MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 9

oh hello who do u think ll send m the pm?
maana ki hum thode buzy the lakin iska matlab yeh to nahi tat u ll forget m!


ah! neva mind the part was..............AWESOME 🥳man! loved it n plz plz plz don seperate dem. i love the way u play wit the words yar awesome.
but i wont forget tat u didnt pm me. 😭😡

hey i gotta rush...sleepy... 😊 i replied to ur beautiful comment on my OS...thanks again...

Originally posted by: junglli billi

oh hello who do u think ll send m the pm?
maana ki hum thode buzy the lakin iska matlab yeh to nahi tat u ll forget m!


ah! neva mind the part was..............AWESOME 🥳man! loved it n plz plz plz don seperate dem. i love the way u play wit the words yar awesome.
but i wont forget tat u didnt pm me. 😭😡

hey neetiiiiiiiiiiii!

That was so freaking awesome! One hell of an amazing update! So many things happened.....Maan came there, they danced and felt their love for each other, enjoyed each other's closeness and company. Dev proposed to her and she agreed in a daze. Her getting kidnapped and Maan saving her.....and the most awaited part.....the truth! She knows who he is.....everything is out in the open! It's a great update! Can't wait to know how Maan reacts now....after knowing he caused her so much pain......do continue soon.

Updated my comment on page 1... 😃
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hi reet

Reet..... I luved every word of it!

Originally posted by: humz_786

Me third yaaaaaay
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Congratulations on the third thread, hope you open many more... 😃

Coming to your update..

It was simply amazing, I am at a loss of words it was simply outstanding, and fabulous... 👏⭐️
The update made me happy, sad, laugh and cry... So many emotions in one update too good... 👏
First if all thank you for writing such a long part 😊
How can you say that it sucks? It was awesome.. 😃

It was an action, romantic packed update..
Loved their little romance at the beginning 😳, the whole dance, and loved all the songs used as well 😊
You portrayed each emotion so beautiful; the way Geet was acting after Maan had left, she was stil living in "their" world 😳 Maan for the first time let himself a litlle free, and loved the way she said to him that he was her birthday present 😳
😲 She unknowigly accepted Dev's proposal, hmm.. Will that create problems in the near future....?
😲Geet finds out that he is Chief/ Guru and Maan... Loved her reaction to it as well, as she doesn't know his reason behind it, and he also now knows that she was missing him the whole while...!!

Loved how you keep the suspense of each update 😊
And I am sure Geet got the birthday suprises of her life... Romance, happines, and tears

As well as giving me tears with the update, it was quite emotional as well, especially with Geet's emotional outburst 😭

Got nothing more to say.. It was hard to write what I wrote above, as the update gave me a loss of words..

Thank you sooooo much for such a masterpiece of an update 🤗
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well ...

Originally posted by: Kkadss

Reet..... I luved every word of it!

Amazing update as usual. I had tears towards the end.

Keep up the gud wrk n congrats on the new thread

-Kads

great ...m flattered ..and super happy u know why

reet omg fabulous update.............brilliant.,...............

seriously it took me 1 1/2 to read this update putting myself in geet and maan shoes...............omg me crying😭😭😭😭😭
so emotional........dialogues were awesome................especially this

"When I saw you first ...i never thought I will ever like you .. when I meet you ..i never thought I will die to meet you again.........when u kissed me breathless I never thought I will yearn to be kissed .........when I kissed you I was afraid to love you .....when I love you ......i m afraid to lose you "

also geet asking abt the bday present.............each and every line is so beautifully written................i can feel their love and pain..............

i don't find enuf words to praise you dear...........you torn my heart today...........

only thing i didn't like is geet saying yes to dev ofcourse unknowingly........the chandelier incident should have happened before she said Yes.............**greedy me**