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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

wowwieee

thankx iqra !

nice name ...!

well i donno how many kisses are their ...eeks ...bored with kisses ??

i dont know cause i had written the parts in pieces ..

and hell tired to read that once again ...

love u for bearing my crap ..lolz

😃 thanx hunny and Reet is a beautiful name 😳

NO WAAAAY am I bored with the kisses!!! They are too good ☺️😍😆 ..ahhhh I actually cannot wait for the time when you write about their SR!! (You better do at some point!😛😉) 😍☺️ (excuse my dirty mind 😆)

aww yeah you must be tired!! You need to rest dear you have overworked yourself so much but boy has it paid off 😃

And aww love you for writing such an amazing FF!😳🤗 (don't call it crap!😳) xx

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

awesome.......

breathtaking

killing

outstanding

update of dis ff

it is full of emotions, i fel short of words while appraising dis update

i literary cried while reading d emotions of geet ..........omg

breathtaking.......

really reet u r a fantabulas writer, heads off

i dont hav words 2 say now.......... today i m unable 2 express miself

wel do continue soon.........

thanx 4 d lovely ff

and d song selection iz g8 acc 2 situation...👏....👏 .👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏 .👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏

btw congrats 4 d new thread............

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Shalini

@shalini01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

wow first time im reading your FF but i love it. i have to catch up on what i misses. please please please continue soon.

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Fabulous update Reet!!! I went through a whole myriad of emotions while reading....last part outstanding!!!👏👏👏 Like others,I wouldn't ask you to update soon,because I'm gonna read and re-read this part till I get tired of it 😆....the song selection - perfect!!! congrats to the friends who helped you choose these wonderful songs!!! 'Unbreak my heart' is one of my all time favorites...I was overjoyed when Toni Braxton ⭐️ received a Grammy that year!!!

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holyangel

@holyangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

that was amazing update

Edited by holyangel - 14 years ago

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zoha25

@zoha25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

it was just speechless..
every dialigue was awsomme...
love this part the most...

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maaneet_pisces

@maaneet_pisces

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

You are brilliant...

waiting since last night for the update and when i read it i was all speechless...

too good...

loved the way geet reacted on seeing maan....and maan too...

your fic totally makes you believe that in love you are always at the mercy of your heart....and you can deny all you want but in the end its ur heart which triumphs.....

awaiting the next update even mopre!!!

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Bulbul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

great update👍🏼..the beginning was giving me goose-bumps as I was so excited to know how they will meet in the party!..the party part-the dance,their kisses,hugs and them being together was something I was yearning to see(read😆) and you did full justice with that part and all the wait was truly worth it👏👏👏..the part where Maan leaves and Geet runs after him and stops him was BEAUTIFUL and extremely touching😭..loved how he kissed her all over her face to let her know what she meant to him!..superb lines written by you⭐️!..I didn't like the part where Geet gets engaged to Dev in oblivion but I guess you might have some reasons to show it like that..the entire scene where Geet gets kidnapped,Maan saves her and Geet's realization of Maan/Chief/Guru's truth was damn interesting and gripping..Geet's anger,her pain,her hurt,..everything is totally justified..the way she expressed her feelings and fears was brilliantly written!.. Whatever questions Geet is arising are totally justified as she has suffered a LOT..it hurts to see Maan in pain but its time he answers her questions and get her out of this fear-stricken state(fear of losing him..fear of not knowing him..fear of him not loving her...fear of who he is and what he wants..) and uncertainity filled life!..your song selection was great and all three songs you chose suited Maaneet in this FF perfectly!..frankly this update was filled with beautiful and touching lines so its hard to pick just few but the one I liked the most was-

"I m not supposed to love you ....i am not supposed to care ...i am not supposed to live my life wishing you were there .. I m not supposed to wonder who you are .. where you are or what you do ....i m sorry that I cant help myself .....i m in love with you ...."

PS-thnx for your lovely replies on my comments..I feel great when you say that my comments fill pride in you becasue you totally DESERVE it!..and I truly adore the name you have given me😳😊..keep rocking🤗