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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
plz add me to ur PM list
ur ff is fabulous
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting

loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey loved ur ff...
its very interesting...
main uss nivi ko sach mein maar doongi...phir ek baar usne geet aur dev ke baare mein baat ki toh...
hope they r going to b ok...
i hv sent u buddy req pl add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing .
do continue plz.
thnx for d PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethia

hey loved ur ff...

its very interesting...
main uss nivi ko sach mein maar doongi...phir ek baar usne geet aur dev ke baare mein baat ki toh...
hope they r going to b ok...
i hv sent u buddy req pl add me to ur pm list

Thankyou😊
i guess you an geet share same thoughts😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -dia-

Interesting

loved it!!!
add me in ur PM list

thanx😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bhakbhartifan, asmi123, gagsy, maaneetsangel, gangesegb, 9n9i9s9h9u9, Shalve, preethia, Dreamy_Mystique, mrk_1, shah10, sharmake11, monikaseth, -dia-, thankyou guys for liking the updates.

maaneetsangel sharmake11 monikaseth Shalve shah10 Dreamy_Mystique 9n9i9s9h9u9 -dia- preethia sonali_N loads of thankyous for commenting and giving your suggestions.

please keep commenting as it motivate me to write and don't forget to press the like button. Thanx
here is the update.

PART 8:

4th may

6 pm

She had been sitting there all day .she was getting dizzy.but she didn't care . she kept on praying. Maan was still unconscious. She got up. Bleeding , fatigurd , hungry she could not even stand properly.She stumbled.The monitor started beeping. Doctors rushed in. She staggered towards the stairs. Lost control and slipped. His heartbeats were going crazy.His b.p was shooting. She rolled over to the last step and fainted .he moved his hand to hold her..

6:30 pm

She was rushed in the emergency . Doctors shifted her to the icu..

They both were lying there side byside only barrier between them was of the curtain separating the 2 beds.

7 pm

They were still unconscious.another patient was being shifted from icu . to shift him to stretcher they needed to put the strecher between geet's bed and that pt's bed.During this hassle geet's bed was pushed towards maan's bed and there hands touched each other .

Sudden current ran in their bodys.both jolted to life.They both sat up at their beds.looked for each other but again the curtain was there.Doctors rushed to their sides. They were amazed that how come both of them suddenly came back to life.icu was crowded hence they were immidiatey shifted to their separate rooms..

Both nivi and vickey were relieved.

Later when nurse came in to give her medicine She told her how she and that other patient suddenly gained conscious when their hands touched each other.

9 pm

Both maan and geet had been impatiently waiting for vickey and nivi to go home so that they could stroll around and see who was the other patient. Both knew it had to be the same person from their dreamz..finally the visiting hours were over and vickey and nivi were pushed out of the room..the moment nurses left them alone after their night visits. Both rushed out of the room. Too weak to move.yet trying their best to reach their destination as soon as possible.they took support of walls to move searching for the desired room no. they were so engrossed in looking for the room no that they missed seeing each other when they crossed eachother in the hall way. Finally they found it maan in front of room 302 and geet in front of 320.

They took a deep breath and opened the door with beated breaths.but'..

There was no one in the room..

Maybe he left

Maybe she left

Both returned to their rooms. Dejected yet happy that their dreams were true.

5th may:

6 pm

I don't care ..

I need 2 tickets as soon as possible. I have to fly back this wk.

But sir there are no flights available esp first class is impossible to get.

I don't care. Do whatever I need tickets for Chicago right now.which ever flight whatever class. I don't give a dam.

Sir I will try.

I'll inform you as soon as something comes up..

Well do it fast.

Vickey just stood there open mouthed.

Close that big mouth of yours. You aren't watching some 9th wonder of world.

Uh ' yeah'. Wo apki medicine. He placed medicines on his side table and quickly went out.

Omg he just blasted that poor soul for no fault oh his..what is he going to do with me once he take me back..vickey apni azadi k akhri din enjoy kar le phir to ye Hitler tere sir pe sawar ho jae ga..well he is 9th wonder of world.

7th may

Vickey .our tickets been confirmed for 10th pack your luggage..

Yes bro..

Nivi oh I am so happy I am going to meet him on 10th

Dev 10th ko ara hai?

Nivi' gosh y do u always irritate me.dev wont be back from malasia until 20th. And me apne dd se milne ki baat kar ri the remember that astrologist.

Well even if u blv that astrologist of yours still it's dev cuz

Whatever whatever . I don't think it's dev. Tujhse to baat karma hi fazool hai

PRECAP:

10TH MAY WHO WILL SHE MEET?

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Beautiful part

loved it!!!!

uss nivi ko mein,...well ll put fevicol to her mouth.

thnx for the PM.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
loved the update...
thanks fr the pm...
make sure its maan she meets and not that stupid dev...
nahin toh main nivi ke saat tumhe bhi pack up karne ki plan karoongi...jokes apart i just dont know ehenever this nivi talks abt dev i just like to strangle her with my hands sachi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

arre .. un logo ko mila do naa ... with happy note .. plzzz .. no fights , no nok - jhok , no misunderstandings ... plzzz ... its a request ...

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