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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful work sweety loving this new avtar of Maan..doc
looking forwad to see more
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Guys, please comment as it will motivate me to write further……….

Please note that I do not have any medical background so disease names, medicines and symptoms are all made up.

Also, I have lot of respect for people who do not just run after money but go for research and teaching to give back to the community. Hence, please no offense intended as this is just my POV on such people and how sometime society judges them

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Chapter 2 – Bachna Ae Haseeno

And now, the last and most expected act of farewell party for the final year MD students from AIIMS. Enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Background music starts –

A smart, handsome guy in a white shirt, blue jeans with red guitar in his hand on the stage, starts playing and singing –

Yeah baby when you see me coming Yeah Yeah you better run for cover

Yeah Yeah coz you know when I find you Yeah Yeah Im gonna be your lover

Tujhse log kahenge, Na kar pyar mujhe Main tho lakh bura hoon, neend chura loon, hosh uda doon

Mein tho baho mein le ke Raah bhula doon, baat bana doon Chahe jahaan dil ko chupa Baaton hi baaton mein, do mulakaton mein le loon

Baachna ae haseeno, Lo mein aa gaya

Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya

Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

Girls swoon, clap and dance where as guys…let's just say they know there is no point in being jealous of the dildar dude so better enjoy!!!!!

Yeah baby when you see me coming Yeah Yeah you better run for cover Yeah Yeah coz you know when I find you Yeah Yeah Im gonna be your lover

Backstage –

Wow, song chose is just like you. Do you even remember the number of girlfriends you had in last 6 years; said Aditya.

Maan smirked. Every one of them. Total Numbers of girl in college – 67. No of girls worth dating – 52. Number of girlfriends – 47 because the last one stole my heart and I am a converted man. And my darling must be waiting for me; so bye see ya at hostel later

Maan quickly moved to the partying crowd searching for his Jaan….She looked beautiful and regal in a black knee length dress. Maan couldn't remove his gaze from her face.

1:00 AM Boy's hostel –

Adi is worried where Maan is….saale ke to thoda sa padhke bhi number aate hain par meri bhi to soche. Where is he? Ring marta hoon

Hello (mumbled and jumbled)

Kahan Hai, Kya kar raha hai yaar

Samira ke saath…kya kar rah haaon bata nahin sakta.

Maan throws the phone away and continues his kiss. His one hand is in Samira's hair and one caressing her thigh thru the dress. He inches his hand upwards and starting stroking her on top of her inners while kissing her passionately. Samira moans and puts her hand in back pockets and presses him from behind on to her more tightly. He is completely turned on is very close to loosing it all but remembers he has some important and happy news to share with his Jaan.

He disentangles himself from Samira and - I have something important to tell you. You are going to be so happy baby that we can continue after that.

What is it baby…..

You remember I had applied for a research lab post in Switzerland. I got the approval today. After my exam I will be going to Switzerland to pursue research.

But why will you want to do that…I mean you already have job in AIIMS and other top hospitals. Why do you want to waste your career in research?

Maan was very offended. But you said that you are ok with it when I applied

I did not want to break your heart but I never thought you were serious.

Well I am serious. This is what I want to do. I am fascinated by nemocytis and want to take part in this research for better results.

But what about the money?

I don't care….I have my entire life to earn that….come on babes understand…..i really want to do this. It is a two year research project and I am really excited to be part of it.

If you don't get a god practice now, you will always remain behind. I am sorry but for me my career and money is very important. You have to choose between me or this stupid project. And don't think I will wait for you for two years. It is not happening. I am with you because you are the most popular guy but a researchist….uggh….

What are you saying Samira…I love you…

Love and Maan Singh Khurana…Do you even know how many girlfriends you have had…

But I have been faithful to you and you know it….I never cheated anyone…They all knew what they were getting into….You are the only one I committed myself to….

Yeah right!!!!!!!!!!but news flash, I don't love you…it was a pass time for me and a good catch. I don't want to spoil my image by being linked to a boring nerd.

4 years later………….

Maan is at the breakfast table having his breakfast.

Juhi – At least have one paratha beta

No time mom….i have a surgery in 45 mins…Bye…Maan rushed out with a toast in his mouth

Rishab sighed seeing his son. He was happy on one side that his son was now a world famous surgeon. He always had the brains and his research with his swiss partners had lead to a breakthrough. Because of this he was a hot contender for Nobel prize in medical this year.

But along the line he had lost something big. He has lost the warmth and zeal towards the life along with his music. He had not touched his Guitar since then. Although Rishab hated Maan's flirty ways and still maintained that Samira was a bad influence but he couldn't help seeing the lonelinees which his son had wrapped himself in after she left him high and dry. Maan kept himself busy and surrounded with work and being a leading surgeon at Leelavati hospital, Mumbai didn't help either leaving hardly anytime for himself.

Rishab just looked at Babaji and asked for an angel who can save his son and bring back the music, warmth and soul back in his son's dull life. He needed his life's song back.

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Precap – Runaway Bride(groom's sister)

Guys I have given a big update (more than 1000 words). Please Please give some long comments telling me what is working and what is not so that I can make this more interesting for you all.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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an awesome update...
samira is a complete idiot.......

looking forward for next update
keep writing

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sam she is total Pagal that i like it....Maan like his personality and looking for next update thanks a lot for pm and this part 4 year .leap very nice

I am sure geet going to bring
music, warmth and soul back in his life
Edited by monikaseth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting.............
plz add me in ur pm list.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
awesome part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice updates ...

plzz add me to the pm list

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start!
continue soon!
plzzz pm me next time!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff...
add me too in the PM list...
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