A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

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@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Glad To see u back Radhika Hope U are perfectly settled in new City

Great part Dear feeling Sad For Sneha as well as Mayur

But Precape O mY God mayur Dad want to abort Mayur Child How dare he

Hope every thing will be fine soon

thanks for pm

cont soon

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

awesome update.

very nice.

finally sneha knw abt nupur...n she was so heartbroken :(

poor she :(

bt i like mayank...he couldnt tolerate nupurs insult.

they r behaving responsible parents.

love them.

bt precap was so scary.

who wants nupur abort this child???

m really scared.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

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ana.khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

nyc part...really lyked it...

precap z bit scaryy...

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Sania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

awesome update dear!

update the next part soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

It as wonderful update Radhi
Simply awesome
loved it so much
do update next part soon

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

NICE UPDATE..

PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON..

WAITING FOR.. MAYANK'S DAD REACTION...

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Hello frnds once again Radhi here.. with the new
part of A mistake of our life... i knw u all
are waiting for this SS for so long so i dont want
to make u more wait so here is the part hope u like
it n njoy it...n m really very very sry 4 late

sryyy * puppy eyes* plzzz

PART 7

When Mayank came out of washroom he saw Nupur was
still crying...he went to her.. n silently sat
beside her..

"Nupur... m sry Nupur meine tume apne aur Sneha
ke baareme nahi bataya...tum jaanti ho ki hum
office me kabhi bhi kuch bhi discuss nahi kart.. is
liye kabhi humne humaari personal life ke baareme
baat hi nahi ki..."he tried for his gorgiveness...

"humaari shaadi se pehle to bata sakte the na...
kyu nahi bataya muje ki tum kisi or se pyaar karte
ho..."Nupur argued n crying..

"bata kar kya karta mein?? haa bolo tum... humne
shaadi apne shaukh se nahi ki haii... humaari galti
ki wajase ki haii..."Mayank said frustredly...
n saw her more crying.. Mayank realised dat he was
angry so he took deep breath...n calmed himself
down..he too her hand in his hand n pressed it with
his hand..

"Nupur m sry ... muje tumhe sab kuch pehle hi bata
dena chahiye tha humari shaadi se pehle hi... par
tab humaari shaadi jaruri thi... mein maanta hu ki
humse galti huyi thi... par mein nahi chahta tha ki
humaaare bacche ko koi gati kahe...is liye tumhe
nahi bataya taaki humaari shaadi ke baad in sab
baaton ka koi matlab nahi haii... humaari shaadi
humaare bacche ki wajase huyi haii.. to fir ab
humaari life me sirf humara baccha hi hoga.. kisi
bhi baat se jyada important humara baccha hi
hoga...hoga na???"Mayank explained situation
n Nupur nodded on his last question...

"so nw no more crying...baby ke liye ok..."
Mayank wiped her tears ...n at door Shilpa aunty
was watching them she was the witness of that
scene... she smiled dat her son is nw responsible
son... n she was pround of him dat she was nt
needed here any more.. coz she knew nw her son
could manage his life ... n face any problem with
confidence...n nw he was always with his wife n his
child...n shilpa aunty left frm there...

"ab chale hume office jaana haii or fir doctor ke
sath appointment haii..."Mayank said while Nupur
nodded...n came down n saw Shilpa mom was coming
our of kitchen having jug of juce in her hand...
she saw them n smiled...Mayank came n huged his
mom..

"gud morning mom.."Mayank wished his mom with a
cute smile..

"gud mornig Mayank.."Shilpa said while broking the
hug...

"gud morning mom..." Nupur also wished n also
hugged ger...

"Gud mornig beta..aao beitho naasta kar lo..."
Nupur nodded n sat on chair...n then Mayur
started to eat their breakfast...Nupur ate
minimum...Shilpa mom noticed it...

"Nupur tum kuch khaa kyu nahi rahi ho??? ab tumhe
sirf apna hi bacche ka bhi khayal rakhna haii...
agar itna khaaogi to kaise chalega... aur is ka
saara asar bacche par padega..."
Shilpa aunty said .. n Mayank was listening
carefuly...n made a mental note he had to take care
of her food coz if she doesnt take her food
properly it wil effect his child...

"ye lo juce ye finish karo chalo..."Shilpa aunty
scolded her... n Nupur could see motherly love in
her eyes... so without any argument she finished
the whole glass of juce...n Mayank smiled seeing
this...

"mom ab hum chale??"Nupur asked while standing up
frm chair... n Mayank also stood up as he also
done...

"accha thik haii jaao... Said to Nupur n then
turned towards Mayank .. aur tu... tu na is ka
acche se khayal rakhna... "Mayank nodded n Nupur
smiled seeing Mayank's face... n Mayank also smiled
seeing Nupur's smile...n soon both left for
office...

AT OFFICE...
Mayank came out of car... n went to Nupur's side n
opened the door for her... watch man was surprised
seeing them together for the first time... n Mayank
on time... Nupur came out n then both left for office..
every1 wished them morning...n surprised
seeing them together n Mayank on time... n also
staring at them...they reached to Nupur's cabin...
Mayank also entered...

"ye log hume aise kyu dekh rahe the...?? jaise
pehli baar dekha ho..."Mayank speak out as soon as they entered the cabin...

"aaj tum pehli baar jo time par aaye ho...warna
always late ..."said while smiling...

"aur saayad hume sath dekh kar..."Nupur added...
n her smile vanished...Mayank read her expression
n understood her sentense... to lighten her mood he
changed the topic...

"Nupur wo momday ko jo deal final karni haii na
uski final report ready karni haii bt i think kuch
point pe me confused hu..."Mayank said this to
divert her mind.. n he knew that she will be fine
once she got busy in her work... she was
workholic...

"wo file muje de do mein ready kar deti hu... tum
bas saare employee se unke work ke weekly report le
lo...aur jo mr.ahluvaliya ka jo contract haii na us
par kaam shuru karvaa do..."Nupur explain while
talking a file.. n checking it...Mayank nodded...

"Nupur wo shaam ko doctor se appointment li
haii..."Mayank informed seriously...Nupur nodded
n gave him a small smile...n then went to his cabin
n got busy in his work...

after 2 hours... door of Samat's cabin was
knocked... Mayank looked up n saw Sneha was
standing at door... as soon as Sneha saw Mayank
has seen her .. she entered...

"Sneha tum???"Mayank asked with a sock...

"kyu Mayank nahi aa sakti kya???"
she said n sat in front of him...

"nahi wo aisa nahi haii...wo bas subaah tumm wo.."
Mayank stammered...

"Mayank m sry Mayank subaah meine aisa behave kiya
tumhaare sath... m sry muje aisa nahi karna chahiye
tha...par tum jaanete ho na Mayank mein tumhe
kitna pyaar karti hu... is liye tume kissi aur ke
sah dekha to muje achanak se gusa aa gaya .. aur
gusse me naa jaane meine kya kya bol gayi...muje
samaj na chahiye the ki tumne jo kiya wo tumhaari
ek galti thi ur mistake...aur wo bhi tumse galti se
ho gayi thi tum nashe ki haalat me the... mein
tume us baat ke liye maaf kar sakti hu Mayank...
aur fir tumhaare ghar se jaane ke baad meine bahut
socha... fir samaj aaya ki shaadi bhi tumne
majboori mein aake ki haii... kyunki Nupur
tumhaare bacche ki maa banne wali haiii... agar
aisa nahi hota to tum mujse hi shaadi karte...
Mayank mein aaj bhi yahi chahti hu ki hum dono ek
dusre se pyaar karte haiii aur hum dono ko hhi ek
dusre se shaadi karni chahiye... tumse galti ho
gayi mein manti hu... par mein is galti ko maaf kar
sakti hu..."Sneha said all these... n then stood
up...

"Mayank tum Nupur se kehdo ki wo baccha abort
karva le..."Sneha added this...
n hearing this Mayank was hell socked...
n stood up frm his chair...

"haa Mayank tum dono ki shaadi ki wajah sirf ye
baccha haii agar ye baccha hi nahi rahega to sab
kuch pehle jaisa ho jaayega naa tume majboori ki
shaadi nibhaani padegi na Nupur ko... aur fir hum
shaadi kar lenge.. bas ye baacha hum dono ke bich
ki deewar haii ise hatta do..."
As soon as Sneha speak out they heard a noice..both
turned n saw Nupur was standing at door.. n tears
were streaming frm her eyes...n she tood
supporting side door... n her expression said that
she had heard last talk...n Mayank was also hell
socked hearing Sneha n seeing Nupur...then Nupur
ran frm there...

"chalo accha hua Nupur ko bhi pata chal gaya ki
use kya karna haii ab aasan hoga wo baccha abort
karvana..." Sneha said n turned towards Mayank...
n got a tight slap frm Mayank on her cheek...

"how dare u to talk like this??? haa samajti kya ho
apne aapko... kab se jo mann me aaya bole jaa rahi
ho... bole jaa rahi ho... subaah jab tum gayi to
muje laga ki meine tumhare sath galat kiya haii...
fir baad me tumsemaafi mang kar samja dunga... par
nahi... tum kaha samaj ne wali thi... tum is
hadd tak soch sakti ho Sneha is hadd tak... Mayank
made disgust face... is hadd tak ki tum mere
bacche ko hi abort karvana chahti ho...meine kabhi
nahi socha tha. ki tum itna gir sakti ho.. tumhaari
soch itni ghatiya ho sakti haii... mein maanta hu
ki meine galti ki haii ... aur mene tuhaara bharosa
toda haii ... aur uska muje afsos haii... par muje
is baat ka zara bhi afshos nahi hai ki meine Nupur
se shaadi ki haii..."Mayank said angrily...

"Mayank wo baccha sirf tumhaari galti haii..."
Sneha said..

"Sneha... aaj bol diya aaj ke baat mere bacche ko
galti kehne ka sochna bhi matt... wo mera baccha
haii mera...wo is duniyaa me aayega... aur
jeeyega bhi... aur use harr pyaar milega.. maa aur
baap dono ka pyar milega use...duniya ki harr
khushi uske kadmo mein laa kar rakh dunga... aur
Nupur bhi use wo sab kuch degi jo ek maa apne
bacche ko deti haii...har khushi degi wo use..aur
beshoomaar pyaar lutaayegi wo hummaare bacche
par... aur jaha tak tuhaara sawal haiii... to aaj
tumne mere bacche ke baare me soch humaari jitni
dosti thi na wo bhi tod di tumne...muje garv haii
ki meine tum jaisi ghatiya soch wali ladki ko naa
chun kar Nupur se shaadi ki... aur mein ab is
shaadi ko nibhaunga aur apne bacche ko kabhi kuch
nahi hone dunga.. yaad rakhna..."
Mayank pointed fingure towards Sneha n left his
cabin...

"Us bacche ke liye tumne muje chhoda hai na Mayank
ab mein bhi dekhti hu ki kab tak tum apne bacche ko
apne paas rakh sakte ho... aur jaha tak Nupur aur
tumhaara sawal haii to wo to is bacche ki wajase
haiii.. baccha chala jaayega tume chhod kar to
Nupur bhi chali jaayegii... tum rahega kaun tum
akele fir to tume mere paas aana hi padega... aur
ek baar tum mere paas aa gaye to mein tumhe aur
Nupur ko ek sath is company me bhi kaam nahi karne
dungii..waise bhi pehle se hi muje pasand nahi ki
tum uske sath kaam karte ho... ab dekhti hu...
kaise wo baccha bachta haii.. kaise wo rishta
bachta haii aur kaise ye company..."
Sneha speak out after Mayank left...

on other side... Nupur>>.

Nupur was standing near window n crying holding
her stomuch...she felt a hand on her
shoulder...Nupur turned n saw Mayank was standing
beside her...She back stepped.. n placed her hand
on her tummy a bit tightly..

"Nahi Mayank mein apne bacche ko abort nahi
karvaungii...kabhi nahi.. ye mera baccha haii mein
ise nahi maarungii kabhi nahi..."Nupur scared n
stepped back...Mayank came forward...n hold her
both shoulder...

"Nupur meri baat suno..."before Mayank can
complite his sentense Nupur cut him..

"Nahi Mayank mein aisa nahi karungi.. mein tumse
humaari shaadi tod kar kahi door chali jaungi apne
bacche ke sath n promise apne bacche ko le kar
kabhi tumhare paas nahi aungi uska hakk lene... par
plzz mere bacche ko matt maro plzz..."Nupur
begging...she held his shirt n slided down on
floor crying...Mayank also sat beside her n pulled
her in a tight hug...

"Nahi Nupur aisa kuch nahi hoga... kuch nahi hoga
humaare bacche ko... Sneha ne jo bhi kaha wo sab
galat tha...kya meine tumse aisa kaha ki mein ye
baccha nahi chahta...??"Mayank asked.. n Nupur
looked up n looked at serious face...Nupur shaked
her head on NO..

"to fir kyu ro rahi ho???"

"tum Sneha se pyaar karte ho...aur wo nahi chahti
ki ye baby rahe... muje laga tum bhi is baby ko
nahi chahte..."

"acchha ye batao tum is baby se pyaar karti ho??"
Mayank asked n hearing this question Nupur came
out of her grip...

"ye kaisa sawal haii Mayank of course i love my
baby... mera baby haii ye...(placed her hand on her
tummy) koi maa ap ne baby ko kyu pyaar nahi
karegi??"

"wahi to mein tume samja ne ki koshish kar raha hu
Nupur ki jitna ye tumhaara haii utnaa hi mera
haii... ye baby hum dono kaa haiii... is baby ke
parents hum dono haii... daddy hu mein humaare baby
ka to agar ek maa apne baby se pyaar kar sakti haii
to ek baap bhi to karta hoga na??? ye mera baby
haii Nupur... i also love my baby...to kya apne
baby ko kabhi kuch karunga...??"Mayank said while
Nupur was trying to understand his point of
view...

"Nupur ye humaara baby hai... hum dono humaare
baby ko sab kuch denge...kabhi kissi chiz ki kami
mehsus nahi hone denge...hum humaara har farz
nibhayenge nibhayenge na???"Nupur nodded while
Mayank said all these placing his hand on her
tummy...n feeling his baby inside her...
n then again both hugged...
while Sneha was watching them n fuming in anger...
n then Sneha left office... n both started their
work... n then Mayank got a call frm his mother
that they have to go to home for lunch... firstly
Mayank didnt want to go coz of work bt then his
mother said that..they should eat at home as Nupur
was pregnent...Mayank went to Nupur's cabin n saw
she was drinking her coffee... Mayank ran to
her..n Nupur socked seing him like this...

"kya hua Mayank tum aise??"Nupur stood up...

"tum kya pee rahi thi??"

"coffee.. kyu??? Nupur was confused...

"tume pata haiii is time coffee nahi peete ..."

"Mayank is time kyu nahi pee sakti its on 12..."

"Nupur mera matlab haiii tum... tum pregnent ho to
tume coffee nahi peeni chahiye...wo baby ke liye
harmful hoti haii..."Mayank informed her...n as
soon as she heard this she kept her coffee mug on
table back...n made a sad face..

"sryyy muje nahi pata tha...aaj ke baad aisa nahi
hoga... par tume ye kaise pata ki muje coffee nahi
peeni chahiye??"

"agar bataunga to tum mazak udaaogi..."Mayank said
cutely...making face...

"tumhe lagta haii ki mein aisa karungi...?? bolo na
tumhe kisne ye bataya haa??? yaa fir se koi
prank..."Nupur left the sentense n notice Mayank's
expression...

"Nahi wo prank nahi... wo bas 15 nahiii 10 minute
pehle na mera work khatam ho gaya tha... to mein
na sirf internet pe mail check kar raha tha.. aur
aise hi bas search kiya baby ke baare me...aur uski
mom ke baareme to bas wahi thoda sa read kiya
tha..."Mayank said shyly...n Nupur smiled seeing
his stupid face...n his love for baby... he knew
he was laying dat he was searching it for 10
minutes bt its more then 1 hour... he was busy
reading all these things...bt she knew he scared
of her..she might scold her for time paas n nt
working dats y he was laying dat only 10 minutes
searching on internet...

"aur kya kya tumne read kiya us 10 minute me????"
Nupur asked...

"wo naa usme bahut kuch tha...ek ghanta laga muje
sirf half part hi read kar paaya... fir mom ka call
aa gaya ki hume ghar jaana hai lunch ke liye... aur
fir pata haiii... usme na india ke best
gynocoligist ka name tha maine uska contect bhi
kiya haiii or kal ki appointment fix bhi kardi...
aur abhi 1 aur ghanta ..."he was saying all these
in exitement...n it showed how much he loves his
baby...n then Mayank realised that first he said
that he was searching for 10 minute n now he
confessed dat he was in all these frm more then 1
hour...bt felt reveal when he saw Nupur was just
smiling at him... n he too smiled...

"tum hans kyu rahi ho... wo to mein saari books
laane ka soch raha tha... fir socha office time
mein lene jaunga to tum daato gi... to meine..."

"net ka use kiya ryt??? fir mr.ahluvaliya ki file
to kab ki complite ho gayi hogi nahi...???"
Nupur asked with a slight anger...

"are meine wo sabke report le liye na... tumhe
pata haiii... wo finance department ka manager haii
na wo kuch kaam ka nahi haii... koi na koi fault
dikhata hi rehta haii financial position me..."
Mayank tried to change the topic n didnt want he
was scolded by Nupur ... n nw his wife... loll

"topic change kitni aasani se ho gaya nai???"
Mayank was thinking wat to reply...n his cell
rang... n looked at her... n said her his
cell...

"hello haa mom...nahi nahi mom bas abhi nikalte
haii naa... ha baba pakka ... ok 30 minutes me ok..
bbye..."Mayank cut the call happily as they have
to reach home by time n he had nt to answer
Nupur's questions...

"chalo ghar chalo lunch time u knw.. mom ka call
aaya tha..." Mayank said happily... finally Nupur
smiled n walked out of cabin with him...

"ye Mayank bhi na kabhi nahi sudhrega... kaun
kahega ek baby ka papa banane wala haii... khud bhi
ek baby se kam nahi haii... ise kaam na karne kaa
bahana bhi mil jaata haiii...aur aise excuses dega
ki koi naraz bhi nahi ho skta..."
Nupur thought n smiled at his talks...

"ye Nupur bhi na bossy haii puri ki puri... aaj
to bach gaya...par mein thodi naa har baar ki tarah
game khel raha tha... baby ke baareme hi to padh
raha tha...fir bhi daant na shuru kar deti par mein
bhi smart hu aise kaise daant khaa leta... apne
baby ke liye read kar raha tha..."Mayank said
proudly in his mind n smiled him self while both
walking out of office n left every1 in sock...
as they were leaving office at lunch time..n
together...

precap:

Mayank's dad return...

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Love
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago