A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

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i knw u all r waiting for it..

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Hey frnds Radhi here.. i knw u all socked dat m
in Rajasthan n m updting loll bt i have my laptop
with me so thpght to updt so here is the updt..
n thnks to al frrnds who loved my last updt n
also thnks to all silent readrs n who cmmnted
on my ss,, here is updt njoy it..

PART 5

Shilpa opened the door n socked to Mayur... jaymala
around thier neck... n Nupur in red lahengha n her
mang was filled with sindoor... n mangalsutra around
her neck...
Shilpa:Mayank tum ye .. or Nupur tum?????
Mayank:mom humne shaadi karli haiii???????

his words were echoing

mom humne shaadi karli haiii...

mom humne shaadi karli haiii...

mom humne shaadi karli haiii...

Shilpa was damn shock... she dint knw wat to
do..wat to say hw to react...Mayank merried to Nupur..
no it couldnt possible... she couldnt believe on her
eye dat Mayank n Nupur are married??? hw could be it
possible???

Shilpa:tum dono andar aao...

held both's hand n took them in... she was looking angry..
Shilpa:Mayank muje batao ye sab kya haii..?????????
Mayank:mom wo ye...
n looked at Nupur... she was feeling guilty...
Shilpa:haa Mayank mein sun rahi hu... bolo ye sab kya
haii?? she raised her voice...
Nupur scared as shilpa's voice raised..
Mayank:mom maine Nupur se shaadi ki haiii... he said with
soft voice... he knew dat his mom must be angry...
Shilpa:Nupur se shaadi karli par kyu??? she was socked..
nw tears were streamming frm Nupur's eyes...
Mayank became quiet...Shilpa went to him ...
Shilpa:bol Mayank tune Nupur se kyu shaadi ki..???
bol Mayank jawab de muje... she was dam angry...
n Mayank saw in her eyes...
Mayank:kyunki Nupur pregnant haii mom...
another sock...
Sh:Nupur pregnant haii???? she looked at Nupur
who was crying badly... she went near her...
Shilpa:tu pregnant haii???
Nupur couldnt say a word... n crying...
Shilpa:Nupur tu maa banne wali haii????????????/
asked in slight anger...Nupur cried more...
Shilpa:samaj gayi... par tu maa banne wali haiii to tune
Mayank se shaadi kyu ki????????????
Mayank:kyunki wo mere bacche ki maa banne wali haii...
uske pet me meta baccha pal rha haii...mom
said in soft voice...
this was the biggest sock for shilpa...
Shilpa:Nupur tumhare bacche ki maa banne wali haii?????
she even didnt knw hw to react...
she was socked to death…

Mayank held Shilpa's hand n made her sit on sofa...
n kneed down helding her hand...

Mayank:mom his voice broken...
plzz muje maaf kardo plzz mujse galti ho gayi..
aap hamesha muje daant ti thi taki mein kabhi koi galti na
karu par meine aap ko suna unsuna kar diya...mom aapke
Mayank se ek galti ho gayi...
Shilpa:galti???kaisi galti Mayank?????
Mayank:A mistake of our life... maine aapko us din
bataya tha na ki mere dost ne ek galti ki haii...
wo galti mujse huyi thi mom...

n Shilpa remembered the the convo of Mayank n her...
Shilpa:matlab ki tu jo us din baat kar raha tha wo galti
tune... or Nupur ne ki thi...
Mayank remained silent...n looked down n shilpa saw
Nupur was still crying... shilpa stood up...

Shilpa:tum dono jante ho tum dono ne kya kiya haii????
tumhari is galti ki wajase sab ka kya haal hoga???
kitno ki zindgi badal jaayegi...

Nupur came to shilpa...
she was crying like hell...

Nupur:i m sry...plzz hume maaf kar do...
n folder her hands...
shilpa touched her hands...
Nupur:plzz hume maaf kardo wo galti humse anjane me huyi
haiii...

Shilpa hugged Nupur... n Nupur hugged her tightly.
n shilpa felt her grip tight ... n understood wt she
felt.. n she needed her...this time she had to be wwith
them... she knew they did wrong... bt this time she knw
she was needed most... she broke the hug...

Shilpa:aap dono ne galti to ki haiii... uski saza sirf tum
dono nahi kitne log bhugtenge...
Mayank:m really very sry mom... bt aapne hi to kaha tha ki
ki koi insan uske bacche or uski maa ki zindgi barbad
nahi kar sakta...
Shilpa:Mayank tum jante ho na ki is baar tumne kitni badi
galti kardi haii... apne dad ko kya kahoge Mayank...
n Mayank thought abt his dad...

Mayank:dad??? he was scared wt he would tell his dad...
n knw that how much his dad loved him...
Shilpa:haa Mayank kya kahoge apne dad se...
n nw tars were streaming frm his eyes...

Shilpa:Mayank is baar tumne bahut badi galti ki haiii Mayank.
Mayank went to his mom...
Mayank:plz MAA maaf kardo plzzz... plzzz aap mujse
naraz mat hona plzzz...

Shilpa saw his son broken...
coz he always called her mom... n he only said
shilpa maa when he really needed his mom... Mayank's mom
saw her son was totally broken...
Shilpa had tearsss...

Sh(in mind):Mayank bahut toot chuka haiii is baar
uska sath muje dena hoga... janti hu ki usne apni
zindgi ki bahut badi galti kar di haiii... aur wo
us galti ko sudhar raha haiii Nupur se shaadi karke...
aur is baar mere bete ko meri sabse jyada jarurat haii..
mein janti hu Mayank ke dad Mayank ko kabhi maaf nahi
karenge... or Sneha.??? use har haalat ka samna karna
padega... bahut muskil hoga uske liye... agar meine
abhi apne bete ka sath nahi diya to wo toot kar bikhar
jaayega... use is duniya se bhi larna haii...
or uske sath sath use apne bacche or Nupur ko bhi to
sambhalna haiii... muje uska dard samajna hoga... wo to
ab apna pyar Sneha ko bhi kho dega...muje uska sath dena
hoga... muje use or ab uske sath sath Nupur or un
dono ke bacche ko bhi sambhalna hoga...

Mayank:maa plzzz maa maaf kardona...crying...
shilpa hugged him...
Shilpa:Mayank bas Mayank... mom haiii na...
Mayank broke the hug n held her hand...
Mayank:mom aapne muje maaf kar diya???? Said with a smile with tears,
Shilpa:pata nahi Mayank par mein apne bete ke sath hu...
Mayank:thnk u mom... thnk u... aap nahi janti muje aapki
kitni jarurat haiii...
Shilpa:janti hu mein... or tum apni galti sudharne ki
koshish kar rahe ho to mein usme tumhare sath hu...
sirf tumhare sath hi nahi Nupur ke sath bhi...
she held Nupur's hand...
Nupur:aap ne muje maaf kar diya aunty?????
smiling in tears...
Shilpa:nahi tuje meine maaf nahi kiya?????
n her smile fadded...
Shilpa:agar maa bolegi to maaf kar dungii...
Nupur smiled...
Nupur:thnk u maa...
n she felt she was luckiest girl...
as she got her mom... n hugged her...

both were hugging.. n Shilpa saw Mayank...
n told him to join...n Mayank came n thrice hugged...
they were crying n smiling...

Then they brokew the hug... n shilpa wiped tears of Mayur.
n Mayank wiped tears of his mom...
Shilpa:ab jaa ise upar leja... ise aaram ki jarurat haii..
Mayank:ji mom.. chalo Nupur...
Nupur:ek minute Mayank...
Nupur bent n touched shilpa's feet...
shilpa held her frm shoulder...
Shilpa:Nupur nahi... n both smiled...
Nupur:mom aap sachme maaf kar diya na????
Shilpa:haa beta... maaf kar diya tuje meine... kyunki agar
tum chahti to is bacche ko gira kar sukun se apni
zindgi jee sakti thi... par tumne aisa nahi kiya...
tumne mere bete ke bacche ko apne paas rakha... is
ghar ka pehla baccha haiii... aur ise tumne maara
nahi... is nanhi si jaan ko apne paas rakha...
humare khandan mein sirf Mayank hi tha... aur uske baad
ye baccha...

Mayank:mom muje bhi maaf kardo na plzz...

n made puppy face...
Shilpa:ek shart par...
Mayank:har shart manjur haiii...
Shilpa:thik haii to shart ye haii ki ab Nupur or ye
nanhi si jaaan ko tumhe protect karke rakhna padega...
Mayank:haa mom.. mein Nupur or baby ko kuch nahi hone
dunga...
n both smiled...
Shilpa:ab jaa ise upar room me le ja or rest karne de...
Mayank:ok mom...

n Mayur went upstair...
Shilpa:Mayank ke dad ko kaise sambhalungii... or Sneha
use mein kya kahungii... kya Nupur janti haii ki
Sneha or Mayank... sayad nahi kyunki na Nupur ne ek
baar bhi Sneha ka jikar kiya na Mayank ne...
muje Mayank ko puchna padega...

MAYUR
Mayank opened the Door od his room...
opsss sry door of their room...it was clean...
it looked like boys room... Mayank closed the door...

Mayank:tum yaha beitho na khadi kyu ho...
n Nupur sat on bed .. n looking here n there..
its very big room...
Nupur:wo dad to maaf kar denge na...??? asked in soft voice.
Mayank became quiet... as he knew his dad well...
Mayank:haa kyu nahi...wo bhi kar denge.. he lied n Nupur
knew dat.. n he smiled fakely bt tension was visible
on his face...
just then door was knocked...
Mayank opened the door.. n saw a servent had a bag...

Sr:Mayank baba wo koi aaya tha ye bag de ke gaya haii...
Mayank:haa laao.. n servet handed it to Mayank... n left..
n Mayank close the door...

Mayank:lagta haii benji ne kapde bheje haiii...
Nupur:haa wo mein use phone kar deti hu...
n dialed his number n talked to him...
n Mayank saw her face sad while she was talking to benji.
she was sad... he knew dat Nupur loved benji a lot..
n she was crying silently also...

Nupur:accha benji mein rakhti hu wo Mayank ko kuch kaam haii.

n cut the call...
benji knew dat Nupur made an excuse... n Nupur couldnt control
her self n burst into tears...
Mayank went to her ...

Mayank:r u ok????
Nupur nodded n wiped her tears...
Nuput:main change karke aati hu...
n opened her bag n took our her cloths n went to
washroom...

Nupur:ise kya hua??? sayad benji ko juda ho gayi is liye..

he too changed his clothes...
Nupur came out in simple salwar suit...

n sat on bed... while Mayank closed his cupboard..
Mayank:wo kal hum doctor ke paas check
up karwane jayenge... wo new doctor aayi haiii
specialist haii to kal unke paas saare check ups karwale.
said in soft voice...
Nupur:thik haii...

just again door was knocked...
Mayank opened n saw his mom Shilpa... having juce
in her hand...
Mayank:mom aap...??
Shilpa:Nupur ke liye juce laayi hu...
n came in... Nupur stood up...
Nupur:mom ye ...
Shilpa:yaha beith tu.. n made her sit...
or chup chap ise peele...
nupur:nahi mom muje bt shilpa cut her...
Shilpa:Nupur ab sirf tuje hi apne baare me
hi nahi apne bacche ke baareme bhi sochna haiii...
sirf tuje hi nahi khana use bhi khilana haii...
chal jaldi pee le...
n Nupur had tears... as she saw Shilpa's love...
n took glass n started to drink n Mayank n shilpa smiled
seeing her ...

precap:

Sneha slaped Mayank

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Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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