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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
nice part
so both r getting used to each other without realising it. hmm dats gud atlst a positive sign..
yeah hw can she hear watevr her husband says as she is not a dutyful wife but yeah she cares for him thats y she do all the thgs even after the agruments dats shows that sumwhere down the line she accepts this marriage thg and try to manage thgs accordingly ..choti choti cheejo se hi ghar banta hai aur ghar se parivaar😉
well so sujal also not liking dis regular kich kich and tries his level to avoid it as he can though he chose to avoid her which is unusual but den fir bhi he also took 1st step towards this marriage in his way.
hmm so kashish speaks it out and ready to ceasefire i mn she atlst try to sort out this prob though not in ususal way instead she also chose the same way as her husband which implies me that thy both have sumwhat milti jhulti soch and u knw wat soch jab milne lage to fir unusual thgs to happen hoti hai...which may be we can see in future though we hav to wait long...
well well so dono party main gaye after marriage i guess its the 1st party to attend and wat the party ghoshh ..so mr sujal cannot get ny better ..i mn he forgets abt her wife and enjoy himself very coolly. he is so insensitive dis time..which is new to see and i think this angle has more spice which we have to taste sooner..hmm but dis time its out n out sujal mistake as she is here with him for him and for his sake and he didnt even pay a little attention to her..well i knw she can control the situation but i'm happy that she couldnt as she is also not sum sensible sati savtri wife here and its limit to her control and ignorance power..hmm well he said abt her n her relationshps like dat in party is very idotic of him if he is not drunk and he should watch his tougue atlst for his sake only and yeah agreed that kashish added sum salt in this convo and provoked him to such extent but yeah she was frustrated and he is not atall understanding and gettleman kida here atlst not now and yeah i can sense that even kashish is not soo happpy with this marriage but she sumwhere at the bottom of heart has sum expectations frm him which he cannot sense or even care to it.well i think y kashish feels so bad wen sujal says abt it .i mn she had a r/s which she herself told to sujal and if he said then she should revert him back with equal agrression but y she took it at heart and tears are fixed in her eyes y she is so hurt..is the reason she is so sensitive and soft nature girl or his husband says it hmmm..pls clarify it a little😉
well nice goin
lets c wat will happen next..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
ohh GOD yeh kya ho raha hai sujal and kashish both are so immature they need to understand that now they are married and kashish it seems she just dnt care of her married life and on the other side suajl he is also to much na he royally ignores her presence in his life yaar after all she is is your wife and one minute kashish had a past that's y she being like this but y sujal?i mean if there is some thing about his past too?and if not then y he got married like this and now he is ignoring his wife its too Bad he is being rude 2wrd her
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
and at teh 1st night he didn't even bother to go to his wife and was partying with friends strange!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

PART 5

Sujal and Kashish sit in their car

Sujal starts driving while Kashish silently sits with him.

They don't utter even a single word during the journey; Sujal concentrates on his driving while Kashish looks outside

They reach home

Sujal burst like a volcano as they step into the house

s-chain mil gaya naa tumhe meri beizaati karake??????

k-chain? Mujhe? Beizzati to tumne meri ki hai !

s-maine kya galat kaha hai? Aur tumne jo wahan scene create kiya wo?

k-tumhe to kabhi apni galtiyaan dikhti hi nahi hai naa !

s-aur tumhe hamesha har cheez mein meri hi galti dikhti hai !

k-haan, kyunki tum galat hote ho Sujal, you are the most uncaring person in this whole world !

s-oh really? If caring person means caring about a cunning person like you then I am happy to be uncaring !

k- at least I am trying to adjust !

s- then don't !!!!!!!!!!!! acha nahi lagta to just leave ! I don't care if u stay or leave, tumhare rehne naa rehne se mujhe koi farak nahi padta I'l be the happiest man if you just leave !

k-I hate you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[she screeches as he goes into the bedroom and lays down to sleep]

He pays no heed to her

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Next day as he slowly opens his eyes in the morning.

Kashish is all dressed up, ready to go

s-where are you going?

k-college ! [she answers curtly]

s-now?

k-tumhara naashta aur chai kitchen mein rakh dia hai ,shirt aur trouser hanger mein hain, socks aur rumaal cupboard mein waise tumse khud se kuch hota to hai nahi, phir bhi kar lena naajaane akele rehte kaise the

He decided to ignore her comments like he always does

She takes her purse and goes out

Once she thinks of saying a goodbye to him, but the decides otherwise

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She walks towards the bus stop where her college bus would pick her from.

As she reaches the place and is waiting for her bus, her eyes fall on the balcony of her home, as the road could be seen from the balcony and vice versa

Sujal is standing at the balcony with his tea mug looking at the road

She wonders he never does that, he usually gets up late and rushes to dress up and leave

Then why was he up today, she wonders one part of her says , is it because she is waiting, then she brushes off the matter

No way, he is not like that ! he is a jerk !

Its been 15 minutes that she had been waiting, she expected him to get inside as he must have finished his tea and also he was getting late for his office

But he was still standing there

She glances at him with the corner of her eyes, she can't help a smile creep in when she thinks may be he is standing because she is waiting

She turns her face at him

k-arreee OOO !!!!!!!

s-kya hai????????? [he yess from the balcony]

k-khade kya ho, late ho jaoge office ke lie !!!!!!!!!!!!

he is silent for a moment

s-tum...tumhe isse kya????????

Her bus comes in that very moment

She climbs the bus She stops for a moment at the steps and glances at him with the corner of her eyes

H e was still looking, again a small smile comes over her face and she climbs in the bus

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
nice part
its seems that story is goin in a flow ...well the way two r behaving in d mrng is cute and exaclly d way two newly married couple behave..hmm gussa hai bhi aur nahi bhi ignore karna bhi hai aur nai bhi..dono ki nazar hai ek dusre pe..hmm aur kashish ye to kafi jaldi fisal rahi hai is path pe jaha tak mujh lagta hai but cnt get this sujal
but yeah y he is standing outside is still sumthg fishy ..i thgt may be becuz its sunday n she is not aware of dat but the bus cums so it removed that confusion..well so he doesnt care for her ..lets c kab tak..the way he caught red handed its very cute i mn the expression..hmm he has to be more careful in frnt of his wiffy..
Edited by pinky901 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
hi'
the up is goood
so sujal is like volcano he is busting on kashish but yaar kashish bhi kya karte she was getting bored there
i pity for her
but their fight mildblowing laage raho munni
so the next day kashish is al prepared to leave for his college and suajl jee is as usuall busy in his sleep but kashish she is nice to make all the things ready for him
i liek this thing
and sujal he is waiting for her
plz cont soona dn pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
hey neelu sweetheart!! loved the update!! it was fantastic..shuru mein jab ghar aake jhagda hua tho mujhe lagga ke baat serious hai aur she might just end up leaving him..lekin thankgggood she didnt leave..aur mujhe improvement nazar aarahi hai..kashish sab taiyaar kar rahi hai for Sujal..like a typical wife..aur Sujal balcony mein se dekh raha hai whilst she is at the bus stop..hw cute was that..and on top of it..he is now asking her ke woh kahan jaa rahi hai..matlab usse parwah tho hai..woh maane ya na maane..cant wat for things to get better between them..do cont soon..luv summi xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Nice i am sure he was waiting for her to get the bus cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@crazy_fan-hey dear, welcome , ur my newest reader

@monika-thnks dear, bohot hi amusing comment tha

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@lalulla-ye lo aa gaya nxt ud

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@spvd-sahi h dono ka, kuch nahi to fighting hi kar lo...he...he...he

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey neelu sweetheart..fantastic update..i found this part quite emotional..it pinched my heart 2..to knw that Sujal left her alone throughout the party and was bzy with his friends..and i think Kashish was not wrong in what she said..she was hurt..and i felt really bad for her..i can't wait to know what happens next..poor Kashish is hurt with Sujal's words and i don't blame her for that..i hope they resolve this tension between them..and both make this work together..keep up the gr8 work..luv summi xxx


thnks...yeah k must be feeling bad...make it work? naajaane kab hoga, i hope they survive...thanks for lovely comment dear

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