OS: A stormy night updated part 3 ,page 13

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-MansiKohli-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

that was too HAWT to handle.😳😳😳

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

awesome ... loved it ..

thnx 4 d pm ...

plzz .. do pm me wen u start ur new os ..

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Absoluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

AWESOME...Perfectly described everything..I was sooo ☺️ ☺️...Loved it to the core...😉...cud infact visualize MAAN & GEET doing it...😛

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Anupama

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Awasome dear. Loved it to the core

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saanjh rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

omg so hot and beautiful superb dear 😊

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-eiya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

that was sooo ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️...

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Stupendously fab!!!u're really awesome honey.the first part where they both aplogize to each other was so much well written.and then their love making was so so so passionate perfectly apt with the character of maan and the possesion he feels for her was so much visible.
Overall ths was a great pleasure to read such a good piece of literature and i plead u to write more os and ffs.not to forget hunzz u need to update ur ff.
Once again thank u so much for giving the pleasure with ur writing and hell it was soo much worth it!!!