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Posted: 14 years ago
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He is n his room…

Where he got a phone……………………………….

Ok……

Listen to me…

I need to meet delhi's top detective agency…………………….

He turned and move to her room.

Geet is sleeping in his bed.

He smiled……………………..

He reached the bed.

Geet is sleeping like a baby

The innocent face……………sweet smile………………………………

Hair locks covering her eyes…………………………………….

He open the blinds sunlight touches the face…………………….

She open her eyes…………………….

She got terrified………………………….

And she quickly got off from the bed felt dizziness…………..as she about to fall………………

Maan quickly…………..caught her.

Eye lock moment….

Geet tumare tabiyat teek nahii hay……………………….

Please araam karo………………..

And then…………………..

He called servants……………………….

And ordered them for breakfast

Just then……………………

Geet came into senses……………………….

She remembered kids

Rohan and pari….

They will create problem when they find her …………………

Oh god…..

She started running

And bumped.with maan.

What 's wrong with u……..geet…and why the hell are u running………….

Sir.i need to go..other wise pari starts crying

Neither pinky nor rohan can control her……

I need to go.

Please sir.thanks for help…………

Geet…………………

She starts running.

Wait……..

Geet ruko………

Just wait ………..i will drop u

And please give me 10 minutes

10 minutes please

All the servants gasps……………

Please………from the great MSK……….

And for girl…………………………………………

This is something……………..different…………………

And he walked to his room….

He dressed……………………..in simple casual wear…………………

Oh this girl drives me crazy…………………………………

And he took the car and drive to her house……..

On opening the door……………

Pari cam e running and hug her..

Sorry maasi ….mein darr.gayee thi between sobs…………

She hugged her…..

Don't worry………………….princess………………apki maasi yeh na……………………….

And rohan come s there and hugs……………………….geet..

At that time………………..

Pinky said bye and ran to her home………………

And geet make……………..rohan and pari…………………

To get ready

She enter sinto washroom.

She remembers maan

Their dance

Something in his eyes

And she also fills

She misses him

When ever he is not in the office

His helping nature

Concern , care……………………………..

And his feelings

Her thoughts filled with him.

No……………………..

Kya jarorat hay geet apne bhavanoo mein……………….

Kyon behek gayee………

Bhool gayee kitna dard diya ek rishte ne………

Jisko tum aur tumara parivaar bagwaan maana……….usne tujse tere sab kuch cheena hay………………………………………………..

Aur bauji……………..hospital hay….

Pari aur rohan.tere zimadari hay…….is mein

U need to take decision

To stay away from………..u……………..

With that thoughts

She enter the office

Where as maan is restless

It is 10 0 clock………………

And she is not at office

He is keep on looking at her empty cabin ………………..

And he even angered on tasha for bringing file…………………

He is bashing his staff………………….

Unknown the fact that geet is already In his office…….and she is working in someother work………………….

After 1 hour..

She came out….

And took file from tasha…………………..

And enter into her cabin………..

And as she is busy in her work.that already a person is waiting for her……………………………

Suddenly she felt him…………

He pinned her to the nearest wall……………..

And looking into her eyes.

Samjate kya hay apne apko

Kitna parishaan hoot ere liye…………………

Aur tum.

Mazak bana rahe hoo kya

Geet confused why he is behaving like this….

She is shocked

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope maan finds out about geet soon then only geet will be able to relax and maan will be able to understand her behaviour...great part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luv ur ff cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Sir………chodiyee muje……………..

Please…it hurts……………

Just then there is a knock in the cabin…………………….

He leaves her……………………………….

Come in

Tasha enter s with a weird looks……………………………..

What is the matter tasha

Sir……….clients want to talk to u…………………

He gave a last look to her and leave the room.

Geet came back to the room……..with tears……….

No babaji………….

Mein apne parishaani mein….maan sir ko nahii keech saktha …….

Who nahii jante hay mein kiss chakvruuh..mein hoo………………………..

Mere zindagi itne seedi nahii hay…..aur who bahut acchee insaan hay………………..

Mere jaan bachayaa hay…..lekin who dev ke baremein kuch nahii janta ……………

Mein unee…apne liyee parishaan nahii hone de sakthe …………………..

Babaji mere madad karna………………………….

With the thoughts………..

She looked at the watch to find……………………..

It is 7 0 clock

She looked at his cabin.

He is still there……….

She enter into the cabin……………….

He is not there………………………..

He is not in office…………………where is he……………………………….

She turned to the side…………………………

She came out side…..she looked at the sight………………..

May be he is gone…………..

Suddenly she felt a tug……turned to find.him..striaght looking into her eyes……………………………..

What's wrong geet…….didn't expect me ………..

Sir………….woh….she is fumbled with words.

Actually im sorry for morning………

Im waiting for u geet….

Im worried for ur health………….when I didn't find u….i felt something is missing………..i don't know why……………..

I felt strange feeling………………….i cannot control my emotional…..but wheni saw u I bursted out.

Im really sorry……………..

She felt bad.

Sorry sir…I can understand sorry for troubling u………….

Ok…………….

Can I ask u one question…………geet

Sir…….

Sorry personal…………

Why did u came to delhi………………………………………..

She is just staring into his eyes…………………..how can she answer this question.

No geet u can't ………………….

But she knows he is a stubborn person and not leave until answering his question………..

For my father's treatment sir……………………………..

Ok can I meet ur father……..

sir

its ok

it is 2 weeks

everything is normal...

geet and maan are behaving like freinds

as he used to drop geet home.when they are late

and even...pari and rohan also maintains a comfortable with maan...

he brought choclates and video games to rohan.

and she cannot refuse

bcause he is maan singh khurana

the mumbai projec tis still on...

and it is extended...

Its ok……anyways Sunday I had a date……….

He said with a unusual smile……

Date…………..

Msk date…………………..

She brushed out the thoughts……..

As least to know that next day is Sunday

She felt relived.

But the thought of date is disturbing her………..

Next day……..usual Sunday……….

Maan is getting ready

Suprising everyone……..

He got ready in his casuals…………………..

Mean time geet got up.

To find pari…is at mirror checking her frok….

She smiled………………

After long time..pari is becoming normal……………………….

She is smiling……………her little angel………………………….

She look at time…………..

Kaha jaarahi hay hamere princess…….

Uffo maasi………………….ek I mportant kaam hay…………………….

My freind is coming home...

So im waiting for him.

Him……………..

Looking .

Where rohan is busy with his video game……………………………

Just then door bell rings………

Geet gone to open the door her eyes snap open………..

Maan is in casuals……………

White shirt with two buttons open and blue jeans………………………….with black goggles…………….looking hot………………………..

He looked at her

She is in night dress………………………..her hair is messed up………but freshness is there

He wanted to hug her……

But control his thoughts

Sir………..aap.actually I Came for date…………………

With a shock…………………………….

Pari came and hug……………….saying MF……………………….

MF>>>>>>>>geet questions '.

MAAN FRIEND…………………..

FB:

Pari.hello.why are u here

Maan:Im alone no one is there for me……………….

Pari:im there ..treat me as ur friend but one problem

M:what

Pari:how can I call ur elder so I cannot call u with name other wise maasi will get angry………………………………….

Maan:ok I have a plan…called me maan friend

Pari:but it is too long

Ok MF……

They both smiled…………….

Hi…….rohan came and said ok I will also call MF……………………..

MF.

Geet smiled…………………….

Maan lost in her smile……………………………………..

She never felt rohan and pari comfortable with a stranger…………………………………….

weekend again……………………………..

Rohan and pari…are playing with maan……………………….

And one week they also went to hospital……………………………

Yeh kya hora hay…..

Babaji mein maan sir ko innsab se door rakneeke koshish kar rahi hoo……………….

Lekin…………………..

Pari.wishpering in his ears

Do u like maasi………….

Seeing to geet……………….

Mmmyes……………………………………….

Maan:yes……………………………………..

Pari:I know………..

Maasi is very nice and also beautiful………………..

Maan staring at her………………yaa…very pretty…………………………………….

Pari giggled……………………..

More than me……………..

He turned and said.

Both maasi and her princess are so cute

She smiled………………………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
wow!!👏😍


liked it very very much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Awesome update
pari and maan friendship awesome
loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...maan getting comfortable with the kids and getting closer to geet...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet woke up.

To find fresh roses in her room……

She smiled……………………..

At the roses………………

And looked at pari and rohan…staring at her

Yesa kya dekh rahe hoo….

Maasi u look beautiful when u smile……………..

She reached to the office ………………………

She wished all………………..

She enter into the cabin.

She looked at his cabin…but no one is there.

She checked the watch……………………..

What's wrong.he never come late.

Is he feeling well………………………..

Fever…….ya……………he played in water

For long time……….

Is he struck with cold.

With all these questions.

She called km………………

The phone picked up by chandu

Hello chandu here……………………………………

Ji mein geet baat kar rahii hoo.kya mein maan sir se baat kar sakthe hoo kya.

Ji maan sir toh ghar pe nahii hay

Office ke liye nikal gayee

Office ke liye nikal gayee

Yeh kaise ho sakthe hay

Wohbtoh office pe bhi nahii hay…………………………………

Her heart beating very fast……………….

She felt restlessness.

Trying for his mobile but switched off………………..

She felt weird sensation…….

She is not in senses……………………..

After noon.

She keep on checking for him………..

At the afternoon………she didn't even done lunch.

Her mind is filled with lot of thoughts…..

She didn't find him……………..

Suddenly tears formed in her eyes………..

Suddenly there is a moment in his cabin.

Turned to find him.

She is so happy………….cannot control her emotions.

She hugged him…….

First taken back.

Then he felt something different in her eyes

The feeling he wanted to……………….

But the realization struck her and she left the cabin……..

He felt confused.

Actually he is on work……………………………

The detective he appointed want to meet him personally…………………

He need to switch off his mobile………….as he donot want to disturb.

He got information.

Her name is geet handa…………

Student of darjelling…………….

She is topper of the school and also college.

Fathername is mohindar handa.

She has sister …

Meera handa.married to dev shergil……………

Two children rohan and pari…………………………

Geet used to stay with them………………..

Until her father got a severe heart attack.

Her sister died of some disease…………………..cannot diagnosed the disease is……….

But according to the detective information.

There is suspicious of her sister's death

And she escaped from Mumbai….onto sudden.

He told detective to collect information…….and ordered him tobe careful to not to share this to anyone……………………..

He know who he is………………………….

Geet to the detective words………………geet is not safe…………………………..

I need to protect geet and also children.

No way geet………no one can touch u until im here………………………..

No one….can dare to touch my geet………….

A firm in his voice…………………….

His thoughts gone out…..

Where he checked his mobile……….missed calls………….of geet…….

And he also called km to find that geet called him……………

He felt happy that she care him,

Thank god.dadi is not there she went for marriage of her friends grand daughter…other wise…..

She will become another detective for him……

Turned to find geet came from washroom……………

Geet I know that u miss me a lot…………………….

But I had gone for ur work itself………………………….

No geet…………………………………

No one come near to u and kids…..until im there

First I need to find someother information from aditya……………………..

Sooner I will find the truth

And trust me geet let me find the person who scared u this much that u cannot be urself…………………

I will make sure he will see the hell…………………

And that's a promise

But who is the person

That day.she hugged him and cried………………………………..

Who is that animal………………..

Geet ur so nave and innocent………….and this is the reason im attracted to u.

And even rohan and pari also became part of my life

And I will not let anyone to harm u…………………………….

Just then he got a call……………………….

Sir…………………………

He said something

Ok lets us meet in personal……………………………….

I will meet u tomorrow at sharp 11 0 clock at rock gardens.

See……….u…………………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved the update...
made justice to his characters and made him strong lead in this...
so he found half things...pl cont soon

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