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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

aur kitna intezaar
hume hai aapki FF se bahut pyaar
ab to update de do yaar.

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

4 New thread

I could not come to forum & when did saw 151 pages. I though i missed update😲 but no that was full of comments😆

Waiting 4 Update😊

EDITED:

Hey Reet,😊

I know I am late again. 😳😳o.k comment is kind of blabbering then I will say yes as I did not had proper thoughts after update, as they say speechless, I'm wordless though there are quite a lot words here in jumbled sentences.😆

It was wonderful update

Masquerade ball where all pretenses were taken off.👏

Loved to see the Princess into her genuine manifestation.

Incognito is trapped by cognition of love so can't run away. Still He enjoys seeing her restless 4 him, doesn't he?

Uninvited intruder is more acknowledged guest than any other present there. Still teasing Geet.😆

Interesting birthday present. I am sure many want a present like that.

Off course, marriage is commitment 4 life. Love has bound them 4 life already⭐️

Unavoidable separation standing in the way again.

Dev did not know about Geet's ideology about life partner. That was kind of putting her in a fix as she consider him a friend so won't be easy to disregard his proposal, what was his big plan asking her 4 marriage in front of so many people without even discussing things with her. [or he did & we don't know as it was not mentioned(not the one conversation where she said she will accept the one whom Darji selects) as per her knowledge he was not selected]

Did not anyone notice she is in deep thought? Neither shy nor smitten. Dev noticed her distant eyes, & before that her reverie. But I guess he was so happy & wishing that It's his big day to consider it much. I wonder how Geet will react once it's cleared that She is engaged?

The way U mixed the thinking of geet & things around her was fabulous.👏👍🏼

Seems like Rheo had enough of prosecutors' digging the info against him. The way his man "Gate Crashed" the party had striking effect.

Knew Chief will be the rescuer, but he came as Maan. How he still thinks that she won't recognize him?

The way she broke was so sad. Longing for the loved ones can never die no matter how much one try or pretend indifference.

I hope in next update, he can make her realize how much he also missed her.

Continue Soon

Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Stop it Reet dare u say ur i mean ur update sucks it cant b possible, it will b like sunrise 4m west instead of east

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Congrats dear 4 new thread, wish u hav many many many many such thread

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Congratz on the new thread!!!

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

wow awsome one yaar ...waiting still ..

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592851

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

REET SWEETIE . . . PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IF U HAVE WRITTEN ALREADY PLEASE POST IT . . . SINCERE REQUEST PLEASE . . . i am crying like nything . . . it was simply Amazing

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

hey when r we going to find out abt Maan's history. i thought we would get it in this UD.
congrats for new thread.
awsome update.
if this "sucks" for u IDK what will be fabulous for u. this was really awsome.

loved it.
waiting for next part desparately.

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

fabulous update reet nd plz continue soon ....................i m waiting

nd ya congrts for new thread...............

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592851

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Reet I know as a writer one always feels that you haven't done justice with your work but that is natural and I am saying so as that happens with me too . . . one always wants to do better even after giving your best shot . . . and although you are calling it crap, sweetie it is not at all carp . . . one more thing as a writer although one does feel for your creation but as you are aware of what you will write next, the impact is far less as compared to that on the readers who have no idea what is going to happen, and they kill themselves thinking, that is precisely what is happening with me at least, I have been crying ever since she accepted Dev's proposal, her reaction to things was absolutely commendable and you have portrayed each and every emotion beautifully, but since you have it written the next scene already, I do not think you should re-write it as Faith in oneself is above all and you have 2 have faith in ur work.

More to come, lemme me stop crying first