ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 80

i loved both the updates amru👏...i am loving the s*xual tension between maan and geet (atleast that is how i am going to look at it)😍😳😃...and the last part between isra and prashant was hilarious🤣...can't wait for the next update!

Originally posted by: undisclosed

i loved both the updates amru👏...i am loving the s*xual tension between maan and geet (atleast that is how i am going to look at it)😍😳😃...and the last part between isra and prashant was hilarious🤣...can't wait for the next update!

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved the updates! Geet being angry at Maan was kinda cute, in a weird way, I think.. My brain's tired too. lol. Ew, Prashant. *shudders* She pulled his ear? Wow. I wonder what that looked like from Farhan's pov. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

Originally posted by: jazzerette

I loved the scene you put in between Maan and Sid. It makes their (Maaneet's) worlds come even more closer.
Yes it does - but then Sid did go away so how does it seem now??

And LOL at the last scene!! What a weird position that would be. And what a moment for Farhan to enter. Men like him notice everything silently, they always see but never say. But they can always be drawn out of their silence when tempted with the ridiculous.

I have to say Farhan is the observant one. He sees all and assesses in his own way.

But please do find a way to incapacitate Prashant!!😡 Or atleast make Geet seal his lips with some super fast glue!! Or some other part of his anatomy could be sealed off. Na kutta khara reh sakega...na baith sakega!!😈😈😈

A surprise in store then...hang in there.

Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan

Superb updates dear.
How cute when Geet comes to Maan's office nd show her anger to him 😳
Just loved it.
Continue soon...
Double thnxxx 4 d two updates & thnxxx for pm

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

brilliant ff...

i jst read it in one go..

pls add me to ur pm list pls...