Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 room service 😆 😆 rong tym... 😆 😆 oh but tht wz awesome...gr8 work...reali tht wz jus amazin gr8 scene jus luvd it...plz continue soon i wna no hu da hadi in da kebab... 😆 😆 n i wna no soon...so plz plz plz plz plz continue soon.... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Dhruv and ved unhug

Ved quickly straightens her clothes

Dhruvs like who could it be

He gets mad

After a while he gets up and opens the door

Looks outside but no ones there

Ved: Dhruv, kon tha?

Dhruv: (turns around and closes the door) pathani,oh well

He sits next to ved again

Ved keeps thinking who could it be

Dhruv draws his face closer to ved

Ved just melts his his arms

Dhruv goes on top of her

He starts kissing her

Lights dim

The next morning

Ved wakes up

She sees that Dhruv is still sleeping

She stares at him a while

Ved like he looks so cute when hes sleeping

She slowly gets out of bed

takes a shower

She comes out in her robe

Her hairs still wet

Ved notices Dhruv is still asleep

She sits next to him

And starts shaking her head sprinkling water on Dhruv

Dhruv: (moans)ved, kya kar rahi ho?

Ved: apne boring husband ko uta rahi hoon

Dhruv: (gets up) acha, tho main boring hoon

Ved: (sarcastic)haan, patani maine tumse shaadi kyun ki

Dhruv: KYA!! (pulls her on top of him)

Ved: Dhruv kya kar rahe ho( tries to loosen his grip on her)choro muje

Dhruvs like nope, tumne muje boring kyun kaha

Ved tries to let go

Dhruv hugs her tighter

his about to kiss her when?

Someone knocks on the door

Ved quickly gets up and heads for the bathroom since shes still in her robe

Dhruvs annoyed

Hes like not again

He goes and opens the door

Hes Shocked!!!!!

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry guys, very short and boring update???

GULI, do you want to do the honors of updating the next part? 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
He opens the door

There's a basket w/ flowers

He looks around

But no one is there

He takes it in!!!

Closes the door

Ved comes back out

Ved: Who was that?

Dhruv; I dont know!!!!! But who ever it was... .we got flowers

VEd: Any message?

Dhruv: let me see

He looks

There's a card

ANd that card says

" HOPE YOU ENJOY UR TRIP!!"

They are like who could send this!

Ved is like forget it

And put them down!

DHruv puts them down

She tells him to shower!

He's like okay

He goes in

Ved is doing her hair and what not

And the someone knocks on the door again

She goes

And when she opens it

There are more flowers

She is thinking who is sending this

Dhruv comes out

He hugs her

Dhruv: What are you looking at?

Ved: More flowers!!!!

Dhruv: from who??

VEd: I dont know!

Now its starting to bug him!

Dhruv calls the lobby

And asks him whos been sending flowers

They are like we dont know!!!!

Dhruv is like please see who it is

They are like we will try!!

Ved: Hey Dhruv dont worry about it much!!!..... Lets enjoy!!!!! Come on put on ur clothes.. and we will go out!!

Dhruv is like okay!!

he gets ready

ved is already

And they both go out

They are looking at everything

ANd are having a blast!

At night

They go back to their hotel

They go to their room

While going

They are talking

And are giggling and what not!!

They open the door

And when they do

There are flowers all over!!!!!

They look at each other!!

They are what is this??

who is sending us flowers!




The End!



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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 Thank you sooo much for updating..interesting flower idea!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😕 kaun....hmmm 😆 😆

great part !!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
hmmm bet u its suraj...m sure its him..he's tryin 2 ruin dhruvedika's honeymoon...lol...plz continue...awesome partz...i managed 2 catch up..plz continue soon plz plz plz 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
yh thts wot i fink atiqa tht its suraj..hu else wud do tht...der iz no1 else..m sure its suraj cos he even sed tht he wnt let dhruvedika b 2geva so jus gta w8 n c wot happenz...lol... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
it'll b so funne if its dhruv nd he's jus tryin 2 freak vedika out 😆
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Both enter the room

Dhruvs like who is sending us these flowers

Hes annoyed!!

Ved tells him to see if theres any cards in the bouquets

Dhruv searches all of the bouquets

Ved goes to the bathroom

A few mins later she comes out

Dhruvs still searching

he hasnt found one yet

She points to a red rose bouquet

Tells him to see if theres a note in that one

Dhruv looks

He finds one!!!!!

Dhruvs like now I'll know whos sending us these flowers

He opens the card

Ved smiling

It says

Happy Birthday Dhruv,
I love U,
Urs Vedika

Dhruv like OMG,

todays November 4

Its my Birthday!!!

Hes like how could I forget!!!

Ved hugs him

Ved: happy Birthday Dhruv!!!I love you!

Dhruv hugs her back

Dhruv: I love you too

Both are really happy

Dhruv then questions her on how she got all this done without him knowing

Ved tells him that she purposely took him out so the waiters could set up the room

Dhruvs like that's fine but why did u send me the note saying

Enjoy your honeymoon!!

Ved like what other note?

Dhruv: you know the one that came with flowers this morning

Ved like I dont know, I didnt send that one

tells him that she didnt send the first two flowers that arrived

Dhruvs shocked to hear this

He wonders who sent them the first bouquet

Ved like forget it

She takes him out on the balcony

Its set up perfectly

Theres a mini round table with two chairs

And a cake on it

Ballons and flowers are all over the balcony

Dhruvs like WOW

Hes like ved, this was sooo sweet of you

Ved hugs him and tell him that dhruvs birthday is a really special day for her

She can forget everything but not his birthday

Ved lights the candles

Dhruv blows it out

Ved: Dhruv, kya wish kiya?(puts her head on his shoulder)

Dhruv: maine tho sirf etna wish kiya ki hum dono hamesha saath rahe

Ved smiles

He cuts the cake and hand feeds ved

She feeds him a piece as well

both just look at the lights from the balcony

ved looks at dhruv

ved:kya soch rahe ho?

dhruv: main yeh soch raha tha ki humhe voh flowers aur note kisne behja

ved like forget it, its not important

suddenly someone calls on dhruvs cell

its kavita

picks up the phone

d-hi mama

k-hi beta, happy birthday!!

d- thanks mama

tara quickly grabs the phone from kavita and wishes dhruv a happy birthday

everyone talks

dhruv doesnt seem to be listening

he keeps staring at ved

ved notices

finaly he puts the phone down

starts walking towards ved still staring at her

put his hand around her waist

Ved:Dhruv, arent you gonna open your presents

Dhruv: yeah(dissapointed she didnt say anything romantic)

Ved takes him by the hand and drags him into the room

she opens her closet and takes out a box

Its wrapped very nicely

With ribbons all over

She gives it to him

Hes excited

Dhruv opens it

He smiles
Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago

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