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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
amazing ff
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awesome diii😳 1 more!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
awesome part...
love it...
omg they talk soo much...
they did not realise the time...
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
I doubt that u might been a successful director in ur previous birth. U arrested me in ur FF. I couldn't wait for the next updates. Plz plz update soon na. Do also pm me without fail. Am dying to look forward in "Pyar to hona hi ta". wow what a romantic topic. u r a genius. Keep rocking and thanks a lot for accepting my buddy request, That's so nice of u.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
I am damn sure u gonna become a director in ur future, so am the 1st applicant so dont forget to join me as ur asst. Director. It's gonna be legend... Wait for it...dary.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
loved the updates...
they were talking for so long...
loved it...
waiting for the long drive...
pl cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
PART-6

AT DINNING TABLE
Maan came to dinning table rubbing his eyes wit his fingers like baby due to lack of sleep.Daadi And Dev were already there with Meera.

DAADI: kya hua maan aap itne tired kyun ho?
MAAN: wo raat bar soya nahi phone pe ta.
Maan regretted saying that what will he say if daadi asks with whom was he in phone.

DAADI:ufff...aap bhi na har waqt kaam karte ho.
maan sighed in relief that he don't want to explain things.He felt like a teenager who hides things from parents.Maan laughed at his own thoughts.

DAADI: meera . Geet kahan hai? woh bhi humare saath shopping aane waali ti na.
MEERA : patta nahi daadi. tayar hoke phir soogayi.
MAAN (thought) :ye acha hai. mere neend karab karke madam aaram se soo rahi hai.

LATER IN KC
maan was about to enter Dev's cabin.He was stopped by geet's voice.

GEET: how rude dev maine tumhe kitni madat ki aur tum mere ek kaam bhi nahi karsakta.
DEV: Geet itni kyun drama karti ho.Kal jaayengey.
GEET : kal muje apne stupid friend ki engagement ki tayaari jo karni hai.
DEV:deko geet (he notices maan) aap ko kuch kaam ta bro?
Geet was sitting in angry state it didn't struck her to get up to greet MSK. somewhere maan liked it.

MAAN ( talked while looking at geet in corner of his eyes) : Mr. Mehara ke project details.
DEV : ji bro abi deta hoon.
Dev goes out of cabin to collect file.
maan with his usual comfortable tone which he uses to geet.

MAAN : kya hua? pareshaan kyu ho?
GEET : aapke chote bai ke wajese.he promised me he ll take me to $$$$( sry i don't know any place near delhi so i m using $) daadi maa ne kuch kaam diya hai .But now he says "kaam hai"
Maan loved the way she speaks with him and the way she makes him feel comfortable.

MAAN : wat so big deal!. Main site dekne jaaraha hoon and fortunately this place falls in the way so i can drive you.
GEET (excited) : really! thats so sweet.
Ha... how much he loved the word sweet now.

MAAN : tum neeche wait kar i ll pick some files and come.

Maan avoided driver and Adi who offered to come with him. He was clear that he wants to spend time with her for he felt himself with her without the tag MSK. Throughout the journey Geet was talking random things and maan was giving his best.
They reached the place geet wanted to go .she came out with two boxes.

MAAN ; wats this?
GEET ; patta nahi daadi maa said to collect.
They went to Maan's construction site.Geet was just walking around and admired his working style. He now and then looked at her to make sure she was ok.Geet understood he was much more than she thought but it didn't affect her behavior towards him.She was as friendly as ever which he liked.
some workers and staffs were surprised to see a girl with their Boss who in no angle was professional with him but no one dared to talk with their boss's girl.It was already 8.30pm when they started from that place and it was 5 hour travel to delhi.
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PRECAP : GAADI KO BI ABI KARAB HONA TA !!

PLZZZ COMMENT AND CLICK LIKE BUTTON.

AUTHOR'S NOTE : FRIENDS I NEED A FAVOR FOR STORY. I NEED A NICK NAME FOR MAAN BY WHICH GEET COULD ADDRESS HIM SWEETLY. I WANT SOMETHING NEW WHICH WOULD REFLECT HIS CHARACTER AND AT THE SAME TIME LOVELY.PLS ADD THE NAME ALONG WITH UR COMMENT AS I NEED IT FOR NEXT PART.

Edited by RATII - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
hey yaar...lovely part!! awesome...will suggest the name later and edit my post!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
how about shona i.e (gold)sona jo maan ne geet ke liye suggest kiya tha in the show. yaar...awesum update do continue ...soon...vill vait...
do reply me if u like my idea...
Edited by aziza_ahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
awesome part...
love it...
maan want to spend some time with geet alone...
so he did not take driver or adi...
what about "Hot Chocolate"...
geet could address him sweetly...
cont soon...

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