FF: A tranquil Storm - Pt3 Pg11

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Short but wonderful update and I loved your closing sentence! Makes it the update complete but keeps you anxiously waiting for the next one as well :D

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

awsome update

i like maan's character even though he's tiiinsy bit arrogant 😳😆

and looks like geet is a dancer..

looking forward for the next update

do cont soon

love

Noor

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

interesting story line...

do add me in ur pm list...😳

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funnymonkey

@funnymonkey

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

wow great starting so far

plz add me to ur pm list whenvr u update

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EBasso

@EBasso

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

@scorpiodreams, -dia-, khwaishfan, swenna10, mrk_1, Dreamy_Mystique, Maanhar, Nahtani88, shalini01, sommie, millie_maneet, tushti_kiran, cyum321, umaimabu, Maan4eva:

Thank you so much dears! Your words are ever encouraging! 😳

@Simi91: Thanks so much dear I am happy to know I am building proper suspense! Will start revealing very shortly what happened!

@anks_ams: Thank you dear! Appreciate you reading and liking it😛

@t_areeb: Thanks dear. Yes the haunting of memories will be even stronger this time~

@Sanjh: Thank you dear – mysteries make memories! They will unfold very soon!!!😈

@Chelsha: I want geet to forever remain a fighter, somewhere in the real show that is lost and I want to try to revive that with this FF, let's hope I succeed. Thanks for reading and please, no sorries yaar!😛😃

@aditiwalia56: Yes married Geet! divorce may be😉!!! Thanks for reading and commenting dear!

@Maureen: Awww thanks sooo very much dear!😳 Yes maan has to go through the melting process and I hope I am able to make it as interesting as the show has been. Yes she is married. Will she belong to maan? When? How? Where? Why?😛

@bebosallu4eva: Wow dear thanks for such kind words!😳 Thank you for reading my other work too. I shall write the next part very soon!

@-afsha-: Yes dear, maan being rude is what grips us right? Even when I was writing I was getting goosebumps! Just love his arrogance. But then, he has a beautiful heart na?😳 That makes me love him even more.❤️ Geet's hubby, yes not so nice! 😡

Thanks for reading dear!

@bhanu_rekhag: Thanks dear. Yeah they are just a little different. Mostly similar.

@esha143: thanks dear. Maan aisa hi hai you know na! he helps but rudely. Anyway, will disclose her tragedy soon.

@9n9i9h9s9u9: BTW nice screen name dear 😆 LOL I was having a hard time typing. I probably did it wrong feeling all dyslexic lol!😃😊 Anyway thanks for reading my story. Yes they are both on the road. Will they meet? Great question! 😳

@Preethia: Thank you dear. Yes anyone would feel weak when they would go thru the kind of trauma geet has just gone thru. You'll know soon. But how one deals with it is the key. Geet is a fighter! BTW I accepted your buddy request already. Thanks again.😳

@GeetHSP: Thanks so much! I am glad I can build anticipation! 😳 Will try to live upto the expectation!😛

@noorfatima: Thank you dear! Arrogance is the fragrance of maan singh khurana right? Geet is definitely a dancer and THAT will take her places!

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EBasso

@EBasso

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

AWWW 🤗 MY IDIOTZ PHAMILIES KE SWEET SWEET LOGZ WHO READ MY FFz - THANK YOUzzz to ya alll!!! 😳😛😃

@daadi: yesss main maan ko NY le aayi LOL😆!!! Commuting ki problem kum ho jaati hai na🤣???? Thanks for liking it dear! Of course his personality can't be that different na? I am inspired by only real maneet so maan's arrogance is what is sooo attractive haina? Vaise suspense bahot jald khulega hehe!😳

@Mumma: Thank you for enjoying it! I can make it as short as you want only so you would read it😳. You know that I need your confirmation and approval ya know :)😛

@Boyfriend: haayeee, bas tumhari, daadi ki aur mummy ki enthusiasm aur encouragement ki vajah se hi maine yeh FF start kiya thanks a billion babes😳! Yeah I am inspired by the show fully and even the circumstances too! That's what makes it fun na? Seeing the similarities in different settings? So you get the hint of real Maneet in it!!! Awww Thanks for liking my writing style dear!😳

@maassiii: OMG wow you read my FF!!!😳 Aww! LOL maasi and her one track mind!😆 Me likingz bery bery much! You are too cute. Maasi patience na, who din bhi aayenge. Thoda pressure build toh hone do LOL! Just love ya too much for your 🤬 imagination! Ab yeh mat kehna, kaash mein who gaadi ki battery hoti, ya fishing rod hoti, ya who kapde hoti jo usne badle, ya jacket hoti LOL!😆🤣

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EBasso

@EBasso

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

@all

Sorry I haven't been able to post the next part in too many days since my mom got sick suddenly and haven't been able to sit down to write yet. Will post the next update very soon! Thanks for your patience! And sorry again!!!