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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part - 1
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Den Haag (The Nether lands)
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One week later
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"Hai Rabba, yeh kaha laakar phasa diya aapne??

Poori duniya mein aapko koi aur jagah nahin mila iss bechari Geet ko daalne keliye???

Naa Bhaasha samajh mein aathi hai na yeh saare streets ka naam yaad rahthi hai...

Hoshiarpur mein toh har gali,har mohalle ka naam kitni achchi tarah se jaanthi thi main...

Haaye Geet..teri phooti kismat !!

Cursing and muttering,she finally managed to find the super market...

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First few days of her stay in Den Haag,was pretty easy since Dev stayed with her all the time.

He helped her to settle down..took her out for shopping...bought all the necessary stuff for the house , warm clothes for her and the likes...

She knew basic cooking, but was not familiar with the gadgets...

He patiently taught her how to use the micro wave,washing machine,dish washer etc..

Took her out and taught her the correct tram to take so that she won't get lost in the city...

But soon,he had to get back to work.

She had religiously followed his every word and found the super market too but the real challenge was to pick up the right stuff.

Everything was labeled in Dutch...The wide variety of vegetables had her in a fix...

"Haaye,kitne ajeeb khaas-poos hai ! How will I know what to choose??"

She wondered looking at the multicolored vegetables.


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He stood behind the shelf watching the pretty girl,quite amused!!!

Clad in a simple salwar suit,she stood out in the crowd...

She looked very young and very innocent..

She was talking to herself and was shooting irritated glances every now and then at the ceiling!

He followed her gaze but failed to see anything fancy up there!!

He gave a mental shrug and went to the vegetable counter ..She was still there,giving killer looks to the poor vegetables...

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"Hello miss, Can you please help me find these??"

She approached one of the assistants working there..Though the lady obliged,she couldn't figure out daal and paneer!

Geet was exasperated in the end!

"Ma'am, can I help you ??"

She turned around towards the owner of the deep baritone voice!!

Her breath caught in her throat as she looked into the most enchanting pair of raven eyes, she had ever seen...

His lashes were so long...that they seemed to be casting deep shadows on his cheeks,every time he lowered them.

"Hello ma'am...".he waved his hand before her eyes...

That broke her stare and brought her back to earth...

"Yeah sorry...ummm please..."

He gave her a friendly smile, and there...her heart went 'dhak-dhak' all over again!!!

"Ufff Geet sudhar jaa!!!..yeh kya ho raha hai tujhe???...kabhi

aadmi nahin dekhi kya ?? jhalli kahin ki...par... Coming to think of

that...wow.. kya lagtha hai!!!! bilkul hero jaisa!!"

"Ik zal voor haar zorgen. Dank je wel!"..He smiled and dismissed the assistant.

"Arrey waah!! inhe toh Dutch bhi aatha hai.."

"Come with me..I'll help you with the shopping"

"I'm sorry for the trouble,by the way what did you tell her?"

"Nothing,I just said that I'll take care of you...Ma'am are you from India?"

"Oh yes..I'm from Hoshiarpur!"

"er..where's that?"

"That's a village in Punjab.."

"Oh sorry! Well,I'm Maan and I'm from Delhi.."

"Nice to meet you Maan,I'm Geet."

He helped her with the shopping and also with the money...she was yet to acquaint herself with the 'Euro'!

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"Thank you so much Maan. Aap nahin hota toh pata nahin main..."

"Oh come on Geet..What's the big deal? If you don't mind,, care to join me for a coffee??"

"Par mujhe toh Tea pasand hai.."

"Fine,then Tea it is!!"

"Maan..."

"Ummm???"

"Please order for me too...I can't understand a word of Dutch!"

"Yeah sure...Geet , Are you here as a student??"

"Nahin toh! I came to stay here a week ago with my husband!"

"Husband?? Gosh you are married!! But you look very young!"

"I'm not that young..I'm 18,you know.." She pouted..

"Oh that is too old..daadi amma!!" He chuckled..inviting a scowl from her!!

"Aur aap Maan? What to do you do??"

"I'm working as an architect in one of the construction firms here.."

"Toh aap yahan kaise?? Office mein kyun nahi??"

"Geet, I was out on a site visit..On the way back thought of picking up some groceries..that's it!!"

"Aap akele rehte hain?? Where's your family?? Are you married???"

"haan, I live alone and no,I'm not married...Whoa...easy... Yaar, Kitne saare sawaal poochthe ho??? I guess you should join the police...good interrogation skills,I must say!!"

"Haan,Haan...sorry,if I offended you..I won't ask anything now!!"

Pulling a long face,she sat staring at her Tea..

He controlled a sudden urge to reach out and pull her cute cheeks..

"Geet,yaar tum toh bura maan gaye..I was just kidding!!..Please talk to me...You are the sweetest girl I've ever met..sachchi!!"

Her beautiful face lit up with a gorgeous smile...seeing which his heart started doing flip-flops!!

"So Geet, Tell me about your husband..his line of work and all.."

"My husband's name is Dev Malhotra..He is working as a financial consultant for 'Deloitte and Touche'..Phew!! Finally I got the name right!!!"

"What?"

"Haa Maan.. Poor Dev had been trying real hard to make me learn the name and address of the firm...but now I know...'Deloitte and Touche',Schenkkade 47,Den Haag"

She recited excitedly like a small child...

He leaned back,watching her intently!!

They had just met,but instantly connected as if they had known each other for life!!

"Geet,I think it's getting late..We should make a move...er..Do you know how to get back home??"

"Yeah I know the tram number..ummm...I stay at Klaroenstraat,Rijswijk.."

"Hey,what a coincidence..I stay there too.."

"wow Maan..I'm so happy..You know something...Babaji ne aapko mere liye bheja hai!!"

"Kya??"

"I mean meri madad karne keliye...I'm so glad I met you Maan.."

"I'm glad too...friends??" He extended his right hand..

She smiled happily and shook his hand..

"Haan...Friends!!!"

"Bye Geet...see you again soon!!!"

"Bye Maan!!"

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Night
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The Secret place
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"Congratulations!! You have made a good start!"

"Thanks Chief."

"You have chosen the right girl..She is young and very naive...doesn't speak Dutch too...very good...Be with her...she'll make a good decoy and no body will suspect you!!"

"Yes chief!"

"But be on alert and make sure she doesn't make any other friends here!!"

"Sure chief!"

"You may go now! Allah Hafiz!!"

"Allah Hafiz!!"

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How was it friends?? Good/bad/mediocre??? Let me know!!
Love..Tanya😊

Part 2 : click here
Edited by tanya_vi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
my goddd,this story is fabbb n really so different,,,,,thatnks for the quick update,,,,,,n continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
congrats on the new SS...🥳
awesome prologue...
awesome start...
wow...the story is really interesting...
maan on a mission ?? n that too he trapped geet??
what mission?? who is chief??😆...i'm asking too many Q ...that too only after the first part...
will have to wait for my answers...

continue soon...
n dont forget to PM me...😳
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Thanks for the PM...
CONGRATS ON STARTING A NEW SS...
LOVED THE CONCEPT...
IT LOOKS LIKE THERE WILL BE LOT OF SUSPENSE AND THRILLER😉
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
wowww
awesomeee
maan being d mysteryoius man cool n different
luved ittt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
congratulation for new ff
brilliant prologue.
awesome part 1
maan want to trap geet but y? who is that chief
suspense hmmm loved it.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good update. the concept is very different. i feel bad that dev is trapping her but now she has maan so not worry. rt tanya. good work 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
it was super duper excellent magnificent! really loved this Maan! but...towards the end did u have to burst the bubble?😭
hai! this time too she has a dev in the background!!
Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
INTERESTING...
I LIKE IT...
OHH MAAN NOOO HE CANT BE A TERRORIST OR MAFIA...
PLZ PLZ PLZ REFER HE AS DEV AND NOT MAAN...
THIS IS INTRIGUING...
PLZ CONTINUE SOON

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