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Posted: 14 years ago

Bhai

Aap sab kuch jaaqnte huwee…………………bhi anjaan ban nake

Who iss seher mein hay

Aur hum tak pounch sak tha hay……………….

And she broke into crying…………………..

Maan cam ethere running……………………..

On the other hand dadimaa also worried.

Then adi had told her everything………………………..

Dadimaa heart felt bad for the poor girl and the children………….

Lekin beta.woh legally unn bachoon ka baap hay………hum usee kaise rok sakthe hay……………………………..

Who legally rohan aur pari ka father hay……….

Lekin usne………………………apne wife ka murder kiya

Geet:lekin hum saabit kaise kareen.

Maan :pari saw it with her own eyes…………….

Geet:what……………..

Everyone shocked……

Yes on that day pari told me that his father had mixed something in her drink.

Not only there is some more thing……………………..fishy

He bribed the doctors to change the reports……………..

and he bribed the police also……..

he is avery ugly man………

we need to stop him.

And not only that he is also responsible for ur father 's condition.

Yes geet………….

I had came to know that he bribed one of the employee of handa group of industries. To destroy the insurance.papers…………………….

And the fire accident…………..also created by him.

So that finanicial crises hit so that u will not any other option……….for ur father and u to come to his house………………

And ur father got doubt and he undergone investigation and he came across the truth……………….and ultimately he confronted dev

And dev made him fall from the stairs……….and the attack is happened…………………………………

The reports made by the doctor proved this fact……………..

Not only that …anjali had recheck the reports.and she also undergone some intense tests proved this part……………………….

Geet broke down

She is sobbing.

This is all because of me……………………………….

From the childhood im the bad onam…………for my family

First I took away…………..my mother from my birth

And di had given me life….she became not only my sister…..but also my mother and also my best friend……………………………………

And again because of me………………now bauji…………also……………..

She is sobbing…………..

And on the other hand…..

Dev in his room.

What where is geet.

I saw her with the old lady.and she is seem to be very happy…………..and……………….she missed..

I need to track her…………

First I need to track my dear father in law.

Which hospital.

Yaa city hospital

He drove to the city hospital.

He enter the room……………..

He saw him.

Open the tube……………….

And he rudely removed all the tubes

And the machine stopped.

Geet woke up screaming.bauji….

Maan woke up…………..

He is next to her…

She hugged him,\

Maan bauji.woh musibat mein hay.

Muje uneee dekhna hay.

Teek hay geet kal subha chalee jayenge.

No maan.muje………………abhi.

Please geet bahut raat ho chuke….

Aur bauji ko kuch nahii hoga.he will be fine…………

So don't worry

She fell asleep in his arms.

He looked at her

The tear strained face.

Her tears stabbing him…………….he felt huge pain in his heart.

He cannot see his angel like this……………………….

He dared not to move..

His anger boiled out ………..he want to kill dev with his hands…………….

He is sad………………….

So sad……………………………..

On the other hand.

Dev reached the hospital

He asked the receptionst……………..

Is there any patient name mohindar handa………….

No sir there is no patient with this name……………………..

What.

It is impossible ……………look nurse

My name is dev shergil and he is my father in law….

i need to meet him soon.so please…………………

no sir…………………….

There is no patient named………………….mr handa…………………

Shit.

This is the last hope………………………….

Where is he………….

And how it is possible…………………………………..

3 days back his person informed that mohindar handa in this hospital.

And how can he move from this hospital.

And even geet cannot change…….

What is going on………………..

On seeing this a person.called…………..

Hello sir………..

Haa.bolo.

Sir aap ka shaq sahi nikala….woh admi yeha aya tha.aur who…………………mohindar handa ke baaremein pooch raha tha………………

Aur hume usee kuch nahii batayaa.

Achaa kiya apne

Sir aap khurana parivaar hoo.iss hospital ke trustees hay…..

Hum apko kasie inkaar kar sakthee hay.

Yeh hospital apke wajah se chalthi hay……………………….

Haa…..mr ravi.i know that .don't worry.

I will take

Maan remembered how he had delete dthe details and also informed the hospital authorities to not to inform about the where about sof mohindar handa.

Even anjali also…………………shifted to other hospital………………………

Maan………………….turned tofind geet.staring athim.

Geet:maan bauji kaha hay

Maan:who teek hay geet.

No need to worry…………………………………

I know dev will not leave easily

He will do something with …………this.

So it is better I will keep………….geet along with me.

And even rohan and pari also……………………………..

And even he also added additional security for them.

Adi make sure pari and rohan are safe…………………

I don't want that dev to reach them………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon ...waiting from long...back
plz update regularly 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awasome update.
Dont make us to wait too long.
Update regularly.
Do continue soon ok
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Awesome part
loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...thank god maan removed all details of mr. Handa...dev reached the hospital...
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Adi :sir.i think we need to change………..mohindar uncle to another hospital……………………

Maan:no adi.that is not a good idea………………………

Even dev waits for that ……………

He even started ofsearching for him in other hospitals…………………….

Sir what about anjali.

Don't worry she is in us.i had transferred her to us for further studies…………………………

Yeh sab hamere liye important nahii hay

Isse pehle usse mere baaremein pata chale………mein chahtaaho ke hum yeha se kahi door chale…………………….

Adi:Sir…….i didn't understand u …………….

Don't worry…………………..

I have a plan….

He informed to dadimaa……..

She smiled.at her grandson.

Next day morning.

Geet is too much worried………as geet……………….is lost In her thoughts……………………….

Dadimaa called geet.

Geet beta mere ek saheli hay London mein…….uski tabiyat achanak karab hogayee hay.is liye mein jara raha hoo………………..

Teek hay dadimaa……………………..apna khayal rakna…….aur pouchate hi.phone karthe naa……………………………

And maan left her with his dadimaa….

And he returned back.

He returned to find geet is standing near the window…………………………

And she felt more alone………

No geet don't worry…I will be always there foru………he will not reach here

Adi…………….sir.everything is ready………………………….

Ok…………………

Geet.there is an important meeting hay.hume jaana hogaa……….\

Nahii maansir.mein bachoo ko chod kar nahii aasakthi………..

Don't worry adi yeha na.unee samal n eke liye…………………………….

Aur waise bhi………………..

Geet did not want to go.but she knows forhim work come sfirst……………

And even simla project is very important………………………

And he called for meeting…………….

He informed that for few days.he is out of station…..and prior that adi is going to take care of his work….and update him with the proceedings…….and .one he will contact him with his laptop

With that he left the office.

He called geet………………..

And informed that flight is at 10 0 clock…………………..

Geet packed everything………………………….

She thought of meeting with kids…….

But nakul informed that they are at adi's place………………………………

She left the km in a hour………………….

They reached the airport……..

And they both walk with each other………..as they board the flight…………………….

But failed to check the destination…as she is in thoughts…………….

And they board into flight……

She is very tired…..and sleep in his shoulders.

Maan smiled.and covered her with cloth and both rested on each other……….

Next morning…….

They reached.

And the name shocked……………

Welcome to goa international airport………………….

They are in goa…………………

Maan didn't answer they are drived…………………..

And reached the hotel………………….

As she about to ask the questions……..

Geet first lets us go to room then we can talk…………………

Geet didn't able to speak.and he drag into the room……………….

She open the door…..

And a scream…….

Surprise……………..

To find………………..

Misha hugging…

Along with…rohan and pari……………………………….

Hugged her saying maasi

And pari jumped into maan 's hands

And rohan also hugged…………………him……….

And he swirled him round……………..

Misha also hug maan………….

They smiled………

Geet is shocked.

Oh moo band kar.makki guss jayegii…………mein jaanthi hoot oh shock mein hay………

Aur tune kya socha ay.

Tuje pat ahay na.muje surprise kitne acchelagtha hay

Hay na.maan jij.stopped on seeing geet expressions..

As maan is on cloud nine………………………………………

He smiled and said…….

Geet this is urs room………………………

And next is mine……

With that he left the room leaving shock geet behind…

Maan arranged everything Inorder to cheer up her……………………………..

And misha………..looked.at her.

As she is looking at maan………………….

Oh geet finally u found ur real partner………….

Hay god im not good at pooja and stuff.but please.geet bahut good hay.bahut cry kar chuke.hay now please…………..uske kushiya…..dena ……and I know this maan singh khurana is something……………………………………………………….

And in mean time I will do something…………………………….

Maan in his room……………

And felt very happy on hearing misha's comment

He smiled……………………………………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow awasome dear. Maans plan was superb. What next waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Geet open her eyes she looked at misha ………..which is cuddled with rohan………..where pari made her way to maan's room.

She never leaves maan a second……………..

She feels secure ….

Sometimes she and maan made a team.where rohan always support her………………

Next day morning………..

Misha woke up…and she gone for swimming with kids………….

She forgot her video cam……

So she came back to the room…………………..

As geet gone for bath………………………….

Maan……….also enter as he want to join them.

As he woke up late

As soon as he enter to find his beautiful surprise…………………………..

Geet..forgot her………..dress……………

So she came wrapped her around a towel…..as she came out……………………….she is in hurry………….

As she slips on mat and about to fall.when a strong mascular arms caught her in the middle……………..

And the same dark brown intense eyes…staring at her in concern……………………………….where as maan is lost In his favourite hazzle eyes.which took away his heart for the first time……………

O re piya haye 3
Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re
O re piya haye 2
Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan
Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai
O re Piya
O re Piya haye 2
O re Piya
ni re ,re re ga
ga ga ma
ma ma pa
pa ma ga re sa
sa re re sa
ga ga re
ma ma ga
pa pa ma
dha dha pa
ni ni sa sa pa
pa sa ma pa dha ni sa ni
re ni sa sa sa.. . . . ..
Nazrein bolen duniya bole
dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan
Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan
Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai
Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai
O re piya haaye 2
O re piya
Piyaaa...
yehhh piya
Nange pairo pe angaro
chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi
Lagta hai ke gairo mein
Palti rahi haaye
le chal wahan jo
Mulk tera hai
Jahil zamana
dushman mera hai
haaye
O re piya haye 5

Misha find them..

And thought

Acchaa aag bara bar lage hay ……….i need have to put lot of effort.

But yet I need to create a space….so that they can confess their love…………………

And after sometime.

They went to beach…………….

And maan on his phone call…………..

Where .sasha got a doubt that maan went to simla…but that project is post poned for next month

And from that day miss geet also missing………..

She has a eye on the chemistry of maan and geet…………………….

His eyes………….

He always support her………………….

This got envy her.

Adi called maan…………..

Sir…………..

Yes adi.

I need to share an important information with u sir

Maan:what is that ..

Adi:sasha is suspicious and asking………………...information…………….regarding simla project…………………..

Maans jaw is tightened.

He know her..she is daughter of old employee metha.they are very much loyal to khurana family…that is the reason he appointed sasha…….

And now she is interfering In his matters…..and he knows her dislike towards geet…

And geet never discusses with anyone…………………

That is the reason he likes her……

But he brushes off.

Adi…….put a eye on sasha activities.make sure she knowsnothing………..and if she acts smart.wait for my arrival…I will make sure she will regret her actions……….

and he cut the call.

And turned to find rohan and pari ar eplaying at beach…………….

And misha also along with them.

As they try to drag……..geet along with them

But geet is looking at them.giggling………………………

But few seconds………………

Misha drag her into water………..and she is completely drenched……………………………..

Water droplets on her face….and her creamy salwar…….completely drenched…………………

He looked around find some men looking at her……………

His heart felt jealous…and he got near…………………………..

To them……………….

And pari…..came to him…………………

And he also dragged into water……………..

And his shirt is wet…so he open it…………………geet look at him.but her eyes……popped out on seeing the girls group drooling over him……………………

She also felt jealous…………………

And some of the girls.reached him……………………..

And asked something..

Misha looked geet expressions.she winked at rohan and pari……………………………

And suddenly pari came to maan saying daddy…………………..

And hugged……..him……

Where rohan hugged geet saying mummy.

The girls expressions.changed.on seeing cute pink pari..calling him daddy………………………….

First shocked maan.see the winking expression and lifted

And she says louder.

Why are u talking with this aunty.u know na mummy will get upset and u need to lot of things to pacify her.

He worriedly looked at geet.where geet expressions showed it right….

He smiled at misha.as he know sthis must be her plan………………………

Wher e pari is winked at him.

Yes princess…she looked at the girl………who is in shock……………….says………….i need to pacify my darling………………….

Lets us go before ur mom blow up………………..my fuse..

He smirked at pari………..

Both giggled……………

And he whispered thanks…………………..to his princess……….where she says u need to impress maasi not this chipku……….

He chuckled at his little fairy statement…………..

He smiled to join the family

He is again top of world.

He enter into dream world.of geet and him with rohan and pari……………….and twins…………………………….

Complete family………………..

he isin his dreams……

and misha looked at him………………

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