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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update Dear,
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Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...please update soon n thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys, please comment to let me know what is working and what is not.

Please note that I do not have any medical background so disease names, medicines and symptoms are all made up.

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Chapter 3 – Runaway Bride(groom's sister)

Today Night 11:30 PM

The Khurana mansion in Delhi was shining like a jewel. The lighting has been done to enhance the beauty of white mansion and it looked like a moon in the expanse of dark night. After all marriage ceremonies of the only son of the house - Rahul Khurana were in full swing. Loud music could be heard from the hall mixed with laughter and chit chat. Sangeet party was dwindling down and guests were filing out of the grandly decorated hall with candles and white orchids.

A beautiful girl dressed in white lehnga choli looked on at the moon as if searching for answers in the sky. Her eyes were full of many emotions she was feeling at this moment – happiness to see her brother finally getting married, sad to not witness, scared of the future, pain of her family and last but not the least vaccum of loneliness she was going to enter. She finally blinked and moved to the washroom to change into jeans and a comfy t-shirt. She glanced at the letter kept on her side table once again and with one final look at what she was leaving behind; she stepped on the sill of her window and climbed down the tree. She glanced back one final time at the shining jewel and with tears got lost in the darkness of night.

She opened eyes and with a set jaw, moved to the gate for her flight to Mumbai. Settled in her seat she couldn't help but think of the events which happened today morning to force her into this decision; knowing well the pain this will give her family.

Today Morning 09:00AM

Rahul was climbing two stairs at a time shouting for Geet – Oh maharani…kitni der aur lagane wali hai…sab breakfast pe intezaar kar rahein hain.

He was now shouting at her bathroom door.

Geet looked around herself and panicked…Babaji please don't let him come inside. Door is also open…please Babaji. She looked around herself. She was almost lying unconscious with pain on the floor. Blood was dripping from her nose and mouth and it looked like a blood bath on white tile flooring. She will not be able to hide or explain any more if Rahul entered and her last wish, her last dream of seeing her brother married will be lost. Rahul was very attached to her; separated by only 10 mins at time of birth and she knew he will need Pari by her side to go thru the coming days. She could not see this marriage fall apart and with her inner strength she clenched her teeth and managed to reply – I am changing my clothes. Will be out in a sec. She somehow reached her injection and managed to pull herself out.

Geet thought about the fateful day two months ago when she fainted with a severe headache in the office washroom.

Two months ago –

Just as a precaution, she went to her family doctor who suggested some tests. Her entire world had come shattering down when doctor uncle had told her that she was suffering from nemocytis. The deadly disease which sucked your life out. Chances of survival were negligible. He had already consulted with some doctors in US and London and her best chance was the latest breakthrough surgery available in Mumabi's Leelavati hospital. Maan Singh Khurana was an extremely busy doctor but he was the best man for the job. Geet closed her eyes and thanked Babaji for at least this much mercy (She is an inherent optimistic !!!!!). She knew that howsoever busy Maan maybe, he will take out time for her once Bauji (Maan's father) knew about this. It didn't matter they had not met for last 12 years but their families were still very close. She thanked doctor uncle and reminded him of patient doctor confidentiality and her wish not to tell anyone including her family about this as she wished to do so herself.

By the team she had reached home she was in tears. All she wanted was to hug Rahul and cry her heart out. She wanted to lie in her dad's lap. She knew her family will support her though somewhere she was scared of seeing her impending death in their eyes. She ran inside but before she could burst out she saw her brother pacing the study frantically. Even before Geet could utter a word, he embraced her in a bear hug and cried. She was confused. Did Rahul found out? But How? She asked him gently what the matter was.

Geet you gotta help me. I don't know what to do. You know how much I love Pari. Today, her mamaji spoke very rudely to me. He didn't even let me meet Pari and he is marrying her off to somebody. We need to tell dad and mom about this. Please fix this Geet. She is my life and I can never be happy without my Pari in my life.

Geet was overwhelmed. She made Rahul drink some water to calm him down. She asked him to wait till the evening and she promised she will fix this.

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Precap – Angel's message

Friends, I just want to mention that I have envisioned this FF to be family oriented along with Maneet moments. Let me know if this is getting boring and I can tune it accordingly. You will have to wait for one or two more updates before Maneet moments. But I promise once they meet, there will be plenty to come.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Haawww what did you do!!!

Geet ko kya hogaya hai

Lekin aik tara sa acha hai...Ab wo Maan se bhi mil le gi!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update
m sad 4 Geet
but hope Maan can save her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love the concept interesting one amazing character both parts fabulous dear but pls pls dont kill geet i know have faith on yu i'll wait how geet cured wow for change geet workholic
love raj & rashab
friendship so specialy
on
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
pls do pm me
Edited by sharmake11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wow..awsome update.
sad for geet.
hope geet n maan meet soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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poor geet!...
can't wait e=wen maan and geet will meet!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
awesome part.
loved it.
feel sad for geet.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
loved geet ab woh maan se milegi thanks a lot for this part i feel bad for her but happy also thank you for pm and update

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