FF: A tranquil Storm - Pt3 Pg11

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey great going with the story line...continue soon

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

wonderful update
I'm loving it!
thnx for pm
plz con soon

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

love the come back of a stronger woman inside Geet...

and Maan ... i guess he will be more haunted with her memories

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saanjh rathore

@saanjh11

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

wow!! loving new angle for maan great dear now waiting for mysteries of life to unfold

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Congrats Dhwani, for your very first and yet a fantastic FF. Loved the nice concept. Geet is a fighter again. That untameable spirit is the one quality i always liked in her. Maan - A mixed personality. helpful and yet rough in his manners. His distinctive character always leaves me in awe. I started to fall in love with them again. Eagerly waiting for the way you work on their chemistry. Sorry for the late comments and Thanks for your pm dear.

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Muniza Riaz

@Infinitedreams

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Wow interesting Beti, me looking forward for next part...Wanna know how she will get connect with Maan?

Muniza

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Wowww meri Premi ne apna FF start kiya! 😃 Thanx for listening to us and writing your very own FF .. because we all fell in love with your writing after that magnificent OS you wrote!

Wowww so I really wonder what happened with Geet .. loving the similarities with this Maaneet and our Maaneet in the show.. even some of their circumstances such as Maan saving Geet from the water albeit in a different context...

Love your descriptive way of writing Premi .. it's lovely!

Ooo Maan already starts to think and worry about her 😳 He may be rude and arrogant now but I'm sure he'll be the one to come and save her next time she's in trouble .. let's see when that happens since Geet is gone to her Tai's!

Wonderful start Premi ... looking forward to more! :)

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Interesting start. . . . . . Geet is married soon to be divorced i guess. . . . . Interesting concept

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

thanks 4 da pm... superb update! Loved Maan n Geet...Poor Geet! Please update soon😛

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maureen84

@maureen84

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

wow !!!!!!!!!!!!👏

amazing update Dhwani!!!!!!it has gripped me from the very begining...feels Maan is the same arrogant,rude fellow from the serial who will soon melt n will show his true colours

hmmm...so she is married???????/problem!!!!!!!

no worries i know she will ditch him as Geet blongs only to maan.

love ya dear keep writing...all the best