OS: A stormy night updated part 3 ,page 13

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

part 3
wow awesome...
just mind blowing...
very romantic...

soon start the new fic...and pm me...

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Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Awesome update!!⭐️ A perfect blend of emotional and physical union! 😳 And water connected till the very end. 😳

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

that was too HAWT to handle.😳😳😳

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Hey Kathie ,

just came across ' A Stormy Night ' ☺️

Wow , just wow , love , desire , passion at its best 😳 👏

Gr8 job dear 👍🏼

Do start ur new story , will send you buddy request 😃 ...

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Neetu2825

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Woh😳That left me quite speechless😉

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awedouny_99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

just read that article which says geet asks maan to leave her beejis house🤢😡and was so fuming in rage until i came across your OS..and girl im much better now.😆..looks like ghsp is not going to give me any hope of rectfying itself so you have work cut out for yourself meaning im waiting for more installments😉...i have come to depend on OSs written by Maneetians to fill the void created by haywire ghsp track😭

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kathie_berns

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: awedouny_99
just read that article which says geet asks maan to leave her beejis house🤢😡and was so fuming in rage until i came across your OS..and girl im much better now.😆..looks like ghsp is not going to give me any hope of rectfying itself so you have work cut out for yourself meaning im waiting for more installments😉...i have come to depend on OSs written by Maneetians to fill the void created by haywire ghsp track😭

lol... Actually i had written this os long back when maan had just become a driver. This track should have ended long back but they are pulling it like a gum i have no clue why. Hopefully they can take some ideas from the numerous ff's and os's written before it is too late. 😊

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ns.1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

wow !! awesome kathie...too good and hot...😉😉..it was just perfect...please write another one even more passionate and hot...😆😆

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Read this OS too. Very well potrayed track of Maneet coming back to delhi after Maan's revealed in front of Geet's amritsar family.

Their passion, desire, love, care, hunger, possesiveness (of Maan, when he saw her towel about to fall in her rain dance) and trust (of Geet, when they were making love). All were very well expressed in words. It was indeed a pure love surrounded by passion and wildness.