Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
awesome scenes both of u r such gr8 writers. continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
👏 👏 👏 great part..

i knew vedika would of been shot 😭

fab part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
fabulous! I had a feeling that Vedika would be shot instead. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
Dhruvs just looking at ved through the window of her room

His very sad

Rudra and nih come to console him

They tell him to rest for a while

But Dhruv wont budge

He keeps saying that he wont leave ved alone

On the other hand

Suraj is so mad he starts smashing things in his house

Finally hours later the doc says people can go and meet her

Dhruv goes in the room first

Sits in the chair next to ved

Dhruv: ved, iam sorry, muje kya patha tha ki voh goli tumhe lag jayagi

Ved: Dhruv, tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho. Tumhara kya kasoor tha?(smiles)

Dhruv feels really sad seeing that ved cant move her right arm at all

Then rudra and nih come in and stay with ved a while

Doc comes in with some tablets

Gives it to Dhruv

Doc: aap, mrs.Vedikaji ko yeh tablets roz khane ke baadh dehna

Dhruv: teekh hai doctor lekin hum ved ko ghar kab leja sakthe hain?

Doc: ved bilkul teekh hai, sirf thora weakness hai, agar aap chao tho uske aaj ghar leja sakthe hai

Dhruv: ok, thank you so much doc

Doc: no problem

Rudra and nih leave in their car a few mins ahead of Dhruv and ved

Dhruv pays the bill and gets ved

Both are walking towards the entrance(dhruvs arm around ved)

When suddenly they see suraj standing by the door

Dhruv is stunned

Ved shocked as well

Dhruv: tumhe hindi samajme nahi atha??? Tumhare vajay se aaj mere ved ko yeh haal hua!!(Dhruv just takes ved around suraj and both leave)

Suraj just stands at the door FURIOUS!!

Suraj(thinks to himself) ved meri hai aur meri hi rahegi

Dhruv on the other hand helps ved get into the car

both reach home

Dhruv takes her straight ot their bedroom

She just lies on the bed

Dhruv sits next to her

His got tears in his eyes

Ved: Dhruv, tum ro kyun rahe ho? Main bilkul teekh hoon

Dhruv: haan, lekin aaj mere vajay se tumhe yeh takleef jelna par raha hai, agar main na hotha tho suraj yeh sab nahi kartha

Ved: Dhruv, (puts her left hand in his) isme tumhara kya dosh? Aur aaj ke baadh muje uska naam bhi nahi sunna!!

Dhruv: (smiles and hugs her)

Dhruv: ved, main abhi atha hoon

Ved: ok

While dhruvs out nih comes into the room and sits next to ved

Nih: kaise ho ab?

Ved: teekh hoon, nih, muje ab bahut dar lagtha hai ,agar suraj phir aya aur mera Dhruv ko kuch kiya tho main kya karonge(starts crying)

Nih: don?t worry ved, Dhruv ko kuch nahi hoga!

Just then Dhruv enters the room with a tray of food

Nih hugs ved and says goodnight to both

She leaves

Dhruv sits next to ved

Dhruv: lo ved, khana kao

Ved: nahi muje bhook nahi hai

Dhruv: nahi, tumhe khana hi hoga(takes a spoonful of soup and feeds her)

She eats

Then Dhruv makes her take her tablet and both get ready for bed

Ved quickly falls sleep

But Dhruv just cant sleep

He just stays awake staring at ved

He finally gets to sleep

Its morning

Everyone wakes up early

Rudras gone to work

Nih in the kitchen cooking

Dhruv gets ready

Ved wakes up

She feels weak but still manages to go downstairs

Dhruv sees her and quickly goes and helps her get downstairs

Tara wakes up later and comes downstairs

Tara: hi babhi,

Ved: (smiles) kaise ho tara

Tara: teekh hoon babhi, bhaiya, aaj muje college chor do!

Dhruv: tara, main ved ko akele chor kar kaise jaon

Ved: Dhruv, main teekh hoon, aur phir nih hai mera kayal rakne ki liye

Dhruv agrees and goes to drop tara to college

Nih and ved sit and talk a while

Ved narrates the entire incident to nih

Nih shocked

Just then Dhruv comes in

Everyone just sits and talks for a while

Suddenly the doorbell rings

Nih goes and opens it

Its none other than suraj!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
awesome scene! wen will suraj get da hint dat vedika hates his guts. pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
LOL, NEVER, cuz his too stupid 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
wow!!!! i finally cuaght up with the scenes...rockin scenes kritika and guli...u both rock!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome scenezzzzz plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
👏 👏 great part 👏 👏

yaar...suraj...chale jao.... 😡

continue soon😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
plz continue soon...m dyin 2 no wot happenz nxt
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
i will post in 20 mins!!! please bare w/ me!

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