MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 7

Originally posted by: preethia

speechless...........

lots of things in one update..............

it took me some time to get things settle down in my mind...........

just thing strikes my mind..........pal mein kushi......pal mein gussa....pal mein pyar........pal mein dard.....

so much of emotions.......when she saw him first there and the moment she share with him is filled with anger, happiness, fear (of losing him), love, passion..........the wya u hv written it i was amazed......then when he was leaving i cud feel her pain of losing her life forever...........when she was in trance and dev was proposing her my heart beat just rose so high i was sweating.........and i was screaming........jhalli apne chief ke bare mein sapne dhekna band kar aur sun kya ho raha hain and when she said yes and the happiness around her i just lost my beat........i had tears in my eyes......i was scolding her umpteenth time for being a jhalli................still i am angry @ her for that mess...........i am sure thats gonna create prob for maaneet.........

when she encounters maan and demands him to prove her that he is not chief and he is not able to hold himself and kisses her............the pain, the anger, the anguish of her sufferings and he being there and never showed up...........were just awesome in ur writing.............u made me cry along with maan with her outburst...............i knew this was coming but not this soon...............oops ..shud i tak that as m unpredictable ..lolz kidding

these were the feelings i had for geet and for maan............exceptional................

his happiness, his depair, his sufferings for not being to give her wat she wants from him........oh god i just love him............he always stands bw her and her troubles.............when geet was bursting out his heart was bleeding with pain..........uff mujhe rula diya yaar..........after reading the update it took me 15 min to calm myself down to write down the comment...............aww....i m ur convict!

i am not sure wat u hv planned further i think its high time geet has to know abt her chief and everything abt him............he shudnt hide anything form her now as bcoz of him she is going thro this pain and he is the only one who can soothe her pain............pl dont splt them yaar.........i cant even hold myself with geet's outburst.............

i don know whats written in their destiny ...or how they will plan their destiny ! what will dev do ...

gal dev has to do something not like ghsp 's abhinav shukla ...fled away from the dev role and the suspence damped down ..

every person had their own reasonings ..generally except the criminals none is bad ...

may be they dont hav a large heart like the hero or heroine but they hav a heart too !

so neva hate the 3rd person (i like naming that )

pl update the next part soon.............

i will dear 😳

altogether this update is mindblowing, awesome, fantastic............

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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

hello honey

glad u are not mad at me for not updating last night

ok ..i had a chat with reva and asked how she feels about it ...listening to that ...i asked for song to you guys

and i was confused as usual...

felt i written crap and select all shif del ...

results nothing written there ...i had to re write the ntire thing ..but in pieces ...took a long time to sum them up

by the way i loved ur say ..!!

mwaaaaaah ...!!

Originally posted by: maaneet_pisces

hey not all mad...like you said in the update from geet's pont of view "You dont owe us anything"...infact the fact that you take time out n write is wonderful and always makes me feel obliged thinking how people manage to take time from their busy lives...coz reading the update takes me 7 mins while u put in 7 hours (i guess) to write it....i think its both way we love to read ur update n ur writing shows that you love to write :) keep writing.... saying it again i wish this someday comes on the big screen or even the tv screen :)