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@all - Thanks friends for all the beautiful & wonderful comments you have showered on & thanks for liking the update ... will be updating shortly ...

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Thanks friends for all the wonderful comments you have showered on me …. Hope you like this update …

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Part 8:-

It's almost evening … maan texts message to both geet & dev & ask them to meet him in geet's room to discuss about karwa chauth … maan then discusses his plan of action with geet & dev … Worried & tensed Geet hugging Maan in front of dev … dev standing at a side …

Geet – maan I am scared & worried … I want you to be there in front of me when I see the moon & I want you to break my fast … I will die

Maan keeps his finger on her mouth … Maan does not allow geet to speak … Maan then kisses geet on her forehead ….

Maan – geet … don't worry … just follow my instructions … every thing will be fine …

Dev – bro … I will leave now …

Maan nods his head …. Dev leaves … as he thought that Maan & geet needed to be left alone for some time … while hugging geet maan reassures her & gives her confidence …

Maan – bharosa hain naa … mujh par …

Geet – haan … khud se bhi jyada …

Maan again kisses her on her forehead & leaves through the balcony …

Later in the evening ….

Geet changes to the red saree what maan gave to her in the sargi & is descending the steps …. Maan who was helping lucky for the karwa chauth preparations spots geet descending the stairs … maan is blown away by her beauty …. Maan is staring at her …. Geet was looking ravishing in the red saree …

maan wishing in his mind - why is it I am not alone with geet …. I so wish I was alone with her & spend some time in peace with my geet ..

maan & geet both are looking at each other … maan trying to be around geet most of the time … geet also was helping maan chori chori chupke chupke … both finding ways to be close to each other …

Finally It's almost night … the moon is about to come out … it was totally dark outside …. the puja is going on … geet is restless & worried as the time is nearing for the moon to come out …

she remembers maan's assurance & is looking at maan … maan then blinks his eyes & keeps his hand on his heart & signals her that he will take care of everything & not to worry … just then there is an announcement by lucky that the moon is visible …

dev made a cocktail for mama as per maan's plan … & changed the contents in the bottle what mama carries with him daily … the cocktail was made with a strong dose of all drinks …

mama was drinking his cocktail … & was fully talli … every1 were appearing 6 … 6 for him … he can see 6 geet's … 6 maan's … 6 dev's … every one in number of 6's … his head was reeling … 6 beeji … 6 tejji … mama was shaking his head so that he comes back to the senses … but poor guy … can't come back to his senses …

all the ladies have assembled in the garden … and they all were standing in front of their husbands …

Fake MSK was made to stand in front of GMSK …. Geet was worried … but she is happy to see maan(SBS) standing right behind DSK … all the ladies started the puja … they take the sieve in their hands & are watching the moon … & then they move the sieves towards their husbands to have a look at their husbands & before they could have a look at their husbands. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

We have a power cut in masi ka home ……it's totally dark & everyone is scattered here & there & there is confusion coz of power cut & there is a power cut in the entire area ….

(it was planned by maan ….. maan sends dev & makes him meet the electricity board & requests them for a power cut …… & electricity board were eager to have a power cut …… so that they can save energy coz it was karwa chauth & the houses in the entire neighbourhood will be lighted & too much energy consumption …so they readily accepted … LOL … so we have a power cut …)

Quickly dev & maan exchange their places … geet has a big smile on her face … now that maan is in front of her …

beeji is calling for tejji & pammi ……. Tejji & pammi & beeji rush inside for candles & some oil lamps & are finding their way to go inside in the dark & cursing the electricity board for the power cut … on karwa chauth …

lucky was with mama holding him as mama was standing beside him & mama could not control himself so he leaned against lucky & was semi - unconscious … mama was giving him a tough time as he was a bit heavy for lucky …

lucky was trying to take him to his room … so he is taking mama inside & is also on his way & as there was a power cut he is having difficulty to take mama inside … lachi comes forward to help lucky so that they can take mama inside ….

so dev … maan & geet were free … as we already know that maan & dev have already exchanged their places … dev has stepped aside from their way …

Geet has her sieve now looks at the moon from her sieve … then she moves the sieve which has a diya placed in it's rim … towards maan sees maan's face from the sieve … maan smiling with a confidence …. Geet is also smiling back at maan with full happiness … geet then pours water in front of maan & moon … then bends down to touch his feet & takes his blessings … maan does not allow geet to touch his feet … there by stopping her in the middle … maan then takes the glass of water from the puja ki thali what geet was holding … then makes her drink water … he then feeds her laddu from her plate … geet bites the laddu half & feeds the other half to maan …

Maan there by breaks geet's fast & without revealing his Identity … geet also feeds maan … geet & maan hug …

Maan – geet … are you happy now …

Geet – yes maan … I am very very happy …

Maan – I will meet you in your room … you will have your dinner with me … samjhi tum ….

Dev – bro … make it fast before any one co …

Dev's mouth is left open & does not finish his sentence … Maan & geet come out of the hug … As they notice that … these 3 were caught by some one …. Who was in a total shock … & was about to faint right in front of them …. It is none other than nandi the bail … she is holding her head …. Yes nandi saw everything …….. dev holds her … so that she does not fall …

dev … maan & geet take her to a side … & tell her their story … nandi understands that she is the one who is responsible for the whole confusion …. & she jumped to the conclusion & Misunderstood dev as maan …. when she saw dev talking to to geet in the market & tells them that it was all because of her …

geet is angry & shouting at nandini …

geet – nandini … na aav dekha na taav kisi ko bhi mera pati bana diya tune …

nandini – sorry di …

maan – leave it geet …

geet – kya maan … aap bhi …

maan – geet … rehne do …

maan – nandini do not to reveal our secret … we will reveal the truth ourselves when the time comes in front of masi …

nandini – di & jiju … don't worry … I will not reveal the secret … even I will join you all … mazaa aa raha hain …

geet – mazaa aa rahan hain … tujhe … haan …

maan – geet ab chod do …

geet – ok … maan … only because you are saying so … other wise …

In the mean while … As we know … masi …tejji … pammi they go inside to bring candles & lamps … they pick the candles & lamps & are coming back & as they were walking towards the entrance … they encouter with lachchi , mama & lucky … mama who was totally talli … falls on the ground … lucky was unable to lift mama … he could not even move him an inch … tejji helps lucky in lifting mama … they take mama to his room & drop him on the bed …

Tejji – yeh mama bhi na … he drank even today … it's a limit …. It's good that you bought him inside other wise it would have been an insult to beeji …

Lucky – haan veerji …

Tejji – chal ab … every one must be waiting outside ….

Masi … pammi … lachi … they are already outside with candles … They start lighting the candles … tejji & lucky come … they finish lighting the candles & lamps …. Then we get power back … as dev called the electricity board & asked them to give back power as the work has been accomplished successfully …

Pammi comes to geet …

Pammi – geet lets start the puja … come …

Geet – bhabhi … I finished my puja … when there was no power …

Pammi – why geet …

Geet – bhabhi I was feeling hungry … so maan wanted me to finish my puja early …

Pammi – you are feeling hungry today … normally you run away from food naa …

Geet – haan bhabhi …

Pammi – geet you are feeling hungry … wait I will ask lachchi … to arrange food for you …

Nandini intervenes …

Nandini – bhabhi … I will take care of geet di's dinner …

Pammi informs masi that geet finished her karwa chauth …. While there was no power & as she was feeling hungry … so she will be having her dinner early … masi is fine as geet normally does not eat … so they did not object her as she wants to have her dinner … nandini arranges for two plates & geet too helps her … nandini & geet both take the food & lassi upstairs to geet's room … geet & nandini are waiting for maan to arrive … but maan aka ballu is busy … as he was being called by one or the other …

Nandini – di … why don't you have your dinner … jiju is busy … they are not leaving him …

Geet – no … nandini … I will not … until he comes & feeds me …

Nandini – di … I will go and check …

Nandini then goes to meet maan … but she meets dev instead. nandini apologizes to dev & asks about maan … dev informs her that maan was busy … & he also tells her that maan also was fasting since morning & he too has not eaten anything because geet was fasting for him & also tells her that maan has asked him not to inform geet about his fast …

nandini is happy that her maan jiju is not like what she thought & he actually is a gentleman & loves her di a lot & to win her geet di back he was acting as a driver & was bearing all the insult & is doing all hard work … even after wining her di back … he is still working a driver … so that he can win her beeji & tejji veerji's heart & also he wanted to clear their misunderstandings which they had against him …

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Finally it's around 10:30 P.M. … everyone had their dinner … geet was feeling hungry … nandini comes back to check on geet … maan finally comes to geet's room through her balcony.

maan comes & hugs geet from back … nandini closes their door as soon as she spots maan … Geet is naaraz with maan … maan understoods that geet might be naaraz …

maan – sorry meeshti …

geet taking his hands off her … nandini is standing in a corner & observing these two in action & smiling …

geet – you found time now … after your busy schedule …

maan – forgive me … meeshti … please … come … let's have dinner …

geet – I don't want to eat …

maan – please ….

Geet – no …

maan – fine … let me see what is there to eat …

maan then sits on the couch & opens the plates … geet now comes & sits next to maan … maan now keeps the plate in front of her … geet was feeling hungry … but was controlling herself … maan took spoon of phirni & takes it in front of geet lips … then again changes the direction of the spoon & was about to keep it in his mouth to tempt geet & is observing her for her reaction …

geet – khayiye … maze le ke khayiye … aur khayiye …

maan – khaungaa … kyun nahin … all the dishes look so delicious & mouth watering …

geet – fine … enjoy …

geet stands up … maan holds her hand & pulls her so that she falls on the couch & is seated beside him …

maan – geet … come on stop it & have your dinner I know you are feeling hungry …. & I got late because of your brother's the work they were giving me …

geet then thinks that she has acted enough & stops being stubborn … She then takes the plate & the spoon from maan … maan was happy that geet finally gave in …

geet – maan … open your mouth …

maan – geet … first you …

maan takes the other plate & the spoon in it so that he can feed geet phirni …

geet – maan I know you also have not eaten anything since morning … come on have it …

maan – how do you know geet …

geet - maan … I know you very well … how can I forget that … when I am fasting for you ... you will never have the heart to eat anything … until some thing goes into my stomach … so

maan – so …

geet – open your mouth …

geet starts feeding maan & maan also starts feeding geet …

nandini was happy as well as shocked that geet knows maan so well & that he also has not eaten anything since morning … when no one informed her about maan's fast …

dev who guessed nandini will be in geet's room … enter's the room while maan & geet were feeding each other … watches that nandini is watching maan & geet … dev goes close to nandini & is speaking to her …

dev – yeh dono … aise hi hain … they both love each other so much … that they know each other very well …

nandini – I really love the love these two have for each other …

dev – hmm … you should see them when they fight … they both are so funny when they fight … they fight like kindergarderners …

nandini - is it really …

dev – yes …

nandini & dev feel uncomfortable … as they never had such type of conversation …

dev – I think we should leave these two love birds alone … any how they don't even care if we exist also … isn't it …

nandini – yes … I think so you are right …

dev – thank god … finally you have agreed with me …

nandini – I am sorry … for all the misunderstandings …

dev – it's ok …

nandini – geet di … we are leaving …

geet & maan are still feeding each other … nandini & dev walk towards geet & maan …

nandini – geet di … geet di …

nandini shakes geet by touching her shoulders … geet & maan come back to the world …

geet – haan nandini …

nandini – we are leaving … lock the door di … so that no one spots you both …

geet – oh ok …

dev – bro … take care … please don't leave any proof this time … warna … god knows what your salaah's will do to me …

nandini gives dev a sharp look … dev gets scared …

dev in his mind – saaleh tho saaleh …. Saali bhi kuch kam nahin hi …

maan – don't worry dev … they will not find any proof of MSK …

dev & nandini leave … geet locks the door … they both finish feeding each other … keep their plates in the side …

maan & geet are having lassi … geet then spots that there is cream of lassi left on maan's lips … she then lifts her hand … to wipe the cream of his lips … maan holds her hand & does not allow her to wipe it with her hand & both are having an eye contact …

maan – not with your hand geet …

geet – then …

maan – think …

geet – what do you mean maan … if not with hand then how to clean it ….

Maan coming closer to geet … maan closing the space between their lips … geet looking into maan's eyes … she understood what maan has in his mind …. geet blushing at the naughty thought what maan got & gets up from the couch & moves away from him … Maan goes behind her & coils his hands around her waist …

maan – geet you are looking like a dulhan today …. In this red saree… you were looking so beautiful just like a moon …

(as soon as maan says moon … maan remembers their conversation on how geet feels about his moon talks … he then thinks that this comparision & the moon talks are different & notices that Geet is blushing & is happy that geet is not naaraz with his moon talks & is ok with his comparision … )

maan was then brushing his face against her hair … later he moves her hair to her right side & gently kisses her shoulder … then places series of kisses from her shoulder to her neck then to her ears … geet releases her self from him & lies down on the bed on her back … maan then goes & lies down next to her on his back … maan then holds her right hand with his left hand & intertwines his fingers in hers … both of them closed their eyes for a few minutes & were at peace … maan then opens his eyes & then gets up & bends over geet … geet senses that maan is bending over her & opens her eyes … both have eye lock … maan is closing in the space between them …. Geet lips were parted & were trembling … maan intertwines his right hand in geet's left hand … & closes the space in between them … he plants a kiss on her forehead … then another kiss on her right eye & then another on her left eye … then her left cheek & then her right cheek … maan could see geet blushing … he then kisses her chin … & then notices that Geet lips were still parted & were trembling … he now closes the space between their lips & finally seals her lips with his … they both have a passionate kiss filled with love … their first kiss on their first karwa chauth … after they both come out of the kiss … maan lies on his back beside geet with his eyes closed & still has her right hand clutched in his left hand … geet then hugs maan & has her head on maan's chest … maan also coils his hands around her … both hug each other & sleep in each other's arms for some time … maan then rolls geet on her back & then plants another kiss on geet's forehead & gets up … but geet still has her hands in his & is not leaving his hands …

Maan – geet … I will leave now …

Geet holding maan's hand …

Geet – maan how long we have to fake … I am tired …

Maan – not long geet … very soon I will reveal myself … I will have to leave now …. Will see you in the morning ….

Geet & maan hug each other … maan leaves … after reaching outhouse maan texts geet to go to bed & not to think much …

Geet calls him … maan & geet speak to each other & fall asleep while they are talking to each other …

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Girls please let me know how you like this update ….. & there will be no dev & nandini romance in this SS …. At the most there will be a cordial relationship between them …… but no romance between dev & nandini ….

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Posted: 14 years ago
me frst agn
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loved the part di
thnx fr ue pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifully written:)👏👏
just loved it:)

but i'm happy with the fact that u stated-😊
& there will be no dev & nandini romance in this SS …. At the most there will be a cordial relationship between them …… but no romance between dev & nandini ….

do update soon. thanks for the pm.😊😊😊
i always love ur updates. they are really sweet and easy to imagine. the whole karvachauth scenario was MSK style.
moreover i'm too happy with the fact that they shared their fist kiss on their first karvachauth☺️. i'm loving it!!!

Ankita:)😊😊😊
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wowww such a beautiful update and their 1st kiss on 1st karwa chaut dreamyyy
continue soon
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hima i am glad no devil-nandini romance...but i really liked the first kiss...aww soo sweet...
Edited by rajeev the best - 14 years ago
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hai kya update hai, loved it, its like ddlj but different at the same time, and power cut😲 🤣 loved that bit so so much, liked also that landini knows about the truth, now thats like the film with AB, dharam and sharmila and jaya, hai love it so so much, i hope something like this happens
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wowww... superb...
First kisss...😳
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Hima, loved the update, I liked your idea of the power cut it solved all the issues and I knew that Nandini will come to know the truth (BTW liked the name you gave her Nandi Bail🤣)
Mamaji ko do nahin che che dikh rahe the 🤣 u bhi na Hima, you are too funny
Loved the end to the evening, chalo it's getting closer to our dreams coming true 😉
Can't wait for the next update 😊

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