET : arre u said that you ll not get angry.
Maan was anyway not angry with her actually he liked the fact that she understood his likings.

MAAN : tumne aise kaise sochliya ki i ll like that.
GEET :Muje pata hai. aap tode boring ho lekin aap tasteless nahi ho.
MAAN (in high voice) : EXCUSE ME!!!
GEET : sorry. nothing offevsive ha.waise maine aap ke bahut saare blue prints aur designs deki hai.amazing.you are sooo talented.
Though maan has heard it many times he felt really happy when she said it.
Maan was leisurely siiting on the couch while geet was lying on her bed.They were talking about many things, From construction to cricket -From designs to dancing.
Maan was convinced that geet had fingers in many pies.
Geet was convinced that maan was not as boring as he was portrait ed.
They were enjoying every word from each other.suddenly they heard a beep sound. it was sure to be from geet's side.

MAAN : what's that geet?
GEET : woh... my alarm.patta nahi ab kyun bajraha hain i had set it for 5.30 only.
GEET ( in shock) : OMG!
MAAN : kya hua?
GEET : aap ne apni watch deeki it is 5.30.
Maan checked his watch.He couldn't believe that.usse time ka patta hi nahi chala.Geet was laughing and he could hear that.

MAAN: why are u laughing?
GEET : kuch nahi.See you later .bye.aur haan good morning.
Maan says bye and cuts the phone.

PRECAP : LONG DRIVE

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
awsome update.
love it.
love geet n maan phone convo.
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
wow awsome yaar ...loved it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
lovely Update...thanks for the pm...i loved it totally...Maan is soo sweet and so iis Geet...she knows his pasand-napasan!! loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
love it love it
wow geet knows maan
like & dislike super
phone conv amazing
lovely part
thanks 4 pm
pls next time longer one
the story turning interesting
now
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
loved the update ... Mr. Khurana is totally smitten .. 😉
continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
plz accept my buddy request & pm me abt the update.

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