A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

Hey frnds Radhi here... well m always writing SAJAN stories... bt i love MAYUR too...
so i try to write MAYUR version also...
here is my first attempt on MAYUR hope u all like it... plzz guys ignore silly mistakes...

****Fingure crossed*****



CS:-

Mayank Sharma:
prince of sharma mansion... handsome hunk cool dude..
fun loving... prankstar... bt gud at heart... never
meant to hurt any 1... really very humble... n kind...
bt he doesnt take anything seriiously... till the his
last bussiness trip... he really madly in love with
his college frnd Sneha... he really loved their
parents... n respect them... n he is laadla of their
parents... he is owner of his M & N company...
of course it was created by samrat shergill n his
bussiness partener Nupur bhushan... only in 2 years
they are in top... really very successful...
so its obvious dat they have lots of enemy...
bt they supported each other... they are professional
frnds.. best frnds n best jodi in bussiness...
his buddy is benji..


Nupur Bhushan:
she is nt bubly bt hardworking n sincere girl... she has
gone through lots of difficulties frm her childhood...
her parents had passed awat when she was only 10 yrs..
n she has a younger brother... so she want to give him
all happiness n everything wat he want... which she didnt
get in her life... of course she is talented bussentss
woman also nt typical...

she wear salwal suit mostly... bt she also wear bussiness
suits sumtimes... n she has her own attitude n her own
rules... n she is also owner of M & N company...
n ya she is 50% bussiness partener of Mayank Sharma...
she doesnt knw more than his parents.. n their nature..



(consider in this story Nupur is nt bubbly .. bt also well
mannerd.. n she is like morden girl.. bt also wear
salwar suit...nupur is totally different chellenging n
strong... n she has her own attitude..)



Sneha: Mayank 's girl frnd... actually she met Mayank when
they were in college.. she is bubbly...
bt bit rude.. n jelouse ... she is madly
in love with Mayank..


Benji Bhushan:younger brother of Nupur n of course best
buddy of samrat... only as samrat is Nupur 's bussiness
partener... he loved his sister like anything... n
consider his sister like his parents... as his parents
had passed away when he was only 4 yrs...
he is stdying in college n also basket ball champ...
n also fun loving like Mayank n always irritate Nupur..


shilpa sharma:Mayank's mom... loves his son a lot..
bt always scolding him as she doesnt like Mayank's life
style... house wife n love his son n husband... really
very nice.. n Mayank n his dad thought she is typical
type... she knw abt Sneha as Mayankt's girl frnd.. n she
likes her.. bt in sum bussiness parties she also met
Nupur .. n shilpa really liked her... n always
praised her...


Ravi Sharma:Mayank's father.. loves his son.. as both
are same.. n always irritate his wife taking side of
Mayank always... he loves Mayank as Mayank's life style
is same as was his.. he has his own bussiness... of
course they are rich.. bt he wanted his son do to his
own bussiness... he also knw abt Mayank's gf Sneha...
so 1 more member in their gang lolz.. n he wants mayank n sneha's
shaadi soon... as he loves Sneha as he has no daughter..
he loves his reputation...


there are more character bt i will explain as story
unfolds...


Story line...:-

Sneha & mayank's story:
both met in college n fell in love... n they are goig to
get marry soon...

Mayur's story:
b4 2 yrs they met in a compay for a job they did job for
2 months.. bt both dont want to slave of others .. n they
want to do sumthing their own... n they also have their
attituse...in two months they jst became just frnds...
they were well knwn abt each others attituse.. so
both left thier job n created thier own company named
M & N company( Mayank &Nupur)... they have been hard
working since last two years...Mayank was really
talented in took decision n Nupur was damn talented in
running bussines.. n dealing wit clients... so nw their
company in top... n really very successful... both
became really very rich.. Mayank was already rich bt nw
he has his own... n Nupur bought a new bunglow named..
Bhushan mansion... so many times Mayur have to go for
bussiness trips out of country n town.. bt there is no
difference in their frnship.. both are still frnds...
till their last bussiness trip.. n they have never asked
abt each other .. as they were really professional...
Nupur met his parents in a party once.. she dont knw
abt Mayank n Sneha.. n Mayank knw benji as he used to
come his sisters company bt more than this he dont knw
anything n he never asked...


Mayur has come back frm their bussiness trip from
london... n 1 week after...


their life will change soon...😉

hope u all liked CS ...
plzz do coment... should i continue????????????????

and one more thing i dont knw any Mayur Fans ...
so tell ur frnds who love MAYUR.. to read this if u really like it...

sry if i hurt any 1 of you...


Love😉
Radhi..

heyyy mee too a mayur fan along wid sajan :)

Originally posted by: ginny09

heyyy mee too a mayur fan along wid sajan :)

i love nupur n mayank a lot :)

n love ur sajan ff too

so plzz update me wid this one

definitely want to read this one :P

hey thnks ginny..

btw... this SS will be different frm others... n u knw dat...
n thnks yaar... u r first one thnks a lottt

GOOD CONCEPT...

Hey Radhika
Congrats dear
thank u so much for writing a Mayur FF
i loved ur concept and CS
its awesome and different...
eagerly waiitng for ur first part
plz do cont it and pm me

take care
all d best

thnks faria & Dhanno aarti...

today i will update first part...

awesome concept dear...pls continue soon...

nice concept. pm me when you update.

Hey Frnds Radhi here.. here is the first part of A mistake of our life''..Thnks to all frnds who liked My first ateempt thnk a ton'''''''''Hope u like it''

PART 1

We can saw a big mansion named SHARMA MANSION...it was like palace...yup palace... n its prince is nonother then our Mayank... after all meaning of Mayank isprince... we can see a lady was preparing breakfast...she is non other than our prince's mother... shilpa sharma... she was smiling as she was making breakfast for his ladla prince...n we can saw a handsum bt old man was reading newspaper n then he folded newspaper..

he is our prince's father... Ravi sharma...n he saw his beautiful wife was making breakfast...well after all he is Mayank's father... so kuch to hoga na... he went to kitchen n staring at his wife...

R:shilpa aaj tume maine bataya ki tum kitni beautiful lagrahi ho????

shilpa turnes n saw his husband...

SH:lo ho gaye subah subah shuru... aur aap ye baat mujesubah se teesri baar keh chuke haii...

R:oh to aisi baat haiii... made face..

Sh:ji haa aur aap bahar jaiye aur behtiye... me nastalagati hu.. kyunki Mayank to itni jaldi uthne wala haiinahi ...

R:are shilpa use sone dona.. wo bichara office me itnakaam karta haii ki itna thak jaata haiii...aur aaj to sunday haiii...

Sh:aap hi ne bigada haii use... bilkul aap par gaya haiiwo ... har harkate aap jaisi.. n smiled...

R:thnk u thnk u... ab meri taarif karna chhodo meri..muje pata haii ki wo bilkul mujpar gaya haiii par dekhnauski shaadi ke baad sudhar jayega...

Sh:hope so ... sayad Sneha se shaadi ke baad wo kuchsudhar jaaye...

R:waise wo humari hone wali bahu... aayi kyu nahi...

A sound come frm back n they turned...

SN:kisi ne muje yaad kiya... with smiling face...

R:lo name liya aur shaitan hazir... aao na beta...

Sh:lo aa gayi aapki hone wali bahu...

Sneha came n took blesses frm Mayank's parents...

R:kaisi ho beta???

SN:main bilkul thik hu papa... aap kaise haiii????

R:fit n fine aap ki mom mera itna khayal jo rakhti haii..

n winked at shilpa... n shilpa blushed...

SN:kyu mom dad ka itna khayal kyu??? haa??? n teasing her.

Sh:tu bhi na... unki party me chali gayi... n laughed...

N:mom Mayu kaha haiii...???

R:as usual so raha haiii...

SN:oh god ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega,...

Sh:tum shaadi karke aa ja fir use sudhar de...

SN:mom aap ko lagta haii kya ki wo mujse sudhrega..??

Sh:lagta to nahi... par koi to aisa hoga jo use sudhar sake...

SN:pata nahhi kon haii jo use sudharega well mom aapkonahi lagta Mayank jab se Mayank bussiness trip se wapas aaya haii kuch badla badla lag raha haiii...

R:are Sneha tum kyu us nalayak ki tension le rahi ho..

Sh:kya aap bhi... Sneha wo M & N company ka owner haii..uski khud ki company haiii use itne kaam hote haii aurun saare kaame ka tension... is liye .. aur use aaye 1week to hua haiii.. tum dekhna ab tum aa gayi ho tofir se pehle jaisa ho jayega...

evry1 smiled... n Sneha left to Mayank's room...

R:shilpa Sneha ki baat sach haiii Mayank jab se aaya haikuch ukhda ukhda rehne laga haiii... sirf kaam se kaampehle to aisa nahi tha...

Sh:saari galti aap ki haiii aap ne hi use apna bussiness khada karne ko bola tha.. to usne apne partener ke sath milke apna khud ka bussiness khada kiya haii...

R:ha bhai wo to haiii i m proud of my son... usne apna bussiness khada kiya haiii... M & N company... jo india ki best compnies me se ek haii...

said proudly...

Sh:aur successful bhi haiii aur is success me uski bussiness partener Nupur ka bhi bada hath haii... kitni sincere n hardworking ladki haii na.. n smiling... aur innocent bhi haii...

R:ha bhai wo to haii...aur professional bhi... ab agar Nupur bhushan ki tarif karli ho to muje nasta mil saktahaii...???

Sh:aap table par baithiye me laati hu...

R:jaise aap ki marji begam sahiba...

n went out...

IN Mayank 's room...

Sneha entered n saw Mayank was sleeping peacefully...

SN:yeh dekho abhi bhi so raha haii...

Mayankkk utho Mayank...

bt Mayank didnt responce...she went to Mayank n sat beside him...

SN:Mayank...

bt no responce... he took alarm clock n made it start n put it near Mayank's near... n alarm rang on Mayank'sear n Mayank wake up with jerk.. n saw Sneha was smiling... Mayank didnt angry seeing her... his lady love was in front of him.. he hugged her n Sneha too hugged him...

M:i love you...

SN:mee too...

they broke the hug,...

SN:so mr kaisi rahi raat...?? kal nind aa gayi thi na??ya kal bhi nind nahi aayi thi...

M:wo bas thoda late soya tha na is liye.. said in serious tone...

SN:Mayank tum kyu itna kaam ka tension le rahe ho...jaise ye company tumhare akele ki haiii... use nupur ko bhi to thoda kaam karne do...

as soon as he heard nupur's name his face turned pale...n lost in thoughts n soon came out of thoughts..

M:Sneha tum janti ho ki aaj humari company jis mukam parhaii usme nupur ka bahut bada hath haii...

SN:par tum bhi to kaam karte ho...

M:ha par uske jitna sincerely nahi...

SN:kyu???

M:kyunki tum jo ho meri life me me kaise koi kaam thikse kar sakta hu... n laughed...

SN:Mayank aaj main tume nahi chhodungi...

n both ran in room...just then his cell rang.. n both stopped...Mayank picked up the phone...

M:hello...

E:hello sir me aap ka employee bol raha hu sir wo aajaap ki jo 11 baje meeting thi wo ab 10 baje haii... aur nupur madam office aa chuki haii...

M:thik haii main aata hu...n cu the call...

SN:kya hua again meeting..

M:ha... with sad face..

SN:kitne baje haiii???

M:10baje...

SN:aur abhi kitne baje haiii????

Mayu looked at clock...

M:oh sit 9 baj chuke haii oh god... i have to rushn took his towel n went to bathroom...Sneha smiled...

MN:sam bhi na... kabhi nahi sudharne wala...

n went down staircase.. n saw Mayank's parents were having breakfast...

R:kya hua wo utha ya nahi???

SN:papa uthta kkaise nahi... par uske office se phoneaaya ki 10 baje meeting haii so jaldi nahne chala gaya..

Sh:ye ladka itna bigda hua haiii .. 10baje meeting haiiaur ye 9 baje ke baad uth raha haii.. aur uski partener nupur ab tak office bhi pahoch gayi hogi...aur kaam bhi start kar diya hoga... kitni sincerely kaam karti hai morden khayalat ki haii par aaj bhi salwar suit pehnati haii... itna bada bussiness khud ke dum par khada kiya par itne simple tarike se rehti haii ki sabke sath match ho sake.. aur ye humara Mayank kisi ke sath match nahi hota... sirf uske jaise aare tedhe logo ke sath uski banti haii...pata nahi nupur use kaise jhelti hogi...

Mayank came down...

M:kisi burai ho rahi haii???

SH:aa gaya bada jaldi uth gaya ...

M:oh mom kya aap bhi...

Sh:kya aap bhi ha??? sudhar ja sudhar ja...ab teri shaadi bhi hone wali haii..

SN:koi baat nahi mom muje yahi mayu se pyar haii...

n Sneha sat on chair...

R:ha Sneha i love my son too...

Sh:ha jaise main to apne beto ko nafrat karti hu na??? said with anger... main ise is liye keh rahi hu takiwo koi aisi galti na kar beithe jise use kabhi bhi pachtana pade...

n as soon as he heard galti he again lost in thoughts...

M(in mind):galti ... mom galti to mein kar chuka hu.. bahut badi galti... main kabhi samaj hi nahi paaya ki aap muje hamesha kyu daant ti rehti thi.. par aaj samaj aaya ki sayad is liye taaki mein kabhi koi galti na karu par mom main galti kar chuka hu... main aap logo ko nahi bata sakta... kyunki agar bata diya to aap log muje kabhi maaf nahi karoge... kyunki ab tak me khud ko maaf nahi kar paaya...

Sneha interped in his thoughts...

SN:Mayu chal na beith nasta kar le...

M:nahi Sneha waise bhi main late hu main waha ja kar lunga,... n mom aap mujse nafrat nahi karti.. main janta hu aap mujse bahut payar karti haii...aap muje is liye gussa hoti haiii taki mein koi galti na karu.. haii na...

Sh:dekha mera Mayu kitna samaj dar haii...

R:hume to pata hi nahi tha..??\

n laughd...

M:mom me chalta hu bbye n kissed her mom... n left soon...

Sh:ye bhi na agar jaldi uth jaata to nasta karne katime to milta.. ab pata nahi wo office me kuch khayega bhi ya nahi .?????

Sneha drank juce..

SN:mom dont wry wo kuch na kuch kha lega... ab mein chalti hu mom mera wait kar rahi hogi...

R:thik haii bt kal jarur aana aur apne parents ko bhi bolna ki wo jaldi aaye taki hum tum dono ki shaadi ki date fix kar sake...

SN:ji dad... bbye mom bbye dad,,

Both:bbye...

both did thier breakfast...

Mayank reached to M & N company...

he went to 10th floor...as soon as he entered every1 saluted him n wishing him good morning...he entered to his office n out his bag on table... n took out a file from his bag... n took his lappy n went to conference room... as soon as he entered he saw nupur n others were waiting for him... he looked at nupur n nupur also looked at him.. n they were staring each other.. n soon they lowered they gaze...

M:sry m late...

Client:dont wry mr Mayank... Ms nupur ne hume brief de diya haii... ab aap aap ki company ko present kar sakte ho..

Mayank smiled n again looked at nupur .. n nupur smiled a bit n Mayank too... Mayank went next to nupur n gv her file n both started to gv their presentation.. n again n agian they were stealing glances... after presentation clients were impressed... n clapped...

Mr shinha.:wow fantastic presentation n we have full trust on both of u... hum ye contract aap ko hi denge... n mayur were damn happy... every1 shaked their hand.. n his employees hugged them.. at last Mayank forwarded his hand... n nupur was first didnt want to shake hand.. bt its professional so she had to she also shaked her hand with him..

M:congratulations nupur...

N:same to you Mayank n smiled a bit...

Mr shinha..: well main chahta hu ki aap dono aaj raat ki party main aaaye kyunki ye party sirf aap logo ke honour me rakhi haii...

MAYUR smiled fakely...

M:ji jarur...

n every1 left... n only mayur left... Mayank turned towards nupur...

N:Mayank tumne party mein jane ke liye haa kyu kaha???

M:nupur tum janti ho ki ye professional party haii jo humare honour me de rahe haiii...

N:janti hu.. tume jaana haii to jaao par main nahi aane wali...

M:nupur wo log kya sochenge agar tum party main nahi gayi to???

N:i dont care Mayank... she became angry... i dont care... nw she calmed n cried n she was feeling dizzy n about to fall..

N:Mayankkk n Mayank ran to her.. n held her.. n made her sit... n made her drink water...

M:r u ok nupur????

nw nupur was ok...

N:yah m fine...

M:tumhari tabiyat thik nahi haii???

N:nahi wo bas abhi thode chakar aa gaye the... nw m fine...

M:nupur aaj raat main tume pick up karne aaunga...

N:nahi Mayank main khud aajaungi...

M:be at at sharp 9.. n left... n nupur cried... Mayank went his cabin n saw pics of their success mayur's pic having awards in their hand.

.Mayank had tears...

M:kaash ki wo sab naa hua hota jo London me hua tha'. Kaashhh

AT NUPUR

N:2 saal se hum saath main kaam kar rahe haii Mayank... hum pehli baar ek compay mein mile jaha hum ne 2 months sath me job ki hum dost bane... aur hum dodo hi chahte ki khud ki ek company ho is liye hum dono ne ek dusre ka hath thama aur ye company khadi ki.. in 2 saalo me humne itna kaam kiya ki is M & Ncompany ko itni uchi pohcha diya jaha hum use dekhna chahte the... humne kabhi ek dusre ke bareme kabhi kuch nahi pucha... na janne ki koshish ki haiii... hum log sirf professional log ban kar rehte the par... par... us trip ke baad.. sab kuch badal gaya sab kuch kaash ki hum us trip par naa jaate to kuch nahi hota'. Kuch nahi'. n cried a lot...

here is the first part i hope u like it...

plzz do cont m press like button m waiting for ur cmmnt...

Love u ll

Radhi...