MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 10

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was so freaking awesome! One hell of an amazing update! So many things happened.....Maan came there, they danced and felt their love for each other, enjoyed each other's closeness and company. Dev proposed to her and she agreed in a daze. Her getting kidnapped and Maan saving her.....and the most awaited part.....the truth! She knows who he is.....everything is out in the open! It's a great update! Can't wait to know how Maan reacts now....after knowing he caused her so much pain......do continue soon.

aww....!!

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

well ...

first of big thanks for the congratulation for the thread

nopes....this will be the last thread i guess !

i loved the bold letters most !

are you sure i didnt make it shallow by the little quipping at the beginning ..i mean before dance ?

yup geet got a pandora's box on her bday !

box ful of emotions ...lol me finding it funny after the whole drama ..i guess i over did it ..

but its done ..n m hell tired to rectify it as well

thank u so much darling for reediting and giving me such a nice comment to drool on

loved it !

Your welcome 😃
Last thread 😒
No you didn't make it shallow at all, the scene before the dance was really good, and needed for them to show each other how much they misssed each other and love each other 😳
Loved the bystander quote "get a room" 😆
I don't think the drama was overdone, it was just right, the perfect reaction 😊

Originally posted by: puth

reet omg fabulous update.............brilliant.,...............

seriously it took me 1 1/2 to read this update putting myself in geet and maan shoes...............omg me crying😭😭😭😭😭
so emotional........dialogues were awesome................especially this

"When I saw you first ...i never thought I will ever like you .. when I meet you ..i never thought I will die to meet you again.........when u kissed me breathless I never thought I will yearn to be kissed .........when I kissed you I was afraid to love you .....when I love you ......i m afraid to lose you "

also geet asking abt the bday present.............each and every line is so beautifully written................i can feel their love and pain..............

i don't find enuf words to praise you dear...........you torn my heart today...........

only thing i didn't like is geet saying yes to dev ofcourse unknowingly........the chandelier incident should have happened before she said Yes.............**greedy me**

awwwwwwww!!

Originally posted by: kadydeep

Reet..........⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Update

I was crying all the while reading the update....Sometimes my tears got so bad....I had to wash my eyes and come back to read....

Awesome.......I am giving u standing Ovation........U are like an empress of pathos..👏

crap math kaho yaar....it was awesome..her pain uufffffffff.kithni ache se likha hai ye me patha hi nehi sakthi.behuth sare words muje pasand aayi.

Cried over nights .....months .....died to see you once .....for few seconds....prayed to god thousand times a day ......only for you ....to see you.......... hold you .....and u ....!!

this one too .i prayed death for myself to have a single glimpse of you

sab kuch pasand hai....sab kuch.maan ko na jaane dena aur maan ka promise.everithing.love u dear.hume ithna acha update dene keliye.....

Originally posted by: humz_786

Your welcome 😃
Last thread 😒
No you didn't make it shallow at all, the scene before the dance was really good, and needed for them to show each other how much they misssed each other and love each other 😳
Loved the bystander quote "get a room" 😆
I don't think the drama was overdone, it was just right, the perfect reaction 😊

Originally posted by: nazsij

crap math kaho yaar....it was awesome..her pain uufffffffff.kithni ache se likha hai ye me patha hi nehi sakthi.behuth sare words muje pasand aayi.

i used to think ...one day my beloved will come and whisk me away from everyone......complete me with all love I always craved for......but never thought he would never love me back ... ye baath meri man se jaa hi nehi reha.

aur ye but you know .....kabhi kabhi ....a faint dream my eyes dared to see.....where you have cuddled me.....like you used to do ...and u know what .................i wanted so desperately that u will hug me tight in ur arms

you havent showed me your face .......you havent told me your name ......u never trusted me... she cupped his face by one hand and made him look at her ... kiun .....kya mai itni buri hu .....darte the? That I will spill the beans to police ...?

this one is my fav But I was so dumb ....u were right there in front of me....partying around ....and me the most stupid person on earth .... waiting for you ....cause I trusted you .......trusted you more than myself .....and you ...???

Cried over nights .....months .....died to see you once .....for few seconds....prayed to god thousand times a day ......only for you ....to see you.......... hold you .....and u ....!!

this one too .i prayed death for myself to have a single glimpse of you

sab kuch pasand hai....sab kuch.maan ko na jaane dena aur maan ka promise.everithing.love u dear.hume ithna acha update dene keliye.....

thank u so much nazsij!

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

oh thank u so much !..

okay ...!

ahh ..get a room !

our nahi to kya ...kahi bhi suru ho jate hai !

samhal na to mujhe hi padhta hai na!

😆
Ha woh toh kahi bhi shuru ho jaate hain, par unhe sambhalna aur rokhna toh mushkil hoga na? 😛😆