Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta

hey guys,
I was wondering, i wanted to create a sindoor fan fic and if u think its a good idea! so if u think this is a good idea then plz tell me! thanks.
Promo(not actual script but an idea)
all the charaters will be the same like vedika n dhruv and stuff but rahul wont be in here at all and suraj will be the guy that vedika likes. One day in college vedika bumps into dhruv ( nih and Rudra arent married yet so no one knows each other)Dhruv is new to the college and so vedika shows him around and they become quick friends.they are about to fall in love but suraj sees this and.........
The question is will suraj let vedika and dhruv fall in love and if they do what will he do to seperate them???????


Sorry, but the intro isnt as good cuz iam in a hurry rite now but the actual thing is detailed and is a very cute romantic love story!Tell me what you think.

oooh....sounds good....

i would start it off.....IF i had any imagination!!! 😆 - im useless at these kinds of things! 😆

sound intresting plzz cont soon

Characters &n bsp;

Vedika Khanna:Daughter of Uma Khanna and younger sister of
Niharika Khanna. Suraj is her best friend!Goes to college.

Niharika Khanna:Daughter of Uma Khanna and older sister of
Vedika. Went to a university and is now working as a secretary.

Uma Khanna:Mother of Niharika and Vedika. Wife of the deceased Raj Khanna. Works in a jewelry company.

Suraj Malhotra:Goes to college with Vedika and loves her only because she is the pretiest girl in college.

Dhruv Raizada:Maddly in love with Vedika khanna and middle child, has an older brother rudra and a younger sister
Tara.A very fun loving person.

Rudra Raizada:Dhruv and taras older brother. Cares a lot for his siblings and makes sure they are always happy.

Viren Raizada:Owner of the Raizada industries and husband of kavita. Has 3 lovable children and a well known man in the city.

Kavita Raizada:Wife of viren and mother of three.

Tara Raizada:has two older brothers Dhruv and rudra who she loves more than her parents.goes to high school.

Aarti Singh:was dhruvs childhood friend but moved to america when Dhruv started going to high school.

Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta
Part 1
Vedika is at home waiting for Suraj to come and pick her up for college.

Ved: Mama, suraj ab thak kyun nahi aaya
Uma: arre beta, kya usne tumhe nahi bathaya?
Ved: kya?
Uma:suraj to aaj sabare ki flight se australlia chala gaye, theen char hafte badh aajaye ga!
Ved: Lekin, vo australlia kyun gaye?
Uma:suraj ke papa achanak bahoot bemar par gaye, isiliye vo use dekne gaya hai!
Ved: oh, acha mama, main ab college jati hoon varna dher ho jaye gi!Bye.
Uma:bye beta!

Vedika is on her way to college and she is thinking how she will have to go to college and come back home alone because suraj was the only person who gave Vedika a ride . Nih couldn?t because she has to go to work early in the moring.
Vedika( mumbing to herself)ab tho main akeli ho gayi hoon, pathani suraj ko aane main ketna din lag jaya ga.As she is thinking she suddenly she bumps in to a guy and falls on the ground!
Ved:ouch
Guy: sorry, aap ko chot tho nahi lagi(helps her get up)
Ved: (looking on the ground)haan main teek hoon?.(looks up to see him and its as if its love at first sight)
Both stare at each other. Then?..
Ved: umm, sorry, maine aap ko college main pehli baar dehka hain, kya aap new hain?
Dhruv:haan maine apna purana college se yahan par transfer hoya hoon.main apna classes doond raha tha jab maine aap ko dakka mar diya. BTW, mera naam Dhruv hai.
Ved: oh, hi. Main Vedika hoon. Aao main aap ko apka classes deeka dethi hoon.

Dhruv gives her his sheet that has his classes written on it.
Ved: takes a glace at it and starts smiling
Dhruv:Kya hua?
Ved: kuch nahi, tum tho meri har class main ho!
Both start smiling and walk around the school together.
Ved:tum Mumbai main akele ho?
Dhruv:nahi, mera family yaha rethi hain, mera pas ek bada bhaiyya rudra hai aur ek choti bhayen tara hai. Aur aap?
Oh. Mera tho gar main meri maa aur badi sis Niharika hai.
They talked all day and finally it was after school.
Dhruv:so, you want aride home.
Ved: yeh, that?d be great, mera dost muje roz ride gar se school aur phir school se gar thak ride detha tha lekin abhi vo australlia main hai.
Dhruv:acha, tho aab main tumhe ride doonga, main bhi tumhara dost hoon!Chale???
Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta

sorry guys, very short and boring!

Part 2

Dhruv gives a ride to Ved...

They are both talking

Ved: So you live around here??

Dhruv: Yes!!! i live 20 mins away u?

Ved: I live10 mins away!!!!

Dhruv: So who is this suraj??

Ved: He's my good friend!!!!!!!!! We always do everything together and he always gives me rides becuz my older sis Nih... cant!! she goes to work in the morning!

Dhruv; U have a sis??

Ved: Yes!!! You?

Dhruv: I do to!! She's younger than me!

Ved: Oh really??

Dhruv: Yes and an older brother!!!!

They talk about each other's family and wat not

Suraj meanwhile

is thinking how much he is missing Ved

He cant stop thinking about her

He likes her a lot

But when it comes to telling he freezes!!!!!

Ved doesnt think of him that way!

He's only a good friend!!

Dhruv: here you go!! your home!!

Ved: Thank you so much!!

Dhruv; Hey no thank you in friendships!1

She smiles!!!

Ved: Do u want to come in?

Dhruv; No i better leave!!!

Ved: Okay!!

She waves goodbye

And goes inside

Dhruv is like wow!!

1st day and made a friend!!!!

For the next couple of days

They become really good friends

One day

Dhruv brings Vedika over

She comes to Raizada House for the 1st time

They all see her and smile at her

Ved is a little shy

He introduces everyone!!!

Everyone welcomes her in

Dhruv: This is my younger sis Tara!!

Ved smiles

Dhruv: My bhaiyya Rudra!!

R: Hi!!

Ved: Hi!!!

Then all of a sudden....

Nih calls

She tells her where she is

Nih is like i am leaving early i will pick you up

Ved is like okay!

She sits

And they have a nice convo w/ her

They all like her

SHe's sweet!!!!

Ved enjoys it there too!!!

Nih comes......

Ved introduces her to everyone

Nih smiles

R sees her

And is like wow!!!!!

Nih looks at him

She smiles



The End!

Oh,It was very sweet 😊 Please continue soon 😊

sooooooo cute. Pls continue soon 😃

great Job!luv the way u introduce characters 😊