MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 11

Reet,

Brilliant, Awesome dear..

entire update was a roller coaster ride for me...

I was holding my breath when she ran out in search for him.. and when she found him, claimed him.. omg I was dead..

and when she knew the truth .. Maan, Guru and cheif was the same person and the SLAP..

I was able to experience each and every emotion you portrayed..

I would dedicate the update to Geet .. Once again hats off 2 you .. great work..

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I will be reading this update once again and I am sure I will be commenting again n again..


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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

awwwwwwww!!

puth after long time i m getting such a long comment from you ...

so i hav to mak u cry for a long detailed report !

kidding honey !

and birthday present bala idea....

i remember someone was demanding in a one liner ..give geet her bday presentt

so made it like that !

m really happy ...

i loved both the parts ...!

thank u so much puth ...

future parts ?? dev ..uh he has to be there ! u know ! lol

love u so muc h darling 😳

you need to update on the weekends to get long long comments Reet😉😉😉😉
*Just kidding** was very very busy with work and my parents visit to the US😛

emotionally i am very much attached to this part compared to the last 2-3 updates..........also more maaneet moments and obviously you get long comments😉😉😉

future i am not worried because i trust you😉😉😉

omg will read this part atleast 10 times more.........

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

ahh ...! i m flattered nightingale !

did i make the post 1 st kiss part.... shallow . means the part before the dance .......i need to know that

can u tell me that ?

i didnt focus much on intimacy on dancing to make geet realize that he had a grace hidden behind those bloodshed..

was it unromantic ?

no..it was not shallow at all..it was very realistic with the correct amount of drama needed..starting from the point Geet heard INCOGNITO,the way Geet's restlessness and desperateness was expressed was perfect..how she was so dying to see him and meet him and how she felt when she heard his voice and how she just felt seeing him actually their..👏..very nicely written..than the kiss was simply BEAUTIFUL and needed..afterall she has been waiting for even a glimpse of him for months and here he was standing right in front of her!..the post kiss part was romantic but not overdone..I think it was perfect that way because the time they have been away from each-other(esp. since Geet only knows that she met him last the day he dropped her at her home),and the way they had been longing for each-other-they just needed to be in each-others arm and feel that the other person was actually with them and it was not just a figment of their imagination..I felt that TOGETHERNESS is what mattered at that time and nothing more!..and when they were dancing on"so close",never did once I felt it was not passionate enough because the lyrics were so well matching their situation and their heart's condition that it felt just right!..Also I liked how this time you were expressing Maan's feelings side by side to Geet's feelings⭐️

dev ..ok ...yes thats needed and u know that !!😳

however m nt quite satisfied with the geet's recognizing part ...i wrote it in a jiify before posting

..it cud be made more realistic ..i read it jus now ...feeling extraa drama

eks !

I cannot find any flaws in that part too😆but seeing your fantabulous writing skills,I cannot doubt that you could have even done better if you are saying(how do you do that😲)😉😊

i love u bul ...thank u so much for all ur help and support

thanks are tiny words in front of friends like u and reva

thanx again

your most welcome Reet🤗..and don't thank too much because as I said earlier,you truly deserve all the appreciation..lots of love❤️

Loved it...so moving cant wait to hear those words! x

omg.such a wonderful update.luvd it to the core.so beautifully written..amazing.i just lived their each nd every action,their emotions.such beautiful kisses.magical....

Im speechless 👏 u made me cry 😭 beautiful update!

congrats on new thread

hey congrats for u r new thread ............the update was superb....

congratulations for the new thread
update was toooooo good👏
loved reading the whole part
awesome, awesome update
do continue
waiting for the next part