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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god dev reached kc...thank god adi was there nahin toh yeh sasha kuch bhi keh dethi...
hope maan is planning everything...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Just then..maan on the phone.

Mr dixit aap jaldi kuch karna hoga.

Hamere dictectives ne apko sab kuch information diya

Aur kya chaheyee apko.dekhiyee.samay beeta chala……………….

Aur who insaan ab hamara office tak pounch gayaa.

Sir..we need to some thing before proceedings………………………..

Yes.what is it.

He told something..ok.make all the papers ready…………and send directly to me.i will make sure everything….under confidential………………..

Yes sir.

He called adi.and told something.then he saw geet is coming towards him he cut the call…………………………..

They finished the dinner……….

Geet I need to talk u something..

Yes sir.

Actually I know we are on holyday…….but there is a work,,and u know we cannot neglect work…………………….

Geet answered yes sir.

She thought…………inno ne hame…………………yeha holiday par…………layayee hamere madad karne ke liye……………………..

Teek hay sir.

Ok muje dadimaa ko phone karna hay………..tum jaavo.mein aaata hoo.

He called dadimaa.

Hello dadimaa…………

Maan.kya apne geet se apne dil ke baat ke……….

Nahii…………..dadimaa.

Beta kab tak.

Hame jaldi se apke aur geet ke shaadi ke tarayii karne hay

Maan blushed

Kya baat hay mera pota blushing.not bad………….geet ne apko kya se kya banadiya

Dadimaa pehle aap batayeye….apne medicines leliye apna sehat………………ka khayal rakna hay na

Haa maan beta hamera khusi apki haat mein hay jaldi se geet aur bachoo ko hamere ghar mein…………………………….layee………….phir hum jat se teek hojayenge……………………….

He again smiled……………………..

Waise jaldi mujse jyada apko hay………………………..

He smiled and cut the phone to make some important arrangements…………………………..

On the other hand….dev life is none other than hell.

His business is under crisis as he is not paying any attention.

And he is in simla.for finding geet………………

But he don't know that………………maan singh khurana plan……………..

Geet got ready.but she is worried as she didn't have nothing for work.

She told misha.to take care of rohan and pari.and surprised as they are sleeping due to their day out they are literally tired and they both are very happy……………..

She smiled on seeing them happy.after long time…………………….

And misha signaled to go.

Where are u going,

Sir ne bhulaya hay kuch important office work.

Office work.so yeh bahana hay.

Aur tum inn kapodmein jayegee……………….

Geet looked at her dress

Are kya karabi iss dress mein aur waise too yesa baat karrahe hay

Ke mein maan sir ke saath office meeting pe nahii balki date par jaarahi hoo…

Yeh toh date hi hay misha mumbled.

Are yaar tum log goa mein hay.aur yeha pe log date kar ne keliye toh aata hay lekin agar tum apne hot boss ke saath jarahoo……….kamse kam apne kapodo pe toh thoda dyan do.

Warna tum waha……………………kisi aur ka nazar tumara hot boss pade toh.

As misha……………………..hit the right chord……….as it is evident from geet behavior she felt a prang of jealous when she saw the group of girls surrounding maan……………

She felt suffocated…………and she turned to misha and took the dress from misha.

It is sleeve less kurtha…………………………with khurti…………….

And her hair is open……making her hair flows…………………

And her white complexion.with little changes by misha……………………….

Looking her more extra attractive…………

And thinks……..

Lets us wait.

Today maan will.loose completely and fall for u…………….it took lot of efforts forhim to control.

And please geet ke babaji……….let us hope he confess his love to her as she needed the most………………..

With that she left for his room……………

At the room maan is restless he is looking dashing hand some.in his black and white suit…………….

But tensed.

Maa n singh khurana is worrying…………

He had rehalsed lot of things before.took 2 hours for practice.but still worrying……………………

He is completely lost.

Geet came out.and find a message from him.that he is waiting for ____________place….

She enter the car.and driver left her..

Maan is impatiently at the place and looking repetedly at watch and also the entrance door…is

The picture look like this

Sample…………………..ha

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...MSK nervous, well that's a surprise...is he going to propose now to geet?
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved d last 3 updates... continue soon ...
Edited by maaneetsangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome so maan is nervous continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...
so msk worried abt his date on how to propose to geet...
pl cont soon
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Geet looked at the direction

She felt she may be in wrong place……………………………

But as soon as she looked in the maan's eyes

She felt dumbstuck.

As he is not in his official attire…………he is in tuxedo..tensed…………………..

And the way he is staring at her ..as he is seeing the won derful sight in front of him……………….

She is lost in him…………………….

He came towards her…and she felt her limbs week…………………….

He is so handsome and his eyes…………………

.on the other hand.

Maan is looking at her.

Her dress.

Long hair.with slight make up done by………………………misha…………added glory to her………….

She is heavenly…………………beautiful…………………………….

She slowly take steps…towards him.

Sir…yeh.

Who geet…muje tuje kuch kehna hay.

She surprised ……………………for his words.

Where a smaan sighed as his 1 hr practi ce is into water…………….on seeing her………

As she is the onlygirl which makes him speech less.

Her eyes……………….lovely expressions.

Who…………

Accha beto geet..

He can only able to said that ……………………

Geet………………………lost in the sourroundings as it is of her favourite……………………….

A table is set.

She thought yeh jagah ko lagtha hay.ke yeha koi meeting nahii.sacvh mei n date hay.

She remembered misha wink when she left the room.

Unknowingly she blushed……..

She liked him,

She forget everything…if he is arou nd,

She is trying to control as she could…for rohan and pari………..she forgot to live his life…………………

At that time…………..

Maan is seeing herr.

He don't know howto start.

Geet I just want to say…………………

First……………………….

I need to say something…………………………

He is fumbling with words.

Sir.

Let me say u geet……..

I Love u geet……………

I Love u when I saw u first time………………………on that day when u accidently came into my way…………..

And I felt for u geet.

And when u came into my office

I came to know there is a pain in your eyes.which always hurt me….but ur presence made me feel that im living.

Everymorning…every night I just think of u geet……..

Feel u at my place……………..

My thoughts.of ur safety.

I want u in my life.i will always with u..in your all struggles………..smile…………….ursadness………..every part of u.

I want u hold u…took ur hand and walk into the life of love………………………………..

I will not force u…………….

Everytime when u feel alone……..

U will always find me.

I will protect u fro m all the evil sources.

Every trouble that come to ur life should face maan singh khurana…………………………………….

And regarding.kids.

Rohan and pari.will be always part of our life…………………

And they will.

Our life full oflove and life…………..and that is promise.

Suddenly he felt geet is crying.

He step ahead and took her into arms.

Im sorry geet…………..

Im really sorry geet.

I forced u…………………..

He is blabbering……………………….

As forgot .that geet……is smiling.

Kab se maan singh khurana itna bholna seeka……………

She said without breaking thehugl.

Jab se geet handa…………………..mere zindagi mein aya toh…………….

She smiled……..

Maan very much happy.

As geet about to say something.

I know geet…………………………….u need some time to think.

But still I will wait………..

And inorder to lighten the mood………………………..

I don't mind if u stay in my arms till end of life but geet……………..

But we cannot control some of the parts………………………..like hunger……………………..

Im starving….so can we start our lovely dinner……………..

He said with a chuckle……………

Geet wondered how many faces did this person had.

Sometime s tough dust danav boss making their employees hell…………………and suddenly convert himself to loving and caring grand son…………………which always escapes from her plans……………….

And sometimes a different family person convince rohan and pari……………………………………………

And sometimes……………………

She is so surprised.

At that time….

Suddenly there is raining…..

And she ran towards and start drencing

She is dancing in rain

And maan simply staring at her

Arre aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Main paani ke upar tarne lagoon...

Behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de
Behne de ghanghor ghata behne de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai behne de nadiyaa ki tarah
Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki jeena hai toh pyaar mein...

Deh kahi bhi ho mera, jaan rakhi hai yaar mein,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai saagar ka kehna,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai nadiyaa ko behna,

Patte se tapakti boond ki aawaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapk aur gum ho jaa, beh gaya beh gaya.
Jo rah gaya rah gaya.

Behne de mujhe behne de..

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya,
Tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya,
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon,
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar doon.

Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aate hai,
Dil ke chullu mein bechare,
Doobkiya gote khaate hai,

Beh jaa, beh jaa, Chal tod kinaare ko,
Beh jaa, beh jaa, dhar le majdhaare ko,
Chingaari uda ke raakh se, ek boond gira ke aankh se,
Chalne ka ishara kar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya
Sab bhar gaya bhar gaya...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awasome update
wow maan confessed his love to her!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...loved the way maan proposed to geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awasome update
wow maan confessed his love to her!!!
Continue soon

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