A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

i really... loved the update...

i think.. mayank ne jo.. kiya.. vo bilkul.. sahi.. kiya..

atlest usne.. shaadi krke..

ane waale... tofan se sab ko baccha liya..

i think usne.. bikul right decision liya.. of marrying her..

and i really least bothered of sneha...

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Taks Radhi for taking trouble to update while ur away n the update was lovely n emotional shilpa aunty such sweet n caring mom loved the whole update thanks for the pm

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-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Amazing update... feeeling really bad 4 mayur but shilpa unty is really sweet na... thank she is supporting dem hoipe mayu's dad 4give dem too.. but i guess sneha will turn negative 4 sure...

maybe she will try 2 hurm nup...n mayyu will save ..but i likd mayu's charater he is so caring,loving n understanding n hopefully dey wil start feel 4 eachother im witing 4 dat moment...

but 4 now hav 2 wait 4 sneha's reaction...

Waiting 4 ur next update eagerly...

--Summi--

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

jst shiftd in new city so nt able to updt n as sun as i get net conectn i wl updt.

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Hey frnds Radhi here sry 4 latre updt
bt i just shifted in new city so were damn busy...
bt here is updt hope u like it...
fingure crossed... plzz ignore silly mistakes...

PART 6

just again door was knocked...
Mayank opened n saw his mom shilpa... having juce
in her hand...
Mayank:mom aap...
Shilpa:Nupur ke liye juce laayi hu...
n came in... Nupur stood up...
Nupur:mom ye ...
Shilpa:yaha beith tu.. n made her sit...
or chup chap ise peele...
Nupur:nahi mom muje bt shilpa cut her...
Shilpa:Nupur ab sirf tuje hi apne baare me
hi nahi apne bacche ke baareme bhi sochna haiii...
sirf tuje hi nahi khana use bhi khilana haii...
chal jaldi pee le...
n Nupur had tears... as she saw shilpa's love...
n took glass n started to drink n Mayank n shilpa smiled
seeing her ...

Shilpa:Mayank tujse kuch kaam haiii... tu bahar aa...
Nupur tab tak tum rest karo...
Mayank came out of room with his mom...

Mayank:kya hua mom????
Shilpa:Mayank pehle tu ye bata tune Nupur ko Sneha ke
baareme bataya haii kya????
Mayank:nahi mom meine Nupur ko ab tak Sneha ke baareme
kuch nahi bataya haii...
Shilpa:Mayank tumne ab tak Nupur ko Sneha ke baareme
nahi bataya... ????
Mayank:nahi mom wo humne kabhi apni personal life
discuss nahi ki haii.. to use kuch nahi pata hai..
Shilpa:tum log bhi na ek dusre ke baareme kuch bhi nahi
jaante or pati patni ban gaye... kya karungii mein
tum logo ka...
Mayank:mom agar humne galti naa ki hoti to hum kabhi
sath nahi hote u knw dat.. n aap ye Tv serial ki
saans bahu wala drama bandh karo or muje ye bataao
ki ab mein kya karu???
Shilpa:dekh Mayank Sneha se hum ye nahi chupa sakte ki
tumhari or Nupur ki shaadi ho chuki haii...
Mayank:par mom jab use pata chalega ki meri or Nupur
ki shaadi ho chuki haii to pata nahi wo kya karegi.
Shilpa:wo to tuje galti karne se pehle sochna chahiye
tha...
Mayank:mom plzzz m sry na...
Shilpa:Sry se kya hoga Mayank ..?? Sneha ko to tu bol
dega par apne dad se kya bolega...???
Shilpa aunty beacame serious...
Mayank:mom mein dad se kaise baat karunga...????
Mayank was worried...
Shilpa:Mayank tere dad delhi gaye haii parso shaam tak
aajayenge... or ab tu andar jaa Nupur ka aaj pehla
din haii use awkward lag raha hoga...
Mayank:ya mom...
n went to roomm...
n sat on sofa... n Nupur was taking rest...
both were stealing glanses eachother...
Mayank(in mind):kaise ek raat me humari zindgi badal
gayi... ek galti sirf ek galti or sab kuch badal
gaya humari zindgi badal gayii... humare rishte
badal gaye humare zindgi ke raaste badal gaye
humari zindgi ke maayne badal gaye...yaha tak ki
mazil bhi badal gayi...kya socha tha or kya ho
gaya... socha tha ki zindgi ko apne tarike se
jiyenge... par aaj hume aise jeena pad raha haii
jaise zindgi chahti haii... sirf ek galti ki wajase,
par ab jo ho... galti ki haii use sudharna haii..
ab Nupur meri life ka important hissa haiii or
mera baccha ... ab meri zindgi meri patni or bacche
ke liye hi hogi bas...
Mayank(in mind):kyu galti ho gayi wo mujse?? kash ki
meine wo galti naa ki hoti... aisa lag raha haiii
jaise zindgi mujse ruth hi gayi haii...kaise ek
hi galti se sab kuch badal jaata haii... aaj samaj
aa raha haiii ki anjane me ki huyi galti bhi kitni
muskil laa sakti haii... par jo galti ki haii uski
saza mein apne massom se bacche ko nahi bhugatne
dungi.. use maa ka pyar dungii... or ab to Mayank
ne mujse shaadi karli haii to use papa ka pyar
bhi milega... bas ise jyada or zindgi se kya umeed
karu me... ab yahi meri zindgi haii mera baccha
or mera pati...

then they had dinner...
n went to sleep...

Mayank:tum bed par so jaao... mein yaha...
Nupur:tum bed par so sakte ho.. ab hume ye nahi bhulna
chahiye ki hum pati patni bhi haii...
Mayank nodded n layed on bed.. n Nupur also
layed beside him bt at distance...
n just then phone rang...
Nupur:hello...benji...
Benji:dii aap kaisi haii???
Nupur:mein bilkul thik hu tu kaisa haii???
Benji:dii aapki yaad aa rahi thi...
nupur:muje bhi said in broken voice...
Benji:accha ye bataao Mayank haii kya???
nupur:haa wo bas yahi haii...
Mayank looked at her.. n Nupur gave him phone...
Mayank took it frm her...

Mayank:hello benji...
B:hey Mayank hiii... kaise ho???
Mayank:m fine benji hws u????
Benji:mein bhi thik hu bas dii ki yaad aa rahi thi to
phone kar liya...
Mayank:koi baat nahi benji.. tu kabhi bhi apni dii ko
phone kar sakta haii...
Benji:wo to mein janta hu... tu bas dii ka khayal
rakhna or baby ka bhi...
Mayank:meine tujse koi free ki advice nahi mangi thi
tu apni advice apne paas hi rakh... wo meri biwi
haii or wo mera baby haii to muje pata haii ki
unka khayal kaise rakhna haiii...
saying in irritating tone...
Nupur wasj ust staring at him...
Benji:oh wow to tuje pata haii... accha thik haii thik
haiii ab mein rakhta hu bbye gn n dii ko bhi meri
taraf se bbye bol dena ...
Mayank:haa thik haii n teri dii ko bhi bbye bol dunga..
n cut the call...
Mayank:wo benji ne bbye bola haii...
Nupur nodded ...
both turned their faces in opposite direction...
n slept...

NXT MORNING...

sun rays fell on Mayank's face... n he hide his
face under pillow...n spread his hand...
n thought he was nt alone in his bed nw Nupur also
bt his side was empty.. so he got up... n saw
here n there... Nupur was no where...

Mayank:ab ye Nupur kaha chali gayi..???
just then head the voice of door open..
he looked in this direction...
Nupur came out of washroom...her wet hair was
laying on her shoulder...both were staring at
each other... n then avoid their gaze...

Nupur:wo tum ready ho jaao hume office jaane ke liye
late ho raha haii...

Mayank just nodded... he opened his wardrobe
n started to find his towel... he couldnt find it
so threw all clothes on bed... Nupur started to
comb her hair... then she turned n socked to see
condition of room...

Nupur:Mayank tum ye kya kar rahe ho????
Mayank:Nupur mera towel nahi mil raha haii.. bas wahi
dhundh raha hu... yr lo yahi haiii mil gaya..
n took out towel n went to washroom...
Nupur:oh no isne room ki kya haalat kar di...
n made face... first she became ready.. then
sab kuch kaise faika haii agar kisi ke raaste me
aaya to koi jarur fisal jaayega...
she started to put everything in their place...
n in 10 nimutes Mayank came out of washroom...
wraping towel around his waist...he was walking
towards wardrobe .. n Nupur was coming towards
sofa having his clothes in her hand.. she was
managing clothes..n both crasheddd...
n Nupur was about to fall Mayank catched her..
his arm around her waist... n Nupur was totally
lost in his eyes.. n Mayank too.. then Nupur n
Mayank came to sense...n Mayank slowly made her
stand straight.. but still his arms around her...

n door was opened...

down stair...
"hello ghar me koi haii kya??"

one of servents saw her n said

Sr:Sneha mam bhabhi ji mandir gayi haii.. or bade
saab delhi gaye haii...n Sneha cut him...
Sneha:thik haii tum jaao...

servent nodded n went...

Sneha:so ghar me koi nahi haii...n m sure wo mayank
ab tak so raha hoga... said in her way...

Sneha went upstair n opened the door of Mayank's
room...she opened the door...
n saw Mayank was standing facing his back... n
stood with a girl she couldnt see girl...
first she was socked to see him...
then she said..

Sneha:Sam... Mayur turned... n Mayank was socked
to see Sneha...

Mayank:Sneha??? in socked state... he didnt knw
wat he was going to say her now...
n Sneha was looking at Nupur ...
Nupur was wearing chudidar salwar suit.. mangal
sutra was around her neck.. n sindoor was filled
in her mang... n she didnt knw y bt she was
scaring... unknown fear was visible in her eyes..

Sneha:Nupur yaha????
Nupur was cofused...

Mayank:Sneha tum yaha????
Sneha:Mayank tum to muje aise puch rahe ho jaise tum
ne muje pehli baar is ghar me dekha ho...
Mayank:Nahi Sneha wo mein bas...
Sneha:Nupur yaha kya kar rahi haii... Sneha was
jelous...
Mayank:Sneha Wo Nupur..
Sneha:Nupur tumhare room mein itni subah... ???
Mayank:Sneha Nupur wo...
Sneha:Mayank tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahe ho???/
Nupur... Nupur tum yaha??? koi file lene aayi
hogi haii na????
Mayank:Sneha Nupur yaha koi file lene nahi aayi haiii.
wo meri patni haii is liye wo yaha haii...
Sneha:Mayank subah subah kyu mazak kar rahe ho...
plzz mein tumhaare aise mazak se darne wali nahi
hu...
n laughed...
Mayank:Sneha mein mazak nahi kar raha hu...meine
Nupur se shaadi ki haii...
Mayank became serious...
Sneha:wt the hell Mayank nw stop jocking...
or ise bolo agar uska kaam khatam ho gaya ho to
chali jaaye... muje tumse baat karni haii...
said angrily...
Mayank:Sneha m nt jocking... ye sach haii ki meine
Nupur se shaadi ki hai Nupur se... ab wo meri
patni haii Sneha...Nupur is my wife...
Nupur Mayank Sharma...
said angrily...

*************** SLAP***********************

Sneha slaped acrossed Mayank's face...
Nupur was hell socked seeing this...

Sneha:tum Nupur se kaise shaadi kar sakte ho Mayank
tum to mujse pyar karte the na...

Nupur was hell socked hearing this...
n Mayank remained silent...

Sneha went near Mayankn held her collar...

Sneha:bolo Mayank aisa kaise kar sakte ho tum???/
tumne Nupur se shaadi kyu ki Mayank...???
jawab do Mayank...

Mayank:kyunki Nupur mere bacche ki maaa banne wali hai.

Sneha was hell socked...

Sneha:tumhare bacche ki maa????????
Nupur n Sneha were crying...

Mayank:haa wo mere bacche ki maa banne wali haiii...
or wo meri patni haiii .. hum dono ne shaadi kar
li haii...

Sneha:kab se chal raha haii tum done ke bich me ye
affair..????
asked angrily...

Mayank:Sneha... said angrily...
Sneha:kyu dhokha diya Mayank tumne muje kyu??? agar
tum Nupur se pyar karte the to mujse pyar ka
naatak kyu kiya...?????? kyu Mayank??/

now Sneha was broken...

Mayank:Nahi Sneha meri baat samaj ne ki koshish karo..
muje samaj ne ki koshish karo...

Sneha:kya samju tume Mayank me kya samju??? ye ki
tumne muje kabhi pyar hi nahi kiya tha??? ya fir
ye ki tum mujse pyar ka naatak kar rahe the or
tumhara affair is Nupur ke sath chal rahe tha...

Mayank:Sneha aisa nahi haii wo to bas hum London me
bussiness trip par gaye the or...

Sneha:oh to bussiness trip pe ye sab hota tha...
tum or Nupur is liye bussiness trip par jaate the
taaki tum or Nupur mere naak ke niche ye sab
kar sako... Mayank tum saaf saaf kyu nahi kehte ki
tumne mere saath sirf pyar ka naatak kiya tha
asal me to tumhare Nupur ke nazayas Sambandh the..

Mayank slaped her...

Mayank:Snehaaa...

Sneha was crying n left frm there...
n turned to Nupur who was also crying...
as sum1 pointed at her n Mayank's relation...
Mayank was worried tensed frustreted of all these..
he took his clothes n went to washroom...

Mayank's mom saw Sneha was running out frm home..
n she was also crying ... she understood dat
Mayank told her truth...

i knw guys itna boring n bakwas part aaj tak mene
nahi likha bt jaldi mein likha tha to aisa hoo
gaya sry... bt nxt part accha dungi promise...

precap:

"Mayank tum Nupur se kehdo ki wo baccha abort
karva le..." n

Mayank's Dad return...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...

Love'
Radhi...

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crazymayurian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

nice update but confused about precap

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

it wasn't boring at all Radi
awesome part
but precap seems so scary plzz jaldi update karo n thnx 4 d pm

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monalisa1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

v v interesting update...but the precap is scary..plzzz dont let nupur abort the baby,and plzz make mayank fall 4 nupur v soon...an dthis time hunny plzzz do come bk with a quick update..itna intezaar mat karwana plzzz...