Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago
is it suraj 😆😆😆
Edited by harry_fan2 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Both think for a while

Ved- Dhruv, maybe its from our family or one of your friends

Dhruv- I guess

Ved tells Dhruv not to worry about it too much

They?ll know who sent them the flowers when they go back home

Dhruvs like ok

Both get ready to go out

Ved looking stunning

Shes wearing a knee high black dress

And high heel shoes

Dhruv just has jeans and a black shirt

Both go out to a romantic candlelight dinner

After dinner

They walk around hong kong hand in hand

An hour or so later both return to their room

Ved tired

Dhruv shuts the door and locks it

Ved- (turns around) yeh tumne kyun kiya

Dhruv- (walks closer to her)kyun ki humhe koi disturb na kar saake(now there face to face)

Ved starts walking towards the bathroom

Dhruv gets a hold of her hand

And pulls her close to him

He has his arms around her

Ved- DHRUV, kya kar rahe ho? Choro muje(tries to let loose)

Dhruv- kyun?(hugs her tighter)

Ved- muje neend a rahi hai, choro muje

Dhruv- nope(starts kissing her on her cheeks)

Ved tries resisting but she just melts in his arms

Dhruv starts kissing her on the neck

Ved hugs him back

He kisses her shoulder

Lights dim

The next morning

Both are cuddled together

Ved wakes up

She turns around and looks at Dhruv

Shes like hes so cute sleeping

Ved gets up

She takes a shower

Gets ready and comes out

Dhruvs still sleeping

Ved sits next to him on the bed

She just stares at him a while

She shakes him a little hoping he?d wake up

But Dhruv just turns around and goes back to sleep

Ved- Dhruv?Dhruv uto

He just moans

Finally she leans close to him and kisses him on the cheeks

Dhruv opens his eyes

Dhruv- (looks at ved)good morning(smiling)

Ved- (arms folded)acha, tho tum aise utthe ho

Dhruv- haan jaan, how else will I wake up

Ved tells him she wants to go shopping right now

So he better get ready fast

Dhruvs like your wish is my command

He quickly gets up and takes a shower

After a while both are ready and go out

Ved does the shopping while Dhruv carries all the bags

Their out of the mall now

And walking on the streets

Ved spots a cute little flower shop in the corner of the street

She tells Dhruv to come with her

Dhruvs like me and flower shop!

No Way!

Ved- I wont talk to you if you dont come with me!

Dhruv- fine!

He follows her inside

Ved starts looking at all the flowers on the window display

Dhruv goes to the other side of the shop and starts looking some magazines

He overhears two people talking

Some guy wants orchids sent to a hotel

But the shopkeeper says that they don?t have orchids

The customer decides on roses instead

When the shopkeeper asks where to send the flowers to

The guy tells him that he wants the flowers sent to room # 63 at the Paradise Hotel

The same room and place where ved and Dhruv are staying

Dhruvs shocked to hear this

He turns around to look at the guy

Hes Stunned!!!!!!!

SORRY, I WASNT ABLE TO REVEAL WHO THE PERSON IS...I WILL ON THE NEXT UPDATE!
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Posted: 19 years ago
first one to reply 👏 wonderful part..... btw what did dhruv get in his present 😆 waiting for nexxt part eagerly ..... post soon ..wanna know who dis guy is
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆

keep the suspense!!!

its good!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ja'an.vi <3

first one to reply 👏 wonderful part..... btw what did dhruv get in his present 😆 waiting for nexxt part eagerly ..... post soon ..wanna know who dis guy is



i wrote that part!!! It was a ring!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: guli444



i wrote that part!!! It was a ring!!!!!

OOPS! sorry i realized i skipped a page😳 hehe thanks for telling me ... that also was a great part ....

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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon! awesome scene btw 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part....

i hope its not Suraj 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!!!! tht wz awesome...n omg its nt suraj hu else is it thn??? Rahul??? but w8 Rahul isnt even in da picture..oh plz suspense se mere death hojayegi...plz continue soon....awesome ryterz da both of u but plz continue soon m dyin 2 no....plz..plz...plz....m beggin now plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
just then ved comes running up to dhruv

shes shocked to see whos standing in front of dhruv

ved- (furious)RAHUL!!!

rahul-ved, plz muje ek moka do? main pehle jaisa nahi raha!

ved- nahi! tumne mere aur mere parivar ke saath jo kya uske liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karongi!

rahul- ved, lekin

ved slaps him

rahuls stunned

everyones staring at him

ved takes dhruvs hand and leaves

rahul just stares at them as they leave

back at the hotel

dhruv- ved, yeh rahul kon hai?

ved hugs him

shes got a few tears in her eyes

both sit on the bed

ved- dhruv,rahul mera bachpan ka dost tha, maine usse sirf apna acha dost mana tha. lekin mummy papa ne meri shaadi uske saath set kar diya. main kush nahi tha lekin apne parivar ke liye maine shaadi ke liye haan kar di.

dhruv- phir

ved- rahul bahut ameer(rich) tha, uske pas paiso ki koi kami nahi thi. mere liye voh hamesha jewelry aur roses kareedh kar latha tha. ek din mere papa ka accident ho gaya....we were all at the hospital, doctors ne uska treatment kiya...papa ko ek do din baadh hosh agaya lekin uska treatment pura nahi hua tha. doctors ko ek special fluid ki zaroorat thi. agar uss liquid waqt par nahi mila tho papa ka heart deere deere kamzor hote jata aur phir eventually rukh jata. voh liquid india main nahi milthi hai, sirf america se mangwaya jata hai. humare pas utne paise nahi the.
i told rahul everything. he said he would bring pay for the medicines. a few days passed papa was getting weaker and weaker. the doctors said he only had a few days to live unless we got the antidote soon. i called rahul again but no one answered the phone. then i went to rahuls house but his maids told me his family and him moved out of india. i was shocked and very sad. and by the time i went back to the hospital papa.........(starts crying)

dhruv- (hugs her tight)- dont worry ved, ab jo ho chuka hai usko hum badle tho nahi sakthe.

a while later vedika calms down

both dhruv and ved are sad

ved got her head on dhruvs shoulder

dhruv tries to think of something to get ved mind diverted from rahul

dhruv- ved, dont think about all this too much, the more you think the sadder you'll get.

ved- i cant help it, everytime i think about what happened today, i feel so angry!

the night passes by.

its morning

dhruv and ved are still sleeping

dhruvs got his arm over ved waist

dhruv wakes up

he notices ved still sleeping

he quietly gets up and goes to the bathroom

a few minutes later

ved wakes up from a really bad dream

she doesnt see dhruv next to her

she screams DHRUV!!!

dhruv quickly comes out of the bathroom in a towel

hes got shampoo on his hair

ved runs and hugs him

dhruv- ved, kya hua!

ved- dhruv, maine bahut bura sapna dekha aur phir jab main uti tum mere pas nahi the tho main dar gayi thi!

dhruv- main yahi hoon ved

he goes back in the shower

ved sits on the bed

dhruv gets ready and comes out of the bathroom

ved goes and takes a shower

then gets ready

both are sitting on the bed talking

they are in a very good mood

dhruvs getting all lovey dovey with ved

when someone knocks on the door!

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